A Sat'Day Evening - A small OS on AnSh.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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My story is on a day in the AnSh universe, filled with bright light and devoid of the Black holes such as

JagguBhai MBBS , the eternal pendulum'.who is at the moment oscillating between his worlds of Heaven ( as a doting dad ) and Hell ( as a grumpy hubby )...

CM . ...after being satisfied more or less with the nayee naveli sansar of her Laadla ...is in her Haveli...working on her Mission- Dulhan ' Nayi Naveli., for her yet another Aankhon ka Taara...Mahendra...

So., here goes a SMALL helping of my Khayali Pulao...

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Shiv stared at his wife from the entrance of the kitchen door as she chewed her lip, contemplating the recipe book, with the look of intense concentration, one that he had seen so many, many times before..

Tendrils of her hair are escaping from the loose bun she had clumsily tied at the nape of her neck, frizzy from the moisture in the air, and she is pink in the cheeks from the heat of the stove, and still, she is the most beautiful thing he'd ever seen...

She is in front of him.., She is real.., She is his.., She is Anandi.., and She is cooking him Dinner.

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It's a Sat'day evening..Anandi's school works only for half a day on Sat'days and she treasures this leisure that she gets and usually ends up cooking something special for Shiv for the Dinner.Cooking is one thing that she puts her heart and soul into., but still that comes a meagre second to the feelings she has for her precious husband ..

There was a quaint little book store that has opened in Jaitsar recently..and Anandi more or less got addicted to this store., with the small but varied collection of books they put up..

Both Anandi and Shiv., being voracious readers, immead., got attracted to this store and often end up buying from there...

These days, Anandi is into buying various cookery recipe books...knowing how much Shiv loves her cooking...His temperament and tastes are not complicated but are simple and sweet with a dash of spice...

======================================================================================================================================================= Usually, Anandi makes sure that she winds up her cooking, by the time he is home, but today Shiv's been quite early...and looking at his wife., he indeed thanked his stars for being able to catch her in the act...

Shiv knew she does all of this for him, knew that she is trying as hard as she could (and he is quite certain that she could do absolutely everything if she tried) and looking at her, his heart is ready to explode with love and adoration at this amazing woman he is able to call his wife. .

Then something broke her concentration and he wondered if maybe he'd sighed too loud, she turned to look at him, and gave him such a smile that he didn't care if he had indeed sighed loudly or not because she was smiling at him with that wonderful smile that always made his heart swell with adoration.,

"Hayee...You are home already !... Would you like to have some Tea...?" she greeted, and he smiled in return, thinking that his smile could never, ever compare to the power hers held, no one's smile could. No one's smile could fill him with as much exhilaration as hers could.

'Hey, Sweet heart...No Thanks...I've just had Tea and Snacks at the office in a meeting.." Shiv replied and walked forward...and captured her lips with his ..., still marveling at the ease with which he is able to do it now, after so many months of wanting to but being afraid of how she'd react...

When she started to respond to his kiss with as much enthusiasm..., he had to suppress the urge to sing a romantic song that flitted through his mind...

Aap ke haseen rukh pe aaj naya noor hain...

Mera dil machal gaya tho...mera kya kasoor hain...

Aap ke nigaahon ne kaha tho kuch jaroor hain...

Mera dil machal gaya tho...mera kya kasoor hain...

Khuli latoon ke chaanv me...Khila khila ye roop hain...

Ghata se jaise chaan rahee...subah subah ki dhoop hain...

Mera dil machal gaya tho...mera kya kasoor hain...

When his Mom used to listen to these soulful renditions of Talat & Rafi., he found same ridiculous and often used to scoff at her... until Anandi came into his life...Now his love for such songs is growing on him ..more n' more...

After pulling himself apart., from the long passionate kiss., He goes behind her and rests his chin on her shoulder, to see what she's cooking...It always smells nice.., but the way she smells is so much better. It's her own, unique scent and it's unbelievable. He kisses her neck and she giggles ...thoroughly amused., he kisses a sensitive and ticklish spot and grins against her neck... it only makes her giggle harder. ...

He distracts her to the point, where they are pulled apart when they smell something odd coming from the pan she'd been stirring earlier. She wasn't mad though, instead, they couldn't help but laugh even more at the situation.

Anandi is amazed that Shiv can actually distract her, even when she is most focused on her work...It's a power only he has...and he is indeed very careful with it...most of the time...

But now., Shiv has no intentions of being careful...and would like to exploit this power of his...to their own advantage...and senses that his wife is more than willing to give him that chance'They retreat to their own personal heaven...

Cooking for Anandi and Dinner for Shiv can wait...as these are nothing in comparison to what they feel for each other...

Finish...❤️❤️

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Your feedback in all forms is welcome... 😃

I apologize...that I've put a whole lot of song in between...couldn't help to resist as those lyrics fit in the situation like a hand in a glove...and for the love I have for the song...had to give it a place in my AnSh universe .Feel free to overlook same., if any of u are not up to it...😃

And also my apologies...for having taken liberty with Mahi's name...just for a rhyme...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uma - This one's beautiful! Short but sweet and romantic.Very well written and expressed.
LOVED IT!
Edited by Malika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow grt os loved it !!

And the song addition was indeed good !!
bas thoda font size bada kardo warna hamre ankhin ka kya hoga 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uma di... 🤗

I woke up just now, logged in and greeted by your beautifull OS 😳

Its Fantastic diii !! AnSh together...S kissing her ...A all giggly blushy...☺️ wow ! Your writing is so fresh and amazing 👏 👏
A treat on this thakela saturday. Loved it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this is awesome...i m blushing after reading it...please continue...ur writing is excellent
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Adi... 🤗 You have written so well. Great job !
One suggestion: Change the font color for the song to keep it separate from the scene.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Malika., Khushi, Piya., Ritzi.,@Nniks., @Bul., Dixie.,
Glad u all liked it...
Yes., indeed its short...its a ONE SHOT...😉😆
Dixie., Ritz.,...
Your points taken...have done the editing...😃
Edited by adi2512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uma, good one...

But you leave me thirsting for more 😛😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All I can say right now is awww 😳 its too good!!!!

But have a complaint yaar.. its just too short.. mera mann hi nahin bhara *pout*

Hope u write a real long one soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sou...🤗
How are u...haven't seen in the AT for last 2 days...hope u are keeping fine...
Glad u liked the SMALL OS...😳
The thing is I've just started with writing and am' not a great writer as such to think of any interesting plots...that's the reason for these one shots being bit too small...
Let's see if i can improve the length...going forward...😃

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