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Posted: 3 years ago
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"Mr Kapoor" she woke up screaming sweating profusely in dimly light room. Her heart pounding out loud. She shivered with his sudden touch on her shoulder. "Kya huva Priya" he asked her worried, he could see her completely paranoid. "Priya kya huva, mai yahi hu" he assured her again. Next second she was hugging him tightly, room was surrounded by pin dropped silence, "promise kijiye aap mujhe kabhi chodkar nahi jayenge" he heard her saying between her heavy breaths. He was taken back by her sudden reaction. "Promise, kabhi nahi" he assured her by slowly rubbing her back to calm her down, he was scared for a second with her sudden outburst but at the same time a smile played on his face. For the first into their marriage she had openly confess that she cared for him or to be precise she was scared to lose him.


He could finally feel her body calming down in his arms. She came back to her senses only to realise she was still in his arms holding him tight. She broke the hug "vo mai, ayese", he placed his finger on her lips "itz ok". He offered her glass of water and made her lie down. He took the liberty and removed the pillow in between and took his pillow exactly next to hers. "so jao Priya,Mai yahi hu" he slowly brushed away her tears. He had no idea what had caused this but all he knew she needed him right now by her side. He stroked her hair as she gradually fell asleep.


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Posted: 3 years ago
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A beautiful sketch of what they both feel, the fear of losing someone they never hoped to get. Thanks for this.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ohh... wow!! I wished we had gotten something like this in the show.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Felt good reading this❤️. Why cant the CVs glance at all these ideas once, might do them good.. just sayin👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful ❤️ scene...wish we could see something of this kind between Ram and Priya . Thank you for sharing your written work with us. Enjoyed reading it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I really want to see something like this on the show!! Thank you for writing this!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SEA05

A beautiful sketch of what they both feel, the fear of losing someone they never hoped to get. Thanks for this.


Glad you like it ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: RitikaS99

Ohh... wow!! I wished we had gotten something like this in the show.❤️


Glad you like it ❤️

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Originally posted by: Anonymmus

Felt good reading this❤️. Why cant the CVs glance at all these ideas once, might do them good.. just sayin👍🏼


Glad you like it ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Very much, thank you for sharing this with us)

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