A Short FF....plsss read.... Update pg 3. - Page 2

great work , love the way vidya character actually stood up for herself pls continue .. one small request some english translation for the hindi would be nice 😃 update soon 😃

^^hey ill def try to translate in english...its just harder sometimes cause vidya only speak in hindi u knw...but i can definetly do both....hope u enjoy 😊

Shaili

this si rally good please continue:D

the best FF 😃 ! thankxx alot ! maybe somthing like that will happen , sagar might think about the past and the moments that he spent with vidya , and the laptop ! I hope alll this turns to truth 😃 ! I badly want to know wat will happen tommorrow ! LETS HOPE FOR THE BEST ! Thankssssssss ! this was all because of you armlover that i have hope somthing like this will happen ! Thankx again ! 😃

omg! this was awesome! i usually dont read ff's but this was great! 😆 😆 cant wait for the second part 👏

fabulous i enjoyed reading it sooooooooooooooooo much plzzz continue 😉

Originally posted by: loverocks!

the best FF 😃 ! thankxx alot ! maybe somthing like that will happen , sagar might think about the past and the moments that he spent with vidya , and the laptop ! I hope alll this turns to truth 😃 ! I badly want to know wat will happen tommorrow ! LETS HOPE FOR THE BEST ! Thankssssssss ! this was all because of you armlover that i have hope somthing like this will happen ! Thankx again ! 😃

oh thnxxx soo much...and u knw...to keep everyone thinking positively...incl myself....i wrote this ff...i would really wanna see saagar act the way he does in my ff....like u said...lets hope for the besttt....

Shaili

jaani.. u gonna update?

man i am getting so impatient! 😆

Hey guys....here's the next part...the last part of this short FF...thank u soo much for the wonderfullllllllll comments...i luv them all...luv u all...thnx a million...and i hope i kept this part to ur expectations....pls do comment..thnxx....

btw i tried to translate most of the dialogues in english.....for everyone's convenience...the translation is done in blue.....hope it helps...


After the show-off in the living room....vidya walks off to her room....she goes and starts packing...crying...and all the flashbacks of the past come across her eyes....saagar....saagar and saagar...her life revolved around him....he was her only focus...whn he was sick and even after his recovery...nothing else ever mattered to her...she takes a few sarees she had originally brought frm banaras...she didnt wanna take anything else tht was frm this house...if her husband doesnt belong to her anymore...nothin else does....she takes a picture of him thts they had taken on the day he wore tht black suit with the red tie...she hugs the picture and cries her heart out...she remembers the first time he had hugged her and lifted her in his arms....how she had kissed him on his cheek....she just hugs the picture like she's actually huggin him for the last time....saagar was at the door the whole time...he was silently watching vidya's every step...and seeing her cry...he couldnt control himself either....the tears were constantly flowing frm both their eyes....saagar felt this sudden urge to go and replace the pciture in her arms...tht place was for him...no one else....not even the picture.....he suddenly walks upto her...and vidya just stares at him with teary eyes...wht does he want frm her now...she doesnt wanna speak to him...cause she knws she wont be able to control herself....

Vidya - (with a lot of courage..) - bas hum ja hi rahe hain... (i was just leaving..)
Saagar - (his voice choking) - vidya...voh.... (vidya...um..tht..)

saagar all of a sudden cant take it anymore...he just breaks down...bfr they both knw it..saagar had really replaced the picture in her arms...he hugged her so tight tht she felt like she couldnt breathe for a moment.....at first she didnt hug him back....cause if she gives in this time...she knws it will feel impossible to let go....but afte a couple minutes she cant take it anymore...she gives in..and hugs him back too....he felt her response and just burried his head in her arms crying.....after a few minutes...vidya pulls away as she realizes tht she shouldnt be doing this time...now its time for seperation...she cant loose herself in him one more time...

Saagar - (as he sees vidya pullin away) - vidya...im....im sorry...
Vidya - jante hain..humein apki kisi bhi baat ka bura nahi lag sakta...kabhi nahi...bas ab hum apko azad karte hain...bhagvan kare apko zindagi mein sari khushiyan mile...humesha muskarate rehna... (u knw...i would never feel bad of anything u say ever.....i free u now...frm our relationship....wish u get all the happiness in life...keep smilin always)

saying this vidya starts to walk away as saagar once again just stands there....he wants to stop her...she cant be goin out of his life...he cant live without her....he cant...he has to stop her...bfr its too late...he runs out of the room and sees tht she's downstairs in the living room...where the rest of the family is cryin and huggin her...

