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Sudha

@Sudharies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: AnusuyaYadav

Title edited!!! 😉Now s everythin fine?

Yeah! Nalla ponnu 👍🏼

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Thanx for the PM

I really like the way it is shaping up. Meenu insecurity is not wrong. Saachi the good sister. this is the second story other than mine where she is good. Many men get attracted to a hot body but Mahi wants to look deeper. that shows his character.

Suggestion if you are open to it:

I think what you should try to portray through your story is the truth behind th limelight. Every one thinks the life of a films star is so glam sham but in the truth they are humans just like us. The ch they play may be larger than life but they are not.

I love Mahi and like his story but could you give a small installment of AnSh every now and then. Laalchi mann can never get enough of AnSh.

I understand you dard. We take great pains to write but do not get proper response. Sometimes I feel like I am forcing my writing here but don't worry things will get better. Don't lose hope. A writer never does.

Enough of my rambling. Until the next time. 😊

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AnusuyaYadav

@AnusuyaYadav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Aww thank u so much for the warm words chahat!!! ☺️ we'll definitely take your suggestions into consideration!!! u can definitely expect Ansh in d next chapter!!! 😉

Edited by AnusuyaYadav - 12 years ago

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AnusuyaYadav

@AnusuyaYadav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

CHAPTER - 4

After two months . . . (At Kesarbagh)

Its early morning on Sunday. As Anandi comes out from a refreshing bath, she finds Shiv in a deep sleep and goes towards him.. being very cautious not to wake him up, she slowly touches his hair and softly kisses him on his forehead. He smiles in his sleep.
(As Anandi is admiring her luv sleeping peacefully with a divine face like that of a child, she hears a soft knock on the door). Anandi opens the door to find Meenu with her ever radiant smile.

Meenu: Anandi Why is Shiv still sleeping??? Is everything alright???

Anandi: Ji choti maa. He came very late last night also; he has been loaded with heavy work since we got back from Kashmir.

Meenu: oh oke!! actually its Maahi's first match day after tomorrow. I would like to be there with him and I'm sure he'll be wishing for the same!! So I was thinking to surprise him by going there and giving him an attack.. Can u accompany me? (Anandi instantly thinks about Shiv and Meenu understands it). Don't worry we'll come back in a week. (CM also adds with a tone overflowing with tease) I'm aware of the fact how difficult it is for Shiv to stay away from you!!!😉

Anandi: *heavyly blushing* No! No! choti maa...😆 You've mistaken!!! Ofcourse I will accompany you.

(In the evening returns with the tickets)

Shiv: ( Though he so badly wants to be with Anandi, he doesn't show it out and tries to pretend that he s fine) Your tickets to Mumbai!

Anandi: You are not sad that I'm going...

(Shiv gives her a faint smile and doesn't say anything ; and Anandi totally understanding his plight, hugs him)

Shiv I'll miss you a lot' I can't stay stay away from you but its just that I couldn't say no to Choti maa!!!

Shiv: (Holds her face with both hands, smiling) Anandi don't worry about me at all. I'll be absolutely fine. But please don't forget to text me or call me when your free..(And he gives her a tight bear wala hug ).

(THE NEXT DAY, 7:00 A.M, AT THE JAIPUR AIRPORT)

The Shekhars have reached the airport a little early' When everyone is busy talking and giving eatables to Meenu, Shiv manages to sneak out a little far from them and Anandi gets the clue and follows him immediatly. 😉

Shiv (whispers): Take care and don't worry too much' I'll be waiting for you!!!

Anandi: You too take care and don't stress yourself too much with work. (Whispers very slowly) Love you (blushes and goes and joins the family). Shiv gives a blushing smile too and silently chants a prayer to God for bringing Anandi in his life.

Finally they board the plane and about two hours later (around 11:00 A.M.) they reach Mumbai. Anandi and Meenu take a taxi to Maahi's hotel. Meanwhile Anandi and Meenu get into a small conversation'Meenu tells her that she's very sure that Maahi must be sleeping till now.

Through out the car journey Meenu cheerfully answers all the questions raised by Anandi about Mumbai as she s new to the place and Meenu understands her eagerness to know things!!! 😆

Finally they reach Maahi's hotel. Anandi asks for Maahi at the reception and to their surprise they are told that Maahi's practising on the grounds.

