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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER - 6

In a huge cricket stadium, the crowd hooting "KABIR!!! KABIR!!! KABIR!!!" is the only thing that's heard clearly while the rest was being muted...and a boy of 18, holds up his bat high towards the audience..his face clearly enjoying the victory and the crowd's applause!!! He has scored a century and in a way of saying thank you to the buzzing crowd, he lifts his cap with pride and all of a sudden...
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Shanaya wakes up!!! Sweating profusely.. .. trembling with the flashes of her "just had" dream.. not able to even breathe properly. Quietly a tear rolls down her cheek taking her to the past happenings. Wearing a light pink gown, she sits up and sees all over her room quite alarmed - a big room which seems to be a perfect house at its own.. with a cozy sofa set.. an LCD television with a huge collection of cd's just below it.. a mini library with almost all the genres.. with her pictures all over telling her stories of her from all parts of life!!! And just above the huge round bed of hers, a 'black & white' picture of a boy and a girl almost of the same age and the girl seems to be very much Shanaya herself!!! the picture conveys that both of them seem to be immensely gay and loving.

(Shanaya is being pulled to the present by a sudden knock on d door!!! A servant enters with a glass of cold coffee)

Servant: Madame, your cold coffee..

Shanaya: (gathers herself and cleans her face with a napkin on her side table) Thank you.

She gets up, wears her slippers and moves towards the window and opens it. The air was so welcoming and it was also soothing her inner pain!!! It's a beautiful view of the sea and the sun rising above the sea. The sea seemed to bea little quiet today. Shanaya could hear a few birds chirping. How rarely could she enjoy such things! Looking at the her mind wanders! ! !
Shanaya (thinking): "I'd learnt to walk alone the day you were gone. I transcended the loneliness that had befallen upon me and poured all the love in my heart in my work. Though it was the most difficult thing to do, I still did or atleast tried to or trying till this second!!! You told me not to allow hatred for anyone to take root in my mind and heart and I never allowed it.. I didn't hate anyone- neither dad nor Rehan nor those people who watch me time and again yet criticize me. I suffered all the way along but quietly accepted it as I accept night after day. I joined this IPL team to feel closer to you and I do. You taught me to live the life fully; you said 'the show must go on' and it did. I did have great moments and good people in my life though they are very few. You taught me to dream and I dreamt.
Paulo Coelho says in the Alchemist: 'There's a language in the world that everyone understood, a language of enthusiasm, of things accomplished with love and purpose, and as a part of a search for something believed and desired.' And yesterday I heard the same language when Maahi came which I heard after you had played. And the same language tells me that he's not only a fan, not only someone who wants to meet me out of excitement; but there's something else too. Should I really meet him?"
Shanaya had always believed in signs. Today also she required a sign; to meet him or not.
A servant dressed in formal clothes enters the room. Ma'am, here's the newspaper. As Shanaya lifts the newspaper, the front page news:
"MAAHI MIRACLE AT MUMBAI"! And there, She got her sign. Her intuition and the sign both told her that she must meet him. And she finally decided that she would... She definitely would.

(MAAHI'S HOTEL)

(Anandi and Meenu are walking in and around the room, talking with Singhs/Shekhars respectively)


Anandi: Ji Bapusa! It was Maahi bhaiya only, "elated" is very small word to describe how happy the family is for him, after all, Maahi bhaiya has not only lived up to his dreams but also he has made the family very proud of him.
Meenu: Yaa didi! We'll definitely do that. Even I wanted to celebrate it now but Maahi says he wants to celebrate only after they win the series.
(Maahi is restlessly looking at his phone in hand and Meenu notices it and she immediately ends her conversation with Ira and goes towards him.
)
Meenu: Is everything alright Maahi? Are you waiting for an important call? ? ? and aren't you going for the practice today?
Maahi: Er... (Glances at the clock) Yea mom! Just waiting for the tea and I'll make a move. I'll just wash up my face. (Skips the phone question and goes to washroom)
Meenu feels a little fishy. She did not have a good opinion about the people in the field of media at all and had always been insecure about her son coming to this field but since he was putting in so much of effort and knowing his passion for cricket, she wanted him to live his life and hence she decide not to discourage him with her personal opinions. After having tea and breakfast, Maahi leaves to practice.

