FF:Mohobbat ke Rang URGENT NOTE:Pg54 - Page 39

Originally posted by: stargirl345

wat dulhan thread?

-Ruchika

i meant your dulhan of the week thead Ruchi!😳

Originally posted by: atohani99

Well yeah I will call a truce Ruchika, but I can see I'm out numbered and over ruled in this forum anyway 😆 😆 . that, u are!😆

Oh well, I think we can agree they are both lucky 😆 yes, we do.😆 i sound like an automated voice message.😆

-Ruchika

here's an update. srry for the shortness.



Part 18



Vidya is shocked after Sagar's kiss. Apparently, so is evertone else.
There is silence in the room. Then...

DJ:All right! That was hot yo! Now, why don't you 2 lovebirds go take a break.
I'm gonna put on another jammin' song now.

Vidya runs away, blushing madly.

Tusshar: Wow Sagar. Engagement hain humari, aur romance kar rahe ho tum?
(laughs) Kya baat hai!

Sagar(looks around nervously and simles):Yeah, well that'e me Tusshar.
I never miss a chance.

Barkha(joins conversation):Arre Sagar, tum abhi bhi yahan ho? Aapni patni ko dhoodne nahi
jaoge?

Sagar(laughs):Maine socha, ki jab tak woh pal yaad aaye, acha hai. Kyunki mujhe pata hai,
ki jaise mein Vidya ke saamne jaonga, woh mujhse lare gi, aur mujhe bhashan degi, ki saabke saamne
kaise behave karna chaiye.

Tusshar and Barkha start laughing.

Barkha:Frankly Sagar, mujhe nahi lagta hai, ki Vidya ne tumhe kabhi bhashan diya hoga.

Maaji comes into scene.

Maaji(pulls Sagar's ear):Agar woh nahi degi, toh mein toh zaroor dungi.

Sagar(shrieks):OW! Mom, aap yeh kya kar rahe hain? Maine kya kiya?

Maaji:Tune kya kiya? Lo, Tusshar, tum apne dost ko samjaho ki ussne kya kiya.

Tusshar(confused):Uhhh...

Barkha:Arre main baata ti hoon. Sagar, you kissed your wife in front of a crowd and embarasses her.

Maaji(lets go of his ear):Haan, suna Sagar?

Sagar(still trembling):Mujhe nahi lagta hai ki maine koi glati ki. I mean, what's
so bad about kissing your wife?

Tusshar:Dude, it's not the fact that you kissed her, it's the fact that you kissed her in front of
EVERYBODY!

Maaji:Bilkul sahi. Apne doston se kuch sekha karo Sagar beta. Ab jao
Vidya se maafi maango.

Sagar:Yes Mom(wearily heads for his room)I can't beleive I'm about to apologize to my wife
for kissing her! Oh god. The world these days...
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sorry if it was boring for u guys.
hopefully, the next one will be longer and more entertaining. 😛
and sorry i couldn't add a dance sequence.
do forgive me. 😊


-Ruchika

That was adorable Ruchi!!

Bechara Sagar...I think he needs a hug from me.... 😆

He has to go apologize to his wife? 😆 😆

Please do continue soon, but make them longer! 😉 😳

Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

That was adorable Ruchi!! thnx!😳

Bechara Sagar...I think he needs a hug from me.... 😆 sure, more like me!😉

He has to go apologize to his wife? 😆 😆 i know, i decided to add some humor.😆

Please do continue soon, but make them longer! 😉 😳 i'll try.😛

Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳

-Ruchika

LOL, it was funny to c Maaji come in and tell him off, 😆 😆 . btw how come she was the disco, trying to find a new husband?? 😆 😆 .

Poor Vidya, Sagar should have known bettter, instead he has embaressed her, quite funny to see him muttering to himslef at the end there.

Keep it going, looks good

hey ruchi i just loved your fanfic.. never knew that you have tusshar as well and Barkha too great.. now waitign for the next part eagerly 😳 👏 👏

all i'm gonna say; what a cute episode Ruchika, have read this epi for over four times ! 😆

Originally posted by: atohani99

LOL, it was funny to c Maaji come in and tell him off, 😆 😆 . btw how come she was the disco, trying to find a new husband?? 😆 she was the disco? wait, im a little confused here.😆 .

Poor Vidya, Sagar should have known bettter, instead he has embaressed her, quite funny to see him muttering to himslef at the end there. haah, i laughed while writing it too.😆

Keep it going, looks good

-Ruchika

Originally posted by: nishtha

hey ruchi i just loved your fanfic..thnx nish!😳

never knew that you have tusshar as well and Barkha too great..ya, well now u do.😆 now waitign for the next part eagerly 😳 👏 👏 thnx alot!😳

-Ruchika