RaYa - Trips and truth ..... (Part 21 on Pg 26) updated.. - Page 3

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There needs to a lot of parts and you are a great writer

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Thank you all for you lovely compliments... Part 3 on process😏

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This was so Beautiful ❤️

Priya understanding Ram's disappointment at his Family's subtle rudeness😭 Them planning a short trip in India itself


I liked how you stated that Priya has been on flights before due to work. Even folks whose financial conditions are weak get to travel via Flights when it comes to work as the company actually pays for it. As Priya is a lecturer, it even makes sense that for certain tournaments/competitions, the students & her would have travelled vy air


Loved the last line - "And they would sleep holding each other’s hand, but neither would talk about it but they both liked that ‘accident’. They slept peacefully waiting for the next day."




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This was amazing, please write more

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So... I am back with Part 3...


- PART 3 -


Next day they both got up late due to the tiredness, they headed to have breakfast, which was in a half open area, so that the guests can enjoy the natural air and view. But Ram and Priya decided to sit in as it was quite cold outside. Ram looked at Priya plate and was shocked, “Priya?! Where is my Priya? The khadoos, I don’t eat unhealthy, nor do I allow my husband to, I don’t like ice creams one?” he said, keeping his plate which had a paratha, and dosa down and shook Priya. Mr. Kapoor why are being so dramatic. I just wanted to taste them, they looked delicious. And If you can cheat on your science exam, I can have a cheat week as well.” She said sitting down, with a thought ‘wait, did he say MY PRIYA? What did he mean by that? Did he mean that I am his? Ughh… I am thinking too much now, he must have casually said it and must have not realized it himself.’. It was funny how Ram had chosen simple food, while Priya went all over. “okay okay, why did you have to take that up now? Anyways enjoy your food, I’ll just have this.” He said, “Mr. Kapoor, you know, I am not restricting you now, you can have anything you want but in a limited amount, because I don’t want you getting sick.” She said while Ram looked at her still fazed wondering what changed suddenly. They were eating now, “Mr. Kapoor, I was reading yesterday, and I found out that there is a wildlife sanctuary nearby… and there is a slot free after lunch. Can we go? I mean do you wanna go with me?” she asked, “of course, I would love to. You book that, we’ll see around the resort for some time, have lunch and then go. What say?” he asked, “Sounds good. I heard there was a tiger spotting last week. I am so excited to see animals up close rather than locked in a cage.” She said. Ram stopped listening to her after she said the word Tiger, it somehow scared him. “Tiger uh?” he said, Priya could sense the fear in his words, “Ah, Mr. Kapoor, afraid?” she said chuckling, “what? No... I think you are, but don’t worry, I’ll be with you, so you’ll be safe. Okay.” He spoke hurriedly. Priya looked at him raising her eyebrows and rolling her eyes. “We’ll see, Mr. Kapoor” she mocked, which went unnoticed by Ram as he was busy think about that Tiger. They finished their breakfast, and headed outside. They walking on the path and found some chicken and ducks roaming around, one of the chickens looked at Priya, and came after Priya while Priya was running around, away from it. Ram was laughing at the scenario, took his phone and started filming. “MR. KAPOOR!!!!! Seriously? You are filming me, arrey help toh karo, breakfast time mei toh aap bade bathe kar rahe the ki, I am with you, I’ll help you and all…” she said panting and running. “I can’t miss this Priya, this video will be forever treasured, chicken and Priya’s catch and run.” he said laughing loudly. Then two kids came from behind, “Aunty don’t worry, I’ll help you” yelled the bigger one, saying so he ran behind the chicken and the other from the opposite and caught hold of it. They placed the chicken else where far away from her. “Thank you, my two brave princes, what are your names?” she said relieved. “No problem, I am Akash, and this is my younger brother Arun.” He said proudly. “Hi Akash and Arun, where are you from?” she asked ruffling their hair. They