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devi117 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unressing first of all
its beyond words yaar i read it many times and every time i cried kya likthi hai yaar tu
each and every word frozed me
first of all the explanation given by u that how a person could react while hearing others sufferings was superb
shiv's caring and his protective arms towards her made her the most strongest to unveil her past to him boldly
her "x" esa insaan aajkal bhi reharahai kya itna cruel ,narrow minded abusive . her sufferings are intolerable and her mother , she was also so outdated soceity, uski thinking soch kar apni beti koi e sab sushan sehen karne kehrahi hai
but as like preeti said there are even nowther are some girls that for their famies and their happiness accepting things and happenings which was not liked by themselves too
then the next morning anandi's freeness and shiv's dillema was superb he got the answer which he searched for but not even for a bit he doesn't blame her but understand's her and her situation and also accepted his fate of losting his ashima and their unbornchild and want it be a secret for ananadi as he didn't want her to be in a guilt
the convo between ira and anandi and it overheared y shiv and his guilt and thenn his determination to give anandi the happiness she deserved and the part played by their little angel was superb
ira telling how shiv lost his love and childd and anadi's guilt and realisation of shiv not letting her to know the truth and then her determination to give him the love of both her's and aashima's
shiv unveiling his past was superb and the morning after it was beyond words
ira and shiv's conversation and ansh's silent naino ki basha and their daughter's karnama was superb
so they both think about having some happy time also while ananya giving the mamma bear and baby bear to him but kon first step lega
i think the steps would be take by both of them simultaneously while drenching in the rain
is baar they both joined their fore heads as a indication of their joined fates but next time agar cutie pie ne esa kuch kiya tho zarur e thone uski sammne kuch kar baitenge


update next part soon as lke yesterday and also i need a lengthy update
one more time Clipart Bowing Emoticon - Royalty Free Vector Illustration by yayayoyo
from me for ur mind blowing writing

Edited by devi117 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
both the parts are really amazing chahat I really liked the way you have described the past amazing part cont soon.


will try to update the comment to a long one soon else will give a long comment next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Both got to knw about each other past
Nw the time for love
Nw shiv also get wet in rain hmmm

Waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
I liked Shiv's wittyness when he was talking to his So called Salle's . Shiv did not shout and creat a scene and embarrase Anandi in front of people , nor did he spare the guys for their Insult towards his wife . I Call it glows pahen ke Thapad Mar na 😉 . Both Shiv and Anandi have had a very painful past BUT non of them want to share it with the other Bec of the circumstances they got married they still do not consider themselves as a couple But ONLY Parents of Ananya . I liked Shiv's constant reassurance to Anandi that he is not her past But present and future and will Never hurt her . I think his pacence paid Off and am proud of Anandi for sharing her past with Shiv Because Someone has to be the first start and the healing process has to begin . Only when they are Free from their painful Past can they create and live in a pain free and Beautiful future, for themselves and their loved ones .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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arre waah itni jaldi update kar diya? thanks!
unres

arre yaar is anandi ka ex husband bhi na... arre koi game me bhi aisa karta hai, ki hamesha us hi ko jeetna hai...

anyway, use chhoro , on to ansh 😉

shiv is such a good father, ek to wo aap dara huya hia, lekin he's worried that ananya would be scarred for life... i think he thinks this way because he too was quite scarred in a way 😔... lekin ananya sirf teen saal ki hai na? they say taht chaar saal ke pehle ki life yaad nahi rehti, lekin i guess ananya, the child prodigy, ke case mein different hoga , which isn't good

yeh shiv aur anandi baby steps le rahe hain, aur this time they took another step , they shared the bed for the first time

He put his arms protectively around her ... shiv, the saviour 😃

Shiv is so considerate, he knows that anandi just needs to get her story out, so he makes her feel safe and then cry her heart out... ❤️

he was wiping her tears too... kitna dard hota hai na shiv ko anandi ko takleef me dekh kar ❤️

I realized that anandi doesn't take her ex-husband's name... it really emphasizes the fact that she is still scared of him, so scared that even taking his name is not possible for her ...

ok so anandi's story, you explained it really really well... and the way you described her ex-husband, us se pata chalta tha ki kyun anandi aaj tak chhoti chhoti cheezon se darti hai, like the racket

the words he used for anandi, aisa koi achha admi apni patni ko kya, kisi ko nahi kehta , kitna bura tha wo ...

arre yaar belt wala part parha to i was on the verge of crying, so evil ...

