FF:Romance btwn SV(last update pg61)

Hey guys i am a new member here and have read many of the FF which were great but now i am thinking about writing my own.I really hope u like it it😳.oh ya before starting i want to tell u something my hindi is not that god when i write it in english.. Ok so it all starts when sagar enters his home all tired from work

Uma,chinu,shalu,and ofcourse Sindoora is there on the sofa.Uma:Sagar beta agay tum aho humray saat battu.Sagar smiles and takes a seat on one of the sofa's and puts his breifcase beside him.he calls for vidya.Sagar: Vidya Vidya.Vidya comes in with a tray that holds the glass of water. she gives it to him and is about to leave when sagar stops her.Sagar:vidya rooko idahar mere pass battu.vidya: ji bus abhi atay hai hum kichen may kuch kaam hai.Sagar: lakin please aho na .vidya :ji theek hai. Vidya puts the tray on the on the table and goes and sits beside him. Sagar ub ankay bund karo.vidya:lakin kiyou? Sagar:karo na.so she does.Everyone looks surprised when they see sagar taking a (big ugly necklace as for my opinion) and sagar puts it around vidya's neck. On the other hand sindoora's burning inside seeing all this. Vidya feels the necklace and opens her eyes filled with tears.vidya:app mere liyeah yeah.Sagar: ha mai apni patni kay liyeah itna bhi kar sukta.(what did he do) vidya blushes .Chinu:wah dadda app toh ajkal bohut romantic hogay hai. shalu:ha ha ha chote thukur or kitna pyara necklace. Uma: ha beta suchi mai. sagar asks sindoora about the necklace who is boiling.Sagar:Di apko kasa luga.smiles.Sin:bohut acha.or bohut acha kiya vidya kay liyeah itna kubsoorat haar layeah.

sagar: Nahi di yeah vidya say sadda kubsoorat ho he nahi suckta.sin get more angry when everyone laughs.just then sameer comes with buaji. and also sits down when sagar winks at buaji who smiles. Buaji:arrye sagar beta apnay vidya ko bataya nahi kay app dono kuch din kay liyeah honeymoon pay ja rahay hain. hearing this sindoora starts coughing.Sagar: are u ok di. then she stops coughing and says i am fine. On the other hand vidya is so happy. Sagar:woh batanay he wala tha .Buaji:tho ub vidya ko pata chul gaya. Vidya: lakin hum ja ka rahay hain.Sagar: goa or ub tum ja kar packing karo gi. Sameer: papa app maa ko phir say much say dor lay kar ja rahay ho. sagar and vidya are shocked to here that and sagar also looks quilty.background music plays on ah ah a ahah ah ah a ahahah whatever.vidya:app asay kiyou kay rahay ho beta. Sameer: iss liyeah maa kay last time jub app papa kay saat gai thi manay appko bohut miss kiya. tears roll out of vidya's eyes and she hugs sameer.Vidya: iss baar app bhi humray saat chalay gay. Sameer: yeah! sin: sagar lakin office kon samalay ga.Uma: beta sindoora app nahi samhal sukti ho kaya.Sagar:ha di please kuch dino kay liyaeh app sumhal layna.SIN:ofcourse anything for u.Now sindoora is very mad what she does is just get up and walk away with not another respond.

Sorry guys iam too tired to type more but hope u enjoyed it.Just 2 more ff then sin is gone but there will be sagar and vidya scenes ofcourse without sin budding in .Thats if u want me to continue.luv ya takecare bye.🤗New readers the photograph below is for this ff...U'll find out who's childern these are...But the one who just got a cute surrprise enjoy...😃

its great...i am not as good of a writer, but do u want some 'constructive criticism' ? well u kinda have to start on a new line or put quotes or do something when ppl r talking coz otherwise everything is jammed together and its hard to read..and understand
but the story is abouslutely lovely 👏 in my opinion...hah u write better than me though...wanna read my ff? Sirf main aur tum...hope u like it..
but urs was jus fantastic...brings out a romantic mood.!!!! 🤗
Ananya 😊

I liked it..poor sameer..and could totally see Sindura's blood boiling...
👏

Originally posted by: eclipse_101

its great...i am not as good of a writer, but do u want some 'constructive criticism' ? well u kinda have to start on a new line or put quotes or do something when ppl r talking coz otherwise everything is jammed together and its hard to read..and understand
but the story is abouslutely lovely 👏 in my opinion...hah u write better than me though...wanna read my ff? Sirf main aur tum...hope u like it..
but urs was jus fantastic...brings out a romantic mood.!!!! 🤗
Ananya 😊

i read ur it's great better then mine 😃. u know why the words are jammed up because it wasn't me typing the whole think it was my freind who came over and had nothing to do so read her my script and she typed. sorry though next time i'll type.

