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Posted: 15 years ago
EPISODE 10
Here you go guys

Next scene

Santu is ready to go home and Mr Bajaj comes there and says the papers are ready and she can go home…

Santu: Thank you Mr. bajaj, I have never seen a friend like you. Thanks a lot

Mr.Bajaj: on one end you are calling me friend and on the other side you are insulting me by saying thanks…..dont be so formal……..

Mr.bajaj: I have brought someone with me today and she would like to meet you. Should I call her?

Santu: who is it? Please call her

Mr. Bajaj: this is my daughter Mehak bajaj………

Mehak: hello aunti, how are you?.......Papa told me that you were sick, so I have got these flowers for you..My mom always used to say that flowers make people happy……

Santu: awwww these are really beautiful and yes these flowers are as pretty as you are…..

Santu: how old are you………???

Mehak: I am 8 years old but my dad says I am 50 years old because I talk like a grandma……..Is it like that aunti???

Santu: No, you are very sweet……….

Mr. Bajaj: lets got home and then you can chat about flowers all day long with your Aunti………….

They reach Mr.Bajaj's home and santu says I am fine now…….and would like to start work…but bajaj says NO, you have just got dischared from the hospital and I won't let you do work…..

Santu: Please, this way I will be able to keep my mind off from all the incidents which have occurred in the past.

Bajaj: fine, let me just speak with the rest of the crew and get in touch with you later. I am going now and will be back in the evening. Can you take care of Mehak for me please

Santu: Ofcourse, don't worry about her….

Santu and Mehak are having a good time. Mehak says I wish if I had a mom, just as loving and caring as you are.

Santu: Why do you say that?

Mehak: My mom left me when I was 2 years old. Dad always says that she has become a star and I can see her at night…

Santu becomes emotional and says that don't worry I am here with you.

Next scene

Mr. bajaj comes home and says that we are leaving for Antwerp tomorrow and then we will go to Russia for our movie shooting. So let's get packing. On the other side Dm is also packing his stuff as he is also going to Antwerp for Diamond trade. Dm then goes in flashback….

Dm packing his back and santudi come from behind and says Maalik………..

DM: su che? ( what is the matter?)

Santudi: When are you coming back?

DM: Abhi to me gaya he nai, aur tu vapas aane ki vaat karte hai, kem? ( I have not even gone and you are asking me when am I coming back? Why?)

Santudi: I will be missing you and cant stay away from you so that is why and then she starts crying…….

DM: eh santudi, why are you crying?...........areee su kare che tu, Hamesh ke liye to nai jaraha, fir ( its not like I am going to Antwerp for ever then why are you crying?)

Dm pacifies santudi and says don't cry and I will be back soon……….flashback ends

DM: I am going for ever this time and will never come back. Because your memories always haunt me here and I wont be able to see you with another men……

Next scene

Both Dm , Santudi, Mehak, Bajaj are on the same flight…..but no one is able to see eachother…..finally they reach Antwerp………

So after taking few days rest Santu and Bajaj head out to shooting area and all other cast are ready……….it is quite cold and snowing in Antwerp………..so Santu starts her shooting……..after some scenes Mr. bajaj gets a call from Mehak who says that she wants to go out and play in the snow…..Bajaj says you cant play until I come there…..and besides I am coming there to pick you up…….then we will go for Disney movie………..ok??

Mehak: ok papa………I will be ready in 10 mins

Santu busy with her shooting and then Mr. Bajaj interrupts her and says that he has to go and he will be back……..he has to pick Mehak and then all three will go out for lunch………santu completes her shots and then Both Mr. Bajaj and his daughter along with Secretary's wife and secretary go for lunch.

