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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: mijanur
love every part of this update.sagar vidya bed time romance is superb.i also like the dream house of sv.sahil & sanju scene is also good.you take one month leap. i am sure you will give us some more happy update.excelent writing from you.
at last i want to ask you can i address you as bidu?

Thanks so much for appreciating.. Yes sure u can call me Bidu.. No need to ask for that.. Just be frank with me.. 😊
And lots of thanks to Fatima and Sonudii also.. Love u both..🤗

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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baloSD

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Posted: 14 years ago

#402

Awesome update!!!! i loved all parts the frist part was sooo funny when they trying to hide sagar 🤣
i loved sagar's surprise and SV dream house and i like sahil and sanju scene soo much!!!!
waiting for the next part...

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Shilpa Sobti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#403

OMG!!!!!!!! This is the cutest update EVER!!!!!!!!!! CHO CHWEEET!!!!!!!😳☺️ OMG!!!!!! There is absolutely nothing to criticize Bidzzu🤗👍🏼👏 This update was sooo fantastic!!!!!!! Everything was done so cute! The best part for me was Scene 3😳 Jab Sagar ne Vidya ko surprise diya!☺️ That was sooo cute! I just ❤️-ed the sweet and loving baby pics, and the ones of SV... those were so ❤️-ing!!!!!
The precap sounds really interesting😉😍, lets wait and see what's in store for us😉
great job, Bidzzu🤗 ❤️ ya!

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Neha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#404

Hey Bidz ...

How are you ??

Sorry for not commenting for soo long . Actually I was gone to mt nanis place ..

Just read all ur parts ...

All parts were amazing ...

Loved the way story has moved on ...

You are a great writer dear ...

Awesome work ...

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

Thanks so much for appreciating.. Yes sure u can call me Bidu.. No need to ask for that.. Just be frank with me.. 😊
And lots of thanks to Fatima and Sonudii also.. Love u both..🤗

thanks bidu.i hope you will give us next update soon.

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn
Hey Bidz ...
How are you ??

Sorry for not commenting for soo long . Actually I was gone to mt nanis place ..

Just read all ur parts ...

All parts were amazing ...

Loved the way story has moved on ...

You are a great writer dear ...

Awesome work ...

Hey Neha 🤗

I am fine ... Wbu ?? 😃

No problem ... It's absolutely fine 😊

For once I thought that u r bored with my ff that's why u hav stopped reading it ...

Sorry for thinking like that dear 😛

But finally u r back .. Yippeee

Thank u sooo much for ur sweet comment n for appreciating me n my writing 😳

So now like before, i can expect u 2 comment regularly, right? 😉

Next part will be updated within a couple of hours ... 😃

Anyways, take care ...

Love ... Bidz 😳

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#407

Part 59

Khushiyo ke kuch anmol pal III

Scene 1 - At the Hospital

Sahil is watching TV. Sanju finished preparing Sahil's plate for breakfast. She comes to Sahil with the plate and sits in front of him.

"Sanju samne se hato na. Kitna accha match chal raha hai." Sahil annoyingly tells Sanju.

Sanju smiles, forcefully takes the remote from Sahil's hand and turns the TV off.

Sahil gets irritated and he says, "Kya yaar Sanju. Kitna important match chal raha hai. Aur tum mujhe disturb kar rahi ho. Remote do mujhe."

Sanju keeps the remote om a table quite far away from Sahil. She touches Sahil's cheeks lovingly and says, "Tumhara health sab se jyada important hai, samjhe? Iss liye pehele tum breakfast karoge uss ke baad jo karna chahte ho karo. Aur waise bhi, breakfast mein tumhari favorite dish Alu Paratha hai."

"Alu Paratha!" Sahil tells with a broad smile on his face and lots of excitement.

Sanju teasingly smiles and tells, "Abhi match dekhna hai?"

"Nahi!" Sahil cutely and smilingly tells.

Sanju broadly smiles and says, "Good!"

She takes a piece of paratha, dips it in the daal and feeds Sahil. She keeps feeding him while Sahil eats silently and smilingly stares at his love Sanju. He notices such expressions on Sanju's face as if she is feeling dizzy. He also notices that her face is looking pale which makes him worried and concerned for her.

"Tumne kal se kuch nahi khaya, haina?" Sahil concernedly asks Sanju.

Sanju replies ignoring the fact that she has been starving for a whole day, "Meri baat chodo Sahil. Tum chup chap khao. Tumhe iss ki zarurat hai. Jaldi theek hona haina."

Sanju takes the food near Sahil's mouth but Sahil grabs her wrist and stops her from feeding himself.

"Kya hua Sahil? Khao naa." Sanju worriedly tells Sahil.

Sahil takes a piece of paratha, dips it in the daal and brings it near Sanju's mouth.

"Pehele tum khao. Uss ke baad main khayunga. Warna nahi." Sahil tells Sanju caringly.

