FF:Why is It Hard to Love.Part 17 updated 6-9-2009 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what wiil Gauri do in the party?!?!?!?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Exciting persii...can u write the complete thing in english...i dont understand hindi so good...love it..do continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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just read it, pretty good. ggrrrrrrr. stupid gauri!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bmtdluver

just read it, pretty good. ggrrrrrrr. stupid gauri!!


lol thank u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok im gonna countine hope u like this chap oh and hopeful by the end of today ill post the party up kkk

Divya: Mitul bago

Mitul: Why

Divya: Neel

Mitul: Uhhh

Amar and Divya left Gauri's room and Gauri went to Mirtika

Mirtika: What happened?

Gauri: The usually Divya told me to take me medicine

Oh and know with Divya and Amar

Amar: I know Gauri put the poison

Divya: If you start being nice to Mirtika you'll win Mirtika from Gauri

Amar: And if I be nice to her... You know what will happen

Divya: True

Amar: By the way give this to Mirtika tomorrow for her birthday you know I wouldn't be able to and tell her its from you

Divya: Ok

Amar: I don't want to lose Mirtika to Gauri

Divya: We already lost

Mitul: Lost what Mamma

Divya: Lost the gift I gave you

Mitul: Whatt

Amar: Mom is confusing right okkk gooo noooo bye

Mitul: Um papa

Bharat: Mitul leave I have to talk to you dad

Mitul: OFFF fine

Bharat: If I see that Gauri again I'm going to kill her

Divya: Come down

Bharat: How she is always gonna do something she already threaten to take Mitul and Adiytai's live

Amar: KI

Divya: GAURI

Amar: I hope everything turns out to be fine

-The next day on there birthday there all (forgot to mention that Bharat and Aditi have 2 kids one girl and one boy and choti ma is still there) at school-

New Characters are here

Mitul: Mirtikaaaaa

Mirtika: Yes Bhaiya

Mitul: I don't want to go to Englishh

Adiytai: You to know

Shonali (Aditi and Bharat's daughter) :Adiytai Bhaiya I'm skipping thought u can come with me Mitul

Mitul: Nice

Adiytai: You'll end up in soo much in trouble stop it

Mirtika: Darh poke (scaredy cat)

Mitul: ha lets go Shonali and Mirtika

Mirtika: Hum ne jarei (I'm not going)

Adiytai: Whose scared know?

Mirtika: I have to go to the bathroom

Adiytai: Ok

Mirtika went to the bathroom and say her dad at school

Mirtika: Papa what are you doing here

Amar: Be careful you know Gauri

Mirtika: Gauri ki

Amar: Gauri will take your life away and I don't want to lose you

Mirtika: Don't say a word about Gauri diddi

Amar stayed silent

Mirtika: You're the one who didn't accept me when I was born and said I have such a bad kismet and Gauri diddi helped me and you want me to go against her know well guess what papa ill never I'LL NEVER

With that Mirtika walked

hope u like ittttttttttt
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i know it abit to short i had to think of something but i promised u id put this part it short but i hope u all like ittt

~At the party~

Gauri: Happy Birthday Mirtika

Mirtika: Thank you Gauri diddi

Gauri: Your welcome and than she put an evil smile up

Mirtika: Hum abi athi hai

Gauri: Ok

While Mirtika was going away she ran into Shonali and Shonali made her drink the orange juice that Gauri said give to Mirtika

Shonali: Mirtika

Mirtika: Shonali

And than Mirtika passed out

Mitul: MIRTIKA

Everyone ran and started to help Mirtika and Divya started to cry and Amar knew it was Gauri so he went our and was about to smack her until and she said remember the deal hit me I'll kill her next time and with that Amar left.


Gauri is evil heee

OH hope u liked it and ty for reading


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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG she mixed something in her drink is Mirtika dead? Continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh no...hope Mirtika is alright. Gauri ki bachhi! Why can't Gauri just stay out of everyone's lives?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohhhhhhh.this stupid Gauri yeha vi pouch gai....uski to aisi ki taisi............anyways plz continue soon dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
i need to talk to someone real quickk can iii

it important

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