Ram-Priya OS: All I need is You - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

OMG...this is so beautiful! I really wish we get to see such moments in the show too... It was so serene and pure..just perfect❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

If only the story could continue for the 200 episodes…❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: vaidharbhi95

Firstly was missing your stories very badly and u know this track is so depressing , was looking forward for u to write something


It's as if you have given words to my imagination , I loved this OS..

You know I exactly imagined the kind of common things between Pri and Krish that would hv led to mutual admiration..

I literally thought about Priya and Krish connection via discussion on consumerism vs capitalisms, on social work maybe , both of them seem to socially responsible people, can imagine them volunteering on some NGO work, or some teach the underprivileged kind of club in college 😂


I loved the way u brought in Madhubala discussion between Ram's mom and Dad, so thoughtful ..

The way Priya made her choice was endearing 🥰

@first line, that makes me so happy🙈 not the depressing part, but that you look forward to my stories🙈

I wanted Ram to worry about Krish not for his physical looks or for his past with Pri, but because "yaar yeh dono itne same hai ki soulmates lagte hai" Kinda vibe😅

Glad it was worth your time🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Good job Shibu🤗

i got so excited to see you wrote a story after such a long time i know you are busy with eggjams...but jab free ho jao pls start writing more regularly😳

Kuch sujhe toh likhu🤣 abhi eggjams mein teachers ke liye stories likhti hoon🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

The simplicity and beauty in this conversation is all ❤️

If only the actors got to portray such scenes, wouldn't they just kill it? And wouldn't we fall in love with them and Ram and Priya all over again?

Of course! But it's wishful thinking 😊 I'm starting to disengage from the show now, but reading stories like yours keeps the magic of Pri & Ram alive for me.

Thank you for writing this! And I hope you will keep them coming 😊

I disengaged long ago, but "the night" Got me back in, but no more honeytrapping using PriRa for this one here😅

NaSha would slay such simple, beautiful scenes🥺🔥😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

Beautiful work Shibani! ❤️ Beach sequence is something I wanted raya to have… a languid and peaceful moment… just them, their talks… thank you for putting this piece up!🤗

Also, some déjà vu is hitting me when I was reading this line… can you point me in the direction of the below quote?(either in dm or here!)

“She only laughed and said that many men loved Madhubala, but what mattered was who Madhubala loved”

It was in Happy Bhaag Jaayegi😅 I had written thos in the EDT as a summary and credited the scriptwriters of the movie in the AU of this one😅

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali


I wanted Ram to worry about Krish not for his physical looks or for his past with Pri, but because "yaar yeh dono itne same hai ki soulmates lagte hai" Kinda vibe😅


@Bold exactly 🤣

I loved how u explored Ram's insecurities

Pls do write something more on PriSh if possible , maybe a day from their college life or their final farewell day in college

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

Thank you for writing something for BALH. Your stories were the reason I used to visit the forum initially. Please do write more.


Another thank you for bringing alive/in words an imagination I had. When I saw the beach pictures from the shoot location I really wanted a scene like this.

Ram and Priya talking about them and spending some quality time with each other, having a heart to heart.


You're a terrific writer 👏

You made my day🙈 I didn't know they had a beach sequence when I was writing this, but apparently I can predict future while writing😅

PriRa having heart to heart is one of the most beautiful part of the show because of NaSha, idk why writers make those scenes look like spoilers when they can just carry the show on their shoulders😖

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Damn! You're Back....I was missing your writing so much to the point of wanting to ping you but then I realized that's kind of pressuring in a way👀...


Back with a Bang! & absolutely Stunning piece of subtle confession from Priya in her style.


So nice to see Ram having a clear head by himself while having the conversation with Priya sounds so much better than what we might have to witness😎


👏👏 🧿

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Damn! You're Back....I was missing your writing so much to the point of wanting to ping you but then I realized that's kind of pressuring in a way👀...


Back with a Bang! & absolutely Stunning piece of subtle confession from Priya in her style.


So nice to see Ram having a clear head by himself while having the conversation with Priya sounds so much better than what we might have to witness😎


👏👏 🧿

Reading that you missed me makes me blush, I can't tell you how much m blushing rn🙈

I love Ajab Prem ki Gajab Kahaani for the sole reason that Kat never said ILU, and Prem realized it (with some devine help, but when God tries to help Ram, Priya meets with an accident 🤣)

I can't back to watching BALH2, even Ray's hotel scene couldn't pull me back in, maybe because I know the story in peices, or maybe because whatever I was hoping for (two adults with completely different outlooks at love falling in love) was never delivered as major portion of the show, bht just as some fillers🥲

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