AnSh FF: Anandi & the whiskey (part 2 on pg 4)

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roberoi

@roberoi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Main to talli ho gayi😳

You people are crazy...kahan kahan se ideas late ho...hats off...pls write more...I am sure we can have part 2

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Michelle Dantis

@michelle281194

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

i got this in a dream 😆 thank u all... i'll definitely try to think up a second part 😊

Edited by michelle281194 - 12 years ago

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AryaS

@AryaS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Superb dear!!!!!!!

Loved each and every line written by you. A's reaction to J. Shiv's feelings on hearing those words from Anandi...Wow...It was a bliss reading it.

CVs... are you reading? 😳

Thanks Michelle.

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Piya Sharma

@Piyuu_SRK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Ohh God !! I just died laughing 🤣 🤣 🤣

Best dialogue, ''chee...tum kyun aaye'' 🤣 🤣

Very well written ! 👏 its sooo cute ! 😳 😆 😆

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Manasi

@Manasi_16

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: michelle281194

A: (annoyed) Tum hamesha beech mein baat kyu karte ho? Hum dono ko kabhi shanti se khana bhi khane nahi dete! (she grabs Shiv's arm and places her head on his shoulder) Tum ghar jao... 😛

Anandi sticks her tongue out at Jagya. Shiv has to control his laughter.

A: Cheee... Ji mat boliye... say ANANDI... AAA-NAN-DEEE... ya phir Jaanu bhi chalega... hehehehehe 😊

S: OK Anandi. But aap bhi mujhe Shiv hi bulaiye.
A: Kyu? Jaanu nahi chalega? (then she laughs like a crazy person) OKAAAY. Sheeevooo jaanu... haaahaaa 😆

The 2 best parts of the OS...I was completely ROFL the whole time...but these 2 lines were specially hilarious😆😆😆😆😆😆

Absolutely rocking!!!!!!!!!

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

it was so so cuteee!!..loved it! 👍🏼 ⭐️ 😊

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vasanthi.m

@vasanthimrao

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Cho Chweeet😛 I'm laughing like a mad😆😆

You have brought a cute cute bubly Anandi and she looks so sweet😳

"Chee Tum kyun Aye" and tung sticking to Jagya just hilarious yar🤣🤣

Waiting for d next part😊

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Michelle Dantis

@michelle281194

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: vasanthimrao
Cho Chweeet😛 I'm laughing like a mad😆😆

You have brought a cute cute bubly Anandi and she looks so sweet😳

"Chee Tum kyun Aye" and tung sticking to Jagya just hilarious yar🤣🤣

Waiting for d next part😊

i'll try. i dont really have anything in mind. 😊