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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: anshurg5

@ Donji ,

This will be fine .😳

Btw i wonder how you people picks so well from each other .😛


well thanks for compliment

well...its called Don ka magic 😎😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Aditi,👍🏼

You picked so well from Donji,😛

And A is now tadpoing to talk to Kadoos Shivraj Shekhar .,😉

I am quite enjoying this FF.😎.

Now waiting for Donie's part ...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Nice Update...Aditi...😳
Await Next...Is it goin' to be Guns (Donji's ) style...or Roses ( Yours ) style...😳😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Haila Aditi... Donji ke saath ab aap bhi sahi don-style dlg de rahe ho...
"Yahan mere izzjat ke parinda bhi udd nahi sakata aur tum bahar ghoomne chali gaye." 😎
Nice update. 👏
Next one sooner pls...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Awesome update Aditi!!!

Man you guys are real tease!!!

Not letting us know what kind of a person Shiv is...

Donji can we expect some clues in your update atleast😳

Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sbadam

Awesome update Aditi!!!


Man you guys are real tease!!!

Not letting us know what kind of a person Shiv is...

Donji can we expect some clues in your update atleast😳

Thanks for the PM!

Yeah me too wanting to know yeh Shivraj kaun hain? Donji we need some clues...ok atleast one 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Patience balika

dheere sab pata chal jayega

jaldi kya hain

hum bhi yahin hain tum sab bhi yahin hoo

thoda sabra karo

pata hain na SABRKA fal Choclate se bhi meetha hota hain 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
wow grt work aditi 👏 👏 👏

i ws feelng as if m readng novel...vry well written...

so awsum dialogs...hw mch A talks...n S is sp khadoss...bt soft frm insyd 😳 😳

waitng fr ur nxt update 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Aditi-Finally done-

Wow- u transformed the adorable sweet Shivraj shekhar to a

Great work- both of u think alike -
don and aditi- awesome co-ordination

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90


Chapter - 5


Shivraaj stunned to see anandi in front of him early morning, he start to wonder. what she is doing so early... but he decide to ignore her and decided to take his jog first as he do always….anandi is determine to talk with him.. she know that her punishment is still going on..but isn't one day is enough..

"meri punishment khatam ho chuki ho to mai tumse kuch puch sakti hu…" anandi asked him straight ..

He nod in yes.. but didn't speak further

Anandi bit irritated. with his behavior…

But still continue

"maman keh rahi thi kit um subah jogging jate ho… muje bhi aana hai tumhare sath…"

She notice that his face is tighten little.. and and bit irritation show on his face…his muscle become tense.. as he move towards her to speak something.. but anandi continue further.. not letting him interrupt her..

:muje pata hai tumhe meri chinta hai.. tumhe muje safe rakhna hai… to mai akele kaha ja rahi hu. Tumhare sath javungi na.. to khud safe bhi rahungi.. aur bate karlungi aur bore nahi honewali

Shivraaj expression become soft after hearing this but he still added with smirk

"jogging bate karne ke liye nahi jate…aur muje tumhari chinta nahi hai.."

"isliye to mai keh rahi hu.. tum muje lekar ja sakte ho bahar… chalo.. mai bhi chalti hu.."

He nod again.. and anandi follow him

Shivraaj choose vacant park of nearby.. where people are choose to not visit…something about rumor about that place prevent people to visit.

Anandi try to make conversation with him. .as she wanted to tell him about her dad and require his help too.. but all vain… Shivraaj is to busy with his jogging.. and plus.. she is unable to keep herself with him.. he is fast runner… he already complete…5 rounds.. is impossible to speed with him

Shivraaj notice her situation..and remark about it..

"khud ko prove karne ke liye takad aur himmat dono jaurui hai.. us din jo ladkimaine dekhi thi.. uski aakho mai aag di… wo hai kaha… kahi kho to nahi gayi… he spite her…

This trigger anandi.. she remember event happen with her earlier.. her dad death.. she realize. Indeed she need power. .strength.. she needed to be strong to find killers. she started to run furiously as she recollect everything in front of eyes again…Shivraaj was busy with his call notice this change is her… he look at her surprise again.. her eyes talking same way.. the way they spark when he meet her first. the same determination.. in her face he witness earlier counter with her..

He saw that.. she completed 5 rounds of park.. and its enough for her today...he stop her grabbing her hand…"enough he said to her.."

Anandi replied with anger.. " mai to bus proved kar rahi thi apne aap ko… ki mai himmat aur takad dono rakhti hu..chodo mera rasta.. muje..before she said anything… aanandi fainted.. in his arms…

Shiv look down at her…worried..

