AnSh FF- Red roses and Rain Last ch updtd pg 47

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Blukitten

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Thanks piya...😊

Imagine meri kya halat had I had to get in so many naughty thoughts while writing this 😉

I need some time to recover will update after tht 😊

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Michelle Dantis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

OMG!!!! just read it at a stretch!!!!!!!! love it 👏

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Vishakha_Sakhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Ishhh ☺️ I am blushing so hard right now you can't even imagine!! ☺️ ☺️

That was HOTT yaar! Loved it! 👏 👏

Oh God yeh CM yahaan bhi tapak gayi...haddi kahin ki!! 😡 Why'd she have to ruin the moment yaar?! Waise...how come that towel didn't come loose during the fall?!! 🤣

Continue soon, I'm dying to read more!! 😳

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Blukitten

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Well the towel might have become loose but ansh were too busy in other things tonotice ;) n besides i m writining a romantic ff not xxx rated so i would rather not focus on some areas

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Two days I was absent on India forums and this is wat I get wen i come back...

This was super duper hit...I admit that there are mnay girls though they are dusky would look absolutely mesmerizing and ravishing in black...and I am sure even Anandi looked beautiful in that...tabhi toh Shiv jeee apne haal bhool gaye aur Anandi ko lekar bed par gir gaye...Inlogon kiii pyaar kee gaadi Ajee Sjee se aage bada wahiii bahut haiii...

Loved every bit of this FF...Do update soooner plzzz...

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Blukitten

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Thank u all for lovely comments.this is my first ff and trust me its really exhausting hats off to all writers :)
i love ur comments its really encouraging ...i will come up with new chapetrs soon n i'll try making it hotter btw i hav a question for all where should i draw the boundry i mean should i keep it at cute romantic interlude or should i make them go all the way...i hope u get my meaning;)
i will decide the plot based on wat u people prefer

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melliflous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: nniks
Thank u all for lovely comments.this is my first ff and trust me its really exhausting hats off to all writers :)
i love ur comments its really encouraging ...i will come up with new chapetrs soon n i'll try making it hotter btw i hav a question for all where should i draw the boundry i mean should i keep it at cute romantic interlude or should i make them go all the way...i hope u get my meaning;)
i will decide the plot based on wat u people prefer

I dunno what others feel but since they are still engaged n not married in the FF, I would like some sweet romance n not all out stuff. May be u can preserve that for post marriage FF. but definitely, romancing would be great!!! Just my opinion.