Sanju smiles sweetly and eats. Both keep feeding each other. Their feeding session goes on till they get a knock at their door.

"Ahem ahem! Kya hum andar aa sakte hai?" Sagar teasingly tells.

Sanju feels shy while Sahil gives a broad smile and says, "Arey buddy! Andar aa naa."

Sagar and Vidya enter in.

"Kahi humne aap dono ko disturb toh nahi kia?" Vidya teasingly asks.

Sanju shyly smiles and says, "Nahi nahi! Disturb kaisa? Koi disturb nahi kia."

Sagar smilingly says, "Chalo accha hai."

Sagar sits near Sahil and puts his hand on Sahil's shoulder.

"Kaisa hai tu yaar?" Sagar caringly asks.

Sahil smilingly says, "Main theek hoon. Tu bata, tu kaisa hai?"

Sagar moves his hand from Sahil's shoulder, cutely smiles and says, "Kal tak toh mujhe bukhar tha par aab I am absolutely fine. [looks at Vidya lovingly] Akhir kisi ne mera itna khayal jo rakkha."

Sahil and Sanju say together in a teasingly manner, "Aawwwoooww!"

Sagar cutely smiles and Vidya blushes.

Just then a nurse comes in and says, "Aap mein se koi ek ko doctor ne bulaya hai." All nod positively and the nurse leaves.

"Tum log baatein karo. Main jati hoon." Sanju tells.

The rest three nod in a positive way.

Sanju leaves.

Scene 2 - Doctor's cabin

Sanju comes in.

Doctor tells, "Aaiye baithiye."

Sanju sits and a concerned expression is on his face.

"Aap ne mujhe kyun bulaya doctor? Koi serious baat toh nahi hai? Sahil theek hai naa?" Sanju asks doctor worriedly and concernedly.

Doctor replies, "Mr Sahil aab kafi theek hai. Thoda weakness hai, woh 1-2 mahine mein theek ho jayega. Par.."

"Par kya doctor?" Sanju worriedly asks.

Doctor tells, "Dekhiye unke kuch nerves damage ho chuke hai. Darr ne ki koi baat nahi hai kyuki woh minor nerves hai. Par haan aap logo ko dhyaan rakhna padega ke unhe koi tension wali baat naa batayaa jaaye. Aur haan, mentally and physically jyada pressure lena unke liye dangerous ho sakta hai. If he takes any kind of pressure mentally or physically then he can be paralysed forever."

Sanju is shocked. After a few seconds of silence..

"Aap chinta mat kijiye doctor. Aisa kuch nahi hoga Sahil ke saath. Hum sab uska pura dhyaan rakhenge. Humare rehte huye usse kuch bhi nahi hoga." Sanju determinedly says.

Doctor smiles to hear that kind of answer from Sanju. Sanju bids adieu and leaves.

Scene 3 - Sahil's room

Sanju is going to Sahil's cabin with a worried face but somehow she manages to be normal and brings a smile on her face. She enters into Sahil's cabin.

"Kya kaha doctor ne?" Sahil inquires.

Sanju smilingly tells, "Yehi ke tum aab kafi theek ho aur 1-2 mahine ke baad tum pehele jaise bilkul normal ho jayoge."

The rest three smile.

Four best friends pass a full-on masti time. They watch the cricket match and eat some snacks [chips and coke]. Sagar and Sahil plays "panja" while Vidya is cheering for Sagar and Sanju stares at their game with a concerned look but still cheering for Sahil. Sagar realizes that Sahil is not strong enough to win because of his ill health and for this, he chooses to loose the game. Sagar lost the game while Sahil smiles broadly and says "Yaaayy" in a high tone. Sagar smiles seeing the smile on Sahil's face. Vidya and Sanju notice all these and smiles. *Scene is shown quickly with the song "Hai Junoon from the movie Newyork at the background*

Scene 4 - 1 month passed

Sanju is taking care of Sahil by giving him meal, juice and medicine on proper time and making him sleep by running her hands all over his hairs. On the other side, we see SV hugging each other, feeding each other, doing some romance, going college together, visiting Sahil and Sanju regularly at the hospital and all other stuffs. Time goes on like this.

During all these scenes, Vidya's voice-over goes on, "[SS scenes start] Dekhte hi dekhte samay tez raftar se chalne laga aur humhe pata tak nahi chala. Sanju Sahil ki dekh-vaal karti rahi... [SS scene over and SV scenes start] Aur main aur Sagar... [laughs and shyly says] Hum dono ko apne romance se fursat hi kaha thi, at least usse toh nahi. Uska extra-romance aur badmaashiyaan kabhi khatam nahi huyi, aur main chahti bhi nahi ke kabhi khatam ho.. [laughs again] Holi ka break khatam ho gaya aur hum phirse apne college jane lage... [Scenes of SV visiting SS regularly starts] College ke baad Sahil aur Sanju se milne hospital jana, waha hum charo ki dher saari baatein aur masti. Yeh sab aise hi chalta gaya aur dekhte dekhe pure ek mahina guzar gaye."

