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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update Aditi! Loved the S-J-A interactions...J pakoing, A chattering and S ignoring 😆

Also the Heth Singh twist...did not see that coming...the web becomes more tangled...your readers already entangled, please don't get entangled yourself 😛 Interested to see how he plays a part in this scenario. I know it will be good.

Good luck Prati! I'm expecting some dishoom dishoom at the very least 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just now finished reading the last two updates-

Again a great combo- Don and Aditi-👏

Jagdish and ACP😆

Kuch decision hua abt who is actually shivraj?😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks all 🤗 for wonderful comment

I promise behalf of Don & myself we won't disappoint our readers at all 🤗

keep guessing abt SRS...It will be treat for u all readers...for sure

do comment & reading

wait for nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali_pi

Just now finished reading the last two updates-


Again a great combo- Don and Aditi-👏

Jagdish and ACP😆

Kuch decision hua abt who is actually shivraj?😉


arre tune padha na last update SRS khud hee bataya na who is he 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for informing prati nahi toh i would have missed a super amazing story...
Kya plot hain yaar its amazing...
Shiv is like , main hoon don with rocking atittude.. 😳 (but why do ii feel like he is undercover cop)
anandi can also flirt omg 😲
and Acp jagdish 😆 ..
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aditi, WoW! Awesome build up & suspense

yayyy it is shaping up as a edgy underworld thriller😎

Don some action mangta now 😳




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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..wow...wow... Aditi... wt a part...⭐️⭐️⭐️...👏👏👏...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...
I just Love... SRS' akadness nd ignorance in J's office...😉😆... J to jul bhin ke khakh ho gaya..😆😆
Wow... Kya style hai..😎...... nd Anandi..haye... wo to puri ki puri gae kam se..😳..😉...
nd that HS track...haye... yeh SRS akshir hai kya????😕...
nd suspense...haye... uske bare main to kya kahu.. yar... its killing... kya part likah hai dear...
Well as u know Doni is so expert in such type of Killer character nd story... Like here SRS...
nd to maintain that level... nd take that character nd Suspense part on next level...its tough one... but u not only maintain that... but done excellent in that...⭐️⭐️⭐️
U always wrote... sweet,lovely,romantic stories... nd this one totally different... so to create such piece...nd in such which is not ur forte... its amazing... U cracked it dear...👍🏼
so wt now I said in ur tarif... yar... I m speechless..
I just love this part...🤗🤗🤗..


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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...Wat a shape this story has taken up...Guys U both truly deserve all the accolades and praises for coming up with such a dhaasu script...a script which is no less than a super duper suspense thriller movie by the Bhatts or Madhur Bhandakar or any such director in the movie industry...
So many suspenses, and the way u guys have portrayed the characters, how they emerge at the right moment in a beautiful way is simply superb...
all the adjective in the dictionary will b less to compare ur effort and ur work...Have to invent a new dictionary to praise u both...
Yaarrr plzzz...Shiv ko hatyaaraa mat banaooo...humble request...maintain the suspense, but c to it that he is not a hatyaaraaa, but a man who is doing some sort of goodness to the society and the country...Don banaa hee rahe hoo thooo abh Don aur aditi ki marzi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
agla update kab aane wala hai?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 9

Anandi is sitting in hall thinking about time that she spend with shiv.. she feel very amazed that how her world is revolve around him.. she feel happy when he is with her.. and he just drop her and left for his work.. Anandi frown to thinking about that' that to without saying bye' she actually went to meet Jagdish..Because she wanted to find out her dad case.. but it left her little disappointed that she couldn't get anything from Jagdish.. but she console herself thinking ..this is her first meeting.. its impossible for him to be disclose at her' and then she just break his heart its hurt her..but what she can do in this matter.. Where her heat lay somewhere else.. she remember suddenly.. Jagdish asked profession of shiv.. but he decided to skip that part.. with his own way..she can understand that he don't want to reveal in front of Jagdish.. but then why he is hiding from her too..