And said ye ladki mera rooting bigad kar rahi hai rahegi.. he chuckle at pick her in his arms.. led way to home..

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He enter his house..with anandi in his arms.. which left surprise natthu and pappu both.. his servants watch him with open mouth..

He put her to her room and shouted natthu.. thanda pani lekar aana..

"natthu ran with water and cotton.."

Shivraaj… wash anandi face with cool water… and wipe her face with soft cotton. he repeat its.. again till she get conscience .back

Nathu is behind him look at this shocked.. and informed Shivraaj

"madam ne kal khana nahi khaya tha… isliye huva hoga.."

What Shivraaj turn to his side with anger… asked him to brought something for her…

Anandi open her eyes saw him in front of her… before she able to say anything Shivraaj stop her..

"kuch kha lena.. fir baat karte hai…tab tak so javo.. mai baadmai aakar tumse milunga par pehle kha lena ok.." he said in soft tone.. but still there harshness evident in his voice..

He told her and walk away from there

Anandi curse herself for her stupidity.. now only she will be able to talk to him.. once he return… she decide to wait for him

Shivraaj called out maman…

"kya huva shiv.. maman asked in surprise"

"anandi behosh hogayi thi… aap uska dhyan rakhiye… make sure.. ki kuch kha le.. muje important kaam ke liye bahar jana hai baad mai aavunga.. and he left for important work..

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.In dark forest area…

Viraj and his people are searching for someone..


"us aadmi ne kaha tha… ki ratan sigh ki information yahi milegi…"

A very old man approach them… the wrinkle on his face is much visible.. he is around 65-70… he walk.. Towards them slowly. he is coughing badly…

"maine hi phone kiya tha.. muje ek aadmi ki lash mili… aapka number tha to bula liya.. mai Buddha varna fas jata is mai.. aap use le jayei

The one of Viraj man said

"bhai kahi aise to nahi rattan singh ko mara"

Are the old man exclaim in shocked

Ek Buddha ek noujvaan ko kya marega… aur mera jeevan to lagbhag khatam ho chukka.. javo baccho le javo use…

Viraj and all the man take rattan body with them… and after then left to meet his brother.. the real god of crime… Vishal Thakkar….

No one notice that budda was standing there.. with wrinkle of his face now change in to handsome face.. its Shivraaj shekhar..

The smirk appear on his face.. when he return rattan Singh body… easily to them who are use to babysit him… viraj to bad that you sill not dead.. after sending man to killing me…your time is just start now. one hour.. and you will be dead.. he complete with cold tone..

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Anandi come back after little time and join in breakfast table.. where she notice that.. Shivraaj is not seen anywhere.. she wonder where he is gone.. everyone seems ok.. nathu is not in hurry like always.. maman to eating her breakfast… only Shivraaj is not here… she recall him telling her that he is going for ..just because she is week condition.. she didn't understand properly.. but he is not here.. Mean he left for his work.. which make disappointed anandi..

Anandi left breakfast in anger.. once she realize that shiv is nowhere in her sight…

"muje nahi khana.." anandi said and about to walk out..

Are anandi breakfast karo beta.. meenakshi called out her..

Without looking back.. anandi replied.. " bhook nahi maman.." and she left to her room

Is kya huva. Hey bhagwan ye lakdi itni jiddi kyu hai.. dono jiddi se mera pala padha hai. ek shiv aur ek yeah... maman wondered…

Shivraaj ko informed karma padega. But kya wo phone receive karega…she thoughtful for this..

Anandi left crying in her room.. he said he will be back and talk to her.. bus he didn't.. why. She don't know.. but for her.. its important to talk to him and see him.. everyday… even seeing his talking with him becoming habit for her.. now.. he is nowhere.. ..she determined to talk with him… she decide she will not eat anything until he come back to her..

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In the end of forest are.. a half kilometer.. there was huge.. building.. which using by crime people.. a secrete place of Vishal thakkar.. he was used this place for all his secret meeting.. no one till date find out this place other then his brother and him..

Vishal Thakkar is busy to discuss about his future plan with his gang members… at the same time Viraj arrive at secret adda where they are meeting as normally.

