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Posted: 12 years ago
I really enjoyed reading it.Eagerly waiting for your update .👏
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Im missing the updates. *hint hint*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!! Just read your update! It is superb! Why did you stop though, I could have easily read another 12 pages of this!! Please update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww wowww wowww and wowww...Incredible job dear...
I read all the 6 chapters at a go and i am wondering wat made u stop writing this further...U stopped at a point where u should not have stoppped at alll...I am realllyyy loving this...
Update faster dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ananhita

Wow!! Just read your update! It is superb! Why did you stop though, I could have easily read another 12 pages of this!! Please update soon!!



Thank you so much!😳 I'm working on an update right now for the next hour. it will be up in 59 minutes.

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Im missing the updates. *hint hint*



Coming you way!😛

Originally posted by: Drya

I really enjoyed reading it.Eagerly waiting for your update .👏



Thankyou so much!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago


Updating tonight!

Originally posted by: Kurup

Wowww wowww wowww and wowww...Incredible job dear...

I read all the 6 chapters at a go and i am wondering wat made u stop writing this further...U stopped at a point where u should not have stoppped at alll...I am realllyyy loving this...
Update faster dear...



Wow thank you so much! those words are too kind! I recently have a hairline fracture on my arm so I havent been able to type well and fast so I havent had the chance to update! but im trying to do a small update tonight!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys – sorry for the long time between updates. I have a hairline fracture on my right wrist and it is harder to type. Usually I make my updates around six or twelve pages on a word document – but because of this injury I'll barely be able to make around 4 – 5 pages. I'm sorry but recently I had a change of cast that let me use my fingers so I have been only allowed to type/use my right hand for the last few days.

How about I make a deal with all my readers? I'll try to update at least twice a week but they'll have to be short updates? Deal? Let me know what you guys think!

Recap: AnSh's first kiss, need I say more??

Sunrise broke in the Circuit house as there was a new found stillness in the air of Anandi and Shiv's home. There lay few candles burned out with wax dripping on the floor. The canopy curtains of the bed floating in the still air. In the old bed lay a couple intertwined in their bodies. The first few rays of the sun touched a woman's face. Pale as the moon, her face stood out against the dark locks of her hair. She was at peace. Curled towards the right side of the bed she had her palm of her right hand on the chest of a man. Her left hand was cupping his cheek as they were both facing one another.

He lay on his side facing the woman. His hair gently messed as if someone had repeatedly run their fingers through it. One of his hands was gently placed across the woman's waist – not commanding – but in an endearing fashion that claimed that she indeed belonged to him. His other hand was under his own chest, near the woman's hand, as if they had been holding hands once upon a time but had let go when sleep consumed the couple.

The sun quickly shied behind the clouds, as if embarrassed on the intrusion of a moment in time shared between this couple. When it reappeared from the cloud it hid behind, the ray of light hit Anandi's face. She wrinkled her eyebrows and opened her eyes groggily.

She heard a creak in the distance of the room

She saw his face immediately. A smile reaped her full lips. His dark hair was tussled and she realized why: images flashed through her mind how he hand laid on top of her the night before, kissing her, as she ran her hands through his hair. She saw that her lipstick had left marks all over his face. Her kruta was wrinkled up and piled up around her waist, which was partially bare. She gently lifted his harm from her waist and tried to get up from the bed when…

BANG!

An ear shattering crack was heard throughout the room…

The legs of the old bed had given away! The circle canopy bed collapsed in half. It was as if someone had cleanly snapped it into two. This made A, who was half crawling to get of the bed, roll down towards the middle. Shiv slid down and landed on something soft towards center of the bed.

He opened his eyes still half groggy in confusion as to what happened. He tried to get up and ended in vain as the bed shook a little more. He heard a soft "Oh!" from underneath him. He saw his wife under his weight her arms against his chest and her eyes tightly shut.

He soon forgot where he was and how he had gotten there as he was too busy just gazing into her beauty. Her hair was wild and everywhere. The v neck kurta exposed a cleavage which one day he hoped he wouldn't have to avert his gaze from. Her eyeliner was smudged as well her lipstick. He blushed as he realized that it was probably because of him that she was wearing smudged makeup.

A opened her eyes to look into her husband's eyes. She quickly lowered her gaze and assessed the situation. She realized that they were in a compromising position and that the old bed of the CH had finally collapsed due to wear. She looked back into her husband's confused face and smiled.

She looked half annoyed and half amused.

A: its official you are going on a diet.

S: What?!

A: Well look at you. You probably weigh as much as a small baby elephant. You have managed to break around four couches and now this bed. It's probably the halwa and the mangoes. No more sweet stuff for you.

