FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: ri19
gina............
it was simply wonderful hun..............its only today i saw that u were writting this............my god simply gr8.........and hw can i go without reading the ff written by a such a sweet girl who always commented at first for my ff..................so i sat and read it the whole thing from part 1..............mind you i am having my xams but still i read............hhehehe...😉......simply said....................its simply the cutest,lovliest and the most swee one..............gr8 job dear ...................pls continue sooooooooooon and make that prem say an i love you fast.....................

love you 😊

take care....................🤗

riya......

ps:this one especially for u.............👏

hope u are happy.............😆

awww OMG i am completely surprised !
Just becuz i read ur lovely ff, doesnt mean u have to read mine .. aww ur too sweet <3 <3
And during exams ? ufff now i feel bad n a bit mad too .. like i said, your just too sweet dearest !
Awww thanks hun, i am glad u liked it and thanks for ur lovely comments n support

luv ya <3

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#422

Hello everyone !
Sorry for not updating yesterday .. Really sorry Kiran and Suhana .. But here's an update now .. Part 27 :

The time was 9 o clock in the night. Mohit was on his way home. He was happy. Madhu accepted his proposal and Priya gave them permission. But there's still two permissions to go. His family and Madhus father. He reached his house and parked his black cabriolet. He walked slowly into the house and saw that everyone was sitting in the livingroom. "Oh, good everyone is gathered", he thought. He took a deep breath and walked towards them and gave them a big wide smile." Hi ", he said.
-Hello beta, did you have a good time with your friend? Mohits mom said. Prem giggled. "You mean girlfriend", he muttered to himself. But luckily no one heard him, except for Mohit. He gave him a stern look.
-Anyways, papa, mama aur daadi, main chahti hoon aapke saat ek zaroori baat discuss karlo.
-Ehumm you forgot the most important person, Prem said
-No I didn't, Suhana isn't here. So who did I forget? Mohit said and smiled.
-Acha aisa baat hai, toh tum bhi dekhlo. Mummy aap jante hain aapki pyaari Mohit kahan tha aur kiske saath? Prem said to his mom.
-Nahi toh kiske saath tha ? she asked and looked at Mohit.
Mohit gave a serious look to Prem, but he just smiled.
-Humari hone wali bhabhi ke saath ! Prem said with a happy voice
Everyone was shocked and looked at Mohit who got embarrassed.
-Prem kya keh raha hain, kya yeh sach hain? Mohits father said.
-Woo kya hai nah ke maine...Mohit said but then Prem interupted him
-...pyaar kiya hai ! Prem continued.
-Prem stop it, can you let me speak? Mohit said and looked angry.
Prem got quiet.
-Okay, I will tell you all everything. And I want you all to listen to me first and then tell me what your views are. Ok ?
-Okay beta, now start, daadi said and got curious.

For ten minutes, Mohit talked about how he saw Madhu for the first time and how he was taken away by her presence. And then he kept speaking about her, how he likes her personality, spirit, and how good and nice she is. Mohits parents looked at each other and couldn't believe that their own son Mohit is talking about marriage. Daadi was happy that he had found love, specially a girl like Madhu.
-Sooo, what do you all think? Mohit said when he had finished talking. He was very nervous and anxious.
-Bahu, jao meethaie lao, humari Mohit ne humari liye bahu dondh liya hai ! Daadi said.
Mohit smiled and looked at his parents.
-Papa ? Mummy ?
Both of them nodded. Mohit smiled. He had gotten their permission.
-Mohit jee, you have my permission too, Prem said.
-Beta, how about we go to their house tomorrow for rishta? Mohits father suggested.
-That will be great, daadi said.
Mohit blushed a bit and said: whatever you all decide.

The next day Priya was preparing everything for Mohit and his family to come. She made several kind of sweets, cleaned the house twice and made sure everything was perfect. But there was one thing she was worrying about. Her father. He didn't knew much about Mohit nor about him and Madhu. She went to her fathers room and brought him tea. "Perfect time to talk about Mohit before they arrive", she thought to herself.
-Papa, chai ( tea ), she said and gave him a brick with a cup of tea.
-Thank you beta, he said.
-Papa, aaj ek rishta aane wala hai. From Prems house, she said.
-Kya ? he said and was shocked
-Jee woh ...she said, but then she heard the doorbell. She went to open the door, leaving her dad completely confused. Ek rishta from Prems house? He got happy.

