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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi. That was interesting! 😊 good job!Sorry can't write more it's really late and I gotta go to bed! 😕
Edited by noodles - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety_16_usa

Thaty was soooooo sweeet....i like the bare chested and the ice cream part the most....plz do continue soon!! 👏



thnx sweety!those were my fav parts too! 😳

-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: noodles

Hi. That was interesting! 😊good job!Sorry can't write more it's really late and I gotta go to bed! 😕



thnx noddles! 😳
it's ok, write more tomorrow! 😆

-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aww Ruchika that was such a cute and romantic scene! I love the way Vidya closes her eyes when she sees Sagar bare-chested, I bet she must've been more than just "tomato red" 😳

aah..I can close my eyes peacefully for a second and imagine this scene with such delight now, since you've described it... 😳

Do continue soon, am loving it!

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: soni595

Aww Ruchika that was such a cute and romantic scene! I love the way Vidya closes her eyes when she sees Sagar bare-chested, I bet she must've been more than just "tomato red" 😳

aah..I can close my eyes peacefully for a second and imagine this scene with such delight now, since you've described it... 😳

Do continue soon, am loving it!

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni



oh ya, she was wayyyyyyyy more than just tomato red! 😳
thnx for the compliments didi! 😳 will update soon!

-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
Continue soon Ruchika....you have more than 5 replies.... 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Continue soon Ruchika....you have more than 5 replies.... 😆



ya, i know di! just wait for 2 seconds, i'll be back! 😆

-Ruchika


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: stargirl345



ya, i know di! just wait for 2 seconds, i'll be back! 😆

-Ruchika




Can't wait for it!!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok guys, next update!


Part 9


Sagar(screams):Vidya, tum tayaar hogi ho kya?

It was evening time and Sagar and Vidya were getting ready for the party.
Here's what Sagar was wearing:




He was fixing his watch and was about to yell again. What was taking her so long?

Sagar:Vidya, tum-(Is in awe as he turns around)

Sagar:Oh my god.

Vidya looks stunning in this saree.




Vidya:Hum kaise lag rahe hain?

Sagar(smiles):Sach bolu?

Vidya:Haan, aur kya.

Sagar(smile fades):Sach bolu, toh mujhe party mein jaane kya itna maan nahi kar raha hai
ab.

Vidya(frowns):Kyu?

Sagar(smiles again):Kyunki, agar hum jaange, toh phir saabke nazar sirf aur sirf tumhare upar rahenge.
Aur mein yeh nahi bardash kar saakta.

Vidya(smiles):Ab toh aapko karna hoga.

She is about to leave when Sagar grabs her hand and pulls her closer.

Sagar(flirty smile):Kyu?

Vidya(blushes):Kyunki humne bola.

Then she quickly runs off.

Sagar:Wow, I'm so lucky to have such a beautiful wife.(sigh)


~At the Party~

Vidya and Sagar walk in. An old lady greets them. She is a little large and
is wearing way too much makeup for her age.

Old Lady: Oh my godness darling, it's so good to see you too.

She grabs Sagar into a big, tight hug.

Old Lady:Haii! Kitna sona hai tu? Maan kare toh mein tujhe raat din bas dekhte
jaaon.

Sagar helplessly smiles, then he moves back towards Vidya who is laughing
like anything.

Sagar(whispers):Vidya. Please meri madat toh karo.

Vidya(laughs):Kyu, aapko apni nai dost milgayi hai na. Toh phir usse baat kijiye.

Suddenly, Barkha and Tusshar come along.
Barkha is wearing this.



Tusshar is wearing this.



Barkha: Hey Sagar, Vidya. Tum log kaab aaya?

Tusshar:Ya, maine tumhe dekha nahi.

Sagar:Bas abhi abhi.

Old Lady:Haii, naam bhi kitna sona hai. Sagar.

Vidya snickers.

Barkha:Umm, mummy. Aap waha jaayi, kisne aapko bulaya hai.

Old Lady:Haan, zaroor. Bye Sagar.(gives a flying kiss)

Sagar(sighs):Thank god, woh chaligayi. Woh tumhari mummy hai?

Barkha:Haan. Chalo Vidya, mujhe tumse baat karni hai. Mein tumhe aapna ghar dikha thi hoon.

The 2 women leave.

Tusshar:Sagar, tu mujhe ek baat bata. Tumhne Barkha ki ma ko itni aasani se kaise pataliya?
Woh toh mujhe abhi tak nahi pasand karti hain.

Sagar(frowns):Arre, tu pooch maat yaar. Main andar aaya, aur phir woh mera se chipak gayi.

Tusshar(laughs):Chalo, drink peta hain.

They walk off to the bar.

~An hour later~

DJ:Are you guys ready to rock?

Barkha's Mom:Yes, get your booty on kids!

DJ:Ok ya'all. Here we go.
Main ab aise yeh light ghoomaunga. Joh couple pe land hogi, unke yaha per ake,
joh ghana mein bajaunga, uspe dance karna parega.
Theek hai, chalo, let's start.

The light goes around and lands on Barkha nad Tusshar.

They dance on Dil Laga Na.

DJ:All right ya'all. That was a sizzling performance! Who'll be next.

Some more couples perform, while the foursome talk.

DJ:Chalo, yeh last couple hoga.

The lights land on Sagar and Vidya.

DJ:Ok, come on down.

Sagar leads Vidya to the dance floor.
Bahon Ki Darmiyaan starts playing in the background.

Sagar and Vidya waltz to the song.(baahon ki darmiyan, do pyaar mil rahe hain)

Sagar twirls Vidya and share share an immense eye lock session.

("Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi")

Sagar pulls Vidya close and puts both hands around her waist.
He slides his hands towards Vidya's bare waist. Vidya is blushing, blushing, blushing.

("Aasman ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand")

Sagar twirls Vidya so that her back is to his chest.
He touches her face and runs a hand across her chest.

(Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan)

Sagar and Vidya came close and stare deeply into each other's eyes.
The song ends.

DJ:Whoo! That was hot ya'all. Don't you guys agree with me?

Everybody claps and Vidya shly runs away.
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ok guys, that's all for today!
please excuse any mistakes!
and go ahead w/ the drill!😆

-Ruchika



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Posted: 18 years ago
hai....I could totally see them dancing to Bahon Ke Darmiya!!! 😳 That was soo sweet...

Loved flirty Sagar...and also loved the coloring of his tie... 😆

BTW....smashing suit for Tushar! 😳 😳 😳

Please continue asap!!!

Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳 😳

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