The Convict - RaYa FS Last Part [Updated , 10/8]- Pg 5

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"Priya Kapoor have been sentenced to two

years of jail for being responsible of the accident that led to the demise of Shivina Kapoor"


The judge declared his verdict and banged the gavel(hammer).


The convict, Priya Kapoor looks at her husband Mr Ram Kapoor who was sitting there heartbroken, shattered and silent.

The police women took Priya away. She could not see her Mr Kapoor in this state anymore so she didn't look at his eyes.

As she was about to be taken to the police van.

"Ek Second..."

She looked behind.

Priya: Mr Kapoor...

Ram: (stuttering) Priya, you...you... could have let me handle this. It was an accident..I could have done... something. I will find the best lawyer...

"No"


Priya closed her eyes. She recalled that unfortunate night. Shivina was really upset and wanted to leave from Sood House as she could not adjust. All Priya wanted to do was to stop her from leaving. But little did she know, she will become the reason of her leaving forever.

Shivina became really stubborn. She started arguing and becoming violent with her nephew, Ishaan. Ishaan wanted to say sorry and wanted to convince his Shivina Maami to stay.

Priya was just trying to stop Shivina from being violent. She wanted to prevent her from hitting Ishaan with the vase, so she shoved Shivina. But while doing so, Shivina slipped. Priya tried her best to hold her hand, but it was too late.

She fell from the stairs and got her head severly injured. Mr Kapoor came rushing towards his dear sister who was like his own child. She said her last words how much her Ram Bhai meant to her She breathe her last on his lap. She could recall how Mr Kapoor and Akki cried so much that day she snatched the most precious thing from them.

Priya will never forgive herself for this pain she caused for Mr Kapoor and Akki.


Priya: She died because of me. A mother lost her daughter because of me. A husband lost his wife because of me. A brother lost his sister because of me. It's all my fault. I deserve this punishment.

Ram: You didn't do it intentionally. I know that. You won't tell me anything but I know you didn't. You did so much, you even risked your own life for others. It was an accident!

Priya: So what?! I could not save Shivina. The accident caused by me. She slipped because of I shoved her... Mr Kapoor your heart is very big. You lost your father because of my father and now your sister whom you loved more than yourself because of me. I and my family are the reason why you lost the two person you loved the most in your life.

Ram: But Priya... the situation was different in your case. You loved and cared for Shivi too, it was an accident. If I was ready to take the case back why you did not let me!

Priya: Mr Kapoor I believe in justice. I did a crime, I deserve a punishment for it, even if it was unintentional but someone did lose her life. Shivina, she was such a sweet girl. I killed her! I killed your sister!

Priya cries. Ram also cried with her.


Ram: (in his mind) I need your support Priya. I am broken. I love you equally as much as I loved my dad and sister. I can't see you in jail. I don't know how will I survive without you for 2 years. Why are you doing this Priya?! How will you manage this alone?

Priya: (in her mind) I know Mr Kapoor what you must be thinking. I know you needed support. But I know Adi and Brinda are there for you, they will be there for you. I will manage alone.

Priya is taken away to jail.

Brinda: Jaan...

Ram hugged Brinda and cried. Brinda also cried with him.


Few days later,

It was 2 weeks since Priya was sentenced to jail. Ram had locked himself inside the room since then. He missed his dad, his sister and his wife. He looked at the photographs of his loved ones and cried his heart out.

Ram: Why do the people I love so much always leave me?!

Brinda comes there with a tray full of food.

Brinda: Jaan this is enough! It's been two weeks. For how long you are going to punish yourself like this! Priya told me to make sure you eat your meals properly.

Ram: Priya? You met her?! How is she?! Is she better now?!

Brinda: Jaan, you have to eat first if not I won't tell.

Ram started to eat fast.

Brinda: Aaram se...

Ram: Please tell me how my Priya is doing...

Brinda: She is doing fine.

Ram: She is?!

Brinda nods.


Brinda: You should meet her...

Ram: I met her once. She doesnt even want to look at me. She is so much in guilt. I don't even know how else to tell her it was not her fault...

Brinda: She wants to meet you now. She is ready to talk to you.

Ram feels better hearing this and he gets ready immediately. He wanted to talk to his dear wife.


Jail,

Ram went to the lockup his wife was kept. She was facing behind.

Ram: Priya...

Priya looked at Ram. She was teary-eyed and lovingly look at Ram. She carrassed his face while he kissed on her hand.

