A Short FF....plsss read.... Update pg 3.

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armulover

@armulover

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

^^...tina...thanxx sooo much....and u knw i already have my continuing ff...pls read tht...there are goin to be many more amazingg scenes in tht one....all romantic.... 😛

Shaili

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Ritika

@ritzy2ritz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Saagar - kaise khush rahonga....jab ke meri khushi ka har karan hi mujhse dur ja raha hai...kaise muskarau jab mujhe hasane wali hi mere paas nahi rahegi...mein hi humesha kehta tha...woh phul hi kya...jis mein koi khusbhu hi nahi...waisey hi woh insaan hi kya jiske paas vidya hi nahi...aur aaj meri samaj mein aya...meri baton ka matlab...mein aaj tak nahi samaj saka....woh saagar hi kya jiski zindagi mein vidya hi nahi

SHAILIII SHAILI SHAILI diiii ..OMG theres lnes were BEAUTIFUL ...soooooo good.. i cant find any complex -enough words to describe it ... OMG! pls pls pls... do not end it here ! this is realllyyyyy goood! 😳

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armulover

@armulover

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

hey ritika...thanx sooooooo much...thankoo...(vidya style)hehehe.... 😳 im flattered by ur lovely comment...u knw as i told tina...i promise ill update my othe ff...and it'll have many many SV scene...and cute dialogues...promiseeeee.....pls read tht one and let me knw wht u think.... 😊

Shaili

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Meha

@N3ha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

awwww that was very cute

i hope something like that

happens in the next few days,

your an excellent writer. i loved

ur ff.

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Mandy Singh Walia

@Little Foot

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

hiiiiiii
wow.....it's amazing...
i love it when Sagar is crying.....
and i love all scenes and parts between SV.
u really should write a book^^. very well done!
actually i havent learned hindi (punjabi) but after watching 1year indian tv i dont need any more translation or subtitles...
it's so amazing...would be nice if u continue!
love u all 😛

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armulover

@armulover

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

oh thanx.....well yea hindi tv teaches u all....thts how i learned too i guess...and today i can write a ff....hehehe...and u knw on SV...all of us can write a book....we're soo much in luv with them...tht we can all do tht... 😛

Shaili

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Mandy Singh Walia

@Little Foot

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

yaaaaaaaa......thats true......maybe i m also going to try something like that one day 😆

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

that was a wonderful wonderful FF, shaili!! 👏 👏 👏

absolutely loved it....i wish they'd show atleast 10% of what you've written...but you never know with these creatives....and you translated as well...kudos to you girl...

the best thing i like about your fanfics is that your characters and events are so close to the reel ones, i can totally visualize S, V or Sin (or anyone for that matter) actually saying these dialogues..

keep rocking girl!! 👍🏼