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Ruchika

@stargirl345

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

thnx nabi! 😳 will update in a couple of hours! 😉

-Ruchika

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Ruchika

@stargirl345

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

ok, never mind, i decided to update now. so here we go...

Part 2

As Sagar goes downstairs, he is lost in his thoughts. Could it be possible? Tusshar and Vidya? But what did it matter to him? He didn't even love Vidya.
As he went to his room, he saw Vidya in there, arranging all his clothes in the drawer.
Sagar:Vidya, tum kya kar rahe ho/
Vidya: Ji, hum to bas apke kapre jama rahe the, per hum chalte hai
As Vidya turned around to leave, Sagar held her hand. he didn't know what came over him, but he didn't want Vidya to leave. He wanted her to stay with him.
Vidya:Hi, ye, ap kya kar rahe hai?
Sagar:Vidya, aaj se tum mera hi kamre me raho gi. Yaha hi sona, yaha hi khana, yaha hi rahe na, mera saat...
Vidya is blushing madly.
Vidya:Ji, hum hamara saaman leke aate hain.
She shyly burst out of the room, leaving a confused Sagar.
Sagar:What's happening to me?

~Next Morning at the Dining Table~

Aniket: Sagar, aaj ghar me maine party rakhi hain, naaya project shru karaenga na?
Sagar:Theek hain jijaji.
Aniket:Tum chaho to apne doston ko bhula sakte ho.
Bas Surili nahi.
Sagar: Kyu?
Aniket: Bas maine bola na?
Sagar gets angry and leaves. Harsh and Chachi smirk. Vidya looks worried, but Tusshar gives her a reassuring look.

~In the evening, at the Party~

In Sagar and Vidya's Room
Vidya is wearing a red sari, but he blouse is annoying her. She can't seem to tie the knot in the back of her blouse. Soon Sagar comes out of the bathroom, wearing a black suit, with a red tie, and his hair is licked back with gel. When he sees Vidya, he is shocked at her beauty. She looks amazing in the red sari, with matching bangles and earrings, a gold necklace, and her hair is left out. Sagar suddenly has an urge to...
Sagar: Vidya...lao main baand tha hu.
He ties the knot on Vidya's blouse as she blushes madly and whispers in her ear...
Sagar: Vidya, aaj tum bahut sundar lag rahe ho.
Vidya blushes. The wind is blowing hard and the window is open. Vidya's pallu lands on Sagar's face. In slow motion, he removes the pallu from his face.
Sagar:Ab hogaya.
Vidya could really embarass a tomato from the way she is blushing.
Vidya:Ji, chaliye.
Sagar offers his hand and they both walk downstairs to the party.

ok, that was ok i guess, it didn't turn out to be the way i wanted it to, but oh well. Please excuse any mistakes as I didn't proofread it. 😳 Oh and I promise another update for the evening, I probably won't have time update it much next week, cause I'll have school then, so until spring break lasts... ENJOY! 😃

-Ruchika

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*Reemz*

@*Reemz*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Hawww...you made me blush with that last part. Mujhe sharam aati hai. 😆 Great update!! And I can so imagine Harsh and Chachi smirking like idiots! Continue soon! 😉

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Durre Hussain

@romantic_stylez

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

realy nice....I loved it plz do continue! 😊

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Ruchika

@stargirl345

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

reemz di, jitne sharam apko parna mein ahi, ussa koi jada sharam mujhe likhne mein ahi! 😆

thnx for ur compliment though! means alot coming from u. i'll never be as good a writer as u though! 😆

-Ruchika

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Ruchika

@stargirl345

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

thnx sweety_16. 😳

-Ruchika

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

Wow Ruchika!!!

That was an amazing part...I really thought that the last part....was.... 😳

Please please continue soon...can't wait to see what will end up happening at the party!!! 😃 😃 😃

Luv ya loads and loads! 😳

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Ruchika

@stargirl345

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

ok, time for update!!!