Priya: You lost a lot of weight... Thik se nahi kha rahe ho kya aap?! You love eating right?! You

Ram: How could you even think I would eat happily without my loved ones?

Priya: I am sorry...

Ram: Why are you saying sorry?!

Priya: You deserved better...You have to take care of yourself.

Ram: You ask me to take care of yourself?! You are taunting me for not taking care of myself?! How about you?! You were unwell for last two days. How about that?!

Priya: About that?! There is something you need to know.

Ram: Bolo na Priya.

Priya: I am pregnant.


Ram was silent hearing this. In these 3 weeks there was finally a good news he heard. Infact one of the best. He was...

Ram: Mai...dad...dad bane wale hoon?!

Priya nods.

Ram: Priya...I love you!

Priya: I love you too..

Ram: I wish I could hug you. Our baby..

Priya held his hand and made him caress her stomach.

Priya: I know how much you were eager to be a dad. I am sorry I had to give this news to you like this.

Priya cries and Ram wipes her tears.

Ram: You have to be strong Priya. For us. For our baby! You dont worry I will do something! I will get you out of this jail somehow.

Priya nods no.

Ram: Seriously Priya?! Even now you are stubborn. Priya now its not just about you, its about our baby too.

Priya: Just because I am pregnant that doesn't mean I get to escape my punishment.


Ram: But how about our baby?! Our baby does not deserve to be brought up in this environment. Priya at least for our baby stop being stubborn.

Priya: You are right Mr Kapoor. Our baby does not deserve to be brought up in this environment. That's why I decided once I give birth to our baby, you will take care of the baby till I am back You have to do it alone, and I know you can do it.

Ram: But how about before the baby is born. Priya it is not easy being pregnant. It will be very hard to stay in jail in this condition. A pregnant woman their body tend to change, they have mood swings, they need more nutritious food and they need more care. It will be very difficult to get the care here.

Priya: I will manage. You trust me right?

Ram: I trust you more than myself, but I can't let you suffer like this in the jail. Especially in this condition, not at all. I don't know how but I am getting you out of this.

Priya: Mr Kapoor...you love me right?

Ram: Yes I do..

Priya: (holds his hand) Then please. Please let me do this. I promise you I will take care of the baby during my pregnancy. The baby is your baby, and I will take care of us. The baby deserves all happiness. The best you can do for us, is to come meet us.

Ram: Priya this is not fair!

Priya: Mr Kapoor..


Ram was disappointed. He knows his wife believes in justice like he does infact even more. She got herself punished, but it is not fair. It was an accident. Their baby did not deserve this. He wants to convince her but he knows she won't agree. He wanted to scold her but stopped himself because she was going through a lot. He knew how it was hard for her mentally after that accident happened and she feels guilty easily. And now she is expecting, so she is very fragile. Right now a scolding and argument is the last thing she needs. So he had to stop.


Ram: Take care of our baby, promise me...

Priya: I promise...

Ram: Pinky promise?

Priya smiles and gets teary eyed.

Priya: Pinky promise.

Ram: And Priya I know you won't let me get you released from jail but at least allow me to get extra nutritious food and some things you need in this phase.

Priya: Mr Kapoor...

Ram: I know you will say its a luxury but please I had thought of doing a lot for you when you will be carrying our baby. But I could not do these at least me to do this, please...

Priya could not deny.


In these few months, Ram visited her frequently. They would talk for some time. He brought her food and whatever he felt she needed. He saw her struggling with back pain, he brought a pillow for her. He talked to the police and made sure they didnt gave her too much streneous work, and let her stay outside for more whenever she felt suffocated. Priya usually would have been against it but she allowed it cause she saw he yearned to take care of her and their unborn baby.

She was guilty to deprieve him of this moment, so she allowed him.


One day,

Ram was at a meeting, Adi came rushing.

Adi: Ram you have to go right now!

Ram: I am busy in a meeting right now Adi!

Adi: It's about Priya...

Ram: Sorry guys I have to postpone the meeting.

Ram rushes with Adi.

They come to the hospital.


Ram: Priya is in hospital, why didn't anyone tell me anything?! Is she okay?! (worried)

Adi: Ram relax.

Ram: How can I relax?!

Inspector: Actually Mr Ram Kapoor, your wife's health deteriorated that's why we had to admit to the hospital. She was having pain.

Ram: Couldn't you have gotten her here early?!