(AT THE GROUND, Around Noon)

Maahi checks his phone for the 10th time. No messages. Suddenly a thought strikes him that he never gave his phone number to Shanaya! Crap! (he goes of to his thinking mode yet again: does it mean that she doesn't wanna meet me? Then why that ... she could have told me directly. Whatever i'll just focus on the game now, that's it.)

(He gets back to practice) After lunch, he checked his phone..It flashed "One new text message" It was an unknown number..and without giving much thought to it he clicked open the message...

What he read literally made his heart shift to his mouth!!!

"Meet me at Sahabjee Hotel, Jageshwar at 9 pm, sharp. 'S"

(Again thinking mode - S definitely meant Shanaya. She wants to meet me!!!) (His heart was doing a somersault. He then told himself to calm down and decided to ask Mandeep where the place was.)

Maahi: Oye!! Mandy paaji! Where is this Jageshwar her? Huh?

Mandeep: Khotyaa, What do you gotta do there? ? It's a very quiet place.. not many people live there.
Maahi: Erm..actually one of my friends does!
Mandeep: Then you must take a taxi cause its quiet far off. It will take you atleast two hours to reach there.
Maahi: Oke! Thanks buddy!

(Maahi goes back to his "la la land" forgetting everything except Shanaya and the fact that he's gonna meet her.)

(In the evening, Maahi's hotel)

Maahi is scrambling hands for getting a good suit. He has put all his clothes from Almirah on to the bed. Meenu enters and is shocked to see him behave this way!!!

Maahi: Hey mom! I need a good hmm best suit and I'm confused which one to choose :/ Can you help me with it?
Meenu: Maahi Whats all this? What have you done to your room! And where do you have to go that you need the "best" clothes? ?
Maahi: Erm... Mom... there's an important meeting for players with Rehan sir and Shan...aya madam.
Meenu again gets a hint of something being fishy but again controls herself and brushes the topic away.

Finally with help of Meenu, Maahi selects a suit and goes off to the meeting.

(THE FIRST MEETING)

Maahi has reached the place at 8:50 itself. LOL! He gave the driver 500 extra just to reach on time! This is a lifetime chance to know the girl he always wanted to and he wanted everything to be perrrfect!!! He makes some personalised arrangements, keeps a cute teddy with friend written on it and asks the waiter to play the music when he tells him to.

Around 9:15p.m. Shanaya walks in and Maahi though he had a serene face outside, he was so badly drooling over her within him. And not just that... today she looked so different, she came in plain simple Jeans and tea but more noticeable was that she was totally without make up yet she looked so gorgeous as ever (except for some dark circles she had due to work day and night ;) but still, that din't bother Maahi's sight.)

Maahi: Hi! I'm glad you came!!!