She joked and poked at his belly from under him.

S: Oh yeah? You aren't so light yourself Ms. Shekhar. Before you came along I used to sleep in this bed peacefully. But look here – after sharing it with you for only a month, it collapsed! It can handle my weight. It's you weight the poor bed couldn't take.

A: OH SO NOW IM FAT?!

S: Absolutely. I should know. I have to keep carrying you here and there. All the injuries, the clumsy falling, I feel less like your husband and more like your coolie. (guy at train stations that carries people's luggage)

A: YET IM THE ONE SQUISHED UNDERNEATH YOU?! Get off me ghadha.

S's jaw dropped.

S: Since when is it appropriate to call your husband such names?

A: Since my husband called me fat.

S: Arre meri pyaari gudiya – wait till I tell DDsa what you call your husband.

A: Yeah right after I tell DDsa what you did last nig…

She stopped mid-sentence. Memories of their first kiss came flooding back to her. She looked down shyly. Flashes of images flashed through her and Shiv's minds…

A recalled Shiv intertwining their hands as he was on top of her, kissing her. He moved their intertwined hands onto the neighboring pillow as he proceeded to pin her down using the excuse of gently holding her hand.

Shiv recalled her other palm on his chest, slowly clenching into a fist tugging on his shirt. He broke their kiss to take his other hand to brush her hair out of her face and scoop the back of her head more fiercely towards his, ravishing her with his lips.

He smiled at these memories and came back to the present…

"Okay," A mumbled shyly. "Get off me."

S: No

A: Why

I like it here

Were in a broken bed

So?

Shiv began to descend on her slowly, his face creeping towards her slowly by slowly.

A: So we should get up before we get hurt

S: We wont get hurt

A: How do you know

S: I don't know

A: You are squishing me

He was so close to her….she could count his eyelashes.

S: No im not

A: Yes you are

S: Im holding my weight up Anandi…

A: I have to make tea

S: I decided Sunday is a no tea day

A: Brea..

Shiv shut her up with yet another kiss. The couple was lost in the simplicity of this touch. His lips lightly pressed against hers. Their breaths held, their hearts paused, her bodies frozen – the kiss was more than a physical proximity. It was a reassurance of the previous night's events both words and actions – a conformation of their love for each other.

They broke apart. Shiv grimmanced.

S: Okay – my back is going to break soon, I have to get off now.

A: Finally…

A smiled as her husband made efforts to get off the collapsed bed.

He attempted to first push off her – but that only resulted in the bed giving a threatening jerk. Looking at his wife's worried face, he tried other methods.

Rolling to one side only made the bed wobble. Sitting up threatened the collapse of the canopy's pillars on the couple. A looked really worried.

A: How are we going to get out of here.

S: You act like this is the worst position in the world to be stuck in…

A: Well no – but it is the most compromising.

S bent down, releasing all his weight on his wife. He propped himself up with his elbow. And whispered with almost a growl, "I have a few thoughts on how to make it even more compromising."

A bit her lower lip and looked down.

The scene was quite a spectacle, something out of a romance novel. Shiv was propping himself up with an elbow, looking down at A lustfully with a mischievous smile on his lips. A looked down shyly and almost coyly biting her lower lip in a half embarrassed, half seductive way – daring him to take the plunge towards…

"SNAP!"

The couple looked across the room to see that their intimate moment had been captured by a man with a camera…

The color drained from both of their faces as chills rose up their spines. Shiv and Anandi had never been more scared.

Please let me know what you think! Hitting like or leaving a comment may only take a few moments from you guys but it means the world to me. Really encourages me to keep writing knowing that I have people that like my stories! Please Please leave your comments/suggestions for improvement!

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Posted: 12 years ago
😳Whoa what a nice lovely and funny yet romantic update 👏😳
I was laughing blushing and loving the update while reading ⭐️
Thanx for this beautifull update and plz update soon 😳 bcoz eagerly waiting for more and more romantic stuffs 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tistaa


😳Whoa what a nice lovely and funny yet romantic update 👏😳

I was laughing blushing and loving the update while reading ⭐️
Thanx for this beautifull update and plz update soon 😳bcoz eagerly waiting for more and more romantic stuffs 😳



Thank you you are too kind
I didn't even know what I was going to write about until I saw my self writing that the bed broke! Ill try to update on Wednesday!
Thank you and keep the suggestions coming!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 2arna



Thank you you are too kind
I didn't even know what I was going to write about until I saw my self writing that the bed broke! Ill try to update on Wednesday!
Thank you and keep the suggestions coming!

Ok then I am waiting for wednesday eagerly Embarrassed

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