She decided to asked him reason behind this... he should told her.. what exactly and for whom he worked for.. but then she scolded herself to think like that.. a very first day she believe on his without any condition.. now after failing for him she wanted to find everything about him. Her love is not selfish.. she can give him freedom to express when he want.. she will never question him or judge him like this' her love and trust always be with him.. no matter what.. Anandi think determined..

Anandi thought broken suddenly she heard Maman voice

"are Anandi to batao apne friend se mili ki nahi. Ye Shivraj to bahar ke baharr hi chala gaya' ab to raat ko hi wapis aayega' khana khate waqt bhi tum chup thi' ab sham hone ko aayi hai.. tumhe kahi baharr nahi jana'

Ha maman kyu nahi' mai soch rahi thi mai mandir jakar aavu'

She think in her mind waise bhi' us..khadoos ko waqt kaha hai.. mere liye.. jo muje phone karega inform karega ya fir muje kahi baharr lejayega' Jagdish se milwane le gaya wahi kafi hai.. aur upar se.. aate waqt kaha bhi usne.. ki wo muje drop karne kaam nahi karnewala.. mai to bus kuch samay to mang rahi thi uske sath but nahi.. aur ab jo gaya hai phone tak nahi kiya.. mai karu to pasand nahi aayega' kaisa insane se pala padha hai mera' jismai romance naam ki cheej hi nahi hai aur ab is bodyguard ke sath jana padega

Annadi dhyan kaha hai tumharra apne bodygruad ko sath lekar javo..

Varna Shivraaj ko gussa aajyega hai na Maman.. Anandi completed her sentence..

Bilkul.. both laugh at the same.. while.. bodyguard take this opportunity to informed vishal thakkar that its right time to kidnapped Anandi' he asked him to send his man..

Anandi left with him for mandir

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Shivraaj meet his team as an urgent basis.. and get busy with his work' after dropping Anandi.. he directly come to meet his team. .discussing.. about urgent matter about girl that he working about.. his team find out address of girl'the place.. even Ashima search there. But they find nothing.. he decided to himself.. visiting that place letter..

Chief is baar kamal ki information mili hai' Sehagal said in excitement

Shiv give him node indicating him proceed further..

Chief pata chala hai ki wo ladki.. Khajan Singh ki beti.. jab 12 saal kit hi.. tab khajan singh ne use. Apne kisi dost ke pass rakha tha.. tabse woh usike pass reh rahi thi' islye wo kabhi Kahjan Singh ke baad jayada tar nahi dikhi.. aurr wo aasani se apni beti ko duniya ki najarr se chupa paya.

Interesting.. shivraaj nodded'

I am sure.. uske dost ko kisine dekha nahi hoga.. agar mai sahi soch raha hu to Shivraj replied to him

Ji chief..kisine bhi us dost ko dekha nahi hai.. jiske passs 12 saal ki wo bacchii soupi gayi thi.. even apne chotti bacchii ka itsa tras se kisi ko soupna kind of weird..

Exactly.. ye Khajan Singh plan kya kar raha tha.. itane saalo se usne apne bacchii ko apne aap se dur rakha.. aur fir achanak.. uski mout ke kuch din pehle wo use milne gaya tha' kuch to batya hoga usne apni beti ko.. puri baat nahi batayi hogi kyuki wo apni beti ko khatre mai nahi dalna cahhta tha.. par kuch to bataya hoga jo password ke bare mai'

Jee chief wo lakdi aakhar shaqs thi shayd jo khajan singh ko mili...jaha par body ki lash mili wahi se dur.. kisi kai pairo ki nishan paye gaye they'sandals ke they to ladki hi hogi'sugna sehgal speak in between

All right..par Chief.. wo apne beti ko kharte mai dalna nahi chahta aapne socha kaise.. Miss Khurana asked confused

Well Miss Khurana wo shurvaat se hi apni beti ko apni jindagi se dur rakh raha tha.. usne apne beti ko apne pass nahi rakha.. matlab use pata tha.. ki uski zindagi mein kuch bhi simple ya normal nahi hai.. uski beti.. ko lekar koi uske kaam ko na bigade.. aur uski beti us main a fase.. iske liye usne apne beti ko shuru se hi apne aap se dur kiya tha.. ya fir shayd use pata ho..shayad apne future plan ke bare mai bahot hi aware tha wo..

