SS- You Should Have Trusted Me - upd. pg 3 AGAIN! - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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FANTASTIC UPDATES Di!!!!! It is awesome and i am glad to read the story from your side.
Wow Bindiya!!! Hate sin and Viren..
Continue soonnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fantastic updates! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update Ramsha! so glad you updated! I just watched Om Shanti Om, and then I was hoping you would update! cool!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg ramsha awesome updates hun =D
really like em...
and oooo now bindiya has come to..
i think i noe who this mystery person is who came in the end....=P hehe
anyways continue soon hun =D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Excellent job with the review!!
I enjoyed it⭐️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg....absolutely amazing FF!!
its simply better den da original story line!
i think they should make u da writer instead!
amazing updates!!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sherrygurl - haha thank you=) dont worrie we all hate them...they need to LEAVE amar adn divz in peace lol

Bmtd11- Thank you...i love ur updates too

Adventuregurl - lol thank you...i am glad i am updated too i am kinda excited abt this story line i hope u like it =D

Anki4life - haha dont worrie u'll find out who the mystery person is...thanks for reading it

good kashish - thank you hun

sonia - thank you i am glad u like it

mushtari - thank you

neha fan1 - lol thank you..i am glad u liek my opinion!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap - amar is leaving...divya tries to prove her innocence for the last time....amar is about to leave when bindiya comes and tells him he's married ...
Ye maazak meine kiya hai....,...lmao and sry guys..but its chachi..shes lost her mind as usaul and walking around
Sindoora: mujhe lagta hai mein paagal ho jaon gi..bindiya tum guest room mein raho..magar yeh mat sochna ke mein tumhari baat par vishwaas kar rahi hoon
Bindiya: mat kariye ...mujhe toh sirf amar se matlab hai...kiyun amar...
Amar: tum mere paas mat aana..ek waqt tha jub tum meri sub se achi dost thi...ab kiya hua....kitne paise liye hain tumne yeh kaam karne ke...han!!! aur kisne diye hai yeh paise tumhe
Bindiya: paise to diye hain!!! magar kisne woh mein tumhe nahin bataa sakti...abb toh tum is masle mein phus gaye ho..niklo ge kaise....
Amar: koi baath nahin bindiya..mein sab ke saamne sabit kardoon ga...ke mein begoona hoon
He leaves the guest room adn on his way he bump into divya...he looks at her but notices she cant even look him in the eye...he's dissappointed..how can divya not believe him..how can she not trust him (this fool doesnt realize...its karma)...she decides to walk away before she gets more hurt but when she's walking away...amar grabs her hand and still has his head down
Amar: divya meine sach mein aaisa kuch nahin kiya...tum toh mera yakeen karo..meine sirf tumse pyaar kiya hai
Divya: amar mein jaanti hoon tum aise nahin ho....par kiya farak parta hai....mein tum par yakeen karoon ke naa karoon...kiyun ke agar tum mujhse pyaar karte...toh tum mera bhi yakeen karte....or mujhe dekho..tumhari har baat sar aakhon par...kiya karoon...tumse mein bohat pyaar karti hoon..shayad meri kismat hi aisi hai!
Amar: Divya woh...i am sorry...yeh bindiya neh aise aa kar tumhe aur hurt kar diya..meine sabit kardoon ga!..ke maine aisa kuch nahin kiya
Divya: teekh hai amar..mein tumhara yakeen karti hoon..agar madat chahiye ho toh mujhe keh dena...magar jitne chot bindiya neh pohonchai hai...use kahin ziyada tumnse pohonchai hai....
and than she leaves and amar is left dwelling in his thoughts

Amar: koi itna pyaar karne vaala jhoota kaise hoh sakta hai...magar woh sare saboot...amar pehle apne aap ko sab ke samne beghoona sabit kar..phir kisi aur cheez ke baare mein sochna
In the morning:
Bindiya: Amar!!! aaj mere liye doctor ki appt book karalena...humein check up ke liye jaana hai
Amar: Han han! bindiya kiyun nahin..abhi chalte hain na...better yet...kamna aur sindoora di koh bhi saath lekar chalte hain...
Bindiya: Amar ...yeh personal matter hai...tum poore khandan koh kiyun lekar jaa rahe ho
Amar: yeh personal mattter nahin..yeh bacha is khaandan ka waaris hai..unka bhi toh haq banta hai...chalo chalein...late hogaye toh problem ho jaye gi....
Bindiya: Uf!!! ab yeh konsi musibat hai..yeh kiya karna chahraha hai???
Amar: Koi baat nahin bindiya.....tumne moojh se panga liya hai..ab dekho mein tumhari kaise band bajata hoon....challo bindiya darling..hum late ho rahein hai
As he is leaving he looks at divya whose standing at the door and sees her teary eyes..and realized that he is walking hand in hand with bindiya....he quickly lets go and gives divya a sympathetic look...she gives him a stern face and walks away
Amar: Aare ab isse kiya ho gaya??
Sry guys this was a boring update...but i am just building the story up...it'll get interesting i promise...really sry...i hope u keep reading it=D
Edited by ramsha1990 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing update! man divya is so loving...yet this dude still doesn't care! ukhh.. continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved it very interesting continue oson please, your are a great writer.

i am not hindi and i dont undderstand MUCH...but i do understand ENOUGH to know what's going on and i LOVE it.

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