FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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Radika

@svforever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#191

Di! That was awesome and just wayyyyy toooooo cute! Please update soon!

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SDforever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#192

lol!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahaha: "do u mind if jijaji flirts with bhabbi ji" lol, i just luv that line. Dont worry mohit u have madhu!! awww... two cute couples!! gr8 job gina!! keep updating when u finish with work! i luved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

#193

wow gina di!! that was just mindblowing!! amazing job!! it was sooooooooo cute!! lol, luv the jeju flirting line!! awesome update, prem's sister is funny..........................and mohit....well, somebody fell in love in first sight. luv ya!! bye

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Suhana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Awww, but you know dear I did that for the best of Prem aur Mohit. If you weren't their sister, then you would probably start flirting with them- and then poor Priya aur Madhu don't have chance. They can't compete with Maleka ji, right ? 😆😆

You can sing it generally, on stage .. For both jodis 😉😉
Thanks Suhana ! ❤️

Arre....is this what you think of me?? 😲😲 😆 Kya main itni buri hoon?? Suhana isn't like that at all....main...aur flirt?? Chi chi....kaisi baat kar rahi ho?? Gina...you've gone crazy... 😆

Of course I wouldn't do that...Priya and Madhu would just have to ask Maleka for persmission to flirt with Prem and Mohit.... 😳 😆😆

I would have sung the song on stage.....but there's a problem...I can't sing...so Maleka orders Rajkumariji to sing instead...ready to sing?? 😃

Thank you kisliye?? 😕😕

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#195

Hello ji !

Ok this part is dedicated to svforever, Radika ! But she deserves a much better update than this. Sorry ji, I wasn't on my writing mood today..
So here it goes, part 19, lol the longest update probably ( sorry !!! ) :

Priya and Madhu went first and greeted the elders. Then they noticed Prem standing there with someone and started to walk towards them. Madhu noticed the guy standing next to Prem.
-Wow who's that handsome guy? Madhu asked
-You mean Prem? Priya said
-No I mean the guy standing next to him. Oh wait, did you just say that Prem was handsome? Madhu smiled and said.
-Erhmm no, you said that .. Umm I think that's his brother Mohit, Priya said and tried to avoid the subject.
-Wow his brother is hot.
-Madhu !
-What? Just look at him! Don't you think he's goodlooking?
Priya looked at Mohit. Wow he really was handsome actually, but she didn't say anything. They reached to the guys.

- Hi, Priya said.
-Hello bhaa... Mohit tried to say but Prem interruped him and said:
-Hi Priya, Hi Madhuri..
-You can call me Madhu, she said and smiled.
-Hello I'm Mohit, he said and looked Madhu.
-Nice to meet you, Madhu said and smiled.
-The pleasure was mine, Mohit said.
Both of them smiled and had an eyelock. Meanwhile Prem and Priya just stood there and stared at their siblings. They were shocked. They had never seen either of them like this. What was going on they thought.
-Umm Madhu would you like to dance? he asked
-Yes, I would love to, she said.
And both of them just went to the dance floor and started to dance.
-Wow that was ... odd, Priya said.
-I know, I've never seen bhaiyya like this I mean...
-I know wow .. Love at first sight , can it be? Priya said
-Must be, or else they wouldn't been like this. Oh well it's good to see bhaiyya like that, Prem said.
Priya smiled and looked at Prem. He was looking very handsome today. This was the first time she had seen him in a suit. He had a black suit, white shirt and a blue tie.

Prem looked at Priya and was amazed by her beauty. She was looking absolutely gorgeous in that blue salwar kameez and her hair let down.
-Do you want to dance? Prem asked her.
Priya was shocked. She didn't think he would ask her. She looked around. Does she dare? She wants too but ...
-Umm...
She looked at him. He was smiling shylie. Aww, oh well she doesn't want to make him feel awkward or so...
-Sure, she said.

Both of them went to the dancefloor and joined the others. They started to dance but had a distance from one another.

