AnSh: Friendship renewal, Part 2 updated on Page 2

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Hi all,
I have been thinking about writing something about renewing AnSh friendship for sometime now. But, somehow didn't have the courage to do it. This is going to be a very short story, just 2 parts. Hopefully everybody likes it. Love to hear both positive and negative comments.
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After the divorce everybody is back in Jeitsar including Shiv after finishing his work.
Shiv calls DS in the evening and asks 'Aap log pohanch gaye ghar ?'
DS says 'Haan. hum log abhi abhi aagaye.'
S:
'Anandi kaisi hain?'
DS: 'Abhi bhi teek nahin hain. Bohat udaas hain jo bhi kuch huva iskeliye. Itne barso se jo rishta tha uske tootne se bohat takleef hoti hai.'
Shiv nods and says 'Agar aap bura na mane toh main ek sujaav do aap ko'
DS is keenly listening as Shiv says 'Aap ko Anandi ko kuch din bahar lekar jana chahiye taki unka man inse sab se change ho sake. you know, like a vacation. I mean chutti jaise.
Bahar jayagi toh accha lagega aur shayad past ko boolen ko bhi madad karega.'

DS gets excited at the suggestion and is happy to see Shiv's concern for Anandi. 'Mein Bhairav se baat karungi iske bare mein.Tanku' she says smiling.
Shiv is able to feel DS's excitement and is smiling at her usage of English for him.

DS thinks 'Bohat accha sujav diya hai chora ne. Lekin kiske saath javagi aur kahan ? Bhairav se baat karni hogi jaldi se'. She talks to Bhairav and they both think it is an
excellent idea and decide to talk to Shyam about it.
At night, Bhairav tells DS that Shyam is more than happy to help Anandi in this difficult time and would take her out along with Suguna and kids. Shyam suggested he could take them to Shimla as he had some friend there. The weather would be cool there and they could get away from the summer heat for few days. DS is very excited about the thought of Anandi's impending trip.
In the morning, everybody is at the breakfast table and Anandi is lost in thoughts when suddenly Bhairav says 'Anandi beta, kal Shyam ka phone aaya tha aur voh keh raha tha ki voh Suguna aur bacchon ke saath Shimla ja raha hai kuch din ke liye. Aur woh chahtha hain ki tum bhi jao unke saath.'
A is very surprised and says 'Nahin bapusa.. Mein nahi jaa paa ungi. Mujhe bohat kaam hai yahan. Collector sahab bata rahe the ki school ke liye koi inspector aa rahe hain. Kal
court ki hearing ki wajse mein ja nahi paaye.'
Ds is twisting her face hearing Anandi's excuses and Anandi and Bharaiv are still talking..
B: 'kab aa rahe woh inspector'
A: 'pata nahin'
B:
'Toh Shiv se pooch lo. Tab bhi toh plan ban sakegi'
A: 'Mujhe kahi nahin jana Bapusa. Mein teek ho yahan par.Aur main akeli kyun. ?'
DS asks angrily 'Kyun nahin javegi chori ?' Shyam ko kaise mana karegi ? She then softens and says 'Chori sun.. Shyam, Suguna aur bachon ke saath kuch din ke liye bahar jaoge toh tumahara man badlega. Tumhara mann ko accha lagega. Meri baat maan aur jane ki tyaari karle. '
A tries to see what DS and B are saying and is happy at their concern. Bhariav asks her to call Shiv to ask when Mr.Rathod was going to come.
Shiv is reading the newspaper after his usual morning jog when he sees Anandi's name on his phone. He is very happy to get her call on a Sunday morning.
After exchanging pleasantries,
A:
'Collector sahab, Mr.Rathod kab aa rahe hain school ko dekhne?'
S:
'2-3 hafte ke baad' Woh abhi nahi aa sakte.
S:Pauses and asks '
Teek hai na ?
A: 'Haan. Koi baat nahin. Woh.. Mein kuch din ke liye Jeitsar se bahar jaa rahi thi. Isliye maine poocha ki phir se conflict na hojaye'
Shiv is tensed immidiately if she is going again related to divorce but does not ask anything. Immidiately, DS takes the phone from A and sends A to the kitchen to get something and tells Shiv 'Tum ne jo sujaav diya,woh Anandi ko kahi bejana kuch din ke liye.. Ussi pe hum log koshish kar rahe hai'..
Shiv is very happy hearing that the Singhs are implenting his suggestion but didn't probe into much asking where she was going as he didn't want to get too privy into Anandi's
matters since he knew Anandi would not like it. He wanted to give her time so that she could come out afresh.
As he was ending his call with DS, he gets a reminder on his phone about a flight that he has to take in 3 days. He suddenly remembers that he has to attend his sister's graduation in Shimla. He and his family had made plans months ago but he had totally forgotten about it. He had loads of work and had plenty of scheduled meetings that week. He didn't know what to do but in his heart he wanted to go and be with his family. He decides to go and starts to cancel his meetings for the days he was travelling.
In haveli, everybody has convinced Anandi to go on a vacation for few days. Anandi too agreed since she did not have any other excuse to give. Shyam calls and tells that they would leave the next day to Shimla.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice , waiting for Shimla trip and ANSH encounter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice. Plz continue soon
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Oho shimla trip🤪
Edited by preity_d - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love to reed OS but I have a problem with language barier, actualy I dont understand Hindi,only english..I belive that there is a few people at this forum with a same cind of problem. So please, if you can translate their convo on english we will be very gratefool to reed it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice Dixie ...

