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Posted: 13 years ago
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my god you have really analysed a in significant little scene into major twist like scene.
As ppl have posted here, this was just to show jagya's bratty nature to shiv, that's it.

This a story and every thing cannot be shot so minutely...otherwise almost every scene canbe analysed with pros and cons and show will be stuck forever.

We must see the motive and msg more than intricate details.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mahi i really cannot add more in your post...because i agree with you completely...cvs in an attempt to make high tension drama did mess with Shiv's character which was not required ..they could handle the situation and show it more sensibly but in over excitement of this high tension drama they did mess up ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I think Shiv is saying sorry to Singh family and Anandi not bcoz he has put jagiya behind bar but bcoz he has given trouble to the family as they have to rush to the police station to get jagiya out for the divorce process.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Voldermoth

my god you have really analysed a in significant little scene into major twist like scene.
As ppl have posted here, this was just to show jagya's bratty nature to shiv, that's it.

This a story and every thing cannot be shot so minutely...otherwise almost every scene canbe analysed with pros and cons and show will be stuck forever.

We must see the motive and msg more than intricate details.

pardon me did i say anywhere they shouldn't have shown this i only said they could have shown it more well then in a bloopery way they have shown .which if downed Jagaya they have messed up with shiv too i have also given best solutions for it ...should we only see what we want to see and forget all the rest ...why we shouldn't go in details of anything .and assume a moral from upward and accept it blindly what cvs wanted to show to us ..we should accept it blindly...and ps i think there are huge number of columns and analysis of scenes .films written in which they bring every detail of it is it wrong and what we really should do on public forum do only wow wow cvs ...😕what motive was there to show shiv Jagaya is a spoit brat a moral lesson given to viewers drinking change a man' 's self and will never lessen his pain get him more trouble good but hidden moral Jagaya is a spoilt brat who was never been punished for his mistakes properly thats why he thinks himself superior to others never accepts mistakes on his part will get trouble trouble for him so parents avoid raising your children like this but one more thing a govt officer has every right to take law in his hands ...😆he can do anything 😆

EDIT ...do you really consider it a small scene and all these things minutely ...😕
Edited by mahi12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am sorry..I won't be able to see logic

When it comes to Anandi's Happiness and Jagya's punishment for me its only one rule

EVERYTHING IS FAIR : ))))

If shiv were to slap him again and again and again and again ... just for the hec of it ..I would be whistling from behind and doing dinka chika dance LOL
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its ok suchi..i can understand 😆and thank you for giving a fair reply on your behalf
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i think this show has always shown some extreme type of characters .on one side anandi who is extremely selfless , patient , calm , kind , helping and so on & On the other side gauri is shown selfish , impatient ,loud etc .then the male leads Jagya shown as irresponsible ,short tempered ,egoistic , etc while as Shiv responsible , civilized , down to earth etc . i have never come across such extreme characters in real life where some are extremely good and some are extremely bad
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes ! Finally some senseible topic other than the usual why anandi is crying, dragfest stupid epi etc rubbish!thanku!:) yes i wondered intially also y they did that ik tou shiv nay sharabi bande ku itna mara upar se when was asked to come to ps he chose to do a personal stuff-visit a for skype then do work had it been someone else then?plus i dnt agree with the whole u have to pay coz he stumbled in the way, and odinary admi ki complain yeh kyu thi k on duty govt pe haath uthaya? Today his sorry and agar muje pata hota was so out of line, pata hota tou kia chor dete?i hope cvs dnt fall in trp trap and make it a ansh vs jaga lovestory !dre was noneed for sorry. They cld have shown the stark contrast in other way. This way shiv was shown a lil hypocrite!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written post.Thanks.
I agree with you completely.I would have appreciated Shiv more if he had just apologised for causing inconvenience to them instead of saying that he would have been different if he knew who the nuisance maker was.
Only the good performances by the actors specially from Surekha Sikri,Shashank and Anoop Soni saved the scene from being totally ruined.
While we are on the topic poor witing Iwould like to add about the divorce scene also.I agree they needed to show us the turmoil that was going on in every body's mind but the way they went about doing it looked more like they are trying to drag the episode rather than showing the turmoil.
It was the most eagerly awaited scene but failed to make an impact.Instead of emotionally being moved by that scene in the court we are left feeling irritated.

Edited by apjk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I already posted what I thought about Shiv's first punch (wrong), his first instinct to have jugia charged with assaulting an officer (OTT), and pounding on a drunk dude (in poor taste and inappropriate). As for today, he should not have apologized. I think on the whole Shiv's character was diminished through these incidents.

All that said, let me revisit... (old habits die hard, I used to work with police officers once upon a lifetime). Shiv is the type that gets hyper at injustice...be it a young girl being denied bangles because she is "widowed" or a sabziwala being threatened by a drunk brat. So, he intervened and overreacted when Jugia started misbehaving with him as well. Overcharging is common and a lot of charges are later dropped when cooler heads prevail. That is what happened here... as Shiv cooled, he decided to cut Jugia a break and drop the assaulting officer charge as it was not reasonable in the first place and he was acting in capacity of aam nagrik not Collector. His taking his laptop to Anandi etc was not inappropriate as it was during his own personal time prior to his work meetings. He had no immediacy or obligation to help out the rude drunk out of jail - its not part of his job as Collector. His work and personal life took precedent over the misbehaving sharabi, I don't see the wrong in that. When you are in pressure cooker job like Shiv, you learn to PRIORITIZE.

Coming to the apology today - its about use of discretion. He wouldn't have left Jugia in jail overnight if he had known he was the Singh's pota for a very good reason. Because his concern and police concern was this guy was drunk and disorderly...he would create trouble if not detained. But, knowing who he is would have given Shiv an alternate option - calling his family and having them keep Jugia from troubling others. Looking at it from this light, Shiv's statement that he would have acted differently had he known is not hypocritical. But, unfortunately such nuance was not shown in the scene.

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