Untitled SS on AnSh- Part 2 (updt 12th Nov - Pg 5) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rehana, sorry for the late comment... Well, this update was again amazing. The entry of Sheetal and Pratham were indeed soothing and much needed after the highly emotional update. The way you described Pratham and his thoughts about everyone was really cute. Shiv's nervousness with kids were so sweet.

Now to my fav part, Shiv's emotions, his fear of seeing Anandi in pain were so beautifully depicted. The part when he wanted to kiss away her pain, it was so natural, like how we always want absorb all the pain from the one that we love. How he joined in her silence and understood that she never needed sympathy. Finally the little angel invaded Anandi's silence; bringing her back to her world was simply awesome. Not only little Pratham brought back Anandi's smile but he also brought out the motherly instinct in her.

Loved the update to the core and now I can't wait for the next part.

Luv,
Revathi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rev4eva

Rehana, sorry for the late comment... Well, this update was again amazing. The entry of Sheetal and Pratham were indeed soothing and much needed after the highly emotional update. The way you described Pratham and his thoughts about everyone was really cute. Shiv's nervousness with kids were so sweet.

Now to my fav part, Shiv's emotions, his fear of seeing Anandi in pain were so beautifully depicted. The part when he wanted to kiss away her pain, it was so natural, like how we always want absorb all the pain from the one that we love. How he joined in her silence and understood that she never needed sympathy. Finally the little angel invaded Anandi's silence; bringing her back to her world was simply awesome. Not only little Pratham brought back Anandi's smile but he also brought out the motherly instinct in her.

Loved the update to the core and now I can't wait for the next part.

Luv,
Revathi


Thank you Reva di 🤗... u do know it means a lot to me when comes from u & melli di 😃...glad you liked it ... the next (last) part will take a while max 2 weeks... lets see how my brain works ...

luv ya
Rehana
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
really loved your story.do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: rsk16

really loved your story.do update soon


wow... new reader?😲... thanks hon 🤗... have one more chapter left which will take abt 2 weeks from now😊...

luv
rehaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
superb update..luvd it to the core...!!! waiting fr more to cum...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome SS
but plz give it a good title
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tv_princess

superb update..luvd it to the core...!!! waiting fr more to cum...


thanks hon 🤗...glad u liked it ...😃

Originally posted by: sophie_ansh

awesome SS
but plz give it a good title


thanks dear🤗 ... hmm, now that is a tough task 🤔... 😆... will try to think of something as intense as them 😉

luv
rehana

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