How could you guys be careless?!

The doctor comes.

Ram: Doctor, my wife how is she? And the baby?

Doctor: Your wife's bp had shoot up, and she started to get early contractions so that's why we have to do a premature delivery.

Ram: Go ahead with it doctor! Can I meet her

Doctor: Sure you can.


Ram rushes to Priya, and see her struggling in pain. But she was really brave. She was trying her best not to shout in pain and tolerating it.

Priya: Mr Kapoor...

Ram: (crying) Priya... don't worry you will be fine...

Priya: I...am..okay...

Ram: I know you are not. You are in so much pain. How can you bear with it?

Priya: It's nothing compared to the pain I caused for you.

Ram: Seriously Priya in this situation also... Look I know you are brave, but you have to promise me you will not raise this topic.

Priya closes her eyes in pain. Ram holds her hand.

Priya: Mr Kapoor...where is the doctor?


The doctor comes.

Ram: Doctor where were you?! Here my Priya is in pain and you guys are wasting your time.

Priya: Mr Kapoor...please...let them do their job...

Ram: I am sorry...doctor...

Doctor: It's okay. I understand. We are going to start with the procedure first so Priya you have to bear with us, its going to pain a lot but remember about your baby. And Mr Ram Kapoor you have to talk to your wife and make her comfortable.

Ram: My wife is very brave Doctor!

Priya smiles looking at Ram, her contractions start again, she closes her eyes and holds Ram's hand tightly.

Ram: It's okay Priya...I know you can do it!

Due to Ram and Priya's cooperation, the baby was finally born after an hour or two. They could hear the baby crying. Ram and Priya smiled looking at each other.

Doctor: It's a little princess.

The doctor passed the baby to Priya , the baby looked at her mom with her beautiful eyes. Priya hugged her close to her heart, and Ram looked at them emotionally. Priya then carrassed the chubby cheeks of her angel.


Priya: Our angel! Mr Kapoor..

Priya looked and saw Ram standing in a corner and crying buckets of tears.

Priya: Mr Kapoor...

Ram: I am sorry Priya. I could not help you both, you had to suffer so much in this condition. I am so sorry!

Priya: Mr Kapoor... why are you sorry?! It was my own call. Remember I promised you to take care of our baby. See I fulfilled the promise. Our angel.... And see she has your eyes, same to same.

Priya passed the baby to Ram and he held her. He looked at her and the baby giggled looking at him.

Ram: My baby! My princess!

He pecks on her forehead.

Priya: Mr Kapoor...I have thought of a name for her few days ago.

Ram: Name?!

Priya: Pihu...

Ram smiled looking at Baby Pihu.

Ram: Our Pihu. Ram and Priya's Pihu!


Priya was on bed rest for a week. Ram had taken paternity leave and he took full care of the Baby Pihu and Priya those one week. He spent more time with her. He never made Priya felt for once that after a week she will be back to jail, whenever she raised the topic he will change it. He made her feel so special. Ram brought red roses for Priya and balloons for Baby Pihu. He did everything he could to make Priya happy those one week. He wanted to do more but didnt want to bother her as he knows she loved simplicity.

He wanted Priya to have full bed rest, and take care of the baby. But when Priya said she wont get to do this again after a week, Ram allowed her to do everything for the baby, be it feeding, getting her to sleep or changing diapers. Priya fully took care of the baby during those one week, sometimes Ram tried to help too.


It was a week and Priya had to be discharged meaning she would be back to jail. Ram saw Priya crying that day while she had Pihu in her arms. She didnt leave Pihu at all since morning. She was looking at her dear Princess.

Tu jo gayi to soona hoga yeh jahan


Ram: Priya, if you want I can still....

Priya nods no.

Pheeki pheeki hogi saari yeh dastan


Priya: Pihu don't bother your Papa okay. You have no idea my Princess you have the best Papa ever! Your daddy cool!

Ram was getting emotional but controlled himself.

Tumse judi hai har khushi

Tere bina kya hai yahan

Priya: I don't want to leave her, but I have to. My Pihu...

Ram wished he could fix everything, convince Priya and get her bailed.

Chaahein tumhein hum maange tumhein

Sun le dua yeh aasman


The police inspector came.

Police: It's time now.


Priya hugged Ram and cried.

Ram: I love you...

Priya: I love you too...

Ram, Priya and Baby Pihu shared a family moment and a hug and kiss. Even the inspector became emotional seeing the family.

