FF: Love's suffering- New Update 15/7/13 Pg. 14 ;)

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Sudha

@Sudharies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Loved your first intro chapter, @ anu 😊
But why such a short one?
Yeh dil maange more, give a longer one next time 😊

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Tulasi14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Very nice! I am missing Mahi in the show.Thank you! For this wonderful story! Pl next time make it little longer.

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AnusuyaYadav

@AnusuyaYadav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Hey guys thank u for all d support!!! we are happy that u like it!!! the next chapter will be updated tmr!!! stay tuned 😉 btw the credit goes to appy (arpita nehra) 👏 I'm jus d backbone!! 😆

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AnusuyaYadav

@AnusuyaYadav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

CHAPTER -2

Next day .. early morning ... daddu's excitedly calling everyone in the hall.

In a few minutes evryone collects in the hall and is asking what happened but daddu tells everyone

to wait for Nathu .. Finally after few minutes Nathu arrives with a BIG box of sweets.

Everyone looks across.. totally confused ... Meenu speaks up: "See now Nathu has also come ..

atleast tell now .. whats "THE" news??"
...

Daddu walks to Maahi, " We always think of him as Jobless ... Careless...but ... but ...

today

*with twinkling eyes*

today with my upright shoulders i can proudly say that my grand son has been selected in

an IPL TEAM!!!! Some selectors from the Pune team saw him in the tournament and really

liked him.

Everyone gets astounded. Meenu doesn't know how to react. Maahi suddenly becomes like

a statue. Finally Shivu breaks the silence saying " Isn't it that superstar Rehan Kapoor's

team?"

Maahi confirms that it is. Meenu gets very emotional and gives a huge hug to Maahi, her

tears flowing out uncontrollably ; but daddu again takes the command by saying that Maahi

must move to Mumbai the same day since IPL would start in two months.

When all the packing's are done, everyone bades Maahi off at the Jaipur Airport.

The flight journey was filled with alot of emotions!!! Maahi was totally

astounded...high...nervous... on the whole completely excited to know whats waitin for

him... 😉

(MUMBAI)

Maahi comes out of the airport. A man has a board with his name. They set off in a car ...

looking at the sea passing by .. Maahi takes out his phone.. opens up his twitter account ..

checks Shanaya account .. "They all give me love, they all make me feel as a princess .. as if

i'm one of the most important - a princess .. just wish someone could see me as a normal

human .. as one of themselves .. .. as a friend with whom to share joys and sadness."

Maahi reads and types 'I know today i'm among the thousands of those who love you but

soon you'll have the friendship you've always wished for'. He erases the first part and again

types, "I wish your dream of sharing a good friendship as a normal person and not star

comes true soon." and re-tweets.

He finally opens the window and feels the cool air blowing against him. (Background music:

Jo Barsein Sapne Boond Boond, Nainon Ko Moond Moond, Kaise Main Chaloon ,Dekh Na

Sakoon
Anjaane Raaste; Goonja Sa Hai Koi Ektara Iktara)

When he reaches hotel, he comes to know that he must rush towards the meeting hall as

"Rehan Kapoor" has organised a welcome party there for all players . He enters..meets

everyone and then
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suddenly
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the door opens and the limelight is there ...

A beautiful fair lady with slim built, big twinkling eyes and a *easy to go gaga over* smile on

her lips with ravishing dark red lipstick wearing a beautiful red-white saree with a backless

blouse and long black hair enters. As she steps in ... winds start blowing extra fast and her

"pallu" goes over maahi's face as she moves.

He is mesmerized by the lady's beauty and grace. As he revives back to normal. he realizes

who it is.

It's
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THE Shanaya Chopra! 😆

Chapter 2 ends here!!! hope u like it!!! 😉 will be back soon with d next chapter!!! 😊

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

nyc

one repeat request please add update details to main topic page

check all the time very sad when no update

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AnusuyaYadav

@AnusuyaYadav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

As she walks in Background music plays -

"Aankhon mein teri'
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho'
ankhon mein teri'
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain"

While the music is playing in the background, Maahi is lost in the sweet voice of her laughter seemed music to his ears as if... It totally corrupted his hearin capability 😉 The whole world went on mute and its her and only her that he could concentrate on..
Laughing with a hand covering her mouth and twinkling big wide eyes. She air kisses Rehan Kapoor and talks to The biggies in the team- blah! there are only two- One Jay Arora: Was star player and Indian cricket team's captain; but today's scenario, out of the Indian team, captain of Pune team Two; Kabir Seth, emerging indian baller.

