Untitled SS on AnSh- Part 2 (updt 12th Nov - Pg 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Rehana,

Do I need to tell you how much I enjoy your work? 👏
No words to describe how I loved the way you portrayed every character and their emotions so flawlessly that I could literally imagine the scenes. The intensity of the emotions, pain and anger were just perfect. You brought out the animal in Jagya, his hatred and revenge so well. Anandi's pain & Shiv's turmoil actually moved me to tears. Like said by Melli, this is exactly the CM I want in the serial. Someone who truly cares and understands Shiv and will extend the same to Anandi once she is convince that Anandi loves Shiv as much as she does.

Do continue to mesmerize us with your wonderful works of Ansh...

Love,
Revathi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its Awsome dear👏

But you've left d story wit a heart broken Anandi, please continue this one. Atleast write AnSh meeting after this, and how he consoles her. U write superbly😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: roberoi

Nice one Rehana...good u post it before today's epi and frankly I really wanted Shiv to beat J black and blue... If wishes were horses 😉


thanks hon 🤗... Shiv is a different character dear... of course, he would have done that to J but he was too shocked to even realize the existence of that creep, as his only concern at that very moment was Anandi... 😊

Originally posted by: Kurup

Truly truly amazing. I think u can continue this further...U can make this an SS... The style of ur writing is very nice...the way u penned ur thoughts were beautiful...Plz do continue this great work


thanks for your kind words dear 🤗... errm... now here is a problem... I can't promise but will definitely give it a try if I manage to steal some time from my schedule... 😊

Originally posted by: nniks

Its very nice bas get jagya beaten black n blue..man ko shanti milegi 😊


thanks love 🤗... can't say if S will do that ... but lets see what I can do abt it... 😊...

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Its so well written👏👏👏 Why don't you try and continue it further...some more episodes on how choti ma helps Anandi deal with her trauma, how her new in-laws stand by her at such a time..and of course, how sumi & bhairon support her


awww... thanks for the appreciation dear 🤗... can't promise but will try... 😊

Originally posted by: umam

Hope chotima in the epi turns out as understanding and supportive as in your os


tell me abt it yaar... don't want to see negativity... they're already hanging a sword in the name of Sanchi over our head... adding chhoti maa in that list would be the last thing I want to see 🥱...neway thanks for dropping by 😊

Originally posted by: VerboseG

Please, please write about A and S meeting after this episode...


thanks hon 🤗... will try but hey, can't promise 😊

Originally posted by: tistaa

Really trust me I really desired exactly this track in the serial but Cvs had other plan so they didn't show this track but seriouly if Cvs used this track then that would be very great for them.Well your OS is just fabulous...very very very nicely written and plz keep writting👏


awww, you want the same track? ... that was so sweet hon... 🤗

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rehana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome os, plz continue this


thanks dear 🤗... lets see 😉

Originally posted by: SiriuslySujal

That was awesome - something different! Intense and yet subtle. Liked the inclusion of Chhoti Maa and her reservations and reaction. You should continue! 😃


thanks for liking it 🤗... lets see if I can do it 😃

Originally posted by: melliflous

Rehana 🤗

Splendid job! Such an emotional OS. My heart broke into pieces for anandi. Her fear, her disbelief on how much the person she had loved for years could stoop to crush her inner self, her trauma.. Everything was just so perfectly written.. Highly emotional content. And further shiv's emotions , conflict with himself, helplessness , guilt .. Everything was just outstanding. I loved how you wrote about choti ma ... It indeed gives us insight of why shiv feels so close to her... She was a choti ma of our dreams... Very motherly... Could absorb child's all the pain in herself to get a smile of his face.
Please continue the OS... Would love to read how would you write AnSh's meeting after this.
I don't have to tell you that I loved it..do I ? Ok... I LOVED IT...
Super duper fantastic OS

Looking forward to the next part


diii 🤗... I LOWEEE YOU 🤗... you guys knew I will be stuck with all these wonderful ppl's wish list of continuing it further... that's why asked me to post it here, no? *takes a belan and runs after melli & reva di*... but hey... will admit that it's indeed an wonderful feeling to be appreciated ... it looks like been ages that I tried some SS ... my last SS was on Anmol & Ragini from Bidaai... then I left it right on their consummation part... people are still hunting for me with a machine gun to make me finish that off 😆... neway, I don't want to leave it in the mid way... so, will try to get things done in 2 or 3 epis? ... but the prob is I don't know when I'll be able to write the next part... ...