giggled, “We are from Chennai. We came here for vacation.” The elder one spoke. “Oh, that’s nice, where are your parents?” she asked looking around thinking if they are lost. “Aunty, they are having breakfast and we finished ours, and we have come to this resort so many times that we know all the places, so I was just playing with Arun outside and I saw you.” He said, holding Arun’s hand. “Aunthy… you very pretty girl” spoke the little cute one tugging her dress. Priya’s heart melted hearing that and she took him in her arms, “Thank you Arun, you are very cute too.” She said pinching his tiny nose gently. She soon placed him down, “Ok kids, you go play now, huh. Enjoy your day.” She said, “yes Aunty, you too... Bye” spoke Akash, “Bye Aunthyyyyyy” gleamed Arun as they went on to play, Priya looked ta them once more and smiled. Ram couldn’t help but stare at her, the event he had just witness, it was a different side of Priya, he couldn’t believe. ‘I knew it, she’ll be a great mother someday. She is a bit khadoos, but she is my khadoos Priya.’ Ram thought smiling. “Mr. Kapoor, you are still smiling? I am not talking uh, you didn’t help me.” She said walking away, while Ram ran behind her trying to keep up with her speed. ‘Damn, she is fast. Was she in athletics in school? Can be with her speed, I must be running only.’ He thought. “Arrey ruko na….” He finally came in front and held her shoulder panting, “Priya, I am sorry, but come on, I can never experience such a moment seeing you like that, and it was a chicken it won’t harm you. But look on the bright side, If I had come, you wouldn’t meet those adorable kids.” He said, “okay fine, only for that reason” she said pointing his finger, while he held it and put it down grinning. Thinking of taking advantage of this, “Priya, you were sacred for a chicken. Are you sure of the sanctuary trip?” Priya looked at him narrowing her eyes, “Mr. Kapoor don’t worry, I’ll be fine, we’ll be in a jeep then and there will be people to safeguard us.”. They both sat down on the bench as they were a bit tired after all those running, his phone rang. “Adi Hiii…. Jaan you are there too… Hello to you.” He said picking it up, it was a video call, “Hi Jaan, how’s the trip going on? Where are you guys? Is Priya there?” she asked, “Phew, question after question. The trip is going really good, we are at the resort sitting in a bench, and Priya is right next to me.” He pulled Priya closer so that she could see them too, while Priya’s breath hitched at their close proximity. “Hi Priya, how are you? Are you enjoying?” Bri asked, “Yes, as Mr. Kapoor said, it is really nice.” She smiled, they talked for a while, teased the couple while they blushed not so discreetly, and soon the call ended. Priya liked Ram’s friends. They are very caring and always thinks for him, while he for others. Adi made sure, they reached safely, texted him to inform them, but his family never once called or even texted to see what is was up to. “Look at that, it 1:30 now, let’s have lunch.” Ram said getting up and extending his hand to Priya for support. She looked thinking whether to take it, Ram gave her a smile which was enough for her to take it. They walked to the area, and this time sat outside, as the chillness decreased a bit and the weather was pleasant now. They were having lunch, and Ram was talking about how he had met his friends, and how they became his family. Priya listened to him intently, as even she had grown to like his friends, accept them as her own friends too, they were a fun group. They finished their lunch, headed to their room and changed to go out for the safari, although Ram was still reluctant, but wanted to do it for his Priya. He drove to the sanctuary, and waited there for their jeep to arrive. Priya seemed excited, Ram chuckled seeing her, as witnessing his witnessing his cute wife so elevated for a safari is not a sight he gets to see often. The jeep soon arrived, and Ram first got into it. “M’lady” he said, getting in, extending his hand towards Priya. ‘oh god! Why does he confuse me so much…’ thought Priya taking his hand with a little hesitation, ‘I know it Priya, one day, you will take my hand without hesitation, and freely hold it.’ Ram thought sensing her problem. As the driver started, it started drizzling lightly, the raindrops on Priya’s face just made it look more pretty, and Ram was now gazing at her. Priya looked at him with eyes narrowed, “Mr. Kapoor? Hello?? IS there something on my face? Do I look weird? Why are you staring at me like that?” she asked waving her hands, “I am just admiring you na, let me.” He whispered, “What?? Mr. Kapoor please speak louder!” she yelled, “Calm down... I just said, um... you face… pret… no no... there is a rain drop... haan... there is a rain drop.” He said, slightly flickering it off from her cheek, and turned around, ‘Kya kar raha hai Ram, get hold of yourself, Kya sochegi woh!’ he thought. They now entered the sanctuary, the air was fresh and cold, surrounded by lush green trees and tiny plants growing around. The road was sure bumpy, while made Priya hold ram where the jeep jumped because of a big stone. But she soon took her hand feeling embarrassed. They spotted few deer running around, they were of different kinds, with horn, with spots, big ones, baby ones, Priya looked at them with awe, while Ram did too. He took a sudden interest in them. They saw a big rhinoceros, and ram made Priya take a photo of him with it, although it was far away, but Ram tried posing as if he is close to it, which made Priya chuckle. Ram also took photos of Priya, since Priya refused, he took candids of her smiling in amusement. They stopped the jeep, to see the elephants, the elephants were in the lake playing, taking bath. Ram heard some ruffling in the bush, his mind diverted to tigers, Priya had mentioned this place had tigers and last week there was a spotting. As the ruffling became more, Ram’s fear grew, and clung on the Priya, holding her hand and hugging her with his face hid in her neck, closing her eyes, “No tiger… Priya, tum, you will save me, right?” he said his voice trembling, and now it was Priya’s turn to laugh, as he did earlier. “Mr. Kapoor, oh god! App kitne cute hain. Open your eyes, it was just a deer. Not tiger.” She said laughing merrily, not realizing she called him cute. Ram looked at her flushed, “woh main…. I ... I was just … you know…” he was mumbling, while Priya sat there laughing her heart out. Ram looked at her, her laugh was music to his ears. He suddenly pulled her closer, “Bahut hasee aa rahi hai tumhe?” he asked smirking, he slid his arm around her waist, while she rested her hand on his chest. “aur kya kaha? Mei cute hoon? Really, Mrs. Kapoor, you think I’m cute.?” He said in most flirtatious tone and winking, Priya blushed, and tried to move back but he didn’t allow her and puller here even closer. “Mr. Kapoor, yeh aap kya...” she tried talking, he kept his finger on her lips to shush her. “chup Priya, don’t talk now. Just enjoy this moment. You, me and all the other animals in this sanctuary and that damn tiger because of which I am sitting so close now.”he said, she giggled, “it was deer Mr. Kapoor.” Ram rolled his eyes, “whatever… what do you feel?” he asked, “I don’t know, but it’s different, it’s nice. What do you feel?” she asked, “I feel….” He said his voice trailing off, moving nearer, took her face in his hands, they were just centimeters apart, he could feel their noses touching, moving closer and closer…. “Mr. Kapoor!!!! WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH YOU?!” shouted Priya shaking him, Ram came out of his trance, ‘what the hell was that? Was that a dream, shit yaar, kitna achha tha, oh god… if Priya gets to know that I dreamed of kissing her, she herself will feed me to the tigers!! Brrr... I have to be careful, but what can I do, I can't help it sometimes...’ he thought, smiling weirdly, “Mr. Kapoor!!! Don’t scare me like that… I am sorry for laughing, but when you became stiff suddenly and then started smiling like an idiot, I was scared that you hit your brain and something happened!! In what dreamland were you in, that you didn’t even reply..!!” she yelled, “Sorry… I was just thinking about that tiger.” He said sheepishly. She shook her head. “Madam, please don’t yell here” the driver said in a mocking tone, “Oiyee, hello sir, that’s my wife, you can’t talk to her like that” replied Ram angry with that man, who dared to speak to HIS WIFE in such a manner. “Mr. Kapoor, calm down, he is right, this is a sanctuary, I shouldn’t have yelled, I would have disturbed the animals, it’s my mistake.” She whispered to him. “I don’t care, no one talks to you like that. And sir, remember, you can say that calmly too, there was no need to get angry” he said to him glaring, while the driver remained quiet. “Mr. Kapoor, app teek hai na? what happened?” she asked with concern. “Nothing, I am sorry for scaring you Priya, I was just...” she cut him off by saying, “It’s ok… the safari