Aisha, chand pari

hi again it's me again i have nothing to do but tomorrow i'll be busy so so so i'll just send the update today.
Sindoora's room
sindoora goes sits on her bed while aniket stares at because she looks very angry.sindoora stomps her feet and says.
sin:phir say phir say ajkal yeah sub mere he saat kiyou hota hai.Sub buaji ki vaja say howa.ub sagar or vidya apnay so called honeymoon pay jhay gay or mai yaha par office shumalu gi.
just then sindoora notices aniket smiling.she gets even more angry.
sin: app toh khush hogay na .Apni biwi ko prayshan dhek kar appko bohut khushi milti hai na.
sagarand vidya's room.
vidya is shown packing for there honeymoon which there going to leave for the next morning.Just then she notices sagar whose sitting on the bed lost in his own thoughts.
V:suniyeh apko khai sameer ki batho ka bura tho naji lug gaya.dhekhey sameer abhi chotha hai osay in batto ki sumaj nahi hai.
just then she see's sagar coming towards her and he hugs her tight.for about 2 min he hugs her when vidya notices he's cring.vidya gently pushes him away.
V:app ro rahay hai. she asked with her eyes also filled with tears.
S:vidya please muche maaf kardo.
V: kis bat kay liyeh?
S:woh uss raat jo humray beech howa manay usay gulti kaha, lakin woh meri gulti nahi tumhray liyeh hupa wa pyar tha lakin mai he nahi sumaj saka.tho please muche maaf kardo. He says it with emotion which makes vidya cry even more.
V: woh-wo-woh tho hum kubka bhool chukay hai.rahi baat maafi ki woh tho humhay mungni chaiyeh hai. she's say's that wiping sagars tears.
sagar looks at her and can see the pain inside her eyes and says ,vidya tum bohut achi ho. then wipes vidya's tears.
V:Yeah apnay uss raat bhi ka tha. then both starts laughing and hug again. So cute.
the scene now switches to the morning where everyones at the door to say bye to vidya,sagar,and sameer.
Buaji: sagar, vidya or sameer ka khayal rukna.
s:ji buaji.
uma:or ha jaldina wapas ana. everyone starts to laugh ofcoure leavig sindoora.
now sindoora puts on her act she is pretending to have a headache. sin:ahh mere saar mai itna dard ho raha hai.
Sagar:di are u ok.
V:didi ap chay toh hum ruk jatay hai.
S:Ha ur ub hum kai nahi ja rahe hai.
Inside sindoora's so happy now but buaji intrepts.
Buaji: sagar vidya asay mut kaho hum sub hai na sindoora ka khayal ruknay kay liyeh.
Uma: ha beta hum hai na.
finally sagar agress and tells sindoora to take care and they leave after taking elders blessings.
they are in sagar's car driving to the airport.vidya who's sitting next to sagar in the front seat turns around to look at sameer she see's that he's sound asleep.
V:so gaya. she say's to herself when sagar here's her.
S: kitna cute lugta hai na sammeer sota wah. vidya nodes and starts looking outside the car window suddenly sagar grabs vidya's hand while he's driving.vidya blushes and turns her head towards sagar who looking front.
V: choray muche sameer dhek layga.
S: woh tho soya wah hai vidya. sagar tuns his head towards vidya and is getting closer to her face as if he is gonna kiss her on her cheek . vidya is to shocked to move so she just looking strate...now there a noise from the back it's sameer sagar moves his face away from vidya and lets go of her hand and is driving strate.
sameer: papa ko mummy say pyar hai pyar hai or mummy ko bhi papa say pyar hai pyar hai. sameer sings. both sagar and vidya are embrassed.
sameer:papa ruk kiyou gaya?
S:kaya beta ? sagar asks cirously. vidya looks at sameer.
sameer:kisssssssssss
S:badmassh yeh kaya khay rahay ho.
sameer:please papa maa ko ek kiss do na. sagar and vidya both blush and now sagar gave vidya a quick kiss on her lip which he was gonna give on her cheek which thanks to sameers badmaashy he ended up like that.

ok i am gonna stop now cuz i think this too long and i am also tired 🤢if u like it do let me know then i'll contiue but if not then i'll be sad ocoures 😭 .takecare bye

Thats not true Aisha! Mine is just a whole different story..i myself am a whole different story!! 😆
Anyways...I dont mind at all becoz ur story is so planned out...and interesting that i am just lost.For mine...i dont even plan it and i hardly ever update!!! 😛 BTW..luving that ff of urs budd!!!

Originally posted by: eclipse_101

Thats not true Aisha! Mine is just a whole different story..i myself am a whole different story!! 😆
Anyways...I dont mind at all becoz ur story is so planned out...and interesting that i am just lost.For mine...i dont even plan it and i hardly ever update!!! 😛 BTW..luving that ff of urs budd!!!

u make me laugh😆 and i really liked u calling me by my own name Aisha .i think urs is Ananya nice name and thanks.

are sameer koo wrong tine paar hi entry marni thi

Originally posted by: chand pari

u make me laugh😆 and i really liked u calling me by my own name Aisha .i think urs is Ananya nice name and thanks.

Aww...how sweet....thank you!🤗and yes it is Ananya..

Originally posted by: eclipse_101

Aww...how sweet....thank you!🤗and yes it is Ananya..

i think ur are older then me so better call u di or baji cuz i am a muslim and at this age i am in luv with this show. I think i am the youngest member of this club😳 oh well not that young Anaya api. luv ya bye😉