*~Fall In Love --- All Over Again~* sv-FF - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
great part jaan! luved the wet hair scene 😳 the watch stuck in aanchal 😳 😳 😳 cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sagar: (thnks happyily) yeh tho towyla hi yaha bhool gaye.........*pauses* arre..yeh mujhe kya horaha hai? main...main *softer* khush kyun hu is bare mein? Nehi nehI! mein kush nehi hu! (just brushes it off...and goes to vidya's room)

Vidya: (is sitting in front of the mirror....as still as a statue...look at sagar's picture.....)

Sagar: excuse me.....(knocks)

Vidya: (still in her own world)

Sagar: (yells) EXCUSE ME!!!........(no answer).....

Vidya: (a tear falls on the pic...but she doesnt move)

Sagar: arre...kya main andaar aa sakti hu? (angrily)

vidya: (shakes up) huh? arre..Ji....aap aye...kya aapko kuch chaaye thaa?

Sagar: nehi woh!....actually!...aah...tumhara..kapre...aur uhh towyla (shyly)woh...woh..uhh..*slowly* apko dene aya thaa....


Vidya: (gives a small sad smile) accha...theek hai...dhanevaad.....

Sagar: (in a confused look) huh? ohh....nehi nehi...dhanevaad nehi!...Thank You....(he suddenly remembers the scene where he was trying to teach vidya thnk u)

Vidya: (also remembers tht scene) *softly very softly* "think u" (faces away)

Sagar: (laughs.) accha theek hai....ill take my leav now...

vidya: huh? (confused)

Sagar: woh..main...(sum1 interupts....a person grabs sagar from the back...)

Surili: guess who it is?

Sagar: (happy) arre surili tum?

Vidya: (sad again)....

Surili: haan..woh mujhe kuch kaam thaa isliye main...hospital nehi asaki!...srry jaaaanu!!! (in a flirty voice) *kisses his cheek*...

Sagar: (smirks) accha...kaisa kaam? jo mujhse zyaada important hai? (looking at vidya...trying to show his love and make her jelous)😉

Surili: mera shooting thaa.....isiliye naa....

sagar: accha...madam..tho aap shooting par thhe...(laughs) accha theek hai..(thnks to himself) itne din..surili kaha thi?....*he hugs her*....

Surili: tho aaj hum....ghomne jaye? kya? let's celebrate!!!!!

Sagar: Okay..thts fine with me darling...!! (trying to make vidya jealous again)....

Vidya: (looks at all this in the mirror and is very sad, another tear drop falls on the pic) *she gets up...and gets out of the room....surili just looks at her go...*with her snobish smile* (sagar kinda feels bad)

------------i have to go now.......ill cont later...but please comment😳--------

Edited by Nabihah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
good job, you are very talented
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
great job!.. Uf I hate that surili 😡 ..poor vidya..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
I'm loving Saagar-Vidya's relationship!! 😳 😳 😳 Surili yaha pe bhi tapak gayi!! 😡 😡 My BP increases thanks to her!!

Great job Nabihah!! Can't wait for the coming the episodes...you're fast!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanz reemz! my BP increase too! 😡 😡 infact it increases sooooooooooo much that...that...i wannna strangle her...lol 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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*~Sagar Mistakenly Falls in Love-but denys*~ 😆

Sagar: (walking down the hallway, looking down, humming to a love song) mhh..mhh...mhhhHH..mmhh....

Vidya: (also walking down same hallway looking down also and also humming a love song): la.lalaa...laalaa.....

-----ITS THE SAME SONG-------😳

(sagar and vidya bump into eachother)

Sagar: (shakes up) uhh..srry

Vidya: (surprised) oh..hann..srry...

Sagar: accha nehi theek hai....(leaves and walks past vidya bumping into her shoulder harshly)

Vidya: (shakes up) *ignores and strts walking away*

Sagar: (now strts singing...they arent far apart...they both start singing...vidya is singin wrong lyrics) ehemm?..EHEMEHEM! (vidya looks) woh aap gaana galat garahi hai!

Vidya: kya? aapko humara gana accha nehi lagta kya?

Sagar: arre nehi nehi! *shyly* (pauses) woh...u were singing the wrong words vidya....(now understanding she didnt understand tht...he translates to hindi)

Vidya: accha? (moving closer to him) aapko kya sahi aur galaat mein fark dekhayie deta hai? (implying his behaviour)

Sagar: (embarrased) srry (in a dissapointed voice) *walks away*

Vidya: (feels a little bad..but she thnks he deserved it)

Edited by Nabihah - 18 years ago
DeepaliC thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
aww lol they were humming the same song..cute!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
man read through this whole thing!
that was awesome!

uh-oh jigna you are getting attached to another section! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
please update soon your writing is amazing

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