This was so cute and adorable... Beautifully written .. loved it... Hope you continue with their vacation banter and moments if possible. Anyways looking forward to read more of your stories.. take care :)
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This was so cute and adorable... Beautifully written .. loved it... Hope you continue with their vacation banter and moments if possible. Anyways looking forward to read more of your stories.. take care :)
Yayyyy this makes me sooo happy đđ
Here is the part 2, a continuation for the first one. I hope you like it.
-PART 2-
âIs this your first time?â asked Ram who was walking to pass the time waiting for their flight. âNo, I have flown to Delhi twice.â Priya, walking along with him,looking at the small shops. Ram just hummed, they were now waiting in the lounge, Ram was now busy munching chips while Priya looked at her phone,searching more about Ooty. âMr. Kapoor, thatâs enough. Youâve too much junk food now. You first had those doughnuts, then that pastry and now these chips!âshe reprimanded. Ram pouted, pleaded for just a little bit, Priya strictly denied. He closed the packet and kept inside listening to her like an obedient child which made Priya give a small smile. They boarded their plane, they were sitting in the first class, Priya refused but Ram being Ram, he wanted first class only, and she had to agree. Priya had accept it was quite amazing, even though itâs too expensive, she can enjoy a bit. âPriya, I bought us chewing gum. I usually take it during take-off, it helps me with the pressure. I thought maybe, itâll be helpful for you too.â He said handing her one, Priya then suddenly started rummaging through her bag, taking another chewing gum,Ram looked at her, âActually, I did the same too. I thought youâll have some kind of medicine for this, so I thought Iâll give you this as a substitute.âShe said. They laughed for thinking the same thing. âNow we have a lot of gum,niceâ Ram chuckled eating one, Priya laughed and ate one too. It was 1.5 hour trip, Priya was listening to songs, Ram was scrolling something in his phone but soon got bored and turned to look at her. She asked him if he wants to listen too. âNot a bad playlist for someone who doesnât like all thisâ He said,she narrowed her eyes giving him a stare, âI... uh,,, didn't mean that... wait... you told me you dont like music and all... so only... anyways, I was just appreciating your taste in music.â They both shared earphones sitting close to each other, soon Priya felt tired and slept in an uncomfortable position, Ram slowly lifted her head and kept it on his shoulder, and smiled looking at her peaceful face, soon he drifted off to sleep too. They both woke up by the announcement made for landing. Priya felt embarrassed that she slept on him, âMr. Kapoor I am sorry, I didnât know...â Ram didnât let her finish,âPriya, why do you have to apologize, mei tumhara pati hoon, tumhara haq hai. Itâs okay I have no problem at all.â He said reassuring her for which she smiled. They got down, came out of the airport, to find an expensive looking black car. âPriya, this is our ride. Itâs a convertible, so when we can open and enjoy the nature, just how you like it.â He said gleaming looking at the black four-wheeler. A man in his late forties got out of the same car, âI thought Mr. Kapoor will be driving and itâll be the two of us, why did he have to keep a driver?â Priya thought.âSir, the car is all set for the trip. Enjoy Mr. and Mrs. Kapoor.â The man said after keeping their luggage inside. âSo, he is not driving. I thought you kept a driver.â She said, âOh, so thatâs why you made a weird face when you saw him,you didnât want to him come along, you wanted some alone time with me uh.â He said winking. A flushed Priya, just walked away to her side opened the door and sat inside, before he could tease more. Ram laughed at this. Ram got in and started driving. âIs this your first time going?â she asked. âNo, Iâve come here a lot of times, sometime for business purpose and sometimes just time for myself. But this time, I wanna share it with you.â Priya just nodded her head looking outside. It was lunch time now, Ramâs stomach grumbled, Priya chuckled,âI am hungry too, itâs 1pm, letâs eat first.â She said. Ram sheepishly agreed.They stopped at a small restaurant. They tried some Tamil delicacy, which they enjoyed a lot. After finishing, they continued their journey to Ooty.