( shaam hai, jaam hai aur hai nasha.
tan bhi hai mann bhi hai pighla huaan
chhayi hai ranginiya phir bhi hai betaabiyan
kyun dhadakta hai dil
kyun yeh kehta hai dil
deewanon ko ab tak nahi hai yeh pata
aaj ki raat khona hai kya paana hai kya
khona hai kya
aaj ki raat khona hai kya paana hai kya
khona hai kya )http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kYDYSvB7kI4

Prem looked at Priya. She blushed and looked down. But then looked up again, and looked into his eyes. He smiled. She smiled.
He took her hand and twirelled her. She then put her hand on his shoulder. He put gently his hand on her back. And they danced, closely.
Suddenly all eyes were on Prem and Priya. Priya got worried.
-Prem, people are looking.., she said worriedly
-Let them look, he said with a confident voice.
-But..., she hesitated
-You shouldn't think about what other people think. Just do whatever you want and like. This is your life, just enjoy, Prem said and smiled.
-You're right , she said and smiled.
And they continued their dancing...

-Haii look at them, they look so sweet , Prems daadi said to Prems mother, while looking at them from far.
-I agree, they make a perfect jodi, Prems mother said.
-And look there, there's another perfect jodi, Prems daadi said and pointed at Madhu & Mohit.
They were also close-dancing and couldn't keep their eyes from each other.
-Madhu aur Mohit? Wah, yeh dono ladkiyan ki jadoo kamal hai ( Wow, these two girls "magic" is amazing ), Prems mother said and giggled.
-Kamal toh hai, aur ab waqt agaya hai ke yeh dono kamal ladiykan do kamal bahu banjayee ( They are amazing, and now the time has come when these to amazing girls should become two amazing bahus )
Prems mother smiled. And both of them continued watching the lovely couples-to-be.

The song changed to a slow song. Everybody started to dance closely now. Prem didn't knew what to do. Did he dare close-dance with her? He looked at her. She looked confused. So did he.
-Ermm, he said.
Priya looked at him and she could see he didn't knew what to do and felt embarrased. She remembered what he had told her earlier: You shouldn't think about what other people think. Just do whatever you want and like. This is your life, just enjoy.
She put her hand on his shoulder and went closer. Prem was shocked, but happy. They gently danced closely. And with every beat, they got closer. And closer ...
Their faces came so close that they were about to kiss. Prem was mesmerized by Priyas eyes. Priya was feeling a safeness in Prems arms. They moved closer to each other, their mouths was only an inch away. And just then, the song stopped.
Both Prem and Priya realised their positions and looked that everyone else was staring at them. Priya got embarrassed and quickly left.
-Priya..., Prem screamed after her. But she had left.

Sorry if it was boring ! But next update I'll try to do better and have Mohit-Madhu scenes as well as PP 😊
Have a good weekend everyone 😃

Luv,
Gina <3

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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dipa or divya(every1 in ma family calls me divya.)

@hot chilly

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Posted: 16 years ago

#196

wow such a lovely update, update when you get time.

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: hot chilly
wow such a lovely update, update when you get time.

aww hehe thanks .. lol I just updated 😆
I thought after reading such a long update, you all would have enough of me 😆😆
But thanks hun !

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Suhana

@Suha_18

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Posted: 16 years ago

#198

Aaawww...Prem is just toooooo sweet...afterall he is Suhana's brother...😆....and Priya indirectly admitted that Prem was handsome...hahaa...of course he is!!

And woah...talk about quick...MM already in love...aawww...PP and MM two great jodis in the making...uff...rab ne bana di jodis!!

Haii...close dance...😍...Gina...you're too good!!!

Update soon please!! How about a celebration update...you know...to celebrate that Dulhann is not ending!! 😃😃

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-Unknown-22

@-Unknown-22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#199

Haiii what a lovely update....i loved it PP are sooo cute why can't they just admit they like each other hehe

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Radika

@svforever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#200

OMG! OMG! OMG! That was so romantic! I can't stop smiling! Everything was just perfect! Each word clearly described their feelings! I feel like dropping down onto my bed and just think about their scene! Hai.....di, seriously, tell me how can you write so perfectly? This was seriously really excellent! Their scene just reminds me of someone I like and I just can't stop blushing! Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! Okay, calm down Radika! Di, please update soon! I really want to see what happens next! Pleaseeeeee.....bye, luv ya!

Radika😊

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