Meenu feels very proud to see her son working hard. Maahi is totally shocked to see the sight of Anandi and Meenu waving at him.

Maahi: Mom!!!! Bhabhi!!!! (Touches Meenu's feet and hugs her)

Meenu: (proudly) I didn't know that my lazy son has become a hard working player now.

Maahi: Mom... (before he finishes, all the three hear "There's an announcement, calling for Maahi")

Meenu: Beta, you go and play; we'll talk in the evening..

Maahi: Okie mom!! But where are you going to stay?

Meenu: Don't worry!!! we have taken a room in the same hotel as yours.

Maahi was relieved to hear that..he waves them bye and resumes his practice session.

It's the opening ceremony of the IPL

Rehan and Shanaya are wholeheartedly welcomed by their fans. They also perform together on the track "Ishq wala love" and the entire place is filled with applauds!!! They are seen together during the entire function; infact they also leave the ceremony "together" only.

Later that night Maahi (very restlessly thinks to himself): what if ... if Shanaya and Rehan ... even if it is so ... it must be real ... but if it is then ... what is that I saw in Shanaya's eyes?? The wait or running away?? If she's happy with Rehan ... Okie!!! Maahi Anup Shekhar! You've got to wait for answers ... *sigh*

(THE FIRST MATCH v/s Rajasthan Royals)

Rajasthan Royals gives Pune a tough score of 186. In the second innings, Pune's Captain opens with one of the batsman. No luck!! their score is 70-3. The fourth batsman scores a 50 but again he gets a run out. Maahi, being the latest newcomer is given 8th position. The next two players play very slow and score only a 30.

Commentator: One over and 36 runs for Pune! The match is in Rajasthan's hands for sure.

Captain informs Maahi that he is next!!!
Maahi: Erm ... but Kabir was to go, right!!! (but captain doesn't listen and leaves)

Mandeep: Oye! Bain di tke!! Firstly, Kabir is an Indian team player, secondly, fielder; of course he wouldn't want to make himself a laughing stock out of a lost match!!!

Maahi (thinks to himself): If he starts thinking like this while playing for India too he'd soon be out of team.He bravely goes to the pitch with determination and confidence but still in a calm and composed manner.

As the bowler bowls the first ball; Maahi closes his eyes and remembers his parents and Shiv. And hits!

The first ball goes for a six!!! As the umpire confirms it; Maahi gives a big wide smile and the whole Pune audience starts hooting. And another six! Yet another!... Finally "Six sixes in six balls"!!!🥳

And the Pune team wins!!! 👏 👏 👏

Everyone is jumping and dancing in the stadium and of course at Kesarbagh too. Meenu has tears of joy and pride in her eyes. Anandi is so elated to see Meenu like that!!!

Commentator: Yet, young Maahi Shekhar creates another history in that of the Indian Premier League!!! And well that reminds us of the 6 sixes by Yuvraj!! Seems like we have a mini Yuvraj now.
Maahi gets the "Man of the Match" award!!! The Shekhars' joy knew no bounds!!!

After all the formalities and post-match functions are over, Maahi is called in the VIP compartment as he goes in, Shanaya is there, that too, alone!!! She moves towards him and says something, yet Maahi becomes mesmerized once again looking at their proximity closer than before!!! than ever!!!😳

FREEZE!!! 😉

Oke Guys!!! Hope u liked it!!! 😉 Stay tuned for more!!! :)

Edited by AnusuyaYadav - 12 years ago

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Thanx for our AnSh 😃

Lekin juda kar diya 😭 AnSh are really understanding sacrificing for the family

Kashmir ka khumaar abhi bhi chadha hua hai Udaipur ke Love birds par ☺️ Khullam khulla se zyaada chori chori pyar ka maza hai Karte jao

Mahi chota Yuvi Umm but his hero is M S Dhoni na? Koi nahi I love them both; Next world cup humaara Mahi laayega for India? IPL se get him to the national team

Meenu feelings wow.

I remembered my mom who is no,longer with me. It is tough to be 23 and no mom and dad. They won't be able to see me fulfill my dream and will not be able to see my achievements.