and how anandi's mother reacted when she told her about what he was doing, unexpected... i mean i know mothers say that.. ki koi baat nahi wo tera pati hai, aise nahi karte, etc, etc... lekin yaar agar maar peet kar raha hai wo to fir to aisa nahi kehte na... kaisi ma hai... ya fir anandi ne pura sach nahi bataya hoga, as you said later that she had only shared this with shiv...

anandi kitni buri situation me thi... us janwar ke saath rehti rahi, i'm sure only for her parents... waise jahan tak maine dekha hai to har ladki ke saath aise hota hai, apne parents ke liye she has to bear everything. completely unfair 😡

lekin yaar kitni achhi ma thi (aur hai) anandi... apni baar kuchh nahi kaha, chup chap uske sare tortures sehti rahi ... lekin apni beti ki baar chup nahi rahi, usse threaten kiya.. aisi honi chahiye har ma 👏

sumitra to the rescue.. finally uski help se anandi got justice, warna uske khud ke parents to lagta kabhi nahi help karte anandi is honestly so sweet, khud ki baad mein, pehle yeh soch rahi thi ki wo dusri car ke log theek honge ya nahi , so caring 😊

anandi and shiv go way back... unka rishta to us raat se hi hai ❤️

so happy that anandi has gotten rid of all the things that worried her 😊

i love that she finds the sound of shiv's heartbeat sweet ❤️

and the cute mangalsutra scene 😃

anandi is so caring towards shiv... she wants to know his past and help him out the way he helped her...

aur she takes care that she does not drop water on him... she has noticed even the little things that indicate that he's scared of and is bothered by water... dono hi kehte rehte hain ki they only married for ananya, lekin agar aisa hota to ek dusre ke bare mein itna care to nahi karte na... they really love each other, they just haven't completely realized it...

lekin anandi wants and needs shiv's love, yay !!

shiv is going to keep his secrets just to make sure anandi stays happy, usse pata hai ki agar bata diya to she will feel guilty, and as well all know shiv anandi ko takleef mein nahi dekh sakta ❤️

ananya bahut bolti hai na (referring to the phone convo with shiv)... i'm sure she asked a million questions, and shiv probably answered them very patiently and happily 😊

i love shiv and ananya's father-daughter bond, aisa lagta hi nahi hai ki wo dono step daughter aur father hain, bilkul genuine father-daughter relationship hai ...

anandi's convo with ira ❤️ .. she wants a place in his heart, but totally understands ( or perhaps misunderstands) how he actually feels

it's great that shiv overheard the convo, because without knowing what they feel about each other, wo aage nahi bhar sakte, at least one person had to know how the other actually feels...

it seemed like it would take him a lot longer to let go of ashima, lekin he did it, finally... and i feel that it was important to completely let go of ashima in every way in order to actually move on, otherwise it would be nearly impossible to do so , i'm very happy with shiv's decision 😊

he saw his wife and daughter playing in the garden 😃

and finally anandi thinks about shiv as her husband... ab to dono ne ek dusre ko dil se accept kar liya hai, they just have to tell each other how they feel, which i'm sure will happen soon 😉

rain = monster : perfect description ... jaise koi bacha "monster" dekh kar dar jaata hai aur rota hai, waise hi shiv bhi karta hai, baarish ko dekh kar...

shiv's mask is finally falling off, slowly...

anandi is an angel for shiv, sent just for him, to help him come out of his past and enjoy his present and future ❤️

anandi is very soft just like shiv, she wants to help him, and she knows how to handle him, to get him to speak his heart...

i loved the way shiv grabbed on to anandi and cried like a little kid, very emotional, i was going to cry too , soo cute...

aur shiv ne bas chhoti si kahani batayi, even though he is in pain remembering his past, he still remembers that he cannot tell anandi the whole truth because it would make her guilty and upset 👍🏼

anandi realized her love first .. although she questions it for a moment, she reassures herself that she really does love shiv ❤️

ananya kitni understanding hai, bas ek baar samjhaya anandi ne aur wo samajh gayi, aur maan gayi apni dadi ke paas sone ke liye... aur i love the way she said that her dadi tells better stories than anandi, usse lagta hai ki anandi would be jealous... i think anandi is actually happy, like any mother would actually be, that her daughter is connecting with her grandmother as well😊

chup chup ke dekhta hai shiv anandi ko , how cute .. usse kya pata ki anandi feels the same way about him, but just hasn't said anything ...