Vishal saw his brother.. and raise hi eyebrow to inquire about rattan sing

"to mile gaya rattan Singh"

Nahi bhai uski lash mili hai… sale ke pass information thi par nahi di. Paise ke liye… aur ab khud margaya.. ab to hame pata kaise chalega.. wo ladki koun hai us leader ki beti.. aur nah hi password ke bare mai pata chal payega

Vishal replied hmm… password ke bare mai pata chalna important hai varna boss hamne nahi chodega…aur tune kya majra karke rakha hai.. wo shivraaj shekhar ko marne ke liye aadmi tune bheje they.. jis kaam ke mai waqt dena tha wo chodkar Shivraaj ke piche lag geye. Har kam sahi waqt deekhar karna chahiiye… he' stated..

"ha bhai sale ko khatam karma chahta tha.. but bachgya..agar samne aaya na to nahi chodunga" "usne.. hamri kitna sari deals chini hai…wo to waha ka god bangaya tha.. isliye hamri power dikhane ke liye use khatam karna jauri tha… jis jagah ke ham badshah hai waha koi aur uspar amal chalaye ye kaise ho sakta hai he shouted in rage..

Jo bhi ho.. par ye waqt hamare liye sahi nahi hai.. isliye.. jara dhyan se kadam uthana.. kuch din ke liye use bhulkar password dhunde mai dhyan do..

Before viraj agree what vishal said.. his mam come running..

"Bhai.. hamari adde mai koi gus gaya hai.. hamre bahot se aadmi ko maar dala hai"

Vishal and viraj both stunned to see the man.. is coming behind him

SHivraaj SHekhar.. Viraj exclaimed..with shocked..face...

raghu ki jaan le li tune.. hamre aadmi ko marne ki koshish ki aur is tarah se. moute ke liye chala aaya." Vishal.. the leader roar in anger..

Usne jo kiya sahi nahi kiya boss.. hame use maar dalna chahiye.. uda dete hai one of his man said

Dekha bhai kahaa tha ye asie nahi manane wla yaha bhi aagya. Viraj said..

Before his leader say something..

Shivraaj look at his side.. and said… muje marna itna aasan nahi hai.. aur unke liye to bilkul bhi nahi jo muje marne ki koshish pehle bhi kar chuke hai..

He stop in track look around.. pick two man around viraj…. Throw them on ground…and shoot there mouth.. Leaving them dead at place…

He . look around other man involved in plan against him… he shoot them as well…

Vishal look shocked.. and asked in rage.

Tu mera admiyo ko kyu maar raha hai..

Shivraaj stop his tracks.

" ab tak batya nahi tune is.. he asked viraj..

Tuje lagta hai tu mere admiyo ko marker ja payega yaha se… itna aasan nahi hai

Shivraaj paid not attention to him… he come and take a seat in front "of him

"aai suna nahi bhai kuch keh rahe hai.. other man shouted at shivraaj"

Shivraj just look at him and shoot him as well

Which left scare other too..

"tuje chahiye kya.." vishal asked.

"tere bhai ki mout" shivraj tell his like this is the fact.

wo to ho nahi sakta.. pehle bata tu yaha aaya kaise.. pata kaise chala is jagah ka.. vishal asked suspiciously..

Shivraj doesn't give him answer instead he glare at him and smirk and look at his brother direction.. vishal understand that he follow him… and look angrily at his brother.. and then turn to shivraaj and said to him..

Mai janta hu usne tuje marni ki koshish ki par iska javab mout nahi ho sakta tu marra to nahi na…javab de.

"mai faltu bato ki javab nahi deta.." shivraaj look not interested.. most of the time.. he didn't speak at all.. which scare is opponent lot..

and in vishal adda everyone understand its better to live not to asked shivraaj question other then his boss.. which he give only as per his mood...

"tuje lag ita hai tu mere samne mere bhai ko maar payega…" vishal shouted top of voice

"us se pehle mai tuje mar dunga.. viraj shout too..

Shivraj shoot bullet on temple of viraj… he fell lifeless on floor…and get up like nothing happen…

Marchuk hai.. one hour mai marne ke bare mai socha tha kar diya… he said with smirk

Vishal look stunned at his brother body... and doesn't know how to react.. but then again.. he is his brother after all..

How dare you to kill my brother.. that to at my place…

Galti karnewale log muje pasand nahi aur galit karnewalo ko mai aasani se nahi bakshta.. aur tumhare bhai ne to gunha kiya tha.. apne dushmano ko khula chodkar.. rehne walo mai se Shivraaj nahi hai.aur waise bhi.. apne bhai ki mout par itna gussa kyu hai jab kit um.. .apni gang ke leader apne bade bhai ko marker hi bane ho.. kal ye bhi wohi karta jo tune kiya. .shukra maan… ki mout se mainebachaya hai…tuje.. chalta hu… tu bachgaya kyuki tune muje marne ke liye log nahi beje they …

Shivraaj smirk and get up about to left..

