SS- You Should Have Trusted Me - upd. pg 3 AGAIN!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heyy..guyz this is just my opinion on the current storyline and it'll starts off with divz fake marraige with viren...i hope u enjoy it...although this is my first time...i am not much of a writer and feel free to tell me how u'd want it to be=D
Amar is walking down the stairs and as usual is trying to ignore divya as she no longer belongs to him....he still can not believe divya would betray him like this..."how can she possibly use him for his money..he never have believed that in a million years....but it doesnt matter anymore.. she is not his wife she belongs to someone else...."
Sindoora: Amar beta mein chahti hoon ke tum london jaa kar humari ek company ko sambhalo ....mein chahti hoon ke tum yahan se kuch dinon ke liye kahin door chale jaon...isss divya neh toh tumhari haalat kharab kardi eh...woh din hi manhoos tha jab woh iss ghar mein ayi thi
Amar (snaps out of his own thoughts): Jee bari maa..jaisa app kahen....mein abhi jah kar packing karta hoon
On his way upstairs he bumps into divya who is lost in her own thoughts...when she realizes who she bumped into ...her world just stopped..she could stare at him all day long....she could see the betrayal in his eyes...but ...she was looking for love in his eyes...she was about to say something when....
Viren: Aare divya...tum yahan ho mein tumhara apne kamre mein intazar kar raha that...chalo hum aaj shopping chalte hain..we'll catch on lost time...meine tumhe un doh saalon mein bohat miss kiya...
Divya: Shut up viren ...ur sick ...mein tumhare saath kahin nahin jaaaon gi...mera tumhare saath koi rishta nahin hain...aare mein toh tumhe apna dost samajhti thi lekin tum kiya nikle...meri zindagi barbad kardi tumne...tum mujhse door raho toh tumhare liye bohat acha hai...stay away from me...
(as she turned out ..she saw that no one was there..amar had left...)
Amar: Woh viren...jaan pooch kar mera dil jalatah hai...mein janta hoon divya ab us ki hai..magar phir bhi jaga apni shaadi ki baat cher deta hai..mein yahan se jitna jaldi jaaon utna mere liye acha hai....shayad waqt ke saath sub kuch teekh hojai ga ...amar who are u kidding..now taht divya is outta ur life...nothing will be the same....
okai guys...this is my very very first attempt....soo i hope u like it and can anyone tell me how to edit the title because i am gonna have to put up the page numbers everytime i update...soo if anyone knows how to do it plz let me know
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome attempt......cont soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome! i love it! continue soon! and to edit the title click edit on ur first post.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome start! so glad you wrote something at last! please continue soon!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Ramsha ji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i really loved what u wrote!
Plz conitnue soooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: narmz

awesome attempt......cont soon 😃

thank you..i'll cont. today=D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bmtd11

awesome! i love it! continue soon! and to edit the title click edit on ur first post.

thanks for ur help
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome start! so glad you wrote something at last! please continue soon!😃

lol i know eh finally i am writting something...hopefully u'll like it=D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkpinkers

Hi Ramsha ji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i really loved what u wrote!
Plz conitnue soooooooon!