Hmmm ... Shimla ... what a heavenly place for some AnSh romance !

Plz continue soon !
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Very nice longing for more
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very niceer
waiting for more to come
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great
waiting for the next part
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I tried to embed a song in this. But, didn't know exactly how. So, I just put in the few lines of the song to get a feel of what I want the reader to know what Anandi is feeling...

Part 2:Anandi along with Shyam's family reached Shimla next day by afternoon. As soon as Anandi stepped out of the airport she could feel the crisp fresh air unlike the humid hot air she was so used to in Jeitsar. This cool crispness around her suddenly brought a smile on her face. She was excited seeing the green hills surrounding them, some still covered with snow. When they reached their hotel, the view from their room was superb, a view of the deep valley of Shimla, mountains all around them with a small stream flowing below the hills. When the kids saw this they wanted to go and play in the stream. Shyam didn't like it but since Anandi insited on taking the kids he relented and allowed them to go and play in the water. Anandi got into the water too and became a kid while playing with the kids. Shyam &Suguna were very happy seeing Anandi laughing and playing. It had been ages since they had seen her laugh so contently and innocently.

<Song
dil hai chhota sa chhotee see aasha
mastee bhare mann kee bholee see aasha
chaand taaro ko chhune kee aasha
aasmaan me udane kee aasha
</song>

Back in the room later in the night, Anandi was sitting by herself thinking about the day's events and was excited that next day they would be going to Manali to see snow. She was excited at the thought of touching snow. She was surprised at how she was feeling and why she was behaving so childish yet she was happy, felt very light, seemed like she was suddenly burden free and had no worries. It had been such a long time that she had thoroughly enjoyed herself. It was as if the breathtaking cool and serene environment had rejuvenated her mind and soul in just a day. She remembered the last time she had so much fun was with Jagya when they both had been to Mumbai on their honeymoon and they both had drenched in rain. Suddenly the smiles on her face vanished but she immidiately chided herself as to why she was thinking about the past as it didn't matter anymore and she had to make new memories and there was so much in life ahead of her. Smiling at this thought she went to bed.

Shiv reached Shimla 2 days later. His flight got delayed and he was running late for a pre-graduation party his family was hosting. He rented a car from the airport and was driving to the cottage where the party was held. After driving for sometime suddenly his car jerked and stopped. He went to check and there was a problem in the car. He was furious and called the rental car company but they said someone would reach there only in 2-3 hrs time and not earlier. He was so mad that he won't be able to make it on time for the party. He decided that he had to try and ask for a lift from somebody. He was standing on the road trying to hitch hike. But, had no luck. Atlast he saw a car stop by. He saw that the person whose car had stopped for him was none other than Anandi ! He was surprised seeing her. Anandi had seen Shiv trying to hitch hike and asked the driver to stop the car. She was going back to the hotel after shopping at a nearby market. Anandi was equally surprised seeing Shiv.

S: Anandiji aap yahan ?
A: Haan.. Mein mere parivar ke saath chutti par aayi hoon.. aur aap yahan ?
S: Meri sister ki graduation hai kal yahan. Isliye aaya hoon mein. Meri gadi karab hogayi hai and he filled her on in the details.
A: Koi baat nahin. Mein aapko chod dungi aapko kaha jana hai.

They asked the driver and they found that Anandi's hotel would come first and then Shiv's cottage. Shiv didn't want to trouble Anandi but she insisted and finally he agreed. The driver was going to stay with Shiv's car and get it repaired.

Shiv was driving the car and Anandi sitting in the front passenger seat. He noticed that she looked fresh, bit more relaxed and cheerful than she normally was in Jeitsar. Shiv was normal trying to make conversation with Anandi but not forceful about it as he saw that she was lost in some thoughts. Anandi was getting flashbacks of how rudely she had spoken to him after hearing that he had accepted Ds's proposal, him helping talk with Sumitra, bapusa telling that is was not Shiv's fault. She thought now calmly that she should not have shouted at him for saying yes to the proposal. She was feeling very guilty. She thought she used to be so calm earlier and don't know why she gets so angry especially with him.

