The Story Continues... FF(SidYusha)

lifelessons thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Hi Everyone...This is my first attempt and everyone is welcome to read but if you are one of those who are like Oh no another SidYusha FF then maybe you can save your time and not read. (Just letting people know but with no bad intention) Anyways so all are welcome and your opinions are welcome(mostly possitive😆) heheh I wouldn't mind if someone has a suggestion that might help me in the future🤔...Hmm ya i wouldn't.😉
So moving on I have translated the dialogues to English for the members who don't understand hindi❤️
So here are some things to note
- Hindi Dialogues are in BOLD
- English translation is in Italics
- Narration is in normal font.
****Dedicated to my SY AT girls.. I love you❤️🤗😳

Created

Last reply

Replies

41

Views

10k

Users

18

Likes

153

Frequent Posters

lifelessons thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2

CH: Ira and Meena are having tea in the living room.

Ira is lost in thoughts and thinking how she had jumped to conclusion and in the process hurt Shiv and Sumitraji. She was just concerned about Shiv but in the process forgot that Anandi needed time to adjust. But to think of it, they haven't really gotten any time alone, we haven't even sent them to their honeymoon thinks Ira. Both of them have been so engrossed in their work that they have no time to spend with each other let alone know each other. Meanwhile Meena is observing Ira and noticed her expressions going from stressful to amused.

Meena(teasingly): Didi, kya chal raha hai aap ke dimag mein? (

Didi, what is cooking in your brain)

Ira(smiling): Meenu main soch rahi thi ki, Anandi Shiv ko abhi tak koi time hi nahi mila ek doosre ke saath bitane ke liye. Kyun na dono ko kahin bhej diya jaye, kya kehti ho Mount Abu kaisa rahega. (As Ira is speaking she is getting more and more excited and tumbling on her words.) Main Shiv ko abhi phone karke keh deti hoon ke woh ek hafte ki chutti le le.

(Meenu I am thinking that Shiv and Anandi haven't been able to spend some quality time together. So how about we send them somewhere on Honeymoon? what do you say about Mount Abu? (As Ira is speaking she is getting more and more excited and tumbling on her words.) I will just call Shiv and let him know to apply for one week's vacation.)

Meenu(laughing): Didi, thoda sabar rakho, Shiv kuch hi deir main aa jayega aur Anandi bhi wapis hi aati hogi. Woh keh rahi thi ki Teacherji ke center ka udhghatan karke raat hone se pehle aa jayegi. Phir hum dono ko bitha ke pooch lenge

(Didi have some patience, Shiv will be home soon and Anandi will also be back. She was saying that she will be back before nightfall after Teacherji's center's inauguration. You can then ask them both)

Ira: Nahi Meenu main abhi Shiv se baat kar leti hoon ta ki woh chuttiyon ke liye apply kar sake

(No Meenu I will call Shiv right now so that he can apply for vacation right now)

Ira picks up her phone in excitement and calls Shiv, while the phone is ringing she gets little apprehensive and hopes that Shiv is still not angry with her but when Shic picked up the phone and talked to her Ira gave an inward sigh of relief as she could hear the warmth in Shiv's voice and she thought she is so lucky to have a son like him.

Ira: Hello Shiv

Shiv: Hello Ma, main aap hi ke bare main soch raha tha. Aap theek hain?

(Hello Mom, I was just thinking about you, are you ok?)

Ira(smiles): Haan Shiv main bilkul theek hoon. Acha yeh batao ke tumhe office main kitna kaam hai? Tum ek hafte ki chutti le sakte ho kya?

(yes Shiv I am absolutely fine. Ok tell me, will you be able to take a week off from your office?

Shiv: Kyun ma kya hua? Aap mujhse kuch chupa rahi hai? Sab theek hai na?

(Why what happened Mom? Are you hiding something from me? Is everything ok?)

Ira: Shiv Shiv itni tension mat lo, sab theek hai, reason main tumhe baad main batayungi, pehle tum yeh batao chutti le sakte ho ya nahi

(Shiv Shiv why are you taking so much tension. Everything is fine, I will tell you the reason for now just tell me if you can take time off or not)

Shiv: haan waise abhi sab projects theek chal rahe hain aur sab kuch control main hai. Main kuch dinon ki chutti to le hi sakta hoon

(yes all my projects are going fine and everything is under control so I can take some time off.)

Ira gets excited: Acha to tum kal hi se chutti le lo

(ok then take it off from tomorrow)

Shiv smiles: Ma kal se nahi le sakta. Mujhe Bheem singh ko sab samjha ke jana parega. Main apni sari important meeting 2-3 din tak nipta leta hoon aur phir ek hafte ki chutti le loonga. Par aap mujhe batayengi kay mujhe chutti leni kyun hai?

