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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: soapie

Subhadra behen, tumhare baad, ab hai meri baari,
DM, Baben, Ba aur bacchon ke atyacchar se, main toh haari!
Ek spot deewar par mere liye bhi khali kar de,
Kya pata, portrait mein aa kar, Malik mujh se bhi do bate karle!

👏👏 wow, these lines, epsecially are brilliant!! you've got true talent :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: gawker

👏👏 wow, these lines, epsecially are brilliant!! you've got true talent :)




last one is toooo goood👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: soapie

Santu (Wistfully to DM) : Kaash main newspaper hoti, raat bhar aapke baahon me toh rehti...

DM (Wryly): Meri bhi yahi dua hai bhagwaan se, issi bahane har din nayi nayi to milti😉😆
Subhadra's shaayari for DM before she died : Tere gham me tadap tadap kar mar jayenge, mar gaye toh tera naam lagayenge... Rishwat de ke tujhe bhi bulaenge,Tum upar aaoge toh saath baith ke Dhokla aur Undhiyon khaayenge....😆
Motiben to Santu : Punam ki raat mein chaand badal jata hai, Waqt ke saath insaan badal jata hai, Sochti hoon ki tujhe tang na karoon, Magar sochte sochte plan badal jata hai..!😈😆
Soapie



This just stole the show this is true talent... 👏👏😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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soapie, you are just mindblowing.. i loved, absolutely LOVED reading your stuff..! 👏
Rani, what a sha'er.. you write really well yaar.. 👏👏👏
and Sukhi.. you are a true chupi rustam.. great stuff yaar.. 👏

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