Shanaya: It's my pleasure to meet you. By the way congrats! You are on the headlines everywhere.. your family must be so proud of you!!!
Maahi: Yeah! Thanks! they always wanted me to do something but they didn't really expect this. I mean i've always been that "Spoilt little son" of the family. And how is your family?
Shanaya: (shares a laugh with him) you don't seem "spoilt" atleast. My family! (gets emotional) At peace! (Thinks: for me only he was my family and wherever he is; he is at peace!!!)
Maahi: (Seems like I asked a very personal question just in the start..to befriend her I must talk openly but may be not directly jump to direct questions) Here's a gift for you.
Shanaya: A gift? for me?
Maahi: From a friend to a friend. (She opens it and is totally awestruck!! Its the latest book by Paulo Coehlo)
Shanaya: That's my favourite author. (With a huge grin) Thank you! (She takes out the gift box from her bag) You must also accept this!! not from your owner this time but from a friend to a friend. (Maahi immediately accepts it.)
Maahi: I'll take it because it's from a friend. By the way you didn't compliment me that I know so much about you!
Shanaya: Hm! But this I've said many time in my interviews and fans follow them (looks at Maahi's face which becomes grim) Many can know you but only few can become friends...
Maahi understands that last line is meant for him.
Maahi: So when is the best time to call you(pause) as a friend? (😉) (to confirm whether last line was for him)
Shanaya: You can message me anytime!!! messaging seems easier in the kind of work we indulge in.
Maahi smiles at her and says okay. In the mean time food comes in. They start eating while Maahi cracks a few jokes with her. And she laughs...heartily... which she hadn'tfor quite a long time... Though she was a star and Maahi, a fan - they shared something else too but both of them din't completely understand what that really is.For now all that they knew was they were comfortable with each other. The night was beautiful and so was their conversation... without a reason... just together... a friendship was budding...A friendship that's gonna change their lives drastically!!! Where is this friendship going to lead them??
FREEZE!!!

So that's all for now!!!!!!!!!!! Lemme know how the story is progressing guys!!! ;)

Edited by AnusuyaYadav - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Nice update

Good to see a film star as a person without the make up the chamak dhamak

By the way any chance Shanaya is older than Mahi? I have no probs with that.

I too want to know where the friendship leads them. Many a times a person surrounded by millions is actually alone. this alkelapan only someone special can share. Hope Mahi is that partner for Shanaya. Show him as a friend first and then something else

waiting for more

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hai...dear...


very nice... update...

Meenu ka doubt... Maahi ki besabari.. very nicely.. presented...

Even Stars ve thier own.. feelings and turmoils... hhmm.. very nicely.. presented... thy wud also be loved to be out of LIMELIGHT. .. just be theirselves..

👏

loved it...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat11

Nice update

Good to see a film star as a person without the make up the chamak dhamak

By the way any chance Shanaya is older than Mahi? I have no probs with that.

I too want to know where the friendship leads them. Many a times a person surrounded by millions is actually alone. this alkelapan only someone special can share. Hope Mahi is that partner for Shanaya. Show him as a friend first and then something else

waiting for more

Hmm ... definitly Chahat and thanks a lot for your suggestions; helps us to improve to a large extent;

For the age difference; stay tuned to next parts ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nightseye

hai...dear...



very nice... update...

Meenu ka doubt... Maahi ki besabari.. very nicely.. presented...

Even Stars ve thier own.. feelings and turmoils... hhmm.. very nicely.. presented... thy wud also be loved to be out of LIMELIGHT. .. just be theirselves..

👏

loved it...



Hey thankuu soh mch

Stay tuned for upcoming parts .. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update...i am actually liking a story on Mahi ...i mean the story has more of him and less of AnSh 😆
i hope he first becomes Shanaya's friend and then they go ahead !!!
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WHERE IS MY NEXT INSTALLMENT?

IT WAS TO BE OUT ON 15/5/13

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Seriously I can go on if you want to

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat11

WHERE IS MY NEXT INSTALLMENT?

IT WAS TO BE OUT ON 15/5/13

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Seriously I can go on if you want to

Hehehe!!! No no Chahat no ned fr dat 😛

As u kno; exam time= bad time😉

But we'll gibe u our bestie!!!

Stay tuned! 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER - 7

P.S. first of all very sorry for the late update guys!!! couldn't update on time due to some technical issues!!! pls mujhe maaf kardeejeh 😆 Enjoy 😉


(Maahi's Hotel)

Meenu had noticed Maahi's expressions while he was choosing his clothes and when he was leaving and all those have seriously disturbed her.