Right. Chief... Sehgal said in understanding.

Sehagal.. I am going to myself visit the place woh ghar jaha par wo kabhi reh rahi thi..

Sehgal.. us din Bodyguard jo appointment kiya hai uski file dena muje..tumne muje uski koi information nahi di

Ji chief.. jaise aap chahte they ki koi hamare circle ka na ho.. isliye maine use dharravi se uthaya hai infact' wo to padhna likhna bhi nahi janta

What.. Shivraj get up from his seat.. Refusing to see even file in the handles of Sehgal.. he move towards door

Sehgal asked him confused kya hua Chief.

Shivraaj give him answer without even glancing towards him and replied..

Jo bodyguard ghar par hai.. use padhna likhna dono aata hai sehgal.. and he left immediately' leaving stunned all behind..

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Vishal is rejoicing in happiness that..he actually find out weakness of Shivraaj Shekhar.. Anandi.. isn't that girl is his weakness.. good.. he congregate himself .. to much shocked for Shivraaj Shekhar' its his luck that he find out that.. bodyguard Of Shivraaj and he replace him with his man.. he remember he was pleasantly surprise when he find out.. that form Dharavi.. someone going to be used for Shivraaj work..by Shivraaj.. the stupid bodyguard appointed by Shivraaj.. revealed it.. with his constant chatting.. about it.. which he got to know about all plan. Otherwise its hard to track Shivraaj.. but he managed to track his man at least.. now he can used that girl against Shivraaj and made him dance on his tune..

He received SMS of his work done' and then evil smile spread on his face..

Anandi fell stunned when she realize that she is being kidnapped by someone.. they bring her some unknown place...but what shocking is her Bodyguard is the one kidnapped her.. who dare to cheat Shivraaj she pray to god to let shiv get to know about this kidnapping..

she fail to understand.. how anyone able to track her.. how shiv betrayed by someone.. as much she know shiv is always alert things about her.. still she don't get it.. but she know to how to face situation..

"welcome in my devil Den" Vishal declared' suddenly which made anandi broke her thoughts chain

Anandi paid no attention on his.. as if he held not importance

He continue again..

"Anandi is that your name right.. are you scare of me.." Vishal asked with mock attitude of his

"darnewali aise koi khaas baat nahi hai tumme.. dar shuru kaise hota hai'ye tumhe acchi tarah se pata chal jayega.. thodi hi der mai'"" jab Shivraaj yaha par dakhil hoga' tab pata chalega' di scare ona kise kehte hai' you will get meaning too.."

Vishal stand stunned on this but then his face show furry only about this

He roar in anger

"how dare you' tumhe kya lagta hai.. kaha aayi ho tum' dar..dar ka aisa nach dikhavunga tumhe.. ki khud se bhi darne lagogi tum.. ye mat bhulgo ki tum meri girfat mai.. tumhari us premi ke baho mai nahi.." " ye sher ki gufa hai jaha aane ki permission bhi nahi hai aurr nahi hi jane ke' jo bhi aata jata hai meri marji se.."

He complete with arrogance

He cant believe the girl guts..even in this situation.. she doesn't show any fear..

Anandi give him look of pure disgust..

"sher ki gufa' jaha par ek sher ki rakhwali kuch kutte karte hai.. aur unke dam par wo. Uchalne lagta hai.. inta to circus ka sher bhi nahi uchalata jitna tum uchal rahe ho.." " thoda kam karo uchala future mai kaam aayega.."

Anandi reply him in mocking tone.

