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Shreyasee

@kshre25

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#111

I just really like this story, its gets more exciting everytime i read it! I'm always waiting for you too update.
So since I'm the fifth one, I can expect an update shortly right? 😉

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Ruchika

@stargirl345

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: kshre25
I just really like this story, its gets more exciting everytime i read it! I'm always waiting for you too update.
So since I'm the fifth one, I can expect an update shortly right? 😉

thnak you!!! im glad u really like this story! 😳 and yes, an update will be here shortly! 😛

-Ruchika

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Shreyasee

@kshre25

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#113

P.S. Ruchika, Harry Potter rocks!!

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Ruchika

@stargirl345

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: kshre25
P.S. Ruchika, Harry Potter rocks!!

haha! ur a fan too? nice! 😆

-Ruchika

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Ruchika

@stargirl345

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#115

ok guys, next update!

Part 8

~The next morning~

Vidya is making breakfast and she's wearing this.

Meanwhile, Sagar comes out of the shower.

Sagar:Vidya! Meri shirt kaha hai?

Vidya(turns around):Arre yahi, bistaar pe-

She immeditely turns around seeing Sagar bare-chested.
She closes her eyes.

Sagar(laughs):Vidya, kya hua?

Vidya tries to move backwards and point towards the shirt.

Vidya(closing her eyes and moving forward):Ji, yaha hi hogi.

Then Sagar gets an idea.

Sagar(smirking):Theek hai Vidya. Mujhe shirt mil gayi aur maine pehenli.

Vidya sighs and turns around. Then Sagar grabs her.

Sagar(flirty smile):You know sweetheart. Itna aasan nahi hai, Sagar se bachke jaana.

Vidya(blushing shly):Humhe-humhe chooriye na.

Sagar:Why sweetheart? Main kyu chooru? Tum meri patni ho, aur hum honeymoon
pe aaya hai na? Aur waise bhi, mujhe thora toh haq hai na, meri patni ke upar?

Vidya(blushing like crazy):Suniye, humhe abhi choordijia. Hum nashta banathe hai, aur
tab tak aap tayiar hoke aajaiyaga.

Sagar(smiles):Theek hai, ab tum itni pyaar se bhol rahe ho, toh phir theek hai.

He lets her go, and Vidya shyly runs away.

~In the lobby~

Vidya and Sagar are down in the lobby, getting ready to explore Goa.
Sagar is wearing this.

Soon they bump into Tusshar and Barkha, who are walking hand in hand.

Sagar:Oh i'm so-Hey! Tusshar? Barkha? Tum log yaha?

Barkha:Hey Sagar. Hi Vidya. Hum dono toh aisi bahar ghoomne jaana wala the.

She is wearing this.

Vidya:Toh hum char ek saat hi ghoomne chalte hai phir.

Barkha:Ya. That's a great idea! Chalo Vidya. Mujhe tumhse bahut baate karni hai!

They start walking.

Tusshar:Oh great. Just great Vidya.

He is wearing this.

Sagar:Hey man, don't you go blaming my wife!

Tusshar:Chill Sagar. And I'm sure ki tum bhi yehi soch rahe hoge.

Sagar:Kya?

Tusshar(smiles):Yehi. Ki aaj tumhko Vidya ke saat akela waqt bitana
ka time nahi milaga.

Sagar:Whatever. Chalo, ab yeh do kahan chalige?

~At the beach~

Barkha:So Vidya, mujhe toh tumhare baare mein saab pata hai.

Vidya:Woh kaise?

Barkha(smiles):Tusshar ne muhjhe baataya. Suna hai, ki tum dono ache
dost ho.

Vidya(smiles):Haan. Kabhi bhi unone humhe aisa ehsaas nahi dilaya, ki hum
anpaar hai. Joh shayad yeh bhi kabhi nahi kar pai(smiles sadly)

Barkha:Arre. Yeh toh bahut serious topic hogaya. Waise Vidya, tumhne
Sagar aur Tusshar ko kanhi dekha? Pata nahi kahan chalegaya.

Both turn around and look to see 2 men coming with ice-cream!

Barkha(gets excited):Oh my god Tusshar! I love ice-cream!

Tusshar:Isiliye toh mein laiya hoon.(smiles)

They hug.

Vidya:Yeh gola kya hai?

Barkha:Arre Vidya, tum kha ke toh dekho. Deewani ho jaogi!

Sagar:Haan. Bilkul jaise tum meri deewani hogi ho(winks)

Everyone laughs, while Vidya blushes.

Vidya(licks the ice-cream):Mhhhhhm. Yeh toh bahut achi hai!

Barkha:Bola tha na? Oh, by the way, meri mummy ne ek party rakhi hai aaj shaam ko, hum
dono ki mulakat hu, isiliye.
Tum dono zaroor aana, woh hotel ke paas ek beachouse mein hai.

Sagar:Hum definitely aayanga.

Tusshar and Barkha leave, while Sagar and Vidya go back to the hotel.

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ok, that's it!
that was long!
ok, u know the drill. 5 comments!

-Ruchika

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manisha

@xmanisha

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#116

manisha is commenting again ! 😆
noo, sach mein.. your writing is fantastic 👏
yesss, i'm first !
really i can imagine the whole episode !

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Ruchika

@stargirl345

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: xmanisha
manisha is commenting again ! 😆
noo, sach mein.. your writing is fantastic 👏
yesss, i'm first !
really i can imagine the whole episode !

yay manisha! 😆
thank you! 😳 im glad tht u think my writing's so gr8 and also that u like the ff so much@! 😳

-Ruchika

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manisha

@xmanisha

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: stargirl345

yay manisha! 😆
thank you! 😳 im glad tht u think my writing's so gr8 and also that u like the ff so much@! 😳

-Ruchika

i don't like the ff,
i LOVE the ff ! 😆