(Mom I can't take time off from tomorrow. I have to give all the information to Bheem Singh. I will try to finish all my important meetings in 2-3 days and then take a week off. But can you please telling me the reason behind the time off)

Ira: chalo Shiv tum chutti ke liye apply karo, baki baat hum ghar pe karte hain. Smiling Ira hangs up

(Ok Shiv you apply for the vacation, I will let you know the reason when you get home. Smiling Ira hangs up)

Edited by ayesha321 - 12 years ago
lifelessons thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3

Meenu enquires if everything went ok and Ira says that Shiv can get a week off but first he needs to finish all his meetings and that will take 3 more days. Ira then again loses in thoughts and exclaiming excitedly suggests that they should take Anandi for shopping as they have few days now. Meenu is very happy seeing Ira getting back to her normal self again.

Meenu: Didi, aap to aise khush ho rahi hain jaise aap aur bhai saab honeymoon pe ja rahe hain

(Didi you are so excited as if you and Bhai saab are going on a honeymoon)

Ira (blushes): Nahi Meenu aisi baat nahi hai. Mujhe laga humme Anandi ko kuch light sarees le kar deni chahiye taki honeymoon pe who comfortable rahe . Mount Abu main Abhi thand hogi to overcoat, cap, gloves sab chahiye hoga.

(No Meenu, it's not like thatI just thought we should buy some light sarees for anandi so that she is comfortable oh her honeymoon. It will still be cold in Mount Abu so we need to buy her overcoat, cap, gloves etc.)

Right then Anandi enters the room, She is all smiles and comes and touches Ira and Meena's feet.

Anandi: Ma, aap kab aayin?

(Mom, when did you arrive)

Ira : Subah hi, Anandi mere pass betho. Aur mujhe sab batao udhghatan ke baare main.

(Just in the morning, Anandi come sit with me and tell me all about the inauguration)

Anandi smiles her 1000 watt smiles and narrates all that happened to Ira. She tells her how teacherji was very happy to see her and the great work she is doing for the girls who have been Balika Vadhus. Ira and Meena are listening to Anandi intently with the pleasure showing on their faces. They praise teacherji and her work. Then Meena tells Anandi to freshen up and says that she will make some tea for her. Anandi who is not use to someone else taking so much care of her refuses politely and tell Meena that she will make the tea but Meena insists and tell Anandi that she would love to make some tea for her as she knows Anandi had a long day. Anandi reluctantly goes to her room to change.

While in her room Anandi calls Shiv, Shiv is just entering the house when he picks up her call

Shiv (smiling): Anandiji Boliye

Anandi: Shiv main wapas aa gayi hoon

(Shiv I am back)

Shiv's smile blossoms

Shiv: Acha, abhi aap kahan hain, Circuit House main?

(really, where are you right now, in circuit house?)

Anandi: ji Shiv main seedha yahan aa gayi.

(Yes Shiv, I came here directly)

Shiv: Anandiji bas main bhi ghar ke bahar hi hoon and cuts the call.

(Anandiji I am just outside the house)

Shiv happily enters the house and once again overhears Ira and Meenu talking but this time Ira is all excited and discussing Shiv and Anandi's honeymoon.

Shiv speaks up: Ma, to isliye aap ne mujhe time off lene ko kaha tha.

(Mom, So that's why you wanted me to take some time off)

Ira jolts around and then heaves a sigh of relief: oh Shiv tumne to mujhe Darra hi diya

(oh Shiv you scared me)

Shiv enquires: Ma, kya aap ne Anandi se baat ki hai? Aaj subah hi to humne sab discuss kiya tha. Aur aap ne kaha bhi tha ke aap sab samjhti hain?

(Mom, Have you talked to Anandi about it? Just in the morning we discussed everything and you said that you understand everything now)

Ira realises that in all the excitement she forgot that her idea can be interpreted as interference. She quickly reassures Shiv

Ira: Shiv main jaanti hoon ke tumhe laga ke main interfere kar rahi hoon. But believe me beta, mera aisa koi Irada nahi. Main to bas chahti hoon ke tum aur Anandi ek doosre ke saath thoda time bita lo. Tum dono pe itni responsibilities hain ke ek doosre ke liye time hi nahi mil pa raha.

(Shiv I know that you think I am interfering in your matters. But believe me beta, that was not my intention. I just wanted that you and Anandi spend some time together. You both have so many responsibilities that you don't get enough time with each other)

Shiv calms down a little and keeps his hands on Ira's shoulders

Shiv: Ma, main samajh sakta hoon. Acha don't worry Anandiji se main baat kar leta hoon. Waise hain kahan woh?

(Mom I understand. You don't worry about it I will talk to Anandi. By the way where is she?)

Edited by ayesha321 - 12 years ago
lifelessons thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4

Ira smiles and lets him know she is in her room freshening up. Shiv enters the room and looks for Anandi but Anandi is nowhere to be seen. Shiv realizes that Anandi is taking a shower. He sits down on the bed and mulls over on how to talk to her about honeymoon. Even though their relationship is progressing and he is enjoying seeing love for him blossoming in Anandi's heart, he doesn't want to rush or put any kind of pressure on Anandi. He wants her to accept him and his love completely first. He thinks of the morning when Anandi almost said "I love you" to him and smiles slowly. Just then Anandi comes out of the bathroom. Seeing Anandi with wet hair and a shy smile on her face, all the thoughts in Shiv's head vanished and he stutters in his speech

Shiv: Aaanadiji

Anandi smiles shyly when she sees Shiv's condition and looks at him with loving eyes thinking she would tell everything that is in her heart to Shiv today.