At the restaurant there is a big table booked in the name of Mr. bajaj. So everyone sit in their respective seats and starts talking with each other. Ms Neelam Desai ( Secretary's wife) has a 2 year old child. Then we see Santu is holding cute little boy in her arms….she is trying to play with him…..while everyone is waiting for their food. Neelam says he is very naughty and doesn't go and play with any strangers, but I am surprised that he is playing with you………

On the other side we see Dm and his Diamond factory members sitting and discussing about expanding their business. Just then DM's eye catches Santudi……he is shell shocked and cannot believe his eyes that she is holding a baby……

PRECAP: Its snowing and DM is caught in the snow storm and he is not wearing his jacket😭

Edited by Ayushi_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ayushi again wonderful epi. 🤗

i don't know but i have smell that in the next part there is SanRaj reunion. 😃

waiting for ur next post, post ASAP
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Posted: 15 years ago
Excelent ayushi.So next epi wil b our sanraj meeting.Am i corect?Dm,dont mistake her.She is urs only.waiting 4 ur next epi..
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful ayushi - i am going to love this next scene
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Leena, Sheela, and Sapna,
I am glad that you liked it...........for the next twist you would have to wait...........it will be an interesting one..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
EPISODE 11
Here you go guys

Santu and eveyone is having a good time....Dm who is on the other side of the table is getting restless and decided to go to the bathroom.........Mr. kapur pays and bill and everyone goes from there.

.DM back at his table and he is looking around and gets sad..........and says Gentleman we will discuss this matter another day as I am not feeling very well.............then he also leaves...........

Next scene:

Santu is shooting for her movie, just then Mr desai comes and makes an announcement that there will be a snow storm and that they would have to pack up soon. Santu agrees and ask where is mr kapur?

Desai: He is gone to clinic because Mehak was suffering from cold.

Santu: of fine, can you forward my message that I will come home late as I have to do some shopping..............

Desai: sure, but make sure that you do it fast or else you will be stuck in the snow storm.............

Everyone in the unit packs up early and santu goes to one of the store. While coming back her Taxi is stuck in a snow pack as there is a heavy snowfall. Santu gets out of her car and goes to this cottage. Just then Kapur calls her and asks her about her location.............

Santu: I am near this cottage and don't worry I will be fine...........as soon as the storm is over I will come home

Kapur: fine but make sure you stay safe and warm.............ok

Santu: alright Mr. Bajaj

Santu knocks on the door and a old man comes in and ask her what does she want?

Santu: Can I stay here for few hours till the storm is over please.

Old man: Are you Hindustani?

Santu: Ji, and my name is santu mahiwanshi

Old Man: Come in my child.

Santu: baba you live here alone?

Old man: yes beta, after my accident I not only lost my family but my eyesight too. Anyways beta should I get you chai?

Santu: Nai baba, I will make is by myself if you tell me where the kitchen is? Par baba how can you trust someone so easily........... You hardly know me and yet you have decided to help me, why?

Old man: Beta I have already lost so much so I don't care now.

Santu; Theek hai baba..............

Santu and baba are now drinking tea and baba says, beta the tea is very good just like how my daughter ? in-law used to make it..............chalo beta I am going to sleep if you need anything just help yourself??.

Santu: thankuooo baba

Santu can see through the window that the weather is becoming really bad............The visibility has also dropped............She then grabs blanket and sits near the fire place?.she then goes back in flashback............

Santu: Maalik when are we going to Antwerp?/

DM: We will celebrate our wedding anniversary there.............what say?

Santu: Theek che maalik!! I love snow so maybe we can go during the winter time???

DM: Saru dufford che...............I thought you are going because you would want to spend some time with me...........but you will be going to spend time in snow???.hmmmm ( while placing his hand on his waist)

Santu blushes and says maalik I want to spend time with you so be it pawagard or be it Antwerp...........both hug eachother

DM: ye everything is fine eh............but don't wear jeans there you look beautiful in saree...........

Santu back to reality...........She becomes sad and there is a sad song playing in santu's head........