is gonna end, we’ll go back and have a nice cup tea and relax.” He smiled. Their safari was soon over and the driver just walked away, well, even Ram didn’t like him now for talking to Priya like that, while she apologized to the driver for yelling but not for Ram’s behavior. They were going back to the resort, it was silent drive back, Ram’s mind keeps diverting to the moment he had dreamed, he now craved for Priya, her touch, her trust, her everything. He knows, it’s difficult for her to just let go and fall into his arms, but he made a vow, ‘ Priya, I promise you, I will win your heart in true sense, you do trust me, but not enough because you are afraid that I’ll break it again, you are afraid that I might be like that other men in your life, I might leave you. No, never, I won’t, I cannot, I am not like them. I can never leave you; you have become the essence of my life; how can I be apart from you. And you don’t even know how much you mean to me, how much I love you, but this, I can’t tell you now, I’ll wait for you. Till then, I’ll just dream, hoping I don’t mess anything, blurt something stupid out.’ He was deep in his thoughts, “you are uncharacteristically quiet Mr. Kapoor.” she said, he looked at her, “I was just thinking…” he replied, “Penny for your thoughts, are you thinking about me?” she joked, “yeah...how did you know? How do you always manage to read my mind?” he asked she looked at him surprised, “oh, I don’t know, I just…. Well, what about me?” she asked, “That you were afraid of a chicken this morning, running around but not of a tiger, and instead you got your revenge by laughing at me this time.” He said. Priya let out a chuckle, “well, that’s because I know, nothing will happen, such sightings are very rare, and also, the driver was experienced, he knows what to do. Moreover, even if it wants to eat us, it would like you because you are sweet and leave me as I am bitter.” She said, joking the last part. “Achha, so you’ll sacrifice me uh.” He said with a pout, which made Priya giggle, Ram loved Priya’s giggling, it was adorable, she rarely does, so it makes it more special. “By the way, tum kadavii nahi ho Priya, bas aisa dikthi ho, par aaandar se naram, soft-soft ho.” He said smiling, Priya also returned a small smile listening to him. Well, the rest of the evening went off in a blur, they again ordered room service, but no ice cream. “Well, today my choice of movie, let’s watch maine pyaar kiya, come on” he said, “Mr. Kapoor, Nooo…. We just watched that movie two weeks ago, I’ll watch any other of your choice” she said protesting. Ram sat there and thought, “Ah yes!! Salman khan we saw, now it’s time for the Bollywood romance kind, the one and only Shahrukh Khan.” he said, Priya gave a sardonic smile, “Yeah, let’s watch K3G” he said jumping, “Kabhi Khushi Kabhie Gham? Such along movie Mr. Kapoor.” Priya said, “Pleaseeee Priyaaaaaaa” he said dramatically stretching his words, Priya finally agreed. They both started watching the movie, and finished it too, but was too tired and slept off soon, as usual, holding hands, their little accident, with a small smile on their face. And god knows what Ram would be dreaming….



There goes... I hope you like it... I was thinking of cooking together and swimming pool( not typical romancing and all... just following an idea) for the next one... Anyways do tell what do you guys think about this one😆...

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Priya running from the chicken was hilarious 🤣


Poor Ram can't help it day dreaming about Priya.


Thank you for the long update.

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Ram has eyes only for her...❣️🥺

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Such an awesome update

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Ram lost in Priya, Priya lost in impressions and running from the chicken - it's wonderful)


P.S. I always knew that Priya proves her speeches in practice, in particular, about health, look how she runs)) I hope that in the series we will also see some example when Priya’s principles are shown from a special side, as an achievement of which something or just fun)

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This was a great Read.

Humare Ram aur Priya ko toh Manali bhejne se rahe CVs...but You did & so well 🤩


Swimming Pool talks Pleeeease for the next one..... the stagnant water might be able to help another deepr conversation too

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