thank u jiii...i'll cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap - sindoora asked amar to go to london so that he stays away from divya...amar is jealous and viren is trying to bond with divya...(which is not gonna happen)
Everyone is in the hallway as Amar is about to leave...he said bye to everyone except divya...divya is hurt inside but does not show it..and decides to speak to him for the last time...so she goes to see amar in his room
Divya: Amar mein jaanti hoon tum mujhse naraz ho magar mein sach keh rahi hoon...tumhare siva meine kabhi kisi se pyaar nahin kiya...tumhare siva mein kisi aur ke baare mein soch bhi nahin sakti..tum apne dil se poocho...kiya mein sach mein itni boori hoon ke tum mujhe chor kar chale jao ge....
Amar: Divya sach kiya hai aur jhoot kiya hai mein nahin jaanta...woh sub saboot ek hi baat keh rahen hai...ke tum jhoot bol rahi ho..aur sab log toh tumhare kilaaf nahin ho sakte nah...maan lo badi ma tumse nafrat karti hain magar yeh viren ..yeh kiyun aa kar jhoot bolegi aur us din maaji neh bhi tumhari taraf hi ishara kiya tha jub tumne unse poocha ke mujhe mere pichle janam mein kisne mara...toh kiya sab log jhoot bol rahin hain....
Divya: mujhe logon ki parwa nahin hai...lekin afsos ki baath to yeh hai ...ke jis se mein itna pyaar karti hoon..wohi aaj mere pyaar par sawaal kar raha hai...baath rahi sab logon ke bolne ki...toh amar rajeev uncle...samrat yeh sab log bhi to badi maa par ilzaam lagate hain magar dekho naa tum unki itni izat karte ho and unse itna pyar karte ho ke unke khilaaf kuch nahin sunte magar jahan par meri baath aati hai...mein hamesha tumhare saamne ghalat hoti hoon...tumhari haar baath ko mein pyaar samajh ke maaf kar deti hoon....chalo koi baat nahin...ab tum london jaa rahe ...wahan par apni pehchan banqo aur kush raho...and i love u alot..apna khayal rakhna...n she leaves
Amar is just left there standing confused and decides to leave this home and divya forever as things keep getting more complicated and divya does nothing but hurt him....
Amar: Acha bari maa mein ab chalta hoon...meri flight ka time ho gaya hai....
Viren: I am sry amar divya ne tumhe is tarahan dokha diya hai...hopefully london jaa kar tum settle ho jao k
(amar does not respond...his eyes are searching for someone...but she's not there...why would she be there...she doesnt care)
Sindoora: Amar beta have a safe flight aur apna khayal rakhna...wahan jaate hi mujhe phone karna
....
Amar is about to leaave when what do u know.....bindya enters the house...
Amar: Aare bindya tum yahan achanak!!...kaise aana hua
Bindiya: (hugs him) aare amar tum kahan chale gaye the....mein tumhara mahinon se intazaar kar rahi hoon aur tum yahan ho...aur ab kahin jaa rahe ho
Amar: Bindiya yeh kiya keh rahi ho tum...tum toh jaanti ho mein divya koh dhoondhne aaya tha.....tum jaanti ho mein usse pyaar karta hoon
Bindya: Amar tum jhoot kiyun bol rahe ho ...tumne mujhse shaadi ki thi....tumhe yaad nahin hai..mein toh tumhe yahan isliye dhoodhne aayi hoon kiyun ke mein maa bannewali hoon...
Amar: BINDIYA!!! Yeh kiya bakwas kar rahi ho meine toh tumse shaadi hi nahin ki
Bindiya: wah amar...divya mil gayi toh mujhe bhool gaye...tumne toh kaha tha tum jaise taise kar ke usse paise nikalwao geh!
Divya enters the room: Aare bindiya..tum...yahan kaise..sab theekh toh hai
Everyone is quite ...
Divya: Kiya hua...koi kuch bol kiyun nahin raha...sab theekh hai na?
Amar: han divya sabh theekh hai
Bindiya: Jhoot kiyun bol rahe ho amar isse batate kiyun nahin ke mein tumhari patni hoon..tumhe lene aayi hoon kiyun ke mein maa baanewali hoon
Amar: jhoot mein nahin tum bol rahi ho...kiya saaboth hai tumhare pass
Bindiya shows everyone all the evidence..pretty much the same as viren did....
Amar: Aap sab log mujhe aise kiyun dekh rahen hai...mein sach keh raha hoon...meine sirf divya se pyaar kiya hai...meine aur kisi se koi shaadi nahin ki..bindiya tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho meine toh tumhe apna sab se acha dost maana tha!..divya mera yakeen karo meine aisa kuch nahin kiya...tum toh mere baath mano gi nah!
Divya: she has no words for him...she just leaves....
Later that night:
Sindoora: Yeh kiya maazak hai....amar yeh kiya ho raha hai....someone explain to me rite now!!!yeh zaroor kisiki gha fazool mazaak hai...kisne kiya ye sab!
Meine kiya hai!!!......

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