Khwaab Mein Dekha Tha Ek Aanchal
Maine Apne Haathon Mein
Ab Toote Sapnon Ke Shishe
Chubte Hai In Aankhon Mein)
Kal Koi Tha Yahin, Ab Koi Bhi Nahin
Banke Naagin Jaise Hai Saanson Mein Laheraayi
Tanhaai, Tanhaai, Palkon Pe Kitne Aansu Hai Laayi

On the other hand we see Dm walking in the storm all lost thinking about santudi and the song is playing in the background...........

Tanhaai, Tanhaai
Dil Ke Raaste Mein Kaisi Thokar Maine Khaayi
Toote Khwaab Saare, Ek Maayusi Hai Chhaayi
Har Khushi So Gayi, Zindagi Kho Gayi
Tumko Jo Pyaar Kiya Maine To Sazaa Main Paayi
Tanhaai, Tanhaai, Milo Hai Phaili Hui Tanhaai

He is saying how she ditched him for another man. He is not even aware that he is not wearing his snow jacket. While waking in the snow storm his body becomes so weak that he falls uncounsious near santu's cottage. She saw that someone has just falled uncouncious on the snow. She goes to baba and says that there is someone on the snow and is in bad condition. Should I go and help this person out.

Baba: you can go and bring that person in and make sure you are careful...........

Santu: alright baba??and she goes towards the road and sees who that person is. She turns his face around and Shocked.............its DM

She then put his hand on her shoulder and tries to drag him to that cottage............

Baba: so the person is here?............who is this beta

Santu: baba, he is in very bad condition and she tries to make him lie on the couch. .......

Baba: beta I could have helped you but I cannot see so cant help you much..........but house has lots of resources that you can use............

Santu: don't worry baba you can go to sleep and I will take care of him.............

Santu then tries to grab her blanket and puts it on DM.........She then gets bottle of hot water and tries to put on near his feet and one near his arms...........DM is still cold and she thinks his body could get into hypothermia............she then tries to rub his feet's............and that bandini theme song play in the background.............

Kaare su vanti........Karne su daashi

Boje su mata........Saine su rambha

Bharanpur shama dhaatiii

Sadgun u tya

Pri Dharampatni

She remembers that nanaji said something about body heat...........She says sorry Maalik but I have to do this to protect you. I know you are angry from me but, if I don't do this then you will die. She then gives him body heat by hugging him and then place three blankets on top of her........Then the scene fades away........

Next morning

Mr bajaj calls santu and ask her where she is and she then gives him the address and he says he is coming to pick her up. Santu wakes up and stretches her arm and goes to baba and says baba I am leaving as someone is coming to pick me up.........Thank you very much for helping me out.. santu then takes blessing from the baba.

Baba: jivte raho beta...............oh and what happened to that man who came last night?

Santu: Baba he is fine and is sleeping now................

Baba: theek hai beta may god bless you with long life and happiness.......just then there is knock on the door........its bajaj kapur and his daughter.......she says good morning.............and santu says I want kiss and then good morning...............

Baba: who is this bachi?

Mr Kapur: She is my daughter..................

Baba thought santu is married and it's her daughter...........then santu leaves..............

PRECAP: Dm now wants santudi.......he is searching for his santudi

Edited by Ayushi_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ayushi,

superb one 👏 👏 but i have one question why u made there reunion without knowing Dm. 😕 😕 😕
but ur story is becoming spicier day by day keep it up. 😉

& after reading Precap waiting for ur next post post it ASAP.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

Ayushi,

superb one 👏 👏 but i have one question why u made there reunion without knowing Dm. 😕 😕 😕
but ur story is becoming spicier day by day keep it up. 😉

& after reading Precap waiting for ur next post post it ASAP.

Good question leena............but there is also a twist to that...............long lost love..........Actually the answer to your question is in my next ff........................glad you liked it🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayushi_01

Good question leena............but there is also a twist to that...............long lost love..........Actually the answer to your question is in my next ff........................glad you liked it🤗



so when ur going to post it. 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
I will write them today and post it tomorrow........now wether santudi gets accepted by the family or DM is ........its a totally different question...................and ofcourse we have Mr.Bajaj

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