âDo you know to drive?â he asked trying to break the silence. âYeah⌠Neeraj taught meâŚâ As soon she uttered his name,Ramâs expression changed, his stomach churned. Priya noticed that, âwoh gelled baal wala Neeraj sirf yeh ek achaa kaam kiya, tumhe driving sikhaya.â, Ram said motioning his gelled hair, Priya burst into giggles, Ram looked at her in surprise, her giggles sounded so adorable. âHaan, the one good thing he did. Par aapko uska gelled baal se kya problem hai. Itâs his hair let him do what he wantsâ She said still laughing. Ram was too mesmerized by her laugh and giggles that he didnât answer. âMr. Kapoor?â shewaved her wand. He came back, âwohh⌠mujhe .... arrey uske baare mei baath mat karo na. Everytime I hear his name, it gets on my nerves.â He said. âokay I wonât but you asked thatâs why I told.â She said shrugging. âThen why donât you? I have never seen you drive.â He asked, her face turned expressionless, âOh, thatâs because I couldnât afford one, I learned in his car, drove in that, then, I just didnâtâ she shrugged. Ram looked at her and was lost in his thoughts, âMr. Kapoor, if you are thinking of buying me one, I will not suggest that. And even you know that.â Now Ram again turned to her in surprise, âYaar, how do you read my mind?!!â he asked, she just gave a smile. It was now forest area, greenery surrounding them. They stopped for some tea, which ended by Ram getting scolding from Priya because he had too much sweet again. They went to their car, while Ram sat inside the passenger seat next to driver seat. Priya stood that baffled, âWhat? You said you know how to drive⌠then... maybe itâs my turn to take rest.â He said, she shook her head, âMr. Kapoor, Itâs been really long, I am not sure.â Ram got up and went really close to her, âmain hoon na, toh dar kis baath ka haiâ he said in the most flirtatious tone giving a wink, Priya dazzled, glared at him, âMr. Kapoor, did you forget your meds or did you eat too much of it?â she asked. âOk ok... But you try na, Iâll be there to help you.â He said moving back, giving her space. âUgh⌠fine. But if Iâm not able to, Iâm getting off that instant.â She said, going towards the driver seat. âUmm...Priya, you have to stop the car and then get off.â He said laughing, âOh god,Mr. Kapoor, please stop, before you kill me with your bad jokes.â She said chucking. They sat inside, Priya was nervous, but Ram assured her. It took few minutes for Priya to get into it, but after than she was driving with ease, enjoying it. Ram opened the sunroof, the fresh cold air, the peaceful road, the two of them, it was a trip to be remembered for a lifetime.
Ram was telling her stories from his childhood, his parents, the mischief he used to do. âMr. Kapoor I canât believe, you cheated in your Science exam! I thought you are The Ram Kapoor, who does things honestly, doesnât like to win by cheating?âshe said, âThat was when I was in high school, I have changed. I just wanted to pass the class. I still donât like it.â He complained like a small kid. âWhy? Science is such a practical subject just like Maths. It teaches us so many things, the very existence of life.â She replied back. âYeah, but I donât like it much. But you took English masters, if you liked science so much then why didnât you pursue that?â he asked. âWell, I do love science, but Language speaks to me, I relate to it, language is beautiful, it brings out the untold emotions alive by just mere wordsâ she spoke, Ram saw her love for literature. âIf I have to guess, I have very little knowledge on literature, I donât think Shakespeare is your favourite nor Romeo and Juliet your favourite book.â He said, âYou judge too quickly, but you are also right. Romeo Juliet is not my favourite book nor Shakespeare is my favourite writer. Itâs Pride and prejudice, by Jane Austenâ She said smiling, âOh⌠I would like to know the storyâ he said. âI donât think you would read the book, but the movie version is good too. We can watch that.âShe said. Ram smiled, a movie date with her, and her favourite. They were now enjoying the scenic view outside, âPriya, stop the car.â He said, âKya hua?âshe asked, âthis spot is perfect to take a picture. Letâs do it.â He said. âMr.Kapoor, we are already getting late.â She said. âCome on, letâs be spontaneous.â He said enthusiastically. She stopped the car, he led her to the corner, took out his phone, held her and took a lot of selfies, Ram made Priya take many of his photos posing, while Priya refused to take hers. They got back in the car, Ram drove this time, they reached the resort. Priya was not surprised, it was The Ram Kapoor, of course it would be a 7-star resort. They checked in, they made Priya wear a flower crown as a welcome gift. Ram had to admit, Priya looked like an angel, more like an Earth fairy. Priya liked the crown too, it was very pretty. They entered their villa, it was magnificent,a big lawn with a private pool, a swing nearby, a small garden, and the view from there was just ineffable. Priya fell in love immediately in all those beautiful things, there is no one to taunt her for enjoying her husbandâs money, it was just him, her and the nature. They settled into their room. Priya had contented smile on her face, and it gave Ram immense pleasure to see her happy without worrying about the world.
