FF:Mohobbat ke Rang URGENT NOTE:Pg54

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok, i've decided to write this scene that came across my mind last night. i'm not sure if im going to make it into a ff. it all depends on if u guys like it or not. here we go... 😛



Vidya, lost in her thoughts was out on the roof, gazing up at the sky. She was a confused gal. She had always wanted sagar to recover, but she never knew that he would become such an arrogant man afterwards.

*~Flashback~*
It was the first night when sagar came home from the hospital after his recovery.
Sagar(gritting his teeth):what the hell are you doing in my room?
Vidya:woh. ji, hum to bas-
Sagar: get...out...
Vidya:ji?
Sagar:i said, GET OUT!

Sagar shoves her out the door.
Vidya, leaves, crying fearfully...

*~End of flashback~*

Tusshar is passing by and sees Vidya crying up on the roof.

Tusshar:vidya, kya hua? tumhare ankhon mein...

Vidya: Tussharji, hum apko kya bataein. jabse yeh theek hogaya, tabse-

Tusshar:Vidya, tum chinta mat karo, sab theek ho jayega. ao, mera saath.

He takes her inside the house. But neither of them knew that Sagar had been watching everything with
a suspiscious glare in his eyes. For some reason, he didn't exactly understand why, but when Tusshar was talking to Vidya, he had
an urge to punch Tusshar, and scream at him.(Jab Dil Miley plays in the background)

Sagar: yeh mujhe kya hogaya hai?

Thunder claps, and Sagar rushes inside...still confused.

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ok, that's all. it's really bad, but it was my first time. plz excuse any mistakes, as i did this really fast.
anyway, plz comment, whether it be good or bad, hopefully good...😆




-Ruchika


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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!! thanks a lot... please do some more scenes..
continue soon..its awesome... Sagar getting jealous 😆 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx yuvika di! 😳

-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok, this is really sad! 53 views, nd only 1 reply(excluding mine)???????? 😭 😭 😭 guess i wont turn it into a ff then... 😭
i was so excited b4! 😭


-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no no Ruchika!!! Maybe you shud edit the title to tell everyone its a ff!!!!

Anyways on to the actual post!! It was really really good!! I love the jealousy angle specially when it's OUR adorable Sagar!!!

Please continue soon,

Meera 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ruchika I like it continue with it...I like the jelousy in Sagar 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok, i changed the title, let's see if i get more comments! 😛

btw, thnx for ur comments meera di nd rushvi di! 😃

-Ruchika
Edited by stargirl345 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆Ruchika it's really very very good .
Edited by sidbhat - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww...Ruchika that is such a lovely scene! Do continue it soon! 😛 Kind of the scenes I'm expecting after Sagar's recovers..hopefully the Creatives will adhere to this atleast! 😛

keep smiling...
Love
Soni
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very nice, RUchika! do continue, you write well! 👏 😃 We'll see if this actually happens in the serial! 😉

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