They are incessantly chatting with her- probably about her latest movie, or her latest song and praising her looks or her dance or whatever. He couldn't blame them; she seemed to be so perfect...

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Though she was glittering all over, it was something he noticed in her eyes ... deep within ... a wish to run away from the place or ... or ... to run away from oneself may be. There was a weird kind of fear in her eyes. The princess of Bollywood as she was called had a fear in her eyes? Or wait? Wait for ... the friend she mentioned.

Maahi stepped ahead to say 'hi' but then stepped back. He wanted to befriend her and not like just another fan..He didn't know whether it would happen or not someday but he wished and wished!

Engrossed in Shanaya with the two biggies of the team- blah! there are only two- One Jay Arora: Was star player and Indian cricket team's captain; but today's scenario, out of the Indian team, captain of Pune team Two; Kabir Seth, emerging indian baller.

Suddenly he feels a pat on his back; it's one of the other new teammates.

"Mandeep Kulshreshta here, looking at the beauty huh! you know she has joined hands with Rehan Kapoor as a co-owner of the team. No option also for her; after all Rehan was the one who gave her a break and her rumoured boyfriend too. Pity on her, playing for a lost team."
Maahi: Boyfriend?? OH!!
Mandeep: Oho! Now don't give me the look, like you don't read newspapers ... these heroines are like that only ... They just follow the limelight and nothingelse really matters to them!!!
Maahi (thinks to himself): I know she's not like that ... I just know... and i'll know what is very soon.

Maahi: "Hey com'on yaar!!! If we only consider ourselves as Lost, we can never win; we will definitely win this year." (says in high spirits)

Mandeep: "Good luck to us Bro!"
Finally Rehan gives a speech to boost up the players and says they must try their level best; not only for the team but because most of them being newcomers its their free ticket to Indian team. And everyone makes a move for the dinner.

(In his hotel room)

Maahi calls up Saanchi and tells about the on-goings and Saachi bein his secrets sharer, he also ends up tellin his meetin with Shanaya...

Saanchi: Wow! bhaiya, that' s a dream come true!!! she's the co-owner of your team, means now you can interact with Shanaya and make her my Bhabhi nah!!!!!!

Maahi: No need to think too far now dear! Let's see ... this is only my first step towards her (In a strict voice) Now don't go and preach about this to "ANYONE!"

Saanchi: Yeah! yeah! Okie but you be fast ha! I'm so excited.
After their Shana'ic conversation the duo get back to their work!!!

But outside Meenu overhears the conversation and is sure that something is cooking but what can it be? What was this Shanaya thing? Ofcourse that was only an infactuation that every young boy or girl has ... but if it was some more... if Maahi really liked the girl ...if she starts liking him ... if he forgets all of them once he becomes a big celebrity ... if ... if... if ...

FREEZE
Guys looks like only some are really followin d thread!!! If you want us to continue pls comment and let us know friends!!! For pm's do add me to ur friends list!!! 😉 Gud nite 😊

Edited by AnusuyaYadav - 12 years ago

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Sudha

@Sudharies

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hi! That was a great third chapter.
Mahi's love interest seems to be interesting. Waiting for the next update. Iam in ur buddylist already, so do pm me.
@Anu, plz give the details of date and page no. Of the update.
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AnusuyaYadav

@AnusuyaYadav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ananthesh
Hi! That was a great third chapter.
Mahi's love interest seems to be interesting. Waiting for the next update. Iam in ur buddylist already, so do pm me.
@Anu, plz give the details of date and page no. Of the update.
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Sudha di thank u sooo much!!! :) btw both of us are new to FF's and stuffs that too in India forums!!! The problem s our title s lengthy and so it shows word limit to me!!! thats why not able to update page no and all!!! pls help me nah!!!

Edited by AnusuyaYadav - 12 years ago

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Sudha

@Sudharies

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: AnusuyaYadav

Sudha di thank u sooo much!!! :) btw both of us are new to FF's and stuffs that too in India forums!!! The problem s our title s lengthy and so it shows word limit to me!!! thats why not able to update page no and all!!! pls help me nah!!!

Do onething, if its not possible in the title, edit a column for chapter and page no. In the first page. I would request u to shorten your title if possible, with a more familiar and catchy one. Just a suggestion, think about it.

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AnusuyaYadav

@AnusuyaYadav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ananthesh

Do onething, if its not possible in the title, edit a column for chapter and page no. In the first page. I would request u to shorten your title if possible, with a more familiar and catchy one. Just a suggestion, think about it.

Title edited!!! 😉 Now s everythin fine?

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