the convo that shiv and anandi had after waking up was also very cute 👍🏼

ira thank you sooo much for telling anandi the story , kyunki shiv to kabhi batane nahi wala tha 👏

anandi understands why shiv did not want her to know the truth about how he lost ashima, and so decides to pretend not to know just to keep him satisfied... dono hi apni taraf se sacrifice karne ki koshish kar rahe hain 😛

the ira-shiv scene when he cried was so emotional... larke hamesha jatate rehte hain ki wo bahut tiugh hain, lekin i love the emotional bonding between mother and son... my brother is the same way, jab bhi apne dosto ke samne hota hai to ma ko kehta hai ki aap jaiye ab, lekin agar ma kisi takleef me hoti hai, to sab se zyada dard usi ko hota hai aur rota bhi wo sabse zyada hai 😛

shiv and anandi spoke to each otehr in silence, i love moments like that ❤️

shiv has his heaven on earth because of anandi and ananya , soo cute

yeh ananya hi sab kuchh realize karwati hai na anandi aur shiv ko, like the fact that anandi always sleeps with ananya and not with shiv... ananya bahut hi cute hai, honestly ❤️

anandi finally went in the rain (again, ananya ke kaaran sab kuchh hota hia, agar wo na hoti, to yeh story na hoti, thanks ananya !) ... aur shiv, instead of getting lost in his past in the rain, he's sitting there admiring anandi 😃 ... and im sure ab wo bhi baarish me bheege ga , yay!


wonderful update... and as you can tell from the amount of hearts in my comment , i loved it ❤️


Edited by PreetiSJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chahat,

What a beautiful update ⭐️

The way you connected Shiv and Anandis life it was just marvelous, when i started reading Anandis story and she said we slammed into other car...thad i was like is it going to be what i am thinking.

You did the connect so well, did not realize till date that it could be linked. It was according to me a high point of your story. Hats off 👏

Loved everything about the update.

Best part after reading your update i feel contented.

Waiting for next wonderful update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HemaG

if anyone is thinking i m creating a prob here...and dicouraging her to write.the ff...100% u misunderstood...
i qas just giving my opinion...
and never told her to stop writing or something...
so guess u ll understand...
i guess writers ll listen all type of opinions...
dont spoil our friendship by such comments...
its my req

Sorry by the way did you read update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its perfect ⭐️ You don't have to proof read it 😃

Somewhere more than Anandi's and Shiv's past I got more emotionally touched when Shiv hugged Ira and cried 😭

Ashima's car accident was an unexpected twist in the story and so was Sumi not being Jagya's mom 😆
Waiting to read the happy ending ⭐️ 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read chapter - 6 . You are a Brilliant writer and you have made me Speechless . The best way to Express my feelings is 👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woah finally all the past, hurt, burden everything is finally out!! Loved the way Shiv just listened to anandi while she poured her heart out to him...he stood strong for her even tho he was completely shattered n hurt himself after knowing how badly Ananadi suffered in her past...I cant even comment on all that Anandi has been thru...it really broke my heart to read about her sufferings 😭 no comments on Jagdeesh he's just 🤢 khair...I love how easily Anandi poured her heart out to Shiv, she told him the things she didn't even tell her own parents show how close they've come n how much Anandi trusts Shiv<3 OMG the accident that Aashima died in was caused by J😲 I loved how you connected both the incidents...u know I thought Shiv wud tell Anandi about Aashmia n their accident n wud blame her or get mad at her but I'm so glad he didn't n he actually understood Anandi n their kismet which brought them together! Shiv also finally let out all his fears & I am so glad that just like he was Anandi's pillar she was his...even Shiv suffered a lot...loosing the love of his life n their unborn child with no fault of theirs is so sad😔 loved how Anandi took care of him the way she hugged him let him sleep in her lap n then later slept next to him😳 More than being in love with each other as husband wife I think the taking care of each other n being there for each other as husband wife matters the most n this exactly what I felt when I read this chapter <3 So finally Shiv lets Aashima go...thank god...it's so difficult for him but im glad he realized that he needs to let her go n move on n the fact that he believes he can move on with Anandi just made me so happyyy!!!
Ira n Shiv part was so Cry the way he hugged his mom n cried...I love how without saying anything to each other they both understood & anandi got rid of her guilt n shiv forgave her it was a very touching scene😳
So both are falling for the other its just about time they both admit n confess their feelings to each other😳
Ananya n Anandi dancing in the rain n Shiv's watching them...admiring Anandi and then he got up after awhile and...😲 what's he gonna do?? Go in the rain n go to Anandi na? I guess he will now that all his fears are gone n he wants to move on with Anandi...now pleaseee do update soon...sad chapters hogaye na toh ab thoda happy n romantic update toh banta hai na 😳
Edited by indian_beauty - 11 years ago

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