I have a big b just like Shiv and so hate the Saachi of the show

Parents they give their lives for their children and when the children achieve something they feel like the achievers.

Shanaya ka background story kya hai? This Rehan character I hope he is not using her.

What did she say to Mahi?

please continue soon

Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago

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Sudha

@Sudharies

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

That was an awesome update,
😊 Ansh are very cute and understanding. 😊
Coming to mahi, hitting 6 sixes, becominv a Yuvraj was WOW 👏 👏 Great going , Anu 😊
Update sooner. 😊

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appynehra

@appynehra

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: chahat11
Thanx for our AnSh 😃
Lekin juda kar diya 😭 AnSh are really understanding sacrificing for the family
Kashmir ka khumaar abhi bhi chadha hua hai Udaipur ke Love birds par ☺️ Khullam khulla se zyaada chori chori pyar ka maza hai Karte jao
Mahi chota Yuvi Umm but his hero is M S Dhoni na? Koi nahi I love them both; Next world cup humaara Mahi laayega for India? IPL se get him to the national team
Meenu feelings wow.
I remembered my mom who is no,longer with me. It is tough to be 23 and no mom and dad. They won't be able to see me fulfill my dream and will not be able to see my achievements.
I have a big b just like Shiv and so hate the Saachi of the show
Parents they give their lives for their children and when the children achieve something they feel like the achievers.
Shanaya ka background story kya hai? This Rehan character I hope he is not using her.
What did she say to Mahi?
please continue soon

chahat- u gonna get khullam khulla pyar ka maza very soon😉

For Shanaya and Rehan ... all i can say is ... stay tuned ... 😊

And thankss for such an awesum review 😳

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nightseye

@nightseye

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

HAI.. DEAR...

NICE AND LOVELY.. UPDATE..

ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH...

so.. tell me.. wat is Anandi's role going to.. be.. in Mumbai.. 😉 just Meenu's Companion...??

hmm.. wats the twist... going to be.. can wait to know...

waiting to see wat happens...

and ur update...

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appynehra

@appynehra

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: nightseye
HAI.. DEAR...

NICE AND LOVELY.. UPDATE..

ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH...

so.. tell me.. wat is Anandi's role going to.. be.. in Mumbai.. 😉 just Meenu's Companion...??

hmm.. wats the twist... going to be.. can wait to know...

waiting to see wat happens...

and ur update...

suspense! suspense!😛

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AnusuyaYadav

@AnusuyaYadav

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: chahat11
Thanx for our AnSh 😃
Lekin juda kar diya 😭 AnSh are really understanding sacrificing for the family
Kashmir ka khumaar abhi bhi chadha hua hai Udaipur ke Love birds par ☺️ Khullam khulla se zyaada chori chori pyar ka maza hai Karte jao
Mahi chota Yuvi Umm but his hero is M S Dhoni na? Koi nahi I love them both; Next world cup humaara Mahi laayega for India? IPL se get him to the national team
Meenu feelings wow.
I remembered my mom who is no,longer with me. It is tough to be 23 and no mom and dad. They won't be able to see me fulfill my dream and will not be able to see my achievements.
I have a big b just like Shiv and so hate the Saachi of the show
Parents they give their lives for their children and when the children achieve something they feel like the achievers.
Shanaya ka background story kya hai? This Rehan character I hope he is not using her.
What did she say to Mahi?
please continue soon

Chahat first of all thank u sooo much for taking time and reviewing our plot in detail!!! :)

AnSh are like that and we love them for that!!! 😊 but ders a lot more coming!!!

woah are u just 23?????? seriously???? ur writings are way matured!!! kudos!!! and parents

whever they are, their thoughts will always be with us and abt us!!! so don't worry!!! Ur mom and

Dad are so proud of you and are guiding you in each and every step of yours!!! Life's idiotic

happening is that we don't get everything!!! Be thankful to God that u have A Shiv like brother :) u r

lucky in that way!!! Shanaya's background will be unfolded in d upcoming chapters!!! regarding

Rehan shhh shhh thats a secret and u'll get to know that very soon!!!

Mahi and Shanaya's convo will be cont. in d next chapter and it'll be updated tmr!!! :)

take care!!! :)

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