Chhote chhote khwaabon ko aa jodenge


Priya: Mr Kapoor please take care of our Pihu. I know you will be the best daddy cool to our Pihu.

Ram nods.

Yeh bhi vaada na tumhein ab chhodenge


Priya passed Pihu to Ram and Baby Pihu started crying as she saw her mom leaving. Ram was crying too. Priya didnt look behind as she could not see her daughter crying. She closed her eyes.

The police inspector tried consoling her.

Jeena chaahein phir tere liye

Aankhein na pherenge


Priya continued walking and then she was gone. Baby Pihu was crying and so was Ram.

Saansein meri tu le le bhale

Ab na tumhein jaane denge


Those next 16 months were going to be very long journey for Priya, Ram and Baby Pihu.

End of part 1.


Hi all. I had this idea of trying to write something a bit different. That's why here I changed it a bit instead of Ishaan it was Priya who accidentally pushed Shivina, and how she ended up being a convict. Wanted to also show how Ram still loved and trusted her , and knew it wasn't intentional on her side and still believed in her. In the next part, I will focus on how Ram took care of baby Pihu in Priya's absence and how Priya missed her husband and daughter while she was serving her jail sentence. Tried my best to do something different sorry if u guys didnt like it 😅 This will be a three shots.

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Can't wait to read individual scenes of Ram & Pihu AND Priya missing her husband & newborn from far & Ram doing the same for her. Those would be some great emotional scenes😭

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The Convict FS Part 2


Ram came home with his baby girl, Pihu. Baby Pihu was sleeping peacefully in her dad's arm. Usually this is a happy moment for a father but it was different for him. The situation was different.


He did not know how his mom and brother will react when they see the baby. He did not have Priya by his side this time to assure him everything will be fine.


Their baby will be without her mom for 16 months. How will he handle the baby?! How will Priya stay without Pihu for so long?! Ram being stressed had a pill.


Brinda had told Ram he could come over their house for few days and she will help him take care of Pihu, but Ram refused saying he has to learn how to handle Pihu by his own.


As he entered the house with Baby Pihu, they were welcomed with flower petals and balloons. He did not expect to be welcomed. It was done by Tarun and Pawan. They had done some minor decorations to welcome the baby, but this meant a lot to Ram.

Ram sat on the sofa.

Pawan brought a glass of water.

Ram: Thank you Tarun...for welcoming Pihu...so nicely!

Pawan: But sorry sir! Hum zyaada kuch nahi kar paye...

Ram: What you did is more than enough! It came from heart that is what matters!

Tarun and Pawan smiles.

Tarun: Sir do you need anything. Gudiya ko kuch chaye?!

Ram: Thanks for asking Tarun I already got all sorted. If I need anything I will let you know. Is Pihu's baby cot ready?

Tarun: Yes, we have set it in your room.

Tarun and Pawan goes.

Ram: (looking at Baby Pihu) I am sorry my Princess, I had to bring you here without your mom. But there was no choice. I wish she could also come with us.


Shubham had taken Nandini to the doctor and they just returned home. Nandini looked at Ram and then the baby for a while.

She didn't seem pleased and went into her room without saying a word. Ram felt bad and the response from Nandini did hurt him. Shubham also followed Nandini.

Ram was used to feeling lonely. But he did not want his daughter to feel the same.

Ram: Papa will make sure you are never lonely like I was.

Ram took Baby Pihu to the pink baby cot and laid her there. He smiled looking at his angel.

Shubham came there.

Shubham: Bhai here are mom's reports.

Ram read them through and Shubham looked at the baby as she is sleeping.

Shubham: The baby is really cute.

Ram smiled seeing Shubham actually did notice the baby.

Shubham: Bhai did you or Bhabi decide any name for her?

Ram: Pihu. Priya kept it. Thanks for asking...

Shubham: Don't worry Bhai, mom will understand one day. She needs some time.

Shubham assures Ram everything will be fine.


Next day,

Baby Pihu was very cranky that day. Ram was trying hard to stop her crying. But she won't stop.

Ram: Meri bachi ko kisne rulaya. Papa hai na yahan.

Ram tried feeding her milk sent by Priya but Pihu won't drink it.

Ram: Ek second...aap ro maat Papa hai na!

Ram didn't know what to do. She won't stop. He changed her diapers she still won't stop. He played with her she was crying.