Priya opened the door, out was standing Mohit and his entire family: his parents, grandmother, Suhana and Prem.
-Aaye jee, she said and welcomed them into the house.
All of them went inside and went to the livingroom. Priyas father came.
-Namaste, he said.
-Namaste, hum hai..., Mohit's father tried to say, but Priyas father interupted him.
-Jee hum jaante hai. Priya ne humko bata diya hai.
-Accha, toh aap jante hai ke hum kyun aaye hain. Hum chahte hain ke aapki pyaari si beti humari ghar ke bahu ban jaye, Mohits father said.
Just then Madhu came into the livingroom, wearing a pink salwar kameez and looking very beautiful. She heard what Mohits father had said and blushed.
-Jee humko koi aitraaz nahi hain, hum bahut khush hai, Priyas father said.
Priya was confused. Madhu got happy.
-Toh rishta pakka? daadi said.
-Jee haan, maine toh Priya ko pehle si bhola tha ke mujhe Prem bahut pasand hai aur un dono ki jodi, Priyas father said and smiled.
Everyone was completely shocked, specially Prem and Priya !!!!

Hope you all liked it !
I will try to update next friday, as usual .. I will really try ..
Have a nice weekend 😛

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

#423

awesome update!! lued how prem teased his bro!! aaw, her father thought it was for p&p......hmmm, not bad idea😆

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ViSu_SD

@ViSu_SD

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Posted: 16 years ago

#424

Wonderful update, Gina Di!!! I loved it!!! Hmmm, are Prem and Priya gonna get married??? Keep up the great work! waiting desperately for the next update....=)

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Suhana

@Suha_18

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Posted: 16 years ago

#425

Okay....I soooooo am gonna go and give Priya's Dad a big hug ....kya baat kehdi unhone!!! And a huuuuge hug for you too Gina...for wiriting such a wonderful update!!🤗 🤗🤗Haii...rishta aaya Mohit ka Madhu ke liye...par Priya ke Dad ne kuch aur hi soch liya!! I think that's a great idea...PP should get married too...as well as MM...hmmm...I'm sure PP ko bohot bara jhatka mila hoga.....but Gina...no problems okay??

And trust Prem to embarass Mohit...bechara....he got so embarassed in front of his parents and Dadi...but...how could he give such a lovely news without Suhana being there....hmm....Suhana isn't happy with Mohit Bhaiyya....hehee...accha teek hain...Suhana will forgive him...only and only if MM and PP both get married!! 😃😃

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dipa or divya(every1 in ma family calls me divya.)

@hot chilly

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Posted: 16 years ago

#426

haha the confusion in the end was great. it was funny too, on how priyas daad came to the conclusion.......great update.....loved it it was sweet and funny...........do continuee soon.

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riyana

@riya_luv_sv

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Posted: 16 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

awww OMG i am completely surprised !
Just becuz i read ur lovely ff, doesnt mean u have to read mine .. aww ur too sweet <3 <3
And during exams ? ufff now i feel bad n a bit mad too .. like i said, your just too sweet dearest !
Awww thanks hun, i am glad u liked it and thanks for ur lovely comments n support

luv ya <3

no yaar......i found tat u are writting it and hw cld i miss such sweett ff written by such a sweet girl..........no need to feel bad ok.......i just read the new update it was simply the sweetest of ever yaar...........toooo sweet........i really like dadi now........well update soooooon ok...................👏👏👏

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Monica

@_Monu_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#428

HII GINAA!!

READ THE UPDT!!

IT WAS AWESOME AND FUNNY!!

SOOO HILARIOUS WHEN PREM TEASING MOHIT!!

HE HE THE BEST SCENE!!

LOVE THE END TOO!

CONT SOON!! WHEN IS POSSIBLE!! SEE YAA!!

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Kiran

@KiranSD1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#429

ahhh too good yaar
now both their marriages will be fixed!!!!!
party time
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

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Radika

@svforever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Hihi, Im such a prankster 😆 Leken maza aaya nah ? 😛
Thank you very much meri pyaari si Radika <3
Dun worry, ill manage something for priya and prem .. leken first madhu aur mohit, since mohit is the eldest son 😛
Thanks !

Maza definitely aya! 😆

Okie doks....can't wait to see when Priya and Prem get together. Bye! Luv ya!