FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Hehehe I'm very chalak 😆 Aww but I didn't mean to scare u ..
Thanks alot Radhika ji 😊

lol!! luv ya di!!

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hello to you all sweet PKP readers ! 😊 Firstly I would like to thank you all for reading it & for your sweet comments.
Now some of you have requested that the updates should be a bit longer. So I have made them a bit longer now, hope you can bare with me.

So here I go, Part 18 :

It was the day of the party. Preparations were being held at Prems house. It was a very important day. Mohit, the eldest son would be returning home after being on a business trip in America for 6 months. Mohit was 24 years old ( 2 years older than Prem ) and has graduated from one of the most pretiougest universitys in India. He is now working at the familys business company. Their company was one of Indias most biggest & most famous companies.
Everyone were exited about Mohits returning, especially Prem. He had missed his brother very much. The two of them were really close, they shared & talked about everything openly. For Prem, Mohit was his best friend. And same for Mohit. Even though their differences. Prem was very ambitious, shy and even though he was the hottest guy in his college- he never dated any girls. He was only friends with them, nothing more. Mohit on the other hand was not very ambitious, although he was very smart. Mohit wasn't shy and said and did what his mind and heart told him to. He was also one of the hottest guys in his college days- and he did take advantage of this. He dated and flirted with many girls. But never found anyone he really liked.
But the brothers do have somethings in common in such as both of them love and respect their family very much. Both of them are one of the hottest bachelors in India. And both of them are very decent- they would never do anything to hurt anyone or loose respect.

The time was 6 pm. Almost all the guests have arrived at Malhotra mansion. Prem and his family were greeting & welcoming everyone. There was no sign of Priya & Madhu yet. Prems parents noticed that Prem was looking at the door very often. They smiled and knew Prem was very anxious for Priya to come.
- I just spoke with Mohit, and he has arrived, Prems dad said.
- He's here? Okay wait , Prem said and was happy. He went to the center of the huge livingroom where all the guests were and talked loudly.
- Can I get everyones attention please? Bhaiya has arrived. So how about we surprise him with a big warm welcoming?
Everyone smiled and looked at the entry door. There came a man who looked like this http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v171/ajnabee_angel/Karan%20and%20Mohit/th_MohitMalik6.jpg, and of course it was Mohit !
Everyone said loudly: welcome home!
He got very happy and shocked.
-Wow I didn't expect this, he said ( Oh well to be honest, he did actually expect this )
He went straight ahead to his daadi first and took blessing.
- Meri pyaari si daadi, ohh I've missed you sooo much, he said and kissed her on the forehead.
Then he went to his parents and greeted and hugged them too.
-Great to have you back son, his dad said.
-I've cooked your favourite food today, his mom said.
-Oh mummy, I've missed your delicious food.
And then he saw his little sister Suhana standing there waiting for him. He smiled.
- Suhana meri pyaari si ...
- Itni deer kyun lagi? Maine toh kaha ke aap jaldi wapas yaha aaye. Liken aapne itni zyada waqt waha thi. Kyun aapne mujhse jhoot kaha? ( Why did you take such long time? I told you to come back soon. But you spent so much time there. Why did you lie to me? ) Suhana said with a sad face.
- Mujhe maaf karlo Maleka ji, Woh kya hai naah ke maine waha itni waqt iseliye thi kyunki main tumhari liye deer zyada toofa lao ( Forgive me Maleka ji, The thing is I was there for that long time because I wanted to bring you many gifts ) Mohit told his little sister.
- Aap meri tofa hai bhaiya, ( you are my present, brother ) she said and smiled.
Mohit smiled and hugged his little sister.
- I love you bhaiyya, Suhana said and hugged him tightly
- I love you the most, Mohit said and kissed her on the cheek.
- Ehumm, someone said. Mohit looked back and saw Prem. He got happy.
- Prem? he smiled and hugged him.
- Bhaiyya, how are you? Prem said and smiled.
- I'm good thanks, how are you? Mohit asked.
- Prem bhaiyya bahut acha hai. Aap jante hai kyun? Kyunki usko pyaar ho gaya hai, ( Prem brother is very good. Do you know why? Because he's in love ) Suhana said and smiled.
Mohit was happily shocked.
- Wow Prem you're in love? Wait so where's bhabhi ji? he said and gave a laughing smile.
Before Prem could say anything Suhana interruped and said: There she is, and pointed towards the door.
Both Prem and Mohit turned around and there by the door they saw a girl in a beautiful blue salwar kameez ( http://figurafashion.com/images/Anarakali-Dress30.jpg) , she had long dark hair and looked absoultely beautiful. The girl was none other than Priya !