Part 3

~At the Party~

Photographers surround Sagar and Vidya as they come downstairs for the party.
Man 1:Mr.Sagar,I heard this new project is going to be your biggest one yet.
Man 2:Mr.Sagar,there's always a woman behind a man's success, apke liye ye kaun hai?
Man 3:Mr.Sagar,suna hai ke apke aur apki khaas dost Surili ke beech-
Sagar:Excuse me, no comments please.
He gives a sharp glare to Man 3 and walks off, hand in hand with Vidya.
Maaji:Arre Sagar beta, acha hua tum agaya. Mera saath ao, tumhe kisi se milwana hai.
Sagar goes with Maaji, leaving Vidya to talk to Shalu.
Shalu blabs on about how Chinu is going to get her a gold ring. Vidya listens with a hopeless smile on her face.
Somehow, Surili gets an invitation to the party, and Sindhura brings her in. They plan schemes on how to throw Vidya out of the house.Meanwhile...
DJ:Are you ready to rock?????
Shalu:Yiessssssssssssssss!
DJ:Here's a slow one comin' up for you...Get ready to shake your bootay wid Jab Dil Miley!!!!!
Shalu:Chinuji, chaliye na.
She drags Chinu onto the dance floor.Poor Chinu is sweating like crazy!
Tusshar:Vidya,mera saat ao, ek idea aaya.
(Music of the song starts)
Tusshar leads Vidya onto the dance floor. He puts his hand on her waist and pulls her close.
Vidya(scared):Tu-tu-tusshar. ap ye kya kar rahein hai?
Tusshar(puts a finger on her lips and whispers):Shhhhhh.Vidya, chinta maat karo. Main batata hu.
(First verse of the song..."Iss ishq mein aisi aag lage hooooooooo...")
Meanwhile, Sagar is watching from near the bar and he doesn't look too happy seeing his wife with Tusshar.
Sagar(grits his teeth and says to himself):Ye Tusshar ko toh main chorunga nahin.
As the music plays, Tusshar is telling Vidya his plan.
Tusshar:Dekho, Sagar tumse naafrat karta hai na?
Vidya:Ji.
Tusshar:Per, jahatak mein Sagar ko jaanta hu, woh bahut jidi hain. Toh agar woh tumhe mera saat dekhaga, toh phir uska jaalan hogi, ki uski patni kisi aur ke saat itne kareb dance kar rahe hai.
Vidya(still confused): Apko yakeen hai yeh chaal chalegi.
Tusshar(smiles at Vidya's innocence):Mujhe pura yakeen hai. Per tum ghabrana nahi theek ha. Mein abhi thora tumko ghumaunga, lekin tum chinta maat karna theek hai. Warna acha se effect nahi agaya.
Vidya:Ji, theek hai. Hum inke liye kuch bhi kar saakte hai.
9Jab dil mile mile mile dil mile. Tab ghul khile khile ghul khile.)
Tusshar spins her around and puts both his hands on Vidya's waist. Vidya, following the plan, puts both her hands on his neck.
Sagar is really angry now. He makes the bartender make him a shotglass and drinks it in anger.
Sagar(gritting his teeth):Tussharrrr. How dare you????
(Second verse starts..."Jabse tuuuuuuu hai, iss dil mein, iss dil mein...")
Now Tusshar spins Vidya so that her back faces him and runs a hand across her face.
Vidya:Tusshar ji...
Tusshar(whispers in her ear):Vidya please. Dekho abhi Sagar dekh rahe hai, aur uski ankhon mein meri liye bahut nafrat dikh rahi hai. Iska matlab homko thori der aur natak karna parega.
Vidya:Sach, unki ankhon mein jalan? Shukriya Tusshar.
Far away, the bartender is getting rally pissed off. Sagar has drank 7 glasses already!
Sagar does an unusual eye movement and clutches his fists.How dare Tusshar touch Vidya?
(Second verse ends..."The music starts..."
Tusshar and Vidya are dancing intensley. Sagar is giving them a nasty glare.Meanwhile, Sindhura sends Surili over to Sagar.
Surili:Hi sweetheart.
She leans over to kiss him, but he backs away.
Sagar(grits his teeth):Get away!
Surili(looks at Vidya nad Tusshar dancing then back at the angry Sagar):oh acha. mujhe saab samajh aagaya hai.
Waise Sagar, jitne bholi Vidya banti hai, utne woh hai nahi. Abhi dekho na, kaise chipak ke dance kar rahe hai Tussha ke saat.
Sagar:Surili, tum bhi jinte chalak dikhte ho, iss koi jada ho.Now go away.
Surili:Sagar-
Sagar:I SAID GO AWAY!!!
Surili quietly backs away.
(Third verse starts..."Jo kaho tum...")
Vidya spins around Tusshar with one hand on his chest.
Tusshar spins her around and pulls her close.
Sagar:Aaj ana do, in dono ko main chorunga nahi.
Puts his drink down.
(Third verse ends..."Koi tauba kare koi sijda kare...")
Tusshar brings Vidya really close as the song ends.
Sagar has really lost it now. He throws his glass back near missing the bartender and rushes off to his room in a frenzy, his ears flaming red, and anger filling inside his body.
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ok, that's it for today.hope u all like it! 😳
here's a sneak peak for tomorrow.
Sagar grabs Vidya's waist and pulls her close so tight that she can't move.
Sagar:Ab mujhe saach saach batana, kya tum Tusshar se pyaar karti ho?

-Ruchika

Edited by stargirl345 - 18 years ago