(FF) Meri Jaan - Update page 51 - 14.06.09

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Suhana

@Suha_18

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#191

I second Radika.....Charri, how about an update now??

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-CharriMango-

@-CharriMango-

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#192

Eeeh... sorry to say this but I don't feel like writing anymore, I just don't now why. Maybe 5 parts left till I end it. I was supposed to write 20 parts but seriously, I have lost the magic in my fingers. Sowwie<3. And my big exams are starting next week 😕

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: -Charri-
Eeeh... sorry to say this but I don't feel like writing anymore, I just don't now why. Maybe 5 parts left till I end it. I was supposed to write 20 parts but seriously, I have lost the magic in my fingers. Sowwie<3. And my big exams are starting next week 😕

waaaaaaaaaah!! oh, good luck!! bet youll ace em!!! btw, i was just wondering, why is it stf?? and just for the record, you did not lose your magical touch!!

Edited by bmtdluver - 16 years ago

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-CharriMango-

@-CharriMango-

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#194

Don't throw shoes at me after reading the update! 😆
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Part 11, Fight

-Aditya's POV-

I was standing behind the door, ready to hold attack Imran when he came. Deepika was sitting in the sofa looking all scared and worried. But I had told her to keep calm and don't worry, everything will be fine. Some minutes went and I could hear some foot step outside. I looked towards Deepika and caught her eyes. I gave her a signal that he is walking towards the door. She nodded and held her knees, close to her chest. I could hear the foot steps even better as he came closer and closer. I got ready as the door got opened slowly.

He came in and closed the door. All the lights were off so he couldn't see us. I could hear him saying something to himself, but I didn't figure out what he said. He started to walking to the stairs, like a thief. As he went past me and ran and held his arms behind his back. "Who the hell are you?!" said Imran, trying to get out of my grip. I dragged him outside and Deepika came with me, holding her phone in her hand.

I punched him in his stomach. "What are you doing here?" I asked, holding his collar. "Did you think you can mess with Deepika?" I punched him once more. "If you try to mess with Deepika, you have to mess with me!". I saw him taking out a knife from his pocket. "Oye, mind your language and get away from me!" he said and pointed towards me with the knife. I didn't let he go. "Let me go before I do something to you with this knife!" he said and slapped me on my face. "Do you think I'm scared?" I said. "Deepika, call the police now!" I yelled to her. She dialled the number. "If you dare to call the police, I swear I will kill you!" I looked shocked at Imran. How can a guy be like this? I've never seen in my life someone like he. I let him go.

He started walking towards me and I started walking backwards. He came closer. My heartbeat raised up and I was warm and angry. As he stood in front of me I started to beat him. I punched him in his stomach and he punched me back. But then, he took his knife in front of me again. I was just about to punch him. "Hit me!" he said while laughing. I looked at Deepika. She still tried to call the police. She looked worried and slapped her mobile. What's wrong with the network? Why can't she call the police?

I punched him hard and he held his stomach. But before I could take his knife from his hand, he cut my arm. I yelled in pain. I fell down on my knees and closed my eyes.

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#195

Charri Partner !

Wonderful update , though short , but fantastic !!👏

Loved It !!😊

Kaunsa phone connection hai ye??😆😆 Work hi nahi karta time par...

Wonderful update !

Thanks for updating !

Vidya😊

Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago

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-CharriMango-

@-CharriMango-

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: bmtdluver
waaaaaaaaaah!! oh, good luck!! bet youll ace em!!! btw, i was just wondering, why is it stf?? and just for the record, you did not lose your magical touch!!

Thanks Radhika! It wasn't enough place for "Sirf Tumhaare Saath" so I just wrote STS (sorry, I just realized I have written STF😆).

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#197

Ooooo Aditya in action 😆 Haiii if you mess with Deepika, you mess with me ? Woopsie, Imran better not mess with either of them !

What an intense update Charri ji ! I hope Aditya didn't get too hurt. Oh well, I guess it's true as they say- love hurts 😒😆

Great update meri pyaari si Cherry ! Update soon, can't wait till the next part !