'She’s mine'- FF- Updated (Pg102) - Page 13

Oops! I actually totally forgot about FF yesterday! 😆 😆 Will write today. I have about 1 week left ppl then then I will end the FF.

Till then enjoy...

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

haila didn't know that u write n that too extremelly good 👏
i loved it 😳 😃
can't wait to read more 😉

Hey nancy!

Yeh I used to ages ago for Sindoor but then I stopped. If I wrote a FF in KS then it would get lost 😆 and now I have ideas for Dulhann and the SV jodi...so why not put them in a FF form.😊

Originally posted by: putturani

Great FF Reemz! You introduced me to this new jodi - Saagar-Vidya! Excellent!

Hey! Nice to see you here!!😃 Well i'm glad I did...coz they're so good!😛

hey reemz next part kab likh rahi ho...besabri se intezaar kar rahi hoon... 😳 😳

reshammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!
i'm back!!!
Yaar i hae to go through so much, including 8 pages in this topic 😉 i better have a lot of chapters to read!!! 😆

HAILAAAAAAA 🤢 I think i just died over and over again!!!
OMGGG the door scene, the whole shirt scene and the roti scene!!!! 😳 i'm going crazyyyyyyy!!!!!!
I'll never look at roti the same ever again!! i'll alawys think of saagar-vidya!!! 😳 😳 😳
continue soon reeemu!

Awww ju rock Shaz!! 😃 BTW what is the shirt scene? I cant actually remember my own FF!? 😕

lol what i meant was the NO shirt scene 😉 😉

Sorry for the delay guys. 😳

Even this one isn't great, its hard to think when u hav a mahusive headache. 😕 But see if you enjoy it anyway. 😊

Episode 12

Vidya gives Saagar and her mother odd looks while they give a cheeky grin, especially Saagar. She walks off ignoring the scheming pair.

Vidya: (as she walks off) Maa mein bazaar jaa rahi hu, sabsi lene

Saaagar: Mein chalu?

Vidya: (turns round) Koi zaroorat nahin hai (turns back with attitude and walks out)

Saagar: Toh mein chalta hu… Bye sasuji (pecks kaushalya on the cheek and follows Vidya)

At the Market

Vidya goes up to the vegetable vendor with her basket.

Vidya: Bhaiya yeh kitne ka hai?

Vendor: 10 rupein kilo

Vidya: 10 rupein? Bhaiya kuch zyada hogaye hai. Kal toh 6 rupein ka bhau tha aur aaj-

Vendor: (continues to do his work) Bhau toh yehi hai…lena hai toh lelo.

Vidya: Lekin Bhaiy- (cut off by a woman)

Woman: Arre Vidya, tum? Benaras kab vapas aayee?

Vidya: (smiles) Do din pehle

Woman : Chote Thakhur saath nahin aaye kya?

Vidya: (her mood changes and she stutters) Nahin…woh

Woman: Acha toh lene toh aayege na? Tab milana humein…

Vidya gives an awkward nod.

Woman: Vaise woh teekh hogaye? Ke abhi paagal hai?

Vidya: (glares at the ignorant woman ) Woh kabhi paagal the hi nahin!

Woman: Arre Vidya tum toh bura mangayi.

Vidya looks away annoyingly.

Woman: Mein toh isliye ke rahi thi-

Vidya: (turns to look at her fiercely) Toh mat kijiye…

The woman walks off irritated. Vidya's eyes glisten with tears, she looks down hiding her face, then closes her eyes and after she feels slightly better, Vidya looks up to see Saagar in front of her. She is amazed on the spot as a tear drops down her left cheek. Saagar wipes her tear and Vidya just lets him. He caress' her cheeks and softly kisses her forehead, Vidya looks down and shuts her eyes again. She hears a voice…

Vendor: Behenji aap ko sabsi chahiye ke nahin?

Vidya suddenly opens her eyes and realises that Saagar is not around. She is completely alone in a crowd…

Vendor: (repeats) Chahiye ke nahin?

Vidya still in her own world, shakes her head at the vendor. She walks back silently. As she walks in to her house, Kaushalya notices the empty basket…She walks up to her lost daughter.

Kaushalya: Vidya, sabsi kaha hai?

Vidya: (looks up dazed) Kya?

Kaushalya: Tumhari theli toh khali hai…

Vidya: (looks down at her empty bag) Haa …woh

Saagar comes from behind with 3 bags of vegetables in his hands.

Saagar: Vidya tumne toh saari sabsi mujhe dedi (walks to stand beside her). Maa aapki beti mujhe kya samajti hai? Sab kaam mujhse kaam karvaati hai (Vidya looks confused).

Saagar walks past the two women, puts the bags in to the kitchen and walks back out.

Saagar: (wipes his head) Ab tum khare khare kya karahi ho? Apne pati ko paani nahin dogi?

Kaushalya: (looks at Vidya and expects her not to respond) Main le aati hu…

Vidya: Nahin maa…mein le aati hu.

Kaushalya is surprised at Vidya's reaction and looks at Saagar who has his mischievous grin. Vidya brings the water to Saagar…

Saagar: Thank you

Vidya: (slowly softening up) Nahin...teekh hai. (is about to turn around but stops to look at Saagar again). Vaise aapko kaise pata ke maine sabsi nahin li?

Saagar: (leans forward) Agar tum mere baare mein sochna band karogi tab hi toh kuch kaam kar paaogi.

Vidya: Hmmm…(realises what he said, her eyes widen) Huh?

Saagar: (smiles) Thanks….paani ke liye.

He walks past an astonished Vidya, he twists his body towards her…

Saagar: Waise main uss aurat ko bata diya….ke tumhara pati abhi paagal hai (Vidya looks around quickly) ….apni patni ke liye.

Saagar walks away as he leaves a melted Vidya.

OMG! the last dialogue! pagaal apni patni ke liye! aahhh! !! osooooo oh soooo adoarble! hope u feel better from ur heac ache 😳