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Posted: 16 years ago
woooowwww......such beautiful jewelry....
wonderful update as usual yaar....hope you continue soon....
i love adithi....she is soooo shweet!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: emmy21

woooowwww......such beautiful jewelry....
wonderful update as usual yaar....hope you continue soon....
i love adithi....she is soooo shweet!!!!

can you updated the new one
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Posted: 16 years ago
gina
thank u a loooot sweety 4the comment.......sry honey cant do anything abt the jwellery 😆😆............god finding hun.....bt lets c na......maybe i hv gt much mre better in store with me...........😉
manusha
ur display image dear.....very sweet...........thanks yaaar
dipa
thank u yaaar........keep commentin
monu
thank u dear......well will update k ..........
irika
thank u.........keep commentin wnt you
titly
thank u dear...............keep commentin
sd forever
long update........i will try.......k.......thank u anyway hun.....u,gina and monu think the same way r wt..😊....well will think.....
nupa
goddd........i am blushin hun...😳😳😳......tats sooooooo sweet f u 2 say.......well check out the update to c f they dance.....i would love to write daily ones but nw got a tight schedule.....u knw classes and stuffs.....but will try 4 sure
emmy
thank u hun...........keep commentin na.......i love adithi 222222.......but i liked shamin.....😭.
parichand
thanks 4 commentin......will post t really sooon
percii
thank u dear,.......will continue soon
Edited by ri19 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

part 10

(soorrrry 4 the late update guys....me ws sad f dulhann ending......sooo cldnt make t to write.........)
it was at about 10 when sagar got up the next morning...."vidya.."he called out....there was no reply....'man where is this girl goin every morning.....,.'he wonders to himself.....he gets up and showers.....when he opened his wardrobe he saw a paper pinned to a shirt.......
sagar........sorry....i tried to ake you up.....i am goin out with adi.....i will sometimes come to the hotel straight ok..........bye.....tc.....
"vidya....yaar tum bhi na,...."he smiles and takes his dress to change.......he passed his tame mainly by browsing,talking with tia,seeing tv and everything.....
it was afternoon he was taking a nap when someone opened the door and got in .......he lazily looked up and he saw vidya......his sleep went at once...........she was wearing this.....
and she wasloooking soo stylish and beutiful.........
"hey ....i thght u were sleeping...."vidya said ....turning back at him....."vidya can i say something......"sagar asked looking very serious......."sure "vidyasaid siting down on the bed beside him.........
"if u seriousily dont stop wearing these type of dresses i have to rethink my decision of u going with ranbeer......yaaar hw can i let go such a hot girl man......"sagar said........"you......"vidya screamed and started hitting him with the pillow......
it was evening the time for the reception.....sagar was checking himself in he mirror when vidya came fully dressed......"how do i look........."she asked....."i cant do this......can u please be my wife,......man u r looking sooo good..."
sagar said looking at her ......"you dumbo.....well tum bhi kaafi ache lag rahe ho....".....they laughed and went down.......they reached the hall at 6......it was wonderfully decorated......
"wow...."vidya said......the guest started to arrive.....sagar introduced his friend and relative to vidya....they were behaving as if they were very happy about the marriage......sagar was holding vidya so close to him....
armaan:"buddy....yaar.....phew cool man..."
sagar hugs him and rithima
sagar:"vidya.....my best friends armaan ritsy......"
vidya:"hey....hw r u guys...sagar has lot about you....."
the result of this was after 10 when the reception was a sort of winding up all had become closer to vidya.....they were all circling around her and was talking to her in such a way that they had been friends for years....
tia came at around 9...she spoke to them as if she and sagar was just classmates.....
at the near end of the function vidya,sagar and his friends were siutting in a huge circle....tia was not in them....
armaan"yaar kya party.....ba ek kami dhi...."
sagar:"wt yaar"
ritz:"tum dhonom ke dance but its possible now....."
all said ya,....come on
sagar "no way..."but to his surprise vidya said....."come on sagar...one dance,......"
they both got up......the song was played
Kahin to.. kahin to.
Hogi woh
Duniya jahan tu mere saaath hain
(they startthe dance.)

Chaha mein chaha tu
Aur jaan bas tere mere zajbaat hain
Hogi jahan saba teri
(sagar helds vidya close......)

Palkon ki kirano mein
Lori jahan chand ki
Sune teri bahon mein...(
they have a short eyelock)

[Jane na kahan woh duniya hai
Jane na woh hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Inti kafa nahi ] - [2]

Saasein kho gai hai kiski aahon mein
Mein kho gai hoon jane kiski baahon mein
Manzilon se rahe dhondte chali
Aur kho gai hai manzil kahin rahon mein
(sagar gets more close to her.)

Kahin to kahin to hai nasha
Teri meri har mulakat mein
Hoton se hoton ko
Chumti o rehete hai hum har baat pe
Kehti hain fiza jahan
Teri zaameen aasman
(vidya pulls away a bit)

Jahan hai tu
Meri hasi meri khushi
Meri jaan....
all clapped and that bought sagar back to reality......tia was watching all this and she dint look much happy either.......she saw sagars mom and dad sitting there...she got up and walked there....
tia:"can i sit??"
sm:"sure...."
sd:"wt do you want"

ti:"i just came to say a soory...i am very soorry.....i should have never done this.....my mistake....mein kabhi usiki zindagi mein nahi ayega...."
sd:"its ok...."
tia:"thank you....chalte hai....."
she gets up and go.....sagars mom and ad exchange looks..........
vidya was talking to rithima when bharat came....
"bidhu.....one sec...."....
"kya hai bhaiya"vidya asked..............."time for the truth ..kya ho raha hai......or jhut math bholna....."he looked at her.......
sorry guys i know it was short............ws it borin???😛soorry😉
Edited by ri19 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
no it was not boring at all....sorry, i never gave comments your fanfiction ,but i always liked it..........
i really like your story...and the path in which the story is heading,i am getting restless to read more....cant wait.....plzzz update soon.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
No not at all.................its not at all boaring.......i loved it seriously.....good going girly.....
i liked the Nok-Jhok part b\w SV n ofcourse the dance.......n u have described it properly
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Posted: 16 years ago
Riya, Riya, Riya ... Yeh tumne kya kiya? Kamal kiya !!!!!😃
Hehe amazing update hun !!! Haiii I am loving how this story is leading .. Seems like Sagar is totally in luv with Vidya now.

Update soon !!

And oh yeah I loved the part where Vidya called Sagar for dumbo 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy nice part i wasnt boring it was great please continue soon
Posted: 16 years ago
nooooooo yaar it wasn't boring at all, it was cute, i hope they fall in love very soon. continue when you get time.
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Posted: 16 years ago
yaar so lovely and cutey
love Sagar dialogues to Vidya
and love Vidya when says to him DUMBO!
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
cont soon take ur time
dont need to say sorry
see yaa
always love u!!

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