ANSH-SIDUSA; FF; Dil Kho Gaya new update at pg 9

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I wanted to write this FF from so long but didn't have time. Currently my flight is delayed for 4 to 5 hours, So grabbed this opportunity to write this FF. Yes I only thought about SIDUSA as my ANSH. This is my choice so please no negative comments. You are more than welcome to imagine Current cast. 😊

Healthy Criticism / Suggestions are welcome but no comparison or kit-pit PLEASE.😃😊


Introduction:

Family # 1: Singh Family:

1. Kalyani Devi aka Dadisa or Maajisa: Rich and influential Woman among 20 villages surrounding Village named Jaitser.

2. Basant Singh: Elder son of Kalyani Devi.

3. Bhairon Sing: Younger son of Kalyani Devi.

4. Gehna Basant Singh: 2nd wife (after death of 1st wife, Basant married her) of Basant Singh.

5. Sumitra Bhairon Singh: Wife of Bhairon Singh.

6. Dr. Jagdish Singh aka Dr. Jagat Singh aka Jagya: Son of Bhairon and Sumitra.

7. Anandi Singh: Wife of Jagdish Singh in the process of getting divorce.

8. Dr. Gauri Singh: Classmate turned illegal wife (Jagat and Gauri got married and living together in Mumbai) of Dr. Jagdish / Jagat Singh.

9. Sugna Shyam Singh: Married Daughter of Bhairon and Sumitra Singh.

10. Shyam Singh: Son in law of Bhairon and Sumitra Singh.

11. Nand Kishor Singh aka Nandu: 11 yrs. old son of Basant and Gehna Singh.

12. Varun Singh: 11 yrs. old Son of Sugna and Shyam Singh.

13. Shagun Singh: 7 yrs, old daughter of Sugna and Shyam Singh.

14. Madan Singh: Father of Shyam Singh who is another Rich person of the village Jaitser.

15. Laxmi Singh: Mother of Shyam and wife of Madan Singh.

16. Phooli: Childhood friend of Anandi.

17. Gulli: Like a younger sister to Anandi.

18. Khajan Singh: Anandi's father.

19. Bhagwati Devi aka Bhago: Mother of Anandi.

20. Makhan Singh: Servant of Singh Family.

Family # 2: Shekhar Family:

1. General Prem Kishor Shekhar: Daddu

2. Colonel Alok Shekhar: Son of Prem KishorSingh.

3. Iravati aka Ira Alok Shekhar: Wife of Alok Shekhar.

4. Late Major Anup Shekhar:2nd Son of Prem Kishor Singh who died in war.

5. Minaxi aka Meenu Shekhar: Widow of Anup Shekhar.

6. Shiv Raj Shekhar: An IAS officer and son of Alok and Ira Shekhar.

7. Saanchi Shekhar: Daughter of Alok and Ira Shekhar.

8. Mahip aka Mahi Shekhar: Son of Anup and Meenu Sekhar.

9. Natthu: Servant of Shekhar family.

10. Pappu: Servant of Shekhar family.


Note: This is 100% based on SIDUSA. If you need translation in English then please use google translation for that sentence. If any Sidusian wants to volunteer then he or she is most welcome. (it is hard for me to write this FF but it's my passion, unfortunately don't have enough time). So friend your kind help and support might needed and will be appreciated.

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Chapter 1: Page 1

Chapter 2: Page 2

Chapter 3: Page 5

Chapter 4: Page 7

Chapter 5: Page 9




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Posted: 12 years ago
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After such a looong tym im eager to read an FF...pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1: Jab Hum Miley


Place: Circuit House - Shiv's bedroom;

Shiv was still in trance. He was not being able to sleep. He was having flash backs'.. Chief Minister was going to announce Jaitser a Zilla from a village. Shiv was appointed first District Collector (District Magistrate) of that Zilla due to his reputation of being honest and strict.


Place: Forest like view;

Shiv was on his way to his new appointed District, all of a sudden he heard a girl's scream for help and he increased the speed of his black SUV towards the sound of scream. He saw a girl in a running Carriage in uncontrolled speed by a Horse without a Carriage Driver. Horse was running towards forest and girl was screaming for help'."Bachao' Bachao'" Shiv followed the Carriage, When that girl saw his vehicle, she started asking him to help her.."Kripaya bachlijiye mujhe, Bhagwaan ke liye madad kijiye meri, bacha lijiye mujhe". Shiv jumped on carriage and saved her. They both end up falling down towards the lake. He stopped just before the water; He got up and gave a look at the girl.