Anandi: Choti maa, maa wants to talk to you. (Meenu lost in thoughts and has a really worried face. Anandi keeps her hand on Choti Maa's shoulder and CM gets back.) Choti maa, maa's on line (gives her mobile to Meenu).
Meenu: (stammers a bit) err... umm... I'm so sorry... was lost in thoughts. (Meenu takes the mobile and talks to Ira) Haan didi... yea everything is fine here... Maahi is gone to...

(CM continues to talk to Ira and Anandi is observing her, thinking what is bothering her lately')Meanwhile Meenu finishes her talk with Ira and she hands over the phone to Anandi saying that Shiv wants to talk to her. Anandi's anxiety is replaced with excitement hearing Shiv's name.

Shiv: Hello!
Anandi: SHIV!!! How come you are home now???😲
Shiv: erm' Anandi' actually.. I got back a bit late from office yesterday and that's why it took me sometime.
Anandi: (back to teacher ji mode) WHAT!!! See!!! I knew!! You are overloading yourself with too much of work nah!!! How many times to tell u not to do that!!! Do u ever have the faintest idea of how much of stress your creating to yourself'.(Shiv interrupts)
Shiv: Arey! Teacherjeee!! If I'm overloading myself with work, like you say ermm Shout, then why would I take a leave today?
Anandi: Hmmm! Okhay Pati..You are taking good care of yourself!!! I was wrong..enough!!! By the way, lately you have started me calling "teacherjee". Why so?
Shiv: that's because these days you scold me and treat me like a kid 😆

Anandi: After almost losing you once, I'm scared and very cautious with each and everything about you mhare beendsa. And anyhow! I care better for you than you do for yourself. So just do what I say!!!
Shiv: ahaan!!! Okay teacherji'As u say'
(Both share a heart-to heart laugh)
Anandi: by the way Shiv, I wanna to tell you something!
Shiv: What happened? All okay?
Anandi: Shiv, since the day we came to Mumbai, Choti Maa is looking a bit tensed and confused 'I've been trying from day 1 but can't really figure out what is been bothering her because everything is going good here' Though she is happy for Maahi bhaiya's victory I could still see some confusion within her'she gets lost in thoughts every now and then..I haven't seen her like this before and i'm worried'
Shiv: (laughs) Anandi! You know nah... Choti Maa has always been sceptical of Maahi entering the glamour world. That might be the only thing bothering her right now'don't worry'she'll be fine'You are very innocent my teacher ji but this glamour world is not as good as you.. its not totally bad either...It depends on d people in it and every now and then we read about cricket stars being friends or getting close with actresses and stuff nah'Choti Maa is just over cautious about Maahi's life just as she was with mine'You remember how long it took her to trust you and believe that you're the right choice for me..? ? ?

Anandi: hmm'yeah' Shiv: She just has this fear of losing Maahi into the glamour world. She needs sometime'

Anandi: But Shiv, even if Maahi bhaiya goes in the wrong way, I'm sure you'll bring him again towards the correct path and though he is naughty, he's sensible enough to listen to his big brother.
Shiv: He he!! Yes of course. His bhaiya-bhabhi are always there for him. Oh wait-a-sec.. Anandi..call from office.. talk to you later. Love you.
Anandi: (smiles adoringly): Bye.. love you too. (Looks at Shiv's pic on her mobile and thinks to herself: take care Shiv' I'm not there but you take care of yourself'pls).

ON THE OTHER HAND, A NEW FRIENDSHIP WAS BLOSSOMING...

As the IPL matches were on full swing, Maahi and Shanaya have started exchanging messages. We know that from the start Maahi was already willing to increase his friendship with her whereas "the language of the world"(the signs) made Shanaya want to know more about him' She felt all the more comfortable with him than before..with time, soon they started talking like casual friends very soon.

Though Shanaya was busy with her next movie and Maahi's life was totally with matches and practice sessions, they never failed to contact each other at times.

