A Short FF....plsss read.... Update pg 3.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys....after todays episode...as upset as i am...i felt like i want to write out my feelings in a form of a FF....pls read and let me knw wht u think....this will be a short FF only...only my perspective on wht should happen in the next few days.....so here we go..

Saagar is angry in his room and staring at the divorce papers.....once again looking at the word DIVORCE spelled on those documents sends him back down memory lane....he tries to remember all the good and bad things happened since his recovery....sin is watchin all this frm outside the door...just thn saagar comes and shuts the door to his room much to sin's disgust.....he now goes and sits on his bed with the papers in his hand....he thinks tht all these memories...but every memory with vidya was soo beautiful...he's always been sooo attracted to her...he wishes tht he remembered the things tht happened during his sickness...tht might help him do justice to this relationship...he's just at a point where he cant think...there are tears rolling down his cheeks...and he wonders why he's crying...why does it hurt him soo much at the thought of seperating from vidya...there are soo many thoughts and no answers...he feels soo alone today....he wishes there was an angel who comes to help him out....just thn he gets faint flashes...saagar tellin someone tht she's his angel..his bf..his...his...omg..his WIFE....he thinks...whn did he say this....was it really him sayin this to vidya? was she always his angel..and today he's thinking of throwing tht angel out of his life....he just cant handle all this anymore....it hurts...it hurts him...on second thoughts he gets up and decides he needs to talk to vidya...

he opens the door and with determination he walks towards the room where vidya was locked....he opens the door and sees tht she's not in her room....and once again sin's words go through his head....and he thnks...how could vidya do this? was his di right? he just holds his head and screams......crying his heart out....he takes the papers and SIGNS them...and says to himself..."vidya...ab tum is rishte se azad ho...bahut bandh ke rakha meine hum dono ko...ab hum dono khush reh sakte hain....yeh bandhan se azad hain" he just lays on the bed...crying...and just dozes off in thoughts...just thn sin enters and and takes the papers...saagar is soo lifeless tht he doesnt even realize tht papers are gone out of his hands....he just lays there....after wht feels like hours...he gets up and realizes tht the papers are gone...and thn faintly remembers seeing sin in the room...and thinks...'hey bhagvan..yeh maine kya kiya...mein aisa kaise...nahi..omg...vidyaaa..."

he runs out the room to witness the most horrible scene in the main hall....

Sindoora - kahan se aa rahi ho vidya...
Vidya (as she entered with a few packets in her hands...her hair let down...nice sari..lookin heavenly..) - woh didi..hum...
Buaji - maine use bheja tha...kuch saman lane ke liye..
Sin - buaji main janti hu...apne nahi bheja ise...chalo ab bolo kahan gayi thi tum...
Vidya - woh didi..hum..inke liye...
Sin - bas...bas...bahut hua tumhara yeh natak...saagar bhi ab tumhari asliyet(truth) jaan chuka hai....(just thn saagar enters...his eyes swolen...lookin tired...and exhausted) saagar...achha hua tum aa gaye beta....yeh lo...aur dedo vidya ko...(vidya looks at him with questioning eyes...and saagar just stands there..) lao mein hi de deti hu...vidya...yeh hai...divorce papers...oh..sry...mera matlab hai talak ke kagaz...lo na...yeh tumare liye...
Vidya - (with tears flowing out of her eyes....takes the papers...) yeh...yeh...

she walks towards saagar with anger/hope/pain all overflowing frm her face....and stands in front of him...she thinks to herself for a few minutes and thinks tht now she cant take this anymore...she'll have to stand-up for herself...saagar looks guilty...cause somewhere deep down he didnt want this....

Vidya (quietly) - yeh...yeh kya hai?
Saagar - vidya...voh..voh...
Sin - arey saagar...tum ise bata kyun nahi dete ki tum isey talak chahte ho...aur yeh papers par sign bhi kar chuke ho...(everyone is shell shocked....buaji just wants to slap sindoora and throw her out of the house...)
Vidya - kya yeh sach hai...
saagar - vidya...voh...mein..voh...
Vidya - (now angry) - matlab ki haan...aap chahte hain humse talak...hum hi pagal the jo yeh sapna dekh bethe...ki kisi din sahi maine mein aapki dulhan ban sakte hain hum....hum kos te the apne aap ko...ki humne aap ki hasi chin li....aapki zid puri ki humne..aap ka operation karva kar...aapki identity (sry guys i dont knw the hindi word...so plss pretend she said it in hindi as well...) apko vapas kar ke....lekin hum yeh bhul gaye the apke pyar mein...ki hum toh apke layak hain hi nahi...(crying lots now..) hum ji lenge un sare pal ke sahare jo humne aap ke saath bitaye...agar aap yehi chahte the...toh aapne humse ek baar kehkar toh dekha hota...hum kabhi mana nahi karte.....aaj tak aapki kisi bhi baat ko na kaha hain humne...
Saagar (now guilt has fully over taken him...he cant believe he took such a step...how can he let her go...right now he feels as if his life is gettin sucked out of him...) - vidya...ek min...voh...mein...voh...
Vidya - bas kijiye ab aap...bahut man mani karli aapne....ab nahi...aur aaj toh apka janam din bhi hain...aur ise achha taufa aapko kya mil sakta hain...aapki azadi...(she takes a pen...opens the papers and signs them...everyone is shelll shocked...as specially saagar...its like the ground has slipped off frm under his feet....)
Chinu - dada...aap jan na chahte the na roz bhabhi kahan jati thi...apne aapko padna likhna sikhane ke liye...aapki khushi ke liye...aapki...
Vidya - yeh lijiye aap ka taufa....yeh aapke talak ke kagaz aur yeh...yeh...aap ka laptop...(she says it with no expression...tears rollin down....saagar is left speechless...even he's crying...) ab le bhi lijiye...aap ko yehi toh chahiye tha na...toh ab lijiye na....aur haan...janam din bahut bahut mubarak ho..

saagar's feet have like been glued to the spot...he cant react....he coud just feel his life slippin out of his hands...he wanted to stop her frm signing the papers...she has done sooo much for him....even got him his laptop....she cured him...luved him unconditionally...and this is wht he did to her....but why is he crying and feeling hurt? he got wht he wanted no...thn why these tears now? why the urge to wanna stop her...

ok guys...let me knw wht u think....and pls comment...pls....thn ill post the second half this evening and end this short ff...its just wht i wish would happen.....

Shaili


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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 Simply speechlesss it fabulantic 👏 👏
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gr8 part
plzz post next part soon
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sry guys i dont knw the hindi word...so plss pretend she said it in hindi as well...)loved you for this sentence. 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am amazed!!Wow Please cont. soon!!! I really like it!
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I too want this to happen, please continue
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oh man!!!!!!

this is awesome

i am so waiting for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good job hun.... kash yeh creatives tumse kuch lessons le aur aisa kuch include kare in the future episodes.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it's nice i would like to read da last part... poor sagar 😳 😳 and vidya i feel sorry 4 them 😭 😭 😭 and feel like kicking sindoora's ass 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx sooo much everyoneee...will continue soon...almost done writing it....so ill post it soon... 😊

Shaili

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