Ram: Ek second...

Ram tried to stop her from crying.

Ram: Pihu bohot ro rahi hai, Priya please come!


Ram recalled that it was not possible for Priya to come now. He felt bad and horrible. He felt horrible that he couldn't stop his angel from crying. Priya entrusted him with Pihu's responsibility. He cant see his angel crying like this. He felt demotivated and helpless because his angel was crying so much.

Nandini heard the baby crying a lot and she had to go to Ram's room!

Nandini took Pihu in her arms and sang some lullabies and got her to sleep. Finally Pihu was asleep.

Ram: Thank you Mom...I did not know how to stop her.

Nandini: When Shivi was born she was also cranky like this. She would sleep hearing my lullabies like this.

Ram smiled and he also felt bad.

Nandini: I will never forgive Priya for what she did. She is the reason why our Shivi is not with us anymore.

Ram: She didn't do it by purpose Mom!

Nandini: You would defend her obviously because she is your wife. You love her a lot right!

Ram: Mom...Priya is already very guilty. She is already getting punished...She did a lot for this family and Shivi before how could you forget that?!

Nandini: Stop defending her. I don't want to do anything with her or her daughter.(looking at the baby)

Nandini went away from there angrily. Ram felt hurt. He looked at Pihu and then the photo of his and Priya which was taken during their wedding.

Ram: I promise you Priya , I will give Pihu all the love and care she needs. I don't know how these 16 months are gonna pass.


Ram took care of Baby Pihu everyday. He got her to sleep and even woke up between the night whenever she was crying. He gradually learnt what could stop her crying. He played with her using her baby toys. He fed her milk bottle and also changed her diapers. He would bathe her whenever needed and made sure she wore comfy clothes, he handled everything. Sometimes Tarun and Pawan will help him too. Sometimes Adi and Brinda tried helping too.


A week later,

In Jail,

Priya is recalling the moments she spent with Ram and also the one week she spent with Pihu. She smiled.

Priya: I wonder how Pihu is doing?! Is Mr Kapoor able to take care of her?! Should I call Sara Dii and tell her to check on them?


Just then Ram comes there,

Priya: Mr Kapoor!

Ram: Priya...

Priya: How are you?

Ram: Missing you a lot.

Priya: Pihu?! Is she fine? Is she bothering you too much?

Ram: Pihu is totally fine. She is not bothering me. I am just taking time to get used to it.

Priya...we miss you...

Priya: I miss you and Pihu too!


Ram: Priya...have you talked with...your family?!

Priya nods no.

Priya: I can never forgive Maa for what she did.

Ram: But she is your mom. Are you sure?

Priya: I don't have a big heart like you Mr Kapoor. Whatever happened, this is somewhat Maa's fault too. If she had not gave those false statement years back, this mess would have never happened and now.

Ram: That's your call Priya, this matter is between you and your mom. You should think about this. It's a big decision.

Priya: One regret I have is that I will be missing Pihu's intial moments. Like her growing up to her toddler, her first time walking and what not.

Ram: Priya...I am sure you will be there for more of Pihu's cruicial moments.


A tear escapes from Priya's eyes and Ram takes out a tissue.

Ram: Priya roye aur mere pocket se tissue na nikle aisa ho sakta hai kya?!

Priya smiles while taking the tissue and wipes her tears. Ram also smiles.


Just then the inspector comes

Inspector: Your one hour meeting time is over.

Ram: Ek second. Priya take care of yourself. And don't worry about me and Pihu.

He kisses on her hand. Ram goes. Priya smiles.


Few days ago,

Priya is missing Pihu and Ram a lot every day. She thinks abot them most of the day. She feels bad she is missing out so much. She wants to do something to stay diverted because she knows deep down Mr Kapoor will handle everything.

It turns out the jail was looking for a teacher to teach the juvenile students so that their studies dont get affected. The previous teacher left. Priya herself said she was interested in being the new teacher, and since Priya was well-behaved the Inspector trusted her and gave her this responsibility.


It was her first day of class,

Priya had mentally prepared herself for all situation even for the worst. She decided to stay calm and teach them.

Priya came in and all the students stood up.

Good Morning Mam.

Priya: Good Morning.

Priya: Chalo aap log introduce karo apne aap ko..

It actually turned out better than what Priya expected. The students were more willing to learn, and they paid attention, so she got comfortable teaching them easily.


