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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh man, batwara!!!! You are getting good at the sad parts, 😆
Enjoyed this part as well, do update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
enjoyed alot!
good epi, like i say every time... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kshre25

Oh man, batwara!!!! You are getting good at the sad parts, 😆
Enjoyed this part as well, do update soon!




thnx shrey di! will update in a couple of hours! 😛 ya, for some reason, im good at writing sad parts and singing sad songs. but in real life, im a pretty happy person! 😕 always cheerful nd bubbly! 😛 😆


-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
Please update soon Ruchika! Can't Wait! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: xmanisha

enjoyed alot!
good epi, like i say every time... 👏




thnx manisha! 😳 sometimes i really wish i could direct this show 😆


-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: noodles

Please update soon Ruchika! Can't Wait! 😊




thnx noodles! 😳 next part is comin' up! 😛


-Ruchika
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hey guys, here's the next update! i managed to do it!=P



Part 13


Maaji:Iska matlab kya ho sakta hai Aniket?
Aniket(confused):Pata nahi Maaji. Shayid Sagar aur Vidya ke beech-
Maaji:hey bhagwan!(breaks down crying)
Hamesha mere beta aur bahu ke beech aisa kyu hota hai?(cries)
Jab sabse pehli baar Sagar aur Vidya ki shaadi hu thi, tab bhi Sagar ko
Vidya se nafrat thi. Aur aab bhi...(cries more)

Aniket comforts Maaji and takes her to her room.

Aniket(thinking):Kal toh mein in dono se baat zaroor karonga.

~Dinnertime~

Vidya is serving everyone food. She briefly stops as she is serving Sagar and they share
a small eye-lock session, their eyes brimming with tears as they stare.

Sindoora:Arre Vidya. Rukh kyu gayi, hum saab bhi hai na?
Vidya(guilty):Ji.
Aniket(thinking):Arre. yeh kya tha? In dono ki ankhon mein assu?

Aniket was not the only one to notice Sagar and Vidya's odd behavior...
Maaji had sensed it too.

Chinu:Toh dada, aapka honeymoon kaise tha?
Sagar(angrily):Kyu Chinu? Tum kyu jaana chate ho?
Chinu(frowns):Dada, hum toh baas aapse ek sawal pooch rahe hain. Isme
kya problem hai?
Sagar(stands up in anger):Problem hai Chinu! Tumhe koi haq nahi hai mujhse yeh poochne ka!

He bursts out of the room and goes upstairs.

Chinu:Humne toh bas-
Vidya:Bhaiya, aap chinta maat kijiya. Hum dekhte hain.

She hurries upstairs.

As Vidya enters the room, Sagar is banging his fists on the wall.

Sagar(in pain):Ahh! Ouch!

Vidya rushes over to him.

Vidya(worriedly):Yeh kya kiya aapne? Haan? Yeh bhi koi tarika hai aapna gussa-

She stops as she realizes what she's done. Sagar pulls his hand away.
They have an intense eye-locking session and the song Maula Mere plays in the
background.

Soon, Aniket enters the room.

Aniket(angrily):Sagar! Yeh kya tarika hai aapne bhai se baat karne ka?

Sagar:I'm-I'm sorry jiju. Pata nahi-

Aniket:Mujhse nahi suna hai. Pehli toh tum dono mujhe yeh baatao ki
yeh tape iss kamre ke beech kya kar rahe hai.

Sagar and Vidya look shocked. They never thought about what could happen
if anyone else in the family saw the tape.

Aniket:Bolo na! Tum baatao Vidya. Yeh tape yaha kya kar raha hai?

Vidya(scared):Ji, woh to bas-

Aniket:Chalo, main hi baata deh ta hoon. Tum dono ne iss kamre ka baatwara kiya hai!

Sagar and Vidya are in awe.

Aniket:Main ek baat yaha saaf kar deta hoon. Maaji hamesha chate thi ki tum dono kush raho.
Agar mein unko baatado ki tum dono ne kamre ka baatwara kar diya hai,
toh phir(pause)toh phir woh yeh baardash nahi kar payngi.

Vidya:Nahi! Jijaji, aap chinta maat kijiya. Hum-hum nahi karenga baatwara.

Aniket(smiles):Yehi mein suna chate tha. Chalo, ab mein chalta hoon.

He leaves and Sagar stares at Vidya.

Sagar:Vidya, yeh tum-

Vidya:Humhne baas yeh bola tha, ki kamre ka baatwara hoga.
Aajse hum waha par soenge(points to sofa) aur aap waha(points to bed).

Sagar:Per Vidya-

Vidya:Humhe kuch nahi suna hai.

She leaves.

Sagar kneels beside the bed and breaks down crying.

Sagar(crying):Vidya. Tum kyu nahi samajh pa rahe ho?
Mein-mein tumhse kitna pyaar karta hoon.
Tum kyu nahi samajh pa rahe?
Kyu?
Kyu?
Kyu?

The night dorwns in Sagar's words.
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ok guys, same clothes cuz itz the same day.
Sorry if it went by really slow.
Didnt mean it to go that way...
But i cant reveal my trump card yet!
5-comment drill!

-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
Yay! I'll comment after reading it! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg Ruchika....

I nearly cried....that was a good part!!!

I really wanted to cry.... 😭 😭 😭

In a way call me evil, but I like this separate time for awhile because then when they get back together, it'll be even more magical!!

Trump card?? Kaisa trump card?? 😕 😕 😕 Aapni di ko nahin bataogi?? 😳 😳

Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: noodles

Yay! I'll comment after reading it! 😃



will wait noodles! 😛


-Ruchika

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