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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SSSSIIIIIYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

I'm sad that Siya is handicapped but SIYA...GO AND TAKE REVENGE!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
awww poor Siya!!!!
ERRRRRR 😡 chandra.. sindoora kaafi nahi thi jo iss chandra ne bhi revenge ka plans banane shuru kiya...
plz cont.. soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
awww poor siya....SICK...chandra is gonna get her butt kicked hehe=)) i am looking forward to that
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey chand pari plz continue you are a good writer and i just love your stories they are awsome😆😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys.Thanks u know what i am really ecxited to continue this 1.U know what every night i come up with new idea's before going to sleep and in my sleep.One more thing if ur liking Siya ur liking me too.My charactristics are just like her although my name is not Siya .I mentioned it before.I wanted to help vidya some way.why not in amagination i thought.Ok i am writing to much back with the story.

V-hum ha hum usay milsuktay hain.
Doc-well, woh abhi hosh may nahi ayi.But sirf app usko dhek sukti hain.
S-but doctor hum sub kiyou nahi.
Doc-patient ko nuksaan dhey ga.
S-ok
Vidya enters the I.C.U she see's siya on that bed or whatever it's called.With 2 drips on each hand mask on her face forehead wrapped with a bandge.But u cant's see her leg which was covered by the white blanket but on one of her leg she did have a cast.
She goes and sits on the stool beside the bed she takes Siya's hand and rests her head on it.she continues to say.she's crying.
V-Siya humhay pata nahi kay hum apka dhunaywaad kasay karay tumhara.Lakin khash may gir jati per....Apki tang koh jayi gi.............She starts to cry even louder.
Sad she didn't know that Siya was gaining consious when she said u lost ur leg and stuff.
S-Ma ma ma mam mami...
Vidya looks up in shock.
V-Siya tum hosh may agi.
S-ah aaaaaa abhi aaaa ap na nay ka ka ka kaya ka kaha.
Siya try's to get meaning to sit up a little.But she can't really but she kind of does sit up ...Vidya is worried.
V-Siya latti rahoo.
Siya-Nahi hum nahi lattay gay.Abhi apnay kaya kaha humnay apni tung kodi.what th hell.
She starts to scream.Everybody from outside rushes in hearing that.Siya takes her drips off and that mask.
Siya-abhi hum dhekatay hain kay hum chul suktay hain.
Everyone trys to stop her.
S-siya please rest karo.
Siya-NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
She takes of her blanket but doesn't notice the cast.She gets of her bed but couldn't even stand 10 seconds.She drops down on the floor and starts to cry.Everyone is sad.
Siya takes a deep breath and faces everyone wipes her tears.
Siya-U know what muche koi ub dhuk nahi hai.Infact i am glad may giri thi.
Everyone looks surprised.
S-Siya tumhay pata hai bhi kay tum kaya kahay rahi ho.
Siya-very well.Or mera kaya hum kuch dino may thik hojay gay.thank god mami nahi giri.
Everyone looks sad.
Sagar helps siya back to the bed.
S-wasay siya tayle (oil) kaha say aya sirriyoo per.
Siya remembers something.
Siya-mami appnay Chandra aunty ko dheka tha jub app siriyoo say nechay uthar rahi thi.
V-ha lakin kaya hova.
Siya-unno nay appsay kuch kaha.
V-ahhh nahi toh.
Siya-ok it's ok.
But Siya's brain is starting to work.Because siya had seen her with a bowl of oil in her hand.
The doctor enters.
Doc-oh my god..Siya beta appko hosh agaya hai.So how u feeling.
Siya-completely fine uncle.Bus leg may kuch dard ho raha hai.But i'll be fine right in a little while.
Doc-oh no siya i am sorry app shyad puri zindagi na chul paho.
sagar tryed to stop him but he was too late.
Siya looked shattered but did not cry.
Siya-kaya app sub humhay kuch dher kay liyeah akala chor sukti hain.
Everyone nodds.They leave before leaving everyone tells her to takecare.she also nodds happily.
Inside alone.
Siya- Mom kahti thi kay bachay bagwaan kitara hotay hain.Ub hum bagwaan bun kar dhekayeah gay.Cahndra aunty kay saat jo hoga woh hum decide karay gay.Hum apnay liyeah nahi mami kay liyeah aunty humnay appko dheka tha oil acciedently girathay way but hum sumjay app saaf karlay gi.lakin mami nay kaha kay apnay unhay bataya nahi.So now i get it.Get ready for some revange Chandra aunty.Or yeah hum handicap hony kay saat bhi kar sutay hain and thats a promise to myself.Maybe Mama ki dairy help kay humari.sirf humhay pata hai woh kaha hai....

PRECAP:Sagar gets to know that it was chandra who poured the oil on the stairs.He gets very angry.Thanks to Siya.That jst the start now u'll see what happens next.
ok guys I might update again tomorrow because after i finish my homework i just want to update 4 some reason.ok hope u enjoy please do comment.Forgive me 4 spell or typing mistakes .I also updated on Dher se pg 10.😃
Edited by chand pari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
good update chand pari.... :)
but want to say something...dont stretch toomuch like the real story...(its just a suggestion)....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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....hi i didnt even notice tht u update so much parts.....u r really very fast^^....good job.
but wht did happen to Siyas leg? jst injured?....sorry...i read it in rush...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the comments,Some asked what happened to siya's leg?well she got handicapped 4 life.Some told me not to stretch it too much.If i don't do that there would be no point of understanding whats gonna happen next.Any other question do ask.No problem 😃 .
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i love siya's character ...if onyl vidya was liek that..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys, I really wanted to continue but oh my god my sister said something to me which hurted my feelings which is making me not continue this. 😭 .
Well i don't know tell me if i should or not.My sis has been teasing me about it since yesterday. 😕 But i'll continue with my heart broken.💔.

Siya is discharged from the hospital the next day and she has sitting the wheel chair.(u know those automatic one's used in canada).They reach home with Siya.Chandra is shocked to see that and is a little bit quilty.

Chandra-Arrey Siya tum theek toh hona. & nbsp;

Siya looks at Chandra wickedly.

Siya-Appki meherbani say theek hoon aunty.

Chandra doesn't feel right so she leaves.Siya presses this botton on the wheel chair it leads her to where Vidya was.

V-Siya koi baat.

Siya-Mami humhay apsay kuch akaylay may baat karni hai.

Sagar and everyone in the living room are a bit courious.But then they nodd.Vidya and Siya goes to this near by room and closes the door behind them.

Siya-Mami hum apsay kuch kahana chatay hain.Jo bohut important hai.

V-acha batho.

S-Mami.Apko pata hain hum next month Canada ja rahay thay.Lakin ub hum nahi ja suktay hain.U know hum dance,trek and feild,or quiz kay liyeah finals may agay thay.Lakin ub hum in may say 2 cheesey nahi kar suktay hain.Kiyou kay usmay legs ki zaroorat hoti hain.Or apko pata hain iss sub ka zimedaar kon hai.The one and only Chandra aunty.

Vidya is shocked to hear that.V-pa pa per kasay.

Siya tells Vidya the whole story and tells her to stay allert and that somehow they need to expose her in front of mammu.Siya also says that after this she will never do anything like that.(Which is a wrong prediction.)Vidya agrees and they make a plan of some how making Sagar know about Chandra..

Sagar and Vidya's bedroom.

Sagar and Vidya are lying on the bed facing each other.Vidya is hesutating to say something.Sagar could tell that she wants to say something.

S-Vidya kuch kahayna hai.

V-ja ja ji.Woh hum suoch rahay thay kay see Teail (oil) kasay aya.

S-Ha Vidya muche iss baat ki fikar horahi hay.

V-Ahhhh humhay Siya nay kaha tah kay usnay Chandra didi ko teail (oil) seeriyo may girathay way dheka tah.Or jub hum ahay thay waha per unay humnay waha dheka tah or onnay muche toh kuch nahi batya uskay baray may.

Sagar and Vidya now sits up.Sagar is looking abit mad.

S-Vidya abhi tum meray saat chalo bhar abhi Chandra di say pouchta hoon.

Vidya and Sagar goes the the living room.He starts calling Chandra out.Everyone including Siya also comes out of there rooms.

Chandra-Kaya hai Sagar itni raat ko disturb kardiya.

S-Di kaya yeah such hai kay seerio pay teal(oil) apnay giraya tah.

Chandra starts to look tensed Sagar notices that .While Siya and Vidya gave each other a success type of look.Sagar raises his hand and puts it down again.Everyone is shocked.

Chandra-SAGAR!!!!!!!!!

S-Appkay look say pata chul gaya muche.Or ajj kay baad aghar apnay asa kuch karnay ki kosish bhi key toh iss ghar kay durvazy khulay hain bhur janay kay liyeah.....

Chandra Gets disspointed are goes to her room boiling to death from inside.

Chandra in her bedroom.She starts throwing stuff.

Chandra-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh SAGAR.JUB SAY VIDYA AHHE HAI TUMNAY MUCHSAY ISTRA BEHAVE KARNA SHORO KAR DIYA HAI.Ub dhekna may Vidya ka agli baar kaya haal karti hoon.

From outside Siya has heard all this and gets tensed.She wonders what will Candra will do next.

Precap:It's Mavah and Rajeevs wedding in the temple. Chandra,and Vidya are left home alone.

Ok guys i hope u liked.Plz do comment.😊

Edited by chand pari - 17 years ago

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