After class,

Priya: So make sure you all study well. I have given your homework, make sure you do it by tomorrow.

Just then Priya sees a girl sleeping.

Priya: Siya wake up...

Siya: I am sleepy Mam...

Sonali: Mam yeh aisa hi hai. Kisi ki nahi sunti. Alsi laski.

Siya: Alsi kisko kahan be.

The two girls start to get violent and argue.

Priya: Stop it!

Sonali: She started first!

Siya: Then why were you saying nonsense!

Sonali: I was just telling the truth!

Priya: Stop fighting! Sonali you should have not continued fighting and Siya where were you lost thinking about?

Siya: I don't like to study.

Priya: Not everybody does. Acha future ke liye you have to study.

Siya: Future?! (laughs) Mazak kar rahe ho aap, jo jail mai hote hai they dont have a future.

Priya: Tum ko kisne kahan yeh.

Siya: Cmon Madam. Aap socho. Will anyone ever hire a criminal? Kabhi nahi. Hum galati jaan bujke kare ya galati se, criminal ka tag ek baar mil gaya toh peeche chutwana namunkeen hai. We will always remain as the convict.

Priya didnt know how to answer Siya. Siya left and so did other students as class was already over.

Priya: (in her mind) Ek baat toh Siya ne sahi that the convict tag will remain forever. People wont see me as a respectable lectuerer anymore, now I will be just a criminal to them and nothing else. But I cant let the confidence of these kids down they are so willing to learn and pay attention this wont be fair. I cant let their morale be down.


Priya had got it planned out. With inspector's help, she showed the kids some video and some motivation stories. The message was even if one had a bad past they can turn over a new leaf for a bright future. The kids liked watching this video.

Priya was glad the kids now understood the importance of studying even more.


Time flies by,

Ram is at office and doing presentation.

Ram: Yeh hai humara naya venture! We believe in our young talents so it will be a very good prospect! Our tag line will be be fearless and give it a shot!

Everyone claps for Ram.

Guy: Vah Mr Ram Kapoor kya presentation diya apne!

Ram smiles.

Guy: We need to discuss with our team.

The guy goes.


Ram looked at the baby stroller and went towards it. He brought Pihu to work today. Pihu is now 6 months old.

Ram: I know we both were suppose to go on a walk today but your forgetful Papa completely forgot he had a meeting. Sorry Pihu. Let this meeting end we will go together.

Pihu makes a moody face. Ram also makes the same moody face.

Guy: So I have talked with the team. We are ready to sign the deal with you.

Ram: Great! Thank you!

Guy: You gave such a good presentation we knew we have to make a deal with you! You did so well!

Ram smiles and he handshakes with the guy.


The guy's phone rings and he goes to pick it up.

Ram: My Princess you are indeed lucky for me. Today you came and your papa got this deal. Yay we did it! Give me a 5!

Baby Pihu smiles as Ram does a 5 with her and she giggles.

Ram: Now let's go for a walk.


After the walk, Ram took her to Sood House for first time so that Sara, Maitri and Ishaan could spend time with her too. Sandy does get to spend time with Baby Pihu as she is still working for the Kapoors.

Sara takes Pihu first.

Sara: Hai mera rasgulla, gulab jamun.

Maitri: Pihu bohot cute hai. (pulls her cheek lightly and takes her from Sara)

Sara: Iski aakhen bilkul Ram jaisi hai, hai na Maitri.

Maitri nods.


Ram notices Meera Maa hiding in a corner as she sees Sara and Maitri playing with Priya's daughter.

Meera : (in her mind) Pihu...meri Priya ki beti!

She then saw Ram coming to her. Meera wiped her tears.


Ram: Whatever you did, it will not be easy for me to forgive you for that. More than me, you let Priya down.

Meera cries.

Ram: I know Priya is upset with you, but you can meet Pihu. I know you are yearning to hold her.

Meera cries even more, she runs and she takes baby Pihu. She kisses Pihu while Pihu looks at her confused.

Meera: Meri Priya ki beti...Pihu...

Meera plays with Pihu and Pihu smiles.


In jail,

Priya is reading a book.

Inspector: There is someone who came to meet you.

Priya: Mr Kapoor?! But he comes here every Friday today, it's Tuesday...

Priya gets surprised as she sees Ishaan and Sandy came to visit here.

Sandy: Dii....

Priya: Sandy?! Ishan?!

Sandy: Aap kaise ho Dii?!