Rehan, the director Mr.Sharma and Shanaya were sitting on a tea break and Rehan was discussing how to get more limelight for the film.
Just then a message appears on Shanaya's phone' She opens it and was happy for two reasons.. firstly, it was from Maahi and secondly, she could excuse herself from the boring filmy discussions which wasn't her cup of tea'
Maahi: Hie! Shooting?
Shanaya makes an excuse and leaves to her vanity van. She turns on the music as she does always, so that everyone thinks she's taking rest or relaxing herself after the shoot as usual. After all the set ups, she sits to reply Maahi.
Shanaya: You saved me.
Maahi: Errr.. What?
Shanaya: From typical "business discussions". So how is it going? the practice.
Maahi: As usual, tiring! By the way, I'm having a typical rajasthani food here... its yumm..have a look (clicks and sends the picture to Shanaya; thanks his Shiv bhaiya for the I-phone)
Shanaya: Ahaan! Looks nice.
Maahi: I'd never thought that an actress could speak to people so freely!!!

Shanaya: Whats there? We are humans too' ;)anyhow I am open to my friends. (Both share a small laugh).
This was one of their usual day-to-day talks. They just liked being with and for each other for reason or no reason, for sharing, for laughing together, together- in the real sense.

(Shanaya's Place)
Shanaya comes to her room, after shooting for the whole day. She wears a sleeveless light blue nighty and crashes on the bed'and there he comes again..the 14 year old boy'
(Background music- Manja from Kai po che)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jZpRq3KT1jo
the boy is running' he comes to her and tells her "I've enrolled your name at Sanjay kapoor's School for Acting"
The girl: "I don't think I can do this!!! I'm so fat.. I can't!!!"
The boy: You can!!! we can!!! Anyone can!!! Get the fear out of you!!!
The burning passion in the boy's eyes was easily visible and that totally convinced the girl and gave her the confidence that she needed.He took her hand and they started running.
First para: Ruthe khwabon ko mana lenge ... we'll pacify our angry dreams'
Kati patango ko thamenge ...we'll hold cut kites..
Ha ha hai jazba...yeah! we've passion'
Ho Ho hai jazba...yeah! we've passion'
Suljha lenge uljhe rishton ka manjha... We'll untangle the string* of relations..
Hm, ka manjha, hm, ka maanjha...string, the string'

They are seen running in the streets of Mumbai' both totally energetic and passionate. They reach a personal playground made as a cricket ground and it has a small empty room with a music player.
The boy: See I took this as a birthday gift for u!
The girl is very happy seeing the arrangements. She starts moving round and round.

Rishtey pankon ko hawa denge... relations will give air to wings'
Rishtey dard ko dawa denge...relations will prove to be medicine for the pain'
jeet kabhi, haar kabhi...winning sometimes, losing sometimes'
gam toh yaaron honge do pal ke mehman...sadness will be a two moment thing'

The boy is seen jogging with the girl and working out hard...the girl seems to be tired but the boy is totally engrossed in d work out with passion.

rishtey dehleezein bhi laanghege...relations will cross boundaries
rishte lahoo be toh maangeinge...relations will ask for blood
aansun kabhi, moti kabhi... sometimes tears, sometimes pearls
jaan bhi maangey, yaaron kar denge kurbaan... even if they ask for lives, we'll give it up

Finally the girl was totally exhausted,out of breath and wanted to sit. But the boy pulls her hand and shouts very loudly! "RUN!!! your time is not up." The girl has tears in her eyes but she still runs. Later the boy tells her, "You've got to be very strong in life and you should never get tired in the process of achieving something'then success will automatically be yours" And hugs her tightly.

FREEZE

Stay tuned!!! next update will be in two days time!!! take care.. and pls do like and comment ur thoughts to us guys 😊
Edited by AnusuyaYadav - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As long as you give interesting updates like this no need for Sorry.

Ok i got who the girl is but the boy?

Teacherji and her favorite pupil lovable as always

CM's fear don't let her over power her trust in her child and her love for him

Waise AnSh toh hain hi

Thanx

waiting for the next as usual

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