.. he cant believe.. na to woh Shivraaj meri respect karta hai aur na hi ye ladki.. lagta hai insult ki special training dekhar behja hai usne' taki wo accche se meri insult kar sake

Vishal thought himself.. This increase his furry further he got up and slapped her on face..and throw her on floor..and shouted on her

Maine tumhe yaha par meri insult karne ke liye invitation nahi diya hai

Anandi immediate fell faint after this..

And turn towards his man.. and asked them to lock her up.. so he don't need to face her again.. otherwise.. he may be force her to killed.. he need her to used against Shivraaj.. so only for that reason he need to her to keep alive..

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Shivraaj find out that who is behind all this mess.. his informer find out that.. the man kidnapped Anandi was working for Vishal Thakkar..its no rocket science to find to difficult why Vishal is behind all this.. but Shivraaj will make sure he will paid for this'

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Vishal asked his man to contact Shivraaj'

Bechara dudhn dundh kar thak gaya hoga na ab tak.. ab to raat hote aayi hai' uski mehbuba ke mare mai jannake liye bahot utvala ho raha hoga wo

Ha kyun nahi.. his man reply to him.

Is Mumbai ka Don kehte hai muje don' itne aasani se koi meri khilaf kuch nahi kar sakta.. Shivraaj ne meri bhai ko marker.. mere khilaf khade rehne ki himmat dikhayi.. uski kimat use chukani hi hogi' muje meri bhai se aitraaj nahi hai.. par uski mere samne khade hone se hai..

He declared

Jao bato do use'

Ji ..his man said and left..

Shivraaj enter in his place in his building.. where Vishal keep Anandi' he change his location this time because last time Shivraaj easily enter in his place.. so he set this time different set up and security system.. '.. its time to some entertainment.. Shivraaj thought himself.. and pull gun form his pocket. '. and put silencer on it..He already shoot two man on gate' destroyed security system o n gate.. which used to make alert to so called don for anyone arrival..he saw his other armed man with standing there.. he goes behind this put hand on his mouth drag him out.. he throw him another corner.. and enter through second gate.. and destroyed CCTV camera there.. with green on his face. The second one still there.. who look confuse about' where is the first one gone.. and gone to find out him.. he drag him and kick him too.. who fell flat on his face.. and faint on the spot..

He gone to second floor.. shoot the bunch of people there' he even destroyed the room of set up of CCTV camera.. room.. and other security system of third floor.. he wondered.. if Anandi is hurt.. but he have to reach to her fast' he reach toward the third floor till then he heard Vishal voice telling his man to inform him' which made brought smile on shiv face .so he think I have no idea about him and his whereabouts.. no wonder.. even after kidnapping her.. the fool still going in around without doing anything.. he is overconfident that no one find out about him..

Suddenly Vishal man approach him.. and inform his about that security system is shut down.. plus.. there is no one on second floor and and down too.. security is not on door.. CCTV camera is not working.. shut down completely' vishal freak out listening this.. the other one come running and inform that he found all his man..in store room of second floor' bleeding dangerously and someone found dead too.. Vishal wonder how can anyone enter in his place and that too in short time.. suddenly he saw a man land on his feet near by' he watch him closely and realized that he is the one who kidnapped Anandi on his orders.. before he could do something Shivraaj enter.. .the rest run towards him to kill him.. but Shivraj is to quick on his action' he pull his gun towards and shoot some one them.. those who run towards him.. he pick one of the man and throw on them..without wasting time.. he used his machine gun to finishing others too' some bleeding and some dead fail on floor.. Vishal standing there looking shocked stunned scare.. with open mouth..

Shivraj pull out chair and sit front of him.. Crossing his leg. Look at him with cold stare

"wo ..wo.. its mistake.. galati ho gayi jo maine use kidnapped kiya': he stammer.. looking dead scare

He don't know how he managed to stand on his two leg..

" to kya sochte ho tum.. kya ho tum.. kya kehte hai log tumhe' Don' right..?"Shivraaj asked his disapprovingly..

