*~Fall In Love --- All Over Again~* sv-FF - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great job! u r really talented 👏 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
awesome part!! plz contine soon! there should be sum sizzling hot SV scenes... lyk vidya bringing tea to sagar in the morn and sagar yelling at her and then vidya melting and then sagar melting cuz vidya's melting 😳 and then ooooo.... vidya cumin out of the shower with wet hair and then sagar starin at her... 😳 😳 😳 haye... lols... i could go on and on and on!!! 😆
(btw, my name is asha 😛 )
Edited by angad4life - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angad4life

awesome part!! plz contine soon! there should be sum sizzling hot SV scenes... lyk vidya bringing tea to sagar in the morn and sagar yelling at her and then vidya melting and then sagar melting cuz vidya's melting 😳 and then ooooo.... vidya cumin out of the shower with wet hair and then sagar starin at her... 😳 😳 😳 haye... lols... i could go on and on and on!!! 😆
(btw, my name is asha 😛 )

lol im getting there...dont wrry! u guys will hopefully hopefully hopefully! be overwhelmed!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Overwhelmed hey? Can't wait! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
absolutely stunning 👏 ...infact mindblowing...luv the storyline❤️❤️❤️....poor vidya ...i wonder wat will happen to her now....hope saagar remembers sum flashbaks on vidya soon....or at least he realizes tht vidya has rwally done a lot for him.... 😊 ....can't wait for saagar to fall in luv w/ vidya again 😳 😳....lol...i noe itz still a long time for tht stuff to cum...so i'll b a gud gurl...n wait patiently.... 😆

oh!! wow...i still can't get over this FF....too good hun.... 👏

can't wait to read the next part....continue soon....hurry!!! 😳

cheers! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
aww that was so sad!.. hope he really doesn't say all that to her..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sagar: (walks in and sees vidya) Arre tum yaha kyun!?

Vidya: (in a crying voice) hum woh....

Sagar: (interupting) save it for some one who cares!!!! accha suno! agar tum yaha iss ghar mein rahoge naa! tho phir tum apne jaga pe rehna! SERVANT's Quater!

Vidya: (shocked)

Aniket: (runs in after hearing this) SAGAR!!!! (yelling) apni biwi se is tarha se baath maath karna!!!

Sagar: arre!!!!!!! jijaji! mainai kaha naa? ki ye mera biwi nehi hai nehi hai nehi hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (yelling)

Vidya: aap humari baath suniye...(scared)

Sagar: (gets out a hand almost to slap her)

Vidya: (her face is just shocked)

Aniket: (stops sagar) SAGAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SAGAR!!! tumhari himaath kaisai huyi? Vidya pe haath....

Sagar: (interupts again) aap chuphe rahye! aap kehte hai naa? ki ye mera patni hai? tho thik hai! mein mere patni ke saath jo bhi karu!! ye mera phaisla hai!!!

Aniket: SAGAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (now really mad) agar tumne aisai phir vidya se baath ki naa! tho mein!!!!

Sagar: tho kya karege aap? haan? bolo?

Aniket: (furious) sagar!!!! ye tumhari patni hai! koii property nehi!

Vidya: (stops aniket) aap appp...aapko fikre karne ki koii zaroorat nehi hai...aap...please humme akela.....chhordijiye....

Aniket: (angrily) theek hai! lekin! agar sagar ne kabhi tumhe marne ki koshish ki naa? tho!!...tho main!!...(leaves

Vidya: (cries even more..gets up..runs and is about to leav whn she feels a hand stoppping her!)

Sagar: (grabs her hand and pulls her to him.. reallly close*vidya's back facing sagar* and twists her hand.

Vidya: aaahhh!! aaahh! hummein dard horahi hai!!!!

Sagar: acchaa? dard horahi hai? haan??? chordu kya???

Vidya: aap humare saath aisai kyun?

Sagar: (spins her so that now vidya is facing him....pushes her to the nearest wall...and locks her hands to the wall with his.....) (moving closer to her face he says) Vidya....tumne agar!! mujhe ek aur baar kaha naa? ki tum mere patni ho...

Vidya: (trying to face away) (crying) aap...aap...