-Wooow that's bhabhi ji? Oh dear, do u think she minds if her jijaji flirts with her? Mohit joked with Prem.
-Stop it yaar, and don't call her bhabhi ji, Prem said.
-Seriously she's absolutely beautiful. You're one lucky guy. By the way she doesn't happen to have a sister does she? Mohit said
-Actually ... Prem said.
Right then another girl came. She was also young, about Priyas age, she had a beautiful salwar kameez too ( http://www.bollywoodsalwarkameez.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/03/salwar-kameez-hcm-2039.jpg ) and had medium long dark hair. That girl was none other than Priyas sister Madhu ( Shamin/Aditi ).
Mohit stared at Madhu. Wow, he thought. She was the most beautiful girl he had seen in his entire life.
-Wait who's that gorgeous girl next to bhabhi ji? Mohit asked Prem
-That's Priyas younger sister, Madhuri I think, Prem said.
-Madhuri? Mohit said and got lost in his minds and thought about the name and about the girl he just saw...

Okay so that was part 18. Hope u liked it !
I will update next part next friday ... Sorry if it was too long !
Have a good weekend everybody 😊

Luv,
Gina <3

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@hot chilly

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Posted: 16 years ago

#183

i was waiting for ur update for a long time, loved the update, it 's really nice

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: hot chilly
i was waiting for ur update for a long time, loved the update, it 's really nice

Aww really? Hehe sorry that u had to wait so long ^^
Thank u dear, you're too sweet!
btw what's ur name? I'm Gina 😊

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Monica

@_Monu_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#185

WOW GINA IT WAS SO CUTEY YAAR!

AND MOHIT IS SUCHA NAUGHTY GUY!

HE IS PRYIA'S DEVAR NOT JIJA!!

SORRY IF U DONT MIND I CORRECT U!

AND I THINK NEXT TIME IT WILL BE SOMETHING FUNNY!!

BTW LOVE IT AS USUAL !!

AND ABOUT MY FF....

IM NOT FEELING WELL THESE DAYS....

AND HAVE LOTS OF HOMEWORK!!

I WILL TRY TO DO NEXT PART!!...

SORRY GINA AND SORRY VIDYA....

I KNOW U BOTH ARE SO EXITED TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN !LOVE THE UPDT!!

CONT SOON TAKE UR TIME!!

SEE YAA!!

ALWAYS LOVE U!

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: _Monu_
WOW GINA IT WAS SO CUTEY YAAR! Aww thank u Moni jee !

AND MOHIT IS SUCHA NAUGHTY GUY! I know hehe😆

HE IS PRYIA'S DEVAR NOT JIJA!! Oopsie, my mistake ! Thanks for clearing that out for me ..

SORRY IF U DONT MIND I CORRECT U! I'm glad you did 😊

AND I THINK NEXT TIME IT WILL BE SOMETHING FUNNY!! Hehehe, maybe, maybe not ... 😳

BTW LOVE IT AS USUAL !! Aww I'm happy u did 😉

AND ABOUT MY FF....

IM NOT FEELING WELL THESE DAYS.... Aww take care of yourself dear. I hope u get better ! ❤️

AND HAVE LOTS OF HOMEWORK!! Good luck with your homework! 👍🏼

I WILL TRY TO DO NEXT PART!!...

SORRY GINA AND SORRY VIDYA.... No need to apologize dear !

I KNOW U BOTH ARE SO EXITED TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN !LOVE THE UPDT!!

CONT SOON TAKE UR TIME!!

SEE YAA!!

ALWAYS LOVE U! Luv ya !

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Kiran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#187

great part
please wire the next part fasT!!!

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Suhana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#188

Arre...mere Mohit aagaya....oooppssiiee...I mean...Mohit bhaiya aagaye...haii Gina...Prem aur Mohit dono ko mere bhaiya bana diya...never mind...😆

Anyway...the update as usual was amazing...heheee....pehla nasha...pehla khumaar...naya pyaar hain...hmmm....should I sing this for PP...or for the new jodi in the making...ahem...MM....😳 😆😆

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Suha_18
Arre...mere Mohit aagaya....oooppssiiee...I mean...Mohit bhaiya aagaye...haii Gina...Prem aur Mohit dono ko mere bhaiya bana diya...never mind...😆

Anyway...the update as usual was amazing...heheee....pehla nasha...pehla khumaar...naya pyaar hain...hmmm....should I sing this for PP...or for the new jodi in the making...ahem...MM....😳 😆😆

Awww, but you know dear I did that for the best of Prem aur Mohit. If you weren't their sister, then you would probably start flirting with them- and then poor Priya aur Madhu don't have chance. They can't compete with Maleka ji, right ? 😆😆

You can sing it generally, on stage .. For both jodis 😉😉
Thanks Suhana ! ❤️