Priya: I am okay Sandy. How about you? Your work?

Sandy: I am fine. Dii I work full-time now. At Kapoor industry.

Priya: I am so proud of you. Mr Kapoor told me. Sandy, Mr Kapoor does he take care of himself at work?

Sandy nods.

Sandy: But he misses you a lot.


Priya feels bad.

Ishaan: Priya Maasi I am sorry because of me you are in jail. You were just trying to save me from Shivina ...

Priya: Ishaan it was not your fault. You were trying to stop Shivina from going. She fell down cause I accidentally shoved her.

Ishaan: You shoved her to save me, and she slipped. It was my fault , I should not have got her angry. My one mistake spoiled everything.

Priya: Ishaan please don't feel guilty. But you have to promise me, you will always listen to everyone and do things calmly.

Ishaan: I promise. Even RK said the same thing he told me not to feel guilty. RK is so good , even after so much happened, he is sponsoring me for my studies abroad. I will be leaving next month.

Priya: I am so happy for you.

Ishaan: Priya Maasi, I promise I will make you and RK proud. And your baby, Pihu she is so adorable.

Sandy: Bilkul Jiju Jnr hai. Her habits are like him too. But...

Priya: But?!

Sandy: But she is grumpy like you. Bohot moody hai.

Ishaan: This Sandy is complaining as she doesnt know how to handle Pihu (laughs)

Sandy: Ishaan...(scolding)

Ishaan and Sandy argues.

Priya: Areh Tum dono ladna baand karo.

Sandy: Actually Dii there is someone who came to meet you with us.

Priya: Look if its Maa then tell her to leave.

Sandy: It's not. We should go now, you both need to talk. Take care Dii

Priya: You both also take care!

Sandy and Ishaan leaves. Just then someone comes, as Priya is wondering who could it be. She gets surprised.


Priya: Akki...

Akki: Dii...

They look at each other.

Akki: Dii yeh apne aap ki kya halath bana liya?

Priya: Akki...because of me you lost so much still you came to talk to me...You are not angry with me?!

Akki: Yeh aap kya keh rahe ho Didi. You did a lot for me. You didn't do it intentionally. You gave Shivina so much care and love, like an elder sister. It was just an accident.

Priya cries.

Akki: Yes I was angry initially, I was hurt with but later I understood. How could I forgot how much you did for me and Shivi?! I am sorry I didnt come to meet you earlier. I wish I could hug you. Everyone misses you so much. And Pihu....it's not fair you had to be here throughout your pregnancy and Pihu has to stay without you for more than a year.

Priya: You met Pihu...

Akki: Yes we did. Bohoti pyaari bachi hai. She is brave and smart like you.

Priya smiles.

Akki wants to tell something but he stops himself.

Priya: Akki...is everything fine? Be honest.

Akki: Nothing is fine Dii. After you were gone, the house isnt the same anymore. Sara Dii is barely managing the house and cafe, but you know the situation. She isn't as brave as you are. And Jiju... he has became very lonely, he has his friends but at home at night he is alone. It's good he has Pihu if not he would have been very depressed.

Priya feels sad.

Akki starts crying.

Akki: Why Shivina to go?! She was too young... She never wanted anyone's bad. Even though she came from a rich family, she chose me even though I could not give her anything. She loved me immensely . I never really thought about her I was so selfish. I took her for granted. I lost her forever.

Both Akki and Priya are teary-eyed and Priya tries to console Akki.

Priya: Akki...please don't blame yourself like this...

Akki: Will I get her back again?! No! I wish I I allowed Shivina to stay at her house for more days then this won't have happened.

Priya: Akki...

Priya: (in her mind) Jis Bhai ke wajah se meri ghar basi, ussi bhai ka ghar thod diya tumne

Priya. Yeh tumne sahi nahi kiya...


As time pass by,

Baby Pihu is slowly growing up. She is 10 months old. She can now crawl.

Adi, Bri, Kunal and Vik will come over and play with her.

Brinda is playing with Pihu and Adi video records it. Adi and Pihu has a giggling competiton Brinda records it. Vikrant becomes a 'ghora' and brings Pihu around the living room while she claps and laughs. Kunal plays peak-a-boo with Pihu. Pihu has a great time.

Ram reaches there and smiles seeing how much love Pihu is getting.

Ram: (in his mind) Everyone is pampering my Pihu so much. I wish you were here Shivi, I am sure you would have been one of her fav and the best Bua. But life is so harsh sometimes.

