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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
dear soapie darling u r to good👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hamari yehi kuahish thi ki tum hamari zindagi mein aao,lekin yeh ho na saka aur ab hum apni kismat pe rote hain,neend to nahi aati hai floor pe lekin,
shayad tum kabhi mere saath floor pe sone aa jaav
mein isi ummeed se soti hu.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: soapie

Mrs. M,
I loved the shaayari...Urdu is such a poetic, beautiful language!
Here is something from me...Since I am utterly incapable of writing anything serious and meaningful, here is something on the lighter side!
Santu, teri kismat hai khoti
Ek taraf hai paanch bacche, aur doosri taraf hai moti (Ba-ben!)
Your Pati won't give you a second look,
He would rather talk to his wife hanging on a hook
Room ke jagah storeroom de diya,
Dukh baant ne ke liye, Champakali ko bhej diya...
Ba karti hain emotional blackmail,
Malik ko impress karne ke saare nuske ho rahein hain fail!
Support ke naam par sirf Pinu Kaka aur Bapuji hain,
Hai, kya socha tha, kahan phas gayi main?
Maulik Bhai ne maar giraya meri Mawdi Gaay,
Use punish karne ka decision mujh par aa gaya, hai!
Hiten Bhai ne start kiya Pottery ka kaam,
Mongi kehti hain, mosquitoes ne kiya uska jeena haram!
Subhadra behen, tumhare baad, ab hai meri baari,
DM, Baben, Ba aur bacchon ke atyacchar se, main toh haari!
Ek spot deewar par mere liye bhi khali kar de,
Kya pata, portrait mein aa kar, Malik mujh se bhi do bate karle!
Lolz,
Soapie!



This is the best poem ever Hema you should be awarded.... meri taraf sey haqeer sa tohfa.. 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Soapie !! and Rani !!

You guys are just too good .. LOL I cant stop laughing !
I'll try my hand .. chalo ..

Ek nazar pyar ki mere taraf na aayi ..
Hawa to aayi par kabhi tera saath na layi ..

ok I know - LAME.
lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

Soapie !! and Rani !!

You guys are just too good .. LOL I cant stop laughing !
I'll try my hand .. chalo ..

Ek nazar pyar ki mere taraf na aayi ..
Hawa to aayi par kabhi tera saath na layi ..

ok I know - LAME.
lol




Aw Sukhi good effort hum to eik line bhi nahin likh paaye shaaiyiri khaak kareingey....😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Munee !

Ok here's another for DM ..

Gussa itna haseen hai to pyar kaisa hoga ..
Pyar ek baar to Subhadra se hua , Santo se KAISE hoga?

LOOOOOL!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

Thanks Munee !

Ok here's another for DM ..

Gussa itna haseen hai to pyar kaisa hoga ..
Pyar ek baar to Subhadra se hua , Santo se KAISE hoga?

LOOOOOL!




God I'm screeching with laughter Santo sey kaisa hoga... worth a thought.... waisey in all honesty Subadhra key saath bhi kaisa tha. I must admit acha hii hoga tabhi paanch bachey hain woh bhi uper satak liin in good time warna puuri cricket team hoti. I'm sure Santo can provide him with the other six offsprings to complete the team... hahaha. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOOOL now wouldnt that be something?
6 kids from Santo to give
serious competition to Subhi ..hahahaa let's see .. ek to pakka !

Ok one more -
Ishq aur mushq chupaye nahi chupte ..
Santo ke dil me DM kyun nahi baste?

LOL

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan



LOOOL now wouldnt that be something?
6 kids from Santo to give
serious competition to Subhi ..hahahaa let's see .. ek to pakka !

Ok one more -
Ishq aur mushq chupaye nahi chupte ..
Santo ke dil me DM kyun nahi baste?

LOL



Yaar yeh to puzzle ho gaya mujhko kiya pata uskey dil main kitni jagah hai ussi hisaab sey fit hongey na DM saahab.... nanha saa to dil hai bechaari ka.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh yea .. he's too HUGE for her chota sa dil .. loool

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