Vidya - hum aap sab ko bahut yaad karenge...yeh yaadon ke sahare toh hum hamari sari zindagi jee lenge... (I will miss u all a lot...but i will try to live with these memories...)
Sameer (runs and hugs her) - ma..aap mujhe bhi chod ke chali jayenge.. (ma..u will leave me too?)
Vidya - beta...hum humesha aap hi ke saath hain..par papa ko apki zarorat hai..aap unka khayal rakhna...theek hai... (beta..im always with u...but papa needs u more...u take care of him...ok..)
she hugs sameer back and bharat also comes and joins in the hug....saagar watches this...and feels tht even after all this...she still cares for his happiness....everyone in the family takes their turn to say good bye to vidya in their own way...buaji hugs vidya and apologizes...she tells her to stay back but vidya once again says tht if her husband doesnt want her to stay...thn she wont stay anymore...everyone bids vidya a hesitant good bye...sindoora is the only one who looks happy...she doesnt even pretend to be sad for vidya...now vidya starts to walk towards the door....her eyes are a "saagar" of tears today.....and tht too bcs of her luv for her saagar......at one point he really was the "saagar" of luv...but today tht saagar is like a saagar in a country with drought....not a drop of luv...or as she felt...in reality...today this saagar is overflowing with luv for her....there's a tsunami of luv...guilt and pain in his heart today...as all these thoughts go through her mind...and she gets closer to the door....a familiar voice stops her...

Saagar - kaise khush rahonga....jab ke meri khushi ka har karan hi mujhse dur ja raha hai...kaise muskarau jab mujhe hasane wali hi mere paas nahi rahegi...mein hi humesha kehta tha...woh phul hi kya...jis mein koi khusbhu hi nahi...waisey hi woh insaan hi kya jiske paas vidya hi nahi...aur aaj meri samaj mein aya...meri baton ka matlab...mein aaj tak nahi samaj saka....woh saagar hi kya jiski zindagi mein vidya hi nahi...(how can i be happy? whn every reason for my happiness is goin away frm me...how will i smile...whn the one who makes me smile is goin away....i always used to say about a flower is nothing without fragrance....just like tht...whts a person who doesnt have vidya...today i understand my own words.....wht is saagar whn there's no vidya in his life..) (buaji now smiles as she remembers her convo with saagar whr she had told him tht he will soon understand his own words)

vidya now turns around and looks at him in disbelief....she cant believe he's saying all this...wht does he really want? its sooo hard to read his mind.....she thought he wasnt happy with her...as she's still standing there...thinkin wht to do...saagar starts again..

Saagar - vidya...im sorry...mein kabhi un papers ko sign karna hi nahi chahta tha...maine dusro ki baton mein ake...voh...jab tumhe kamre mein nahi dekha...toh mujhe di ki baatein yaad ayi...aur mujhe laga ki kahin kuch aisa hai jo tumhare liye mujhse zyada important hai....( im sorry vidya.....i never wanted to sign those papers...i listened to others...whn i didnt see u in the room...i remembered di's words...and i thought tht there was something more imp to u thn me..)(now turns towards sindoora) - di...aap humesha mujhe meri vidya se alag karna chaha...lekin mein kabhi yeh nahi chahta tha...thodi der ke liye mein aapki baton mein zarur aa gaya tha...lekin ab mein apni galti khud hi sudhar dunga....(di..u always wnated to seperate me frm my vidya...but i never wanted tht...i belived u for a while...but now ill fix my mistakes..)(turns back to vidya) vidya pls...ek mauka dedo mujhe..im sorry...mujhe laga tum khush hogi agar hum alag ho jaye....im sorry...im sorry... (vidya..pls give me one more chance...im sorry....i thought u would be happy if we seperated...) (the whole time there are tears runnin down both their cheeks....he now spreads his arms as to welcome in a hug...she walks towards him..close to him)
Vidya (standing in front of him...cryin away tears of happiness) jante hain...aap ki humesha se yehi aadat rahi hain...humesha sochte hain ki aap se dur hokar hum khush rahenge..lekin aisa bhi kabhi ho sakta hain...aap bahut bure ho...ekdum..."stupid"... (u knw..uve always done this....always assume tht stayin away frm me would make me happy....but can tht ever happen? ure very bad....just...stupid..)(saagar just smiles...cause he knws this her luv talking...)
Saagar - haan voh toh mein hu...stupid...par kya tum is stupid se saagar ko maaf nahi karogi...(yes...i am stupid....but will u forgive this stupid saagar?)

sayin this... still spreading his arms....he stands there....as vidya just runs in his arms...and hugs him tight...both crying their heart out...the whole family watches and sindoora is disgusted...she hates this site...and today her brother talked back to her....how could she loose soo badly...buaji has a smile of victory on her face....and saagar now lifts vidya in his arms like he always used to bfr....vidya cant believe he did tis today...but thn again he still has tht same heart...the one which only has luv for her and nothin else....

yayyy...thts it everyoneeee.....doneeee..doneeee...this is wht i wish would happen in the show in the next few days...or maybe even tommorow...once again thnx for the comments...and hope u all enjoyed...and hope this gives u all some positive hope till tommorow....

keep smilin always

Shaili

wow i think u should change it to long because u write really good and i really want u to continue 😉