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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
very very good that Sagar is angry with Chandra...hihi....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Pinkypinkers u really love this don't u thanks to all of u that u enjoyed it.I will continue soon with this yet i need to think what to write next.To all of u who think the other topic is closed no it's not.it's just one person said they don't want sagar behaving like that.
anyways i'll continue that one soon too.till then enjoy. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
Hi guys,so i am gonna be continuing this.Oh ya the Dher se but hova na is updated too on pg.5 to who wants to read that one too.

Sagar and vidya walking down the hallway vidya looks sad.
S- vidya muche pata hay kay Di tumsay achi tara say behave kar nahi rahi thi toh iskay liyeah may tumsay maafi mang tha hoon.
V-arrey yeh baat nahi hai humhay toh sirf Mavah or Chandra Didi ki fikar hai.
S-vidya as i said ur so nice.humhaysha dosoro kay baray may suchti ho.
Vidya now smiles.
S-now thats like a good mom and a wife.
V- suniyeah hum Mavah didi say millay.
S-are u sure Vidya.
V-ji woh bhi toh akali hai.
S-ok chalo.
In Mavah's room Mavah is crying in front of thr mirror while she brushed her hair.Sagar and vidya first knock.Mavah quikly wipes her tears.
Mavah-arrey sagar vidya aho na .(she could see their reflection in the mirror)She turns to face them.
Sagar and vidya could tell that she was crying this whole time.So now they enter.
V- didi hum jaantay hai appkay dil pay kaya guzar rahi hai.
Mavah-kaya hova muche i am completely fine.
S-Mavah Di please jhoot na bhoolay.
Now Mavah can't lie so she runs to hug Vidya.
Mavah-yeh sub mari waja say hova hai na.
She's crying.Vidya moves her away gently.And wipes her tears .
V- didi apki waja say kuch nahi hova hai Sub kismat ka khel hai.Or apko tori pata tha kay apko Harsh humhara mutlub hay Rajeev say pyar ho jayay ga.
Sagar is looking at vidya's face in surprise,vidya notices.
S-Vidya yeah tum kaya kahay rahi ho.
V- ji apnay suna nahi kay Rajeev or mavah didi ek dosray say pyar kartay hai.
Mavah-per vidya.
V-didi karti hay ya nahi.
Mavah doesn't reply.
S-di humhay javab millgaya .Ub dheky yeh apkay bahi or bahbi kaya kartay hay.
V-ji did.App apna kayal rukna hum chaltay.
Sagar and vidya leave.leaving Mavah confused.
Sagar and Vidya's room:
Vidya is sitting on the bed legs crossed feeling her stamoch talking to her baby.
V:app jub bhar aho gay tum hum papa, sameer ,or app bohut maza karay gay.Acha batho kaya khely gay hum.Lakin kuch khelnay kay liyeah bahr ana purta hai.
KUB AHO GAY!!! (she wihns).
Sagar on the other hand is watching all this and smiling standing at the door.He comes in.
S- vidya kaya such rahi thi?oh kahi tum woh to nahi such rahi thi jo may such rah tha.
V-ji
S-really acha toh Mavah di kay pus chal kay saat soch thay hay.
V-kaya!!!
(he actually just teasing her.)
S- ha chalo unkay saat soch thay hay.
V- lakin unkay pass kasay appko shurum nahi ahay gi.
S- shurum kis baat ki woh meri bahen hai.
V- lakin kuch nahi.hum kuch nahi soch rahay thay.
Sagar starts laughing that now he see's that her mood is of now.
V-ub app hus kiyou rahay hai.
S-tum katni stupied ho.
V-ji
S-ji ji ji kaya.may mazak kar raha tha.acha chalo junior kay baray mai millkar sich thay hai.
Vidya blushes.
she hits him on his arm then hugs him.They laugh while doing that.

PRECAP:sagar brings Rajeev and decied that they are gonna get Mavah and him married.

Ok thats it for now hope u enjoyed.Please do comment. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
read ur ff all the way trought have to say its gr8
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: asma1

read ur ff all the way trought have to say its gr8

Thanks yaar can't believe u read the whole thing thanks.😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
Hi guys glad u liked it ok i really have reguest from u can u please stand Rajeev,Mavah,and Chandra for a little while.I am trying to kick them out of my FF cuz thats what I want it to happen in the show,but ofcourse Sagar and Vidya will be there.One more thing,do u like siya?