Sagar: SHHH!!! tho mein.....tumhe! chorunga nehi!!!!!!!!!!!!!( pushes her off on to the bed...) aur haan...(slowly) ek baath yaad rakhna!! ki mein sirf...aur sirf surili...haan..haaan! haan!!!! surili se pyarr karti hu! (echoes)

Vidya:(faces down and cries -shocked- looks at him as he leaves) haiy shabunauth aap humare saath aisa kyun karahi hai??? humne aapka puja ki....apko humesha...humesha...(breaks down while crying...)

-------------next scene ~ Morning ----------------

(Vidya is sleeping on the bed)

Sagar: (yells) MAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! mera naashta kahan hai????????????????????????????????????/

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(wakes vidya up)

Vidya: arre...humne tho inka naashta....(hurries up and gets up - goes to the bathroom)

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Maa: haan haan beta....yaha hai...

Sagar: thanx maa....(puts food in mouth and starts chewing) YUCK!!!!! 🤢 ye kya hai (spitting food out)

Maa: arre you mainai tumhare liye puri banaye hai....

Sagar: sorry maa lekin! ye!!! chii!! yuck! ye kya khana hai kya? vaisai kaal jjo naashta thaa naa..woh bahut accha thaa...kisne banaya?

Maa: woh tho vidya ne

Sagar: kya???? vidya??? chii! woh woh..woh tho!!!! (gets up angrily and elaves)

maa: (thnks) aarre sagar tho pehle aisa nehi thaa? tho phir....aab..woh hamesha itna naraaz kyun?

----im not a very gud writer...or a gud explainer...but i hope you get wht im trying to show here😳--- ill cont later-----😊 please comment😳

Edited by Nabihah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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you said above that you're not a good writer. You have got to be kidding me. Fantastic, just mind blowing! 👏 👏 I can't tell you how much i loved that. You are so talented, i really admire you. You make avis and siggys, i always admire them they're great and you write like a professional. 👏 👏 Seriously i don't ever want to hear you saying that you're not a good writer, i think you're up there with the best!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: 12234

you said above that you're not a good writer. You have got to be kidding me. Fantastic, just mind blowing! 👏 👏 I can't tell you how much i loved that. You are so talented, i really admire you. You make avis and siggys, i always admire them they're great and you write like a professional. 👏 👏 Seriously i don't ever want to hear you saying that you're not a good writer, i think you're up there with the best!

Thank you sooooooooooooooo much!!!! you are soooo sweet! this just made my day!! my whole week....evryones comments give me soo much inspiration! and confidence...thnx a lot!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sagar: (goes back into his room, ....and is about to unbutton his shirt whn........vidya walks in with wet hair)

Vidya:(walking towards him wiping her hair with her towel not noticing him)

Sagar: (just astounded...he stares at her....not exactly smiling but just a WOW! stare....!...just stares....)

Vidya: (bumps into him and gets really scared...) ahh...srry ....humein please maaf....

sagar: (gets out of his dreamy mode...now angry again) tum YAHA?? mere kamre mein??? why??

Vidya: woh...mera kuch kapre aur...aur towlya....aapke bathroom mein...rehgaya thaa...

Sagar: achha theeek hai...aab tum jayo....

Vidya: (strts walking away...whn her aanchaal gets stuck in sagar's watch)😉(to my audience: kuch yaad aya?) (vidya looks back)

Sagar: arre yeh kya....(angrily..) (he puts his hand on his watch...just whn vidya does too...their hands touch...and he looks at her....she is scared a little but still looks back......after a moment...she snatches her hand away covering it up with...)

Vidya: woh...(looking embarased)

Sagar: haan..woh....(strts trying to take it off....) *remembers*:

.... dozes off...

sagar: (thnks to himself) yeh kya...mein...wooh....vidya mere yaad...main....lekin kaisai??

Vidya: (starts trying to take it off with him)* she succeeds.....* (she snatches her anchaal and runs away)

Sagar: (softly) arre tumhare....kapre yaha

-----Next scene ~ sagar goes to return vidya's clothes and towyla------

----ill cont again....please comment...as i said b4..im not that gud at explaining stuff...so i hope u get wht im trying to show-----

Edited by Nabihah - 18 years ago

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