A Sat'Day Evening - A small OS on AnSh.

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roberoi

@roberoi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Thanks dear but saturday ke baad sunday bhi to aata hai...which means full day holiday...any thoughts? 😉

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Uma

@adi2512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: roberoi
Thanks dear but saturday ke baad sunday bhi to aata hai...which means full day holiday...any thoughts? 😉

Oh...One full day...😕😉

That's too much for a still budding writer in me...😆😆

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806047

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Absolutely Anshlicious. Beautiful OS.

CM . ...after being satisfied more or less with the nayee naveli sansar of her Laadla ...is in her Haveli...working on her Mission- Dulhan ' Nayi Naveli., for her yet another Aankhon ka Taara...Mahendra...

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roberoi

@roberoi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: adi2512

Oh...One full day...😕😉
That's too much for a still budding writer in me...😆😆

You may say sobut we have fullfaith in you...half day mein ye kammal dhaya to poore din mein kya kya dikhaogee...unka ek doosre ko uthne na dena, breakfast, bathing, picnic...ah the list continues 😃

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RainbowSun

@RainbowSun

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

very nice-

i liked the way u wrote the story- very much user friendly-nice font - easy and comfortable for the eyes to read

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vasanthi.m

@vasanthimrao

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Sweet one😳. Jus loved d way it's portreyed. Keep writing😊

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Myraa Khan

@QuagMyred

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Uma

Its amazing! Superb!!!

I love you!!!

Thanks for writing this...

You literally made my day!!!

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tistaa

@tistaa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

WOW Adi you have done a splendid job👏it's very nice and romantic😳I wish serial mein bhi aisa he ho😳

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melliflous

@melliflous

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Uma,
U know what ... This was just too adorable!! Nostalgic too... I loved it. AnSh away from tensions , away from people , in their own little world :)... Do write more OS... U write very well !! Or hv u written any AnSh os before that am unaware of?

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: melliflous
Uma,
U know what ... This was just too adorable!! Nostalgic too... I loved it. AnSh away from tensions , away from people , in their own little world :)... Do write more OS... U write very well !! Or hv u written any AnSh os before that am unaware of?

Melli.,

This is the second ever story I've written in my Life...the first being the OS I wrote last week...😆

Thanks for ur appreciation...and Glad u liked and felt nostalgic too...That warmed my heart...😳