"well.. jise khud ko bachane ke liye ek aurat ka sahara lena pade aur jise gali ka kutta bhi thokar maar jaye.. wo don nahi sadakchap hote hai.." "tum bhi unhi sadakchap ki paidaish ho.."

Vishal nodded with confuse expression and suddenly something struck to him he look and Shivraaj shocked'and asked..

"ye tumhe kaise.. before he complete.. Shivraj smile and point towards other direction.. his man his right hand the one whom he asked to contract Shivraj.. standing there with smile on his face..

His face is telling him that he indeed work for Shivraj'

Dammed he mutter angrily to himself ..

Vishal is still don't understand how can he forget that.. Shivraj is way to smart.. the easily he enter.. he kidnapped his girlfriend afternoon and he come to rescue for her in evening.. and in matter of face he succeed too..

Shivraj notice that man bring Anandi with him too.. he take quick step towards her.. and take her in his arms.. he notice that she faint and there bruise on her face. Mark uoof slap on her face.. which is visible.. he give cold look to Vishal.. and angrily pick his gun to killed him.. for hurting Anandi

Stop Shivraj.. someone said form behind..

Shivraj stop and look behind find Heth Singh standing there..

Vishal immediately feel relief.. and before he began to speak

Het singh come forward and slap vishal..

"bewakoof.. dekh liya kis tarike se kaam karna sikha hai tumhe..ye shivraaj mera admi hai.. aur tu kitna nalayaka ye bhi dekh liya hai maine.." "ek ladki ko kidnapped karke.. us par hath uthaya tumhen' "

Shivraj he turn towards him.. maaf kar do is.. hame iski jarruat hai.. tum is lakdi ko lekar javo.. aur apne hisab se apna kaam karo.. us lakdi ko duno.. ye tumhari kaam mai dakhal nahi dega ab..

Shivraj asked his right ha' and..to take Anandi to his car and wait there..

he look towards Heth Singh

"isne galti ki hai to saja to milne hi chahiye.. boss." After all this is you taught me.. right.. he asked mockingly..

Offocourse.. Heth Singh reply hurriedly.. bilkul bus jaan se mat marna.. he it too important for me. meri deal yahi karta hai.

Sure.. Shivraj said.. and held his hand..

"ise haat se tumne mara na.. bina hath ke kisko ko slap karna mushily hi nahi nammukin bhi hai. And with smirk..he look at Vishal

Who obvious reason is shocked and scare..

"Waise mai ye karunga kaise yahi socha jar aha hai na' well let me tell you.. i am assassin.. I know some Technics.. do you ever heard about Varma Kalai.. the marital arts form south..well using it spot of your arm.. I can make it totally useless for you.. and I am going to do that now.. ye Technics pehle mahadev ne.. are ha bhole shiv ne apne bete aur devtaoke senapati murgan ko sikhayi thi..aisa its Technics ki history mai kaha jata hai.. as if this is important to listen him.. observing scare look of his face and continue again..is Todu Varnam kehte hai using touch method only hitting the vital spot on your right arm.. will be useless for you..

The fear is evidence on his face.. but he can believe on his that he know some Technic of like this of some form of marital arts

Before he pounded over the thought. Shivraj make him believe , hitting the vital spot on his right harm making him handicap forever.. because he hate when people doesn't believe him.. after all whoever going to work for him need to trust him and his talks too.. so he make sure.. they believe on him too..

"he smirk and said tumhare pass ab hath to hoga par uska istamaal nahi hoga.." and left leaving aghast Heth Singh behind.. who look like that he just seen the ghost..

While returning to house.. Shivraj look beside on seat on his car where Anandi is still faint. For the the first time in his life emotion scare him lot today.. he just make someone handicap just because he slap her.. how come his emotion turn like this for her.. he don't know.. and he wondered the girl is changing him.. but it good or worst only time will able to tell him..

to be continue...

Edited by Don_theEvil - 12 years ago

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