Precap:

Sahil's discharge from the hospital and his grand welcome at home...

A shocking surprise for Sahil and Sanju arranged by Sagar and Vidya...

Pandit ji arrives to fix the date of the marriage...

So did you all liked this part? Eagerly waiting for everyone to comment.

Don't forget to press like, okay.

Take care.

Love... Bidz 😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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Shilpa Sobti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#408

heyy bidzzu😊
here are my comments:
- Scene 2 was very shocking[:O] when I read that if Sahil takes any mental pressure, he could be paralyzed forever???!!!!!!![:O] that's really really really scary yaaru😕. Hopefully nothing happens to him😊
- Scene 3, was sooo very touching😔 ❤️ I can really imagine the way Sagar would have felt when seeing Sahil down that he was loosing, and then lost the game for him😭 that was soo very touching😔 the song you chose went really good with the scene😉
- The PRE-CAP sounded really fun!!!!!! The wedding!😍 Can't wait!😛 Hopefully, everything goes well😔

Bidushy,

aap mere ko bodh udaas kar rahe ho aapki updates se nowadays😭 Sahil's disease😔 ... Vidya having baby is very fun!😊 just want more happiness in updates... I am not saying the updates are bad yaaru, just very mesmerizing, but also sad at the same time😔 anyways, do continue soon k?😊 tc bye😉

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: shilparoxx
heyy bidzzu😊
here are my comments:
- Scene 2 was very shocking[:O] when I read that if Sahil takes any mental pressure, he could be paralyzed forever???!!!!!!![:O] that's really really really scary yaaru😕. Hopefully nothing happens to him😊
- Scene 3, was sooo very touching😔 ❤️ I can really imagine the way Sagar would have felt when seeing Sahil down that he was loosing, and then lost the game for him😭 that was soo very touching😔 the song you chose went really good with the scene😉
- The PRE-CAP sounded really fun!!!!!! The wedding!😍 Can't wait!😛 Hopefully, everything goes well😔

Bidushy,

aap mere ko bodh udaas kar rahe ho aapki updates se nowadays😭 Sahil's disease😔 ... Vidya having baby is very fun!😊 just want more happiness in updates... I am not saying the updates are bad yaaru, just very mesmerizing, but also sad at the same time😔 anyways, do continue soon k?😊 tc bye😉

Scene 2 comment reply - Sahil was going to die but with god's grace, he was saved 😊 Just to make my ff kinda real, I did this

Cuz u see, he was going to die because few of his nerves are damaged cuz of the tumour, so there should be some effect of the damage of nerves naa in spite of the fact that he's fine? Just tried to make it realistic, that's it 😊

Scene 3 comment reply - That's just to add some emotions to the scene and a little bit masala too 😉 Glad u liked the choice of the song 😃

Yeah precap sounds fun n dont worry, u'll love the wedding parts, next few updates will be a happy long series called "Shaadi Week" 😉

Last para comment reply - These r just twists baby... Agar twists n turns nahi honge toh story ka maza kaise aayega bolo? 😉 And i updated some emotional parts but still there r some romantic n funny parts too naa? 😊 If i keep writing romantic updates regularly then u guys wil b bored of my ff 😆 I know u r not saying my updates r bad

Just trying to make my updates kinda touchy n realistic, that's it 😊 Well dont worry cuz in the next few updates, u'll hav lots of fun 😃 Will update soon 😃 Tc!!

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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Shilpa Sobti

@shilparoxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

Scene 2 comment reply - Sahil was going to die but with god's grace, he was saved 😊 Just to make my ff kinda real, I did this 😛 Cuz u see, he was going to die because few of his nerves are damaged cuz of the tumour, so there should be some effect of the damage of nerves naa in spite of the fact that he's fine? Just tried to make it realistic, that's it 😊

Scene 3 comment reply - That's just to add some emotions to the scene and a little bit masala too 😉 Glad u liked the choice of the song 😃

Yeah precap sounds fun n dont worry, u'll love the wedding parts, next few updates will be a happy long series called "Shaadi Week" 😉

Last para comment reply - These r just twists baby... Agar twists n turns nahi honge toh story ka maza kaise aayega bolo? 😉 And i updated some emotional parts but still there r some romantic n funny parts too naa? 😊 If i keep writing romantic updates regularly then u guys wil b bored of my ff 😆 I know u r not saying my updates r bad 😛 Just trying to make my updates kinda touchy n realistic, that's it 😊 Well dont worry cuz in the next few updates, u'll hav lots of fun 😃 Will update soon 😃 Tc!!

oh okay thanks for clearing my doubts😕 thank you bidzzu tc you too🤗