Thanks for the encouragement and loving my work... it really means a lot to me 🤗

Originally posted by: rev4eva

Hey Rehana,

Do I need to tell you how much I enjoy your work? 👏
No words to describe how I loved the way you portrayed every character and their emotions so flawlessly that I could literally imagine the scenes. The intensity of the emotions, pain and anger were just perfect. You brought out the animal in Jagya, his hatred and revenge so well. Anandi's pain & Shiv's turmoil actually moved me to tears. Like said by Melli, this is exactly the CM I want in the serial. Someone who truly cares and understands Shiv and will extend the same to Anandi once she is convince that Anandi loves Shiv as much as she does.

Do continue to mesmerize us with your wonderful works of Ansh...

Love,
Revathi


I LOWEEE YOU TOOO diii🤗... thanks a lot for the kind words di, it really means a lot to me 😃...I also want to see this CM... lets see how CVs surprise/shock us ... as I mentioned before, will see if I can manage time because my head tends to spin thousand times when I sit to write a scene... sometimes I feel like I failed to justify my imagination with the dictions... ... neway will go catch up with today's epi & see ya on FB 😛... once again love you for loving my work 🤗

Originally posted by: vasanthimrao

Its Awsome dear👏

But you've left d story wit a heart broken Anandi, please continue this one. Atleast write AnSh meeting after this, and how he consoles her. U write superbly😊


awww thanks hon 🤗... lets see how long it takes me to get to the next part 😉

luv
Rehana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rehana86


diii 🤗... I LOWEEE YOU 🤗... you guys knew I will be stuck with all these wonderful ppl's wish list of continuing it further... that's why asked me to post it here, no? *takes a belan and runs after melli & reva di*... but hey... will admit that it's indeed an wonderful feeling to be appreciated ... it looks like been ages that I tried some SS ... my last SS was on Anmol & Ragini from Bidaai... then I left it right on their consummation part... people are still hunting for me with a machine gun to make me finish that off 😆... neway, I don't want to leave it in the mid way... so, will try to get things done in 2 or 3 epis? ... but the prob is I don't know when I'll be able to write the next part... ...

Thanks for the encouragement and loving my work... it really means a lot to me 🤗


I LOWEEE YOU TOOO diii🤗... thanks a lot for the kind words di, it really means a lot to me 😃...I also want to see this CM... lets see how CVs surprise/shock us ... as I mentioned before, will see if I can manage time because my head tends to spin thousand times when I sit to write a scene... sometimes I feel like I failed to justify my imagination with the dictions... ... neway will go catch up with today's epi & see ya on FB 😛... once again love you for loving my work 🤗


Well needed additional persuasion power to get you to write more, of course it is also part of my greed as well... Like I said before, you did perfect justice to all characters. Take your time to think about it and write, I m sure you can... Runs away with Melli to escape from you... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rev4eva


Well needed additional persuasion power to get you to write more, of course it is also part of my greed as well... Like I said before, you did perfect justice to all characters. Take your time to think about it and write, I m sure you can... Runs away with Melli to escape from you... 😉


Thanks for having belief in me 🤗... love ya 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣 thanks revathi for taking me away from rehana ..
Rehana, u really need an extra push to write...
See would we like if AnSh din meet n talk after today's epi on whatever happened.. No, right? Similar is the situation in the OS.. AnSh need to meet.. They need to talk.. Shivs assistance, reassurance is need to anandi.. She is the wounded soul... Either he does it directly or indirectly.. Depends on ur perception .. But we demand a continuation
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: melliflous

🤣 thanks revathi for taking me away from rehana ..
Rehana, u really need an extra push to write...
See would we like if AnSh din meet n talk after today's epi on whatever happened.. No, right? Similar is the situation in the OS.. AnSh need to meet.. They need to talk.. Shivs assistance, reassurance is need to anandi.. She is the wounded soul... Either he does it directly or indirectly.. Depends on ur perception .. But we demand a continuation


since I'm sooper happy with today's epi, I'll let you two escape 😊... yeah I got it madam... lets see where my imagination leads me ... 😊

luv
rehana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It took me to a whole new world dear!! Awesome writing 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SujaK

It took me to a whole new world dear!! Awesome writing 👏


really? 😲...well, glad that I was able to do that... thanks hon 🤗

luv
rehana

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