Shiv ne dekha '. Ek behad khoobsoorat si ladki, jiske baal ghutno tak lambe aur khuli huee thee, jisne local Rajsthani Ghaghra pehna thaa, usne apni badi badi sunder si mano bolti huee udaas (sad) aankhon se Shiv ki taraf dekha. Yoon lag raha thaa jaise swarg (heaven) se koi Apsara zameen par aa gayee ho.. Uski ankhon mein ek gazab ki kashish thee.. Komal itani jaise haath lagane se kuchh ho na jaye..

He was astonished, got numbed ' yeh kya jaise uski saanse tham gayee. Usne aaj tak itni sunder nazuk aur chui mui si ladki nahee dekhi' Shiv janta thaa ki uska (Shiv ka) yoon palken jhapkaye bina dekhna galat hai par jaise woh khud ko control nahee kar pa raha thha.

Then he followed the direction that beauty was looking at, he realized that he is holding her Dupatta in his hand, he came back to the reality ground and stood up. Slowly he walked towards her and put Dupatta on her and asked her making his voice soft, " Aap thik toh hain na"?

The girl answered looking down, " ji'.ji'.haan'."

He wanted to ask that what happened, how this accident / incident happened but hardly say anything. He was very nervous and uncomfortable because still he was struggling to keep his eyes off from her. She asked with teary eyes; "ab main kaise jaaoongi"?

Shiv ko laga jaise kaheen kisine veena ki taarein ya phir bansoori (flute) pe koi madhur si dhun chhed di.

That girl repeated her question then Shiv also realized that he also have to attend the function where CM is going to announce Jaitser as a Zilla and then he made a face thinking "woh khadus Sarpanch Anandi Singh ko award bhi toh milega". He kept thinking " hogi koi khadus si mahila jo Sarpanch ban baithi aura ab mujhe bhi usko smile de kar congratulate karna hoga' Par abhi kaise jaayen meri SUV toh kisi kaam ki rahi nahee??? Hmmm took a deep breath looking at that girl wishing if he could spend more time with her but not possible.., suddenly he saw the horse and screamed seeing that girl.." Sawari mil gayee. Aaeeye".

Shiv smiled thinking entire incident that how she refused to go with him at the same horse and this is the unique behavior of that girl was attracting him more because he has always seen girls throwing themselves on him but this girl didn't even care and refused him, refused to go with The Shiv Raj Shekhar.

Lastly he convinced her saying that there is no other option right now and he can't leave her alone here in this forest type of place, '..Finally she agreed and rode on the horse with him.

On the way to Jaitser, he asked her, "ji aap kaun hain aur kahaan reheti hain"?

She answered again in her sweet voice, mithi si khanak ke sath usne kaha, "ji main'mera naam Anandi Singh hai aur main Jaitser mei rehti hoon".

Hearing the name "Anandi Singh" Shiv almost jump out of horse then he controlled himself and ask her hiding his happiness;

Kyaaa' "Anandi Singh? Jaitser ki Sarpanch'.."??


Friends boarding time now. Please press like if you do. Next chapter will be edited soon. I will try to write in plane.

Edited by mmishra1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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'I am Anandi Singh, Sarpanch of Jaetsar'

thanks for your effort👏,
enjoying again the true energy of 14th May 2012, compliments to you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey it's awesome start... 👏 waiting for next part 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Minu, thanks for the link.

It was wonderful to revisit the beauty of ShivRaj Shekhar's entry in our Anandi's life. Waiting eagerly for the next SidYusha dose.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for comment Ginu!! it means a lot.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Starting Minu..🤗.eagerly waiting next part sidyusha 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Minu! It's great 👍🏼
I really miss them 😭
Edited by Bubi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bubi

Thanks Minu! It's great 👍🏼
I really miss them 😭



Right Bubi, that's why I am daring to write so we all can revisit the sweet memories of Sidusha.😊

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