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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: Lahari.

Thank you!

Love your profile pic. Reminds me of bygone days. The flower is called Nitya Malli in the south.

yes I have them in my house in US

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: Onir
*Phew* Finally done it's all out now. 😊

WARNING: please ignore the length & all the illogical assumptions & hopeless rants again & again that I have done in all the above posts... it was just a needed channel for me to express. Feel free to leave it out... as not that important.

You have left me speechless with your zeal for Prithvi and your eye for detail is amazing - it gives me the satisfaction that all the nuances I plan for a scene doesn't go unnoticed. I felt it strongly when I read the below part...

The sarcastic & biting approach both the ladies had towards each other throughout stemmed from somewhere deep that it's due to the lacking they feel on having lost onto sharing what the other one is having with the common link among these two ladies that being - Prithvi

THANK YOU for the time you took to write me your thoughts. I'm flattered and of course, glad to see someone who shares the same level of passion for the characters.

As I already mentioned, Prithvi and Mitra's relationship framework is essential to understand how Anandi and Shiv will operate. So, I can't wait to see how the other couple will appeal to you.

Never say comments are not important. Its all the boost to everyone who writes, just as acknowledgement is to readers.

-H

Edited by Lahari. - 12 years ago

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: had2bu
How easy do you make it to get lost in your words...

The story within the story...

The bait to lure P out made me laugh...

writers block ... not on this thread

Thanks for updating.

Ha! It made my day that I could make someone laugh. Its a tough task.

Now there is another story coming in the next update. The one Prithvi wants to tell...

Thank you for reading.

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Precap:

I gasped even as he continued, "From the door, I saw her sleeping on my bed, wearing my plaid shirt over her night clothes," he turned closing the book and the pleased confession brought a smile to his face.

"And I scratched myself," he ended, forever changing what the three words would come to mean for me.

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

... 😊

She was entrapped in an Anthapura (worldly sense) by Him, but now she knows She is His own Anthapura. 👏
... Now his secret was hers too... 👏

These summarized it all.

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Precap : Interesting... & curious to know. 😊
I liked how you gave the time to feel the whole Rashomon effect by revealing it in the next. The culmination and impact of it came out well in the following update helping one to keep a hold.
I guess the next is in relation to the coming series of Rashomon... For now mostly 2. 😉

It's going to be His perspective that Aanandi will come to be aware and part of after having had with her Shiv and Mitra's perspectives (though in parts to the whole and actual complete one ). This Rashomon might help her in putting together the whole puzzle... Also for your readers it culminating into being aware of all 4 perspectives though (it being her narrative ) completing the Rashomon effect you want to present to us . 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: Onir
His perspective...

You capitalized references to him? 😆

It's definitely Rashomon effect. But, its only 1 so far, not two...😉

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: Lahari.

You capitalized references to him?😆 It's definitely Rashomon effect. But, its only 1 so far, not two...😉

Ab nahin toh Abhi toh. 2 will come sometime . 😉

I will always capitalize on everything any information concerning Him. 😳

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hamini_yash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#509

beautiful. She made him laugh , that was kinda relief, but still , what is Mitra's status?

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libsrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#510

Do you know what...just try to write some story and start a career in book writing because you are an amazing writer with great vocabulary and command over your language...plz think on what i said...u can really make it to the top...👏

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