Shiv: Anandiji actually mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi

(Anandiji actually I wanted to talk to you about something)

Anandi goes closer to Shiv and says

Anandi: Shiv batayie, Kya baat hai

(Shiv tell me what is it)

Shiv: Anandiji woh Ma keh rahi thi ke humme kuch dinno ke liye'

(Anandiji Mom was saying that we both should')

Anandi: ji Shiv boliye

(Yes Shiv)

Shiv: Ke humme kuch dinno ke liye ghoom aana chahiye

(that we both should go out for few days)

Listening to this Anandi is mum; Shiv takes her quiet as her being upset.

Shiv: Mujhe Ma ne kuch deir pehle phone karke chutti lene ko keh diya tha par yakeen maniye mujhe nahi pata that ke woh kya soch rahi hain Par jab mujhe pata chala to maine unhain keh diya hai ke aap bahut busy hain, aur aap pe bahut sari responsibilities hain.

(Mom called me some time ago and told me to take some time off but believe me at that time I didn't know what she was thinking. But when I came to know l told her that you have lots of responsibilities and just cannot abandon them like that)

Anandi is just watching shiv with sheen of tears in her eyes. She doesn't know what to think or feel. She is happy, excited and anxious at the same time. She is unable to speak because her emotions are overwhelming her. She suddenly realizes that Shiv is saying something to her.

Shiv: Anandiji, aap sun rahi hain? To main Ma ko ja kar manna kar deta hoon.

(Anandiji, are you listening? I will go and tell Mom to cancel the plan.)

Anandi suddenly speaks up: Rukiye Shiv, main (now Anandi hesitates a little) umm woh Ma agar chahti hain to main jaane ke liye tyaar hoon. Phooli aur Gulli school sambhal lengi aur sarpanch kaka(referring to the ex sarpanch) mera kaam ek haft eke liya sambhal lenge (she smiles shyly and looks down)

(Shiv Stop, I (now Anandi hesitates a little) umm if Mom wants for us to go then I am ready. Phooli and Gulli can take care of the school and Sarpanch Kaka (referring to the ex sarpanch) will take care of my other responsibilities (she smiles shyly and looks down))

*** now just imagine the Chaudhary song starting in the background***

When she looks up she sees Shiv smiling, he looks like as if he has gotten all the happiness in the world just by hearing her few words. He is barely able to contain himself. Anandi looks at him and thinks why was she so blind to his love? Is it even possible for someone to love so much? She silently promises him that no matter what happens her love will only increase for him as the days go by. Anandi realizes the intensity of Shiv's stare and her heart skips a beat, she feels very shy and makes an excuse that she should go and help Ira and Meena with Dinner but Shiv stops her by taking her hand in his.

He looks at her lovingly and says Anandiji aap kuch bhool nahi rahi?

(Anandiji aren't you forgetting something?)

Anandi's eyes suddenly light up with naughtiness: Nahi to, main to kuch nahi bhool rahi

(No, I am not forgetting anything)

Shiv: Aap pakka kuch bhool nahi rahi. (Seeing the naughtiness in her eyes he also gets excited and grins) Aisa karte hain, main aapko yaad dila deta hoon. Shiv slowly starts pulling anandi towards him "I'" he pulls her more "Love..." in a sudden move Anandi gets out of his hold and runs towards the door laughing. She stops at the door and looks back at him

(are you sure? (Seeing the naughtiness in her eyes he also gets excited and grins) Lets do this, I will remind you what it was. Shiv slowly starts pulling anandi towards him "I'" he pulls her more " Love..." in a sudden move Anandi gets out of his hold and runs towards the door laughing. She stops at the door and looks back at him)

Anandi (laughingly): Sabar kijiye Collector Saab, Sabar ka phal mitha hota (and leaves the room.)

(Have patience Collector Saab, patience reaps sweeter rewards and leaves the room)

Photo courtesy Ex Yu...found this on internet and thought it would go perfectly with the scenario.(I hope you guys don't mind me using it)

Edited by ayesha321 - 12 years ago
pabitra. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
grt wrk ayesha!! read one after a long time..
sudhajo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Thanku ayesha. Story rocks. wonderful that u have started from Feb'27th, which we all sidyushians are missing... waiting for more.
libsrocks thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
really good...update next part soon
manjery thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
ayesha i wanna hug u dear 🤗 thanks a lot for giving life 2 our ansh(SIDYUSHA) i have no words to describe what a perfect story u have written seriously its like i am watching BV from 27th feb u bought tears 2 my eyes but the HAPPY ONE😭😃 n please update it soon 👏👏
lifelessons thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: pabitra.

grt wrk ayesha!! read one after a long time..

Thanks I am glad you like it😃
lifelessons thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: sudhajo

Thanku ayesha. Story rocks. wonderful that u have started from Feb'27th, which we all sidyushians are missing... waiting for more.

thanks thanks 😃...I will be updating soon and you can see where the story heading to😉

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".