She looks at him and says 'Collector sahab, woh main aapse usse din ke liye maafi chahti hoon.'
Shiv is surprised: 'Kis din ke liye ?'
A: 'aapke janamdin party ke next subah ko jo maine kaha...'
S: That's ok Anandiji. mein samajh saktha hoon ki aap bar kya bhithi hogi jab aapne Ashi se ye baat suni or apni divorce... He doesn't complete the sentence.
A: Woh, bohat gusse mein thi uss din. Lekin phir bhi mujhe aapko bolne ka mauka dena chahiye tha.Par mujhe ye samjh nahin aaya ki aapne haan kyun kaha. Meri parivar wale ki baat alag hi. Aap kyun badava de rahe the unhe ?

Shiv stares at Anandi and stops the car on the road side.

Shiv Sighs and says Anandiji, Kash aap ko ye 'kyun' samaj aatha.

There is a minute of silence as Anandi stares at Shiv.

Shiv: Aap ne uss din kaha ki mein aap par ehsaan kar raha hoon. I was very deeply hurt and I still am. Meine aapse kaha hai pehle bhi ki mujhe aapko ehsaan karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Phir bhi aap baar baar ... *Sighs* and says 'Kair, meine haan isliye kaha kyunki'... pauses and says 'Mujhe aap bohat pasand hai aur... 'pauses, takes in a deep breath, closes his eyes for a second and looks into her eyes and says 'mein aapse pyar karta hoon. Mere mann ki baat shayad Dadiji ne padli kisi tara.'

The color on Anandi's face changes as she heard Shiv's confession directly this time. She didn't expect that he would so openly tell her his feelings. She had only heard from Ashima that he loved her. At that time she didn't think anything of it.

Shiv continues, 'Ashi ne bataya ki aap samajh thi hai ki mera pyar aapko physical attraction lagta hai. Its not that. Agar physical attraction hota, toh jab meine pehli baar aapko dekha toh I should have felt something. But, no aisa nahin huva. Dheere dheere jab maine aapko jaane laga ,tabhi mere mann mein kuch feelings jage aap ke liye. Infact, ye baat mujhe Ashi ki wajese hi pata bhi chala ki mere life partner ki jo mere chah hai woh sare gun aap mein hai. Mein aapke inner strength, aapke yeh ek alag identity jo aapne banayi hai, ko bohat respect karta hoon aur shayad issise mujhe pyar bhi huva naki sirf aapki chehre ko dekh kar.' He realizes what he just commented and says 'Mera matlab ye nahin ki aap bahar se khoobsoorat nahin hain' 😊

Anandi is suddenly blushing hearing all the compliments she is getting from a man whom she now knows loves her. She was feeling kind of awkward because she is not able to reciprocate the same for Shiv. Shiv also thinks that Anandi was probably feeling embarrased but it was necessary for him to clear the air between them.

Shiv: 'Ek aur baat kahi aapne uss din, Ashi aur mere bare main. Ashi ke liye mere liye feelings ho sakthi hai but I don't love her. Meane kabhi bhi use uss nazariyan se dekha nahin hai and Ashi knows ki main usse pyar nahin karta hoon balki main apse... ' pauses and looks at her.

Shiv then says 'Aap bhiti baaton ko buladijiye. Jo bhi huva woh circumstances aisi hi thi.We can start afresh and be friends.'
Anandi does not know what to say and is still trying to grasp what all Shiv had just said.
He pauses and then extends his hand and says 'So, Friends ?' Anandi is amused and extends her hand and both of them shake hands.

They start driving back and there is silence in the car for sometime. Anandi suddenly says 'Collector ...'
Shiv interrupts her and says 'Anandiji aap please mujhe mere naam se bulaiye naki mere position se.' He sees that Anandi is uncomfortable at the suggestion and says 'hum kitni mahino se ek doosre ko jaante hain and now we are friends too.

Anandi is very hesistant and says 'Haan woh toh hai, lekin Yeh sahi nahin hoga collector...' and stops and sees Shiv glaring at her. So, he says 'teek hai. hum log aisi hi formal rahenge ek doosre ke saath aur main bhi aapko aaj se,aaj se kyun abhi se, Sarpanchji bulaunga. Then, it will be all ok.'
Anandi sees that Shiv is angry. She smiles and finally says 'Teek hai main koshish karungi ki main aapko aap ki naam se bulane ki.'

On the way back, she gets a call from home and DS is asking her where she is. Anandi tells her 'Dadisa main collec..' stops and remembers what Shiv had just told her and says 'Dadisa mein...' pauses .. 'Shiv ji ke saath hoon.. ab aur hum log hotel ki taraf drive kar rahe hai. 'Anandi tells how she met Shiv in Shimla and DS is ecstatic to hear that Anandi is calling Shiv as Shivji. She thanks her Devi maa and thinks ' Agar kisi cheez ko dil se chaaho to puri kayanat usey tumse milane ki koshish mein lag jaati hai.'😊

Shiv is super happy that she has accepted him as a friend and also called him by his name. He smiles to himself thinking that atleast Anandi is one step closer to him than before although he knows he has many more steps to climb to make her his forever.

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Edited by dixie123 - 13 years ago

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