Ram's phone rings and he goes to pick it up.


Shubham and Sandy also comes to Kapoor Mansion to work on their project.

Shubham: What is happening here?!

Ram's friends look at Shubham not so pleased.

Vikrant: Yeh Shubham ko bhi abhi aana tha. Aagaya mood kharab karne.

Shubham walks to them.

Shubham: Vikrant-Kunal tum dono jao jake aapna kaam karo. Kal ek bohot important presentation hai.

Kunal was about to pass Pihu to Brinda, Shubham takes Pihu. Pihu becomes quiet and looks at him.


He plays with Baby Pihu and makes faces. Everyone smiles seeing this. Vikrant and Kunal are surprised to see this.

Baby Pihu laughs and hits her Shubhu Chachu.

She takes his sunglass off and wears them. Shubham takes a selfie with her and kisses her.

Brinda goes awww records this too.

Shubham: Princess , next week hum dono beach pe chalenge okay. We will wear sunglasses and do some photoshoot! Deal with Chachu?!

Pihu does a 5.


Vikrant: (whispering to Adi) Yeh Shubham itna sweet kabse ban gaya.

Adi: Surprising right?! Mujhe bhi pehle yakeen nahi hua tha. But then I realized, he may not be nice with us and others but he genuinely loves his niece Pihu a lot.

Brinda: When he is with Pihu, he becomes a completely different and likeable person.

Sandy: Pihu baby come to your Maasi.

Pihu makes faces again. Shubham and Kunal laughs.

Sandy: Baby not fair! Tum mere time pe aise kyun karti ho!

Pihu giggles.

Sandy: Nautanki.


Shubham puts Pihu down to let her play with her toys. He and Sandy discuss what they should work on.

Pihu looks at her Papa talking on the phone.

She smiles and crawls to her Papa. She is pulling her Papa's leg but he did not notice and went to the side.

Brinda gets surprised seeing something


Brinda: Guys look!!!

Adi and Shubham does so.

Pihu gets up and starts walking slowly. Ram notices this and he gets emotional. Brinda takes the cam and records it immediately.

Ram: Pihu...you can walk...come to Papa. (opening his arms for embrace)

Pihu very slowly walks and comes to her Papa close, Ram takes her and hugs her. He showers her with kisses.

Everyone gets happy seeing this.


Ram: Adi, can you hold Pihu for a while I will be back!

Ram passes Pihu to Adi and goes. Brinda knows when Ram went.

Ram is siting outside on the bench. He is looking at the stars. He recalls his moments with Priya when they look at the stars.

Brinda sees Ram sitting there sad.

Brinda: Jaan...

Ram wipes his tears.


Brinda: What happened?! Your daughter took her first step today shouldn't you be happy?!

Ram: I am...

Brinda: Priya...you are missing her right?!

Ram nods.

Ram: Bri, you know when I met Priya in the jail first time after Pihu was born, she told me she regrets that she will miss some crucial days of Pihu. And today was that day... Today Pihu took her first steps and Priya wasn't there to witness it. She would have been so happy! She would have said Mr Kapoor dekhiye Pihu ne apna pehle kadam liya.


Brinda smiles.

Ram: I know she will be happy when she knows Pihu took her first steps, but she will be guilty for missing it. Jaan it's not fair that Priya had to miss out on this.

Ram cries and Brinda tries to console him. She didn't know how to help him.

Brinda: (in her mind) I just hope these few months pass by very soon and Priya gets bailed soonest so that she can join Ram and Pihu. Ram and Pihu needs Priya...and Priya needs them too.


End of part 2.

Hi all I initially planned this as a three shots but turns out I have a lot to write for this story plus I was really really happy with the great response for this story so I am turning this into a four/five shots but I may take 3-4 days to post the next part as I m damn busy with work, university and sports. Sorry not much RaYa scenes in this part. However, Priya will be back to be with her husband and daughter in the next part I can assure you that 😊

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Awesome and fantastic update loved raya and pihu so nice to see shubham bonding well with pihu

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Posted: 3 years ago
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res

Jo next time pls continue on a new page otherwise it gets confusing

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Posted: 3 years ago
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waiting for romance😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaparekh12

Awesome and fantastic update loved raya and pihu so nice to see shubham bonding well with pihu

glad u liked it ❤️ really wanted to see some pihu n shubham chachu scenes in the show 😊

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