They freshened up and decided to stay in their room today and go out the next day as they were tired from all the driving and travelling. âOk, Iâll order room service and you keep the movie, weâll watch it tonight. After all itâs your favourite, I wanna know it too.â He said, Priya nodded her head. âWait a sec, what are you gonna order? I know you well now, youâll order so much stuff, likebutter chicken, panner, and all and then you will say âI ordered everything now and I canât waste, so Iâll just eat themââ she said mimicking Ramâs voice.âFirstly, I donât speak like that and second, I am just gonna order, Roti, dal and aloo curry.â he then lowered his voice almost whispering, âpanneer tikka, butterchicken and some ice cream.â Priya glared at him, âI heard that Mr. Kapoor, you know what, why donât I order and you set the movie. Okay?.... And, I am not asking you, I am telling you.â She said sounding scarier. âyes mam!â he sat on the bed with a puffed face, âI love this Priya, everything feels so normal, your scolding makes me feel like Iâm yours, just yours, that biwi wali feeling, hmm, I so wish my whole life goes on like this, no, our life.â Ram thought. Soon the food came, while Ram had set up the movie date perfectly, âRoti, mixed vegetable curry, dal and wait a sec, what is this I am seeingâ he said dramatically, âIce cream and popcorn!!! But how?â he looked at her, âwell, I donât know, I guess they might have given, or someone must have accidently ordered it to enjoy the movie someone had set up very nicelyâ she said trying her best not to smile. Ram already loves her, but now he just fell more in love, if that was possible, even though she told him no, she bought it anyway, trying to make him happy. âNow letâs keep this inside, eat fast and watch the movie.â He said. They had their dinner. Ram and Priya settled comfortable in their bed, popcorn in their hand and big bowls of ice cream. âI swear Mr.Kapoor, if you become unwell, I will get so angry, who takes so much ice cream for one night?!â she whined. âWell, itâs your fault, you got it. Now, keep quiet and let me watch the movie.â He said, she rolled her eyes. She has watched this movie so many times, and wanted to check if even Ram was interested too, the movie was already halfway through, she felt Ram wouldnât take much interest, but to her surprise his eyes were glued to the screen, tracing every move they make, listening intently to their conversation. She was happy that even he showed interest to the things she loved. The movie ended, âMr. Darcy is such a strange character.â He spoke,âI know, but I like him.â She said. Suddenly a spurge of jealousy ran through his body, âSeriously? Out of all the men, him? Heâs not even that good lookingâ he said raising his eyebrows. Priya said "so?" and just laughed. âI like KatrinaKaif.â He blurted, thinking it would make her jealous. âSheâs a nice actress, didnât she just get married, I heard Sandy talking about it.â she said normally, she knew he had just said to make her feel, so she remained normal to tease him more. âSheâs very pretty.â He said trying to instigate more, âIndeed she isâ she said again normally, Ram was done, âSeriously, Priya⌠Why do youe ven like him? Kitna weird hai.â He said huffing, Priya chuckled, âMr. Kapoor aap bhi toh weird hai.â She said. Ram smirked, âSo, thatâs why you like me?Wait a sec, they never mentioned his first name, and you never call me by mine. Mr. Darcy and Mr. Kapoor⌠wow, it makes sense now.â Priya looked at him as he was taking to himself, she just shook her head, âMr. Kapoor kya bakwaas kar rahe hai app, kafi late hogaya,letâs sleep now. I am tired.â She cleaned the place, and sat on her side. While he cleaned himself, and lied down on his. Priya again chuckled thinking how jealous he got when she said she likes the character. Ram called her, âWaise Priya, I like Katrina and she is pretty. But I am happy here, I donât want her.â He said. Priya smiled, âI know.â Their hands accidentally touched, it has become a routine now, his hand will âaccidentallyâ touch hers and slowly hold it. And they would sleep holding each otherâs hand, but neither would talk about it but they both liked that âaccidentâ. They slept peacefully waiting for the next day.
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please tell me how this one wasđ.
Part 3 - Pg 4
Absolutely loved it!!đđ The natural progression in the relationship, that's what we need!! Looking forward to the next one..
Enjoying it through. Feels so fresh. Please update soon đ
Love the both parts - beautifully written - please continue
I always imagined that Priya's favourite book would be Pride and Prejudice and I do think Priya resembles Elizabeth a bit.
Thank you for making my dream come true.
I loved the Mr. Darcy - Mr. Kapoor analogy too.
Please continue soon.
I do too, and I thought that Jane Austen was a feminist and rebel... so she would be an inspiring role model for Priya. And while writing only, I realized that Both Mr. Darcy and Mr. Kapoor are called by like that, ofc the second one is only by Priya, but it had some connectionđ I am glad you liked it.
It's awesome!! This trip is already fun!
Please, please, please continue⌠how I wish to see this in the show⌠you have captured them beautifully. The interactions are so simple yet reveal so much about each other.
Lovely, please continueâŚ