Bahot sari information hai tuje meri...not bad..

Shivraaj give only smirk and look carelessly..…

Wah.. man liya tumhe…tumne sahi kaha muje faraq nahi padta iski mout se.., muje tumhare jaise insane ki jaurat thi.. tumhara bahot naam suna hai.. Assassin ho tum professional killer.. .. Vishal rose form his seat..

Hame tumhari jaurur hai… jitna chaho unta paisa milega…

Shivraj smile.. and keep his gun and table and seat down indicating that he is ok with it..

He raise his eyebrow like karna kya hai..

Vishal.. explain…

Ek lakdi ko marna hai… wo jo abhi kuch din news mai ek political leader ki bare mai batya tha.. uski beti.. uske bare mai kisko nahi pata usne kabhi information leak hone hi nahi..di aur khud margaya.. matlab hamne marvaya.. kyat um us ladki se information matlab password nikal kar use khatam kar sakte ho.."

"hmm. Khajan singh... ke beti.. right.. sure.. mera yahi to kaam hai.. mai apne har task imandari se pura karta hai. .mai us lakdi ko dhudnkar use khatam jauru karunga.. don't worry.. aur password bhi lekar aavunga.."

Well you are part is our gang now… vishal declared with devilish smirk on his face..

No.. I am not any ordinary member of your gang… shivraaj shekhar khud ke liye kaam karta hai kisi aur ke liye nahi.. with that he left place..

And some stunned face watch him in horror including vishal thakkar..

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Its was late in evening.. still Shivraaj. didn't return to house.. he was explaining. .everything to his gang members. who seated with him along

Chief.. to hame us ladki ke bare mai information dhudni hai..

"bilkul muje sari information chahiye. Ki khajan singh karta kyat ha… password dudna bahot important hai.. samj gaye.. wo lakdi jaha bhi kahi ho dundh nikalo use..uska jinda hamare hat lagna important ho chukka hai.."

Ji chief.. shayam.sehgal. replied..

And one more thing.. other look at him surprise ..in his team.. he only trust only some few that to shyam and his wife sugna.. and ashima..so he believe they are good to done his task..

I want one bodyguard to safe anandi, so choose some one girl so she can be with her every time..…

Others look surprise… he never show care for anyone till date.. other then his maman.. they what make different about this girl. and pulse its surprise that he is calling.. her by name.. where even after time.. he use only surname to address them.. they wonder.

shivraaj phone buzz and everyone jump in surprise..

he received and replied

"ji maman.. what. Anandi... mai abhi aata hu.. "

He ask

Everyone.. Surprise what just happen.. the first time chief.. left meeting ..without informing them that to incomplete..

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He drive madly to return house When maman inform him that.. anandi faint again..what the hell is happening…

he enter in him and saw maman is standing. Worried

'maman anandi ko kya huva.. maine kaha tha na uska dhyan rakhna..""kya huva behosh kaise ho gayi.. koi aur attack to nahi huva tha na jo dar gayi ho.."

"anandi ko dar.. bahar wale logo ne nahi baliki tujse hai… aisa muje lag raha hai.. ek tu hi hai jo use nuksan pahucha sakta hai" maman replied

What shivraaj asked shocked..

"tune use kaha tha ki tu use aakar milega.. tu din bhar ghar par nahi tha.. wo tujse baat krna chahti thi.. aur isliye usne kuch bhi nahi khaya hai subah se.. tab tak nahi khana chahti jab tak tu nahi aajta" "aur tu ab raha hai.. jab wo massom behosh ho gayi.. maman replied coldly

What.. kya pagalpan hai ye.. use aisa nahi karma chahiye tha.. but he realize that he maman is too angry to understand that so he decide to keep silent..

He look at her maman she understood that he wanted to meet her. She left.. but not before saying

"shivraaj… ye ek ladki masoom dil hai.. tumhara koi naya assignment nahi jo gun aur bullets se chalta hai.. to handled with care.. don't hurt her.."

He nod in agreement.. and goes to meet her..

Maman wonder looking at his departure in her room

: kuch samj mai nahi aarha kya kaur. Anandi ko rok lu.. is aag mai jalnese.. ye fir chod du aisehi... pata nahi par kyu aisa lagta hai ki. Wo fanna hone ke liye paida huvi hai is aag mai..aur Is patange ko to ye aag bhi nahi rok sakti.. bilkul nahi.. shivraaj kisi aag se kam to nahi..she whisper to herself..


to be continue...

Edited by Don_theEvil - 12 years ago

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