Everyone was sitting in the drawingroom area including Mavah and Chandra.
S mom-Vidya beta tumnay hum sub ko kiyou bhoolya hai.
Chandra-ha Vidya don't waste my time.
V-didi maa bus panch minute or subar karlay bus inhay anay day apko pata chul jayeah ga.
They started to wait till then sagar comes in threw the main door along with Rajeev (fake Harsh).They walk upto everyone and they get up.
Vidya walks upto sagar and stands beside him.
Chandra-Sagar yeah sub kaya hai.
S mom-Sagar Vidya yeah sub batho.
Sagar and Vidya looks at each other and take deep breaths.While Rajeev stood there.
V-didi woh.
Chandra-manay sagar say pocha hai toh tumhay bakwaaz karnay ki zaroorat nahi hai.
Vidya gets upset and sagar gets anyoyed by hearing that.
S-di vidya bhi yeah sub kahay sukti.U don't have to be rude.
Chandra-but sa.
He puts his hand in her face to stop her from saying anything else.
S-anyways Rajeev ko may iss ghar may isliyeah laya hoon kay,humnay decide kiya hay kay Mavah Di Rajeev say pyar karti hai or woh bhi kartay hai toh.
V-ub humnay soucha kay app dono ki shaadi karadani chahiyeah .
Mavah-WHAT!!!!
Chachi-Chote takur app kaya iss dhukaybaaz say Mavah ki shaadi karay gay.Zaroor Vidya ka idea hoga.
Siya-Chachiji mammu nay kaha hai na kay yeah dono ka idea tha sirf mami ka nahi tha.Or jo inka idea hai woh bohut acha hai.
Chachi-Siya tumhi nay toh iski asliat samnay lahi thi.
Siya-but did i say he a robber or anything bad.Jo humnay kaha tha kay woh iss ghar ki balahi kay liyeah tha and i don't regrat.
Chachi feels embarssed when siya spook back to her.In her head she thinks.
Chachi-Iss bachi say tho buch kay rahayna chahiyeah bohut he caluk hai.
S.V-Thank you Siya.
Siya-no worries and get back to what u were saying.
S-Rajeev kuch kaho.
Rajeev-Mavha may jaanta hoon kay tum muchsay pyar karti ho or bus sub kay sumnay nahi ishar kar rahi ho.
Mavah is starting to cry but she wipes her tears.Everyone is completely quite and waiting for Mavah to say something.They're all staring at her.
Rajeev walks towards her and bent down on his knees ,takes a rose out of his pocket puts it in front of her.
Rajeev-Mavha kaya tum muchsay shaadi karo gi.
Mavah takes the flower tells him to get up.
Mavha-ha.
Everyone claps eccept 4 Chandra who runs away to her room without anyone noticing.
S-good choice di.
Mavah blushes.
V-Rajeev app Mavah didi ko kahi bahar nahi lay kar jayeah gay.
Shalu- boolo boolo,tell tell.
Rajeev-ha ha kiyou nahi Mavah juldi say taaiyaar ho jaho hum dono dinner pay ja rahay hay.
Mavah-abhi hoti hoon.
She runs to her room with a big smile on her face to get ready.
Everyone laughs.
NEXT MORNING
Sagar,Vidya,Chinu,Shalu,Rajeev,Mavah,Bharat, Sameer,and Siya are gathered together in the drawing room.
S-Siya hum sub ko kiyou boola ya hai.
Siya-mammu chill .Humnay app sub ko yaha iss liyeah boolya hai kay hum app sub kay saat ek game khelna chatay hai.
V-game! Siya hum bachay nahi hai.
Siya-mami i said chill.Yeah game baro ki hai.or wasy bhi humnay app logo kay free time pay boolaya hai u shouldn't have any trouble doing this.
Everyone nodes.
Siya-Thank u.this game is called Lovers question almost like truth and dare but alittle bit different.sameer bharat tum loog meri help karogay tho idhar aho.App sub log ek ek partner dundiyeah.
Sagar rushes to get Vidya before anyone else does same with the others Chinu gets Shalu and Rajeev gets Mavah.
Siya-i knew it.OK tho lets continue.Rules yeah hai kay her team ek dosray kay against khel rahi hay.Lets say mammu and mami goes first toh dosri teamo nay unsay kuch karna hai ya pochna hai.agarr app log woh achi tara say karay gay appko millay gay points which i am incharge of.That goes on and on we'll play 5 rounds each .then jiss team kay pass zadda points hay woh win.

PRECAP: Chandra is trying to harm Vidya.

OK thats it 4 now do din ki kasar nikal lee itna zada update karkar.HOPE U ENJOYED IT PLEASE DO COMMENT.
Oh ya i might update Dher se today but later. 😃
Edited by chand pari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
oh dear! I hope Vidya is ok! Siya is lovely! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
plz continue soon...BTW..you were askin bout Siya, I like her!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
the update was great........pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls plsssssssss cont.sooooooooonnn......